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A Cerebral Mosh's posted comments

  1. On The Writer's Dilemma:

    posted 10 months ago

    Awesome story, really. Very true. :D

  2. On An In-Depth and Thorough Discussion on the Existence of God:

    posted 10 months ago

    Very nice! Funny, light, and yet thought-provoking. It reminded me very much of Monty Python, and yes, you should take that as a compliment. :)

  3. On I'm An Addict:

    posted 10 months ago

    Ha, this was cute! Just a word: try not to list things in order so much. That’s good for school writing, but not so much for creative writing.

  4. On Unanswered Questions:

    posted 10 months ago

    Wow. this is lovely. Really haunting and eerie, but touching at the same time.

  5. On inside out crazy:

    posted 10 months ago

    Wow, this is really awesomely written. I like it a lot, and that line, “Being crazy…maybe it was more than just a hiccup” is actually pretty inspiring.

  6. On Something There:

    posted 10 months ago

    Good stuff! I’m impressed that you’re only 13 and writing this level of story. Keep going with it.

  7. On Ode To Hamst3r_b0y:

    posted 10 months ago

    Grins I like this. Nice little commentary on the whole web lifestyle. :)

  8. On The Cross (scary challenge):

    posted 10 months ago

    Wow, seriously creepy! Good job.

  9. On Rude and Crude Valentine Message:

    posted 10 months ago

    I don’t mean to be harsh here, but while it’s a nice little story, there’s just too many grammar mistakes for me. Tense is all over the place, sentences are awkward (I think middle schoolers use contractions more often than not), and comma usage isn’t that great. And what’s the point of there being a lollipop inside the card if it’s a cruel note, anyway?

  10. On Held Up at Customs:

    posted 10 months ago

    Oh gosh. Wow. I feel bad for that guy. What happens now?

  11. On Math can be Persuasive:

    posted 10 months ago

    Ha!! I love this! Math definetely makes me feel that way. Nice job.

  12. On Blue Meander: If She Agrees:

    posted 10 months ago

    What’s the test of courage? I want to know!

  13. On The Devils Incarnate:

    posted 10 months ago

    I like the descriptions here, and yet some more explanation of what exactly the devil’s incarnate is would be nice. And just a little grammar nit-pick, it’s devil’s rather than devils. Posessive versus plural, yeah? Anyway, I like what you’ve done here—-maybe a sequel or expansion could be in progress? :)

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