Alexis DeHearts' posted comments

  1. On A Challenge, You Have Your Time:

    posted 7 months ago

    You prequel my challenge! shakes fist like the evil overlordess I am now I feel compelled to enter yours, even though I have absolutely know idea what I will write.

  2. On Reflection on Reflections:

    posted 7 months ago

    ? Cute? Well, that wasn’t entirely what I was expecting but I’ll go with it. Thanks.

  3. On Alexis DeHearts 1st Challenge!!! What is Beautiful? NO MORE SUBMISSIONS!!!:

    posted 7 months ago

    I’m not going to accept anymore submissions now, and will be reveiwing was has been submitted to decide on a winner.
    Good luck everyone!!

  4. On The Artist God (What is Beautiful Challenge:

    posted 8 months ago

    I was going to make a similar comment but you phrased it better than I would have…

  5. On Alexis DeHearts 1st Challenge!!! What is Beautiful? NO MORE SUBMISSIONS!!!:

    posted 8 months ago

    I don’t know, I’ll set the date soon.

  6. On He'll Need to Grow a Beard:

    posted 8 months ago

    There should be a distributer of inspiration. I mean, where else would you get ideas from, huh? lol

  7. On He'll Need to Grow a Beard:

    posted 8 months ago

    Ooh, I have a good idea for a sequal but I don’t know how to do it really…

  8. On A Southern Haunting :The Flyin Fedora of Lampshade Alabama:

    posted 8 months ago

    Haha! I like how you write the accents!

  9. On The Most Beautiful Thing in the World [beauty challenge]:

    posted 8 months ago

    Wow… I must be really hungry… I’m practically drueling… (did I spell that right? or is it drooling?)
    Funny though, it proves that beauty is all in the eye of the beholder. Though chocolate is beautiful all the time to me…

  10. On I am Beautiful (Definition of Beautiful Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    I agree with White Hat. Cute, but it doesn’t seem like it’s very well thought out.

  11. On The Perfect Face:

    posted 8 months ago

    Wow! This is a really good description of the girls beauty, especcially that it may be slightly exagerated by the persons personal feelings.

  12. On An Answer for My Question:

    posted 8 months ago

    Wow… don’t know what to say…I like the comparisons and the way the person is at first skeptical of the lands beauty. You really have a way with describing land scape!

  13. On Beauty Incarnate:

    posted 8 months ago

    whoa… that’s chilling. Very very good.

  14. On A Lesson on Beauty [Beautiful Challenge]:

    posted 8 months ago

    Very nice! If that can’t be labeled “after my own heart” than I don’t know what can be. Hurray for music!

  15. On And The Winners Are.... http://ficlets.com/stories/20437:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow… How will I do this one?
    This will definatly be interesting

  16. On Internal Dialogue - A Bored Girl and Her Imagination:

    posted 8 months ago

    Funny! Very nice

  17. On Peeling Potatoes with Grandma and William:

    posted 8 months ago

    I love “Kiki’s Delivery Service”!! I haven’t seen that movie in so long

  18. On But it isn't a Dream!:

    posted 8 months ago

    Awww! Poor girl! Why do guys always do stuff like that!

  19. On Storm on the Caldera:

    posted 8 months ago

    Thank you!

  20. On The Music Wing Part 3 (Place Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    Thanks! It’s hard to show how much music means to me, but I think I did pretty well.

  21. On Man-Made Armageddon:

    posted 8 months ago

    This is… wow. This is unbeleivable. Talk about shivers.

  22. On Would You See for Me? :

    posted 8 months ago

    Amazing as per usual! The awkward kiss thing was really cute and sweet too!

  23. On Look!:

    posted 8 months ago

    Very interesting, and well written! No less than I would expect from you.

  24. On Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    haha. Yes, that would be creepy if it was eleven year olds… And thank you very much.

  25. On The Music Wing Part 3 (Place Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    Music, writing and love are some of lifes greatest joys.

  26. On Attempt to Describe a Place in One Sentance:

    posted 8 months ago

    Thanks! I usually don’t think of green houses that way, but I was looking for a picture of the jungle and this came up. And I just stopped and realized that when people have to raise a jungle inside, its just sad.

  27. On The Music Wing Part 2 (Place Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    One last part, and I’m done.

  28. On The Music Wing Part 1 (Place Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    The going to my place is an essential part of describing it, and now I must actually describe it in the sequel… I enjoy challenges.

  29. On Gold in the Fire:

    posted 8 months ago

    The train is pretty old fashioned. I don’t know much about trains, but this is an old one.

  30. On Gold in the Fire:

    posted 8 months ago

    I wanted to dive into the story, and didn’t have time to explain everything. Jenny happened to be sitting in the compartment next to Jon and Tom, and every time the train stopped, she asked opened her door and asked if it was their stop (they were all going to a small town in an undecided European country). After this was repeated many times, Jon not so kindly told her to leave them alone, at which point she locked her door.

  31. On A Love of the Type Dreams are Made Of (Unique Love Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    Curly brown hair is very awesome… if tenkou sees this she’ll never let me live it down

  32. On A Love of the Type Dreams are Made Of (Unique Love Challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    How true that is. By the way, I saw a mistake:
    “with as as deep brown”
    do you mean “with eyes as deep brown” ?

  33. On Perhaps That is How it Should Be:

    posted 8 months ago

    Again, this is amazing. The way you describe the place is magic, as is, I’m sure from your writing, the place itself. I can’t even find anything critical to say except that, is this part:
    “to return the place I feel truly whole”
    supposed to be “to return to the place where I feel truly whole” ?
    Or did you write it that way on purpose?

  34. On My Place:

    posted 8 months ago

    I saw my name in the list of people you admire… I feel honored to be on that list, as this is the first of your writing I have seen, and am simply blown away. Amazing job.

  35. On Preparation:

    posted 8 months ago

    Nice job Vics.

  36. On Disbelief:

    posted 8 months ago

    Dang. Totally off what I thought, speccially since in the story I’m writing Ariel is a sort of storage for the god-like thingy that holds another world together…

  37. On Quirks: May or May Not Come from ADHD [challenge]:

    posted 9 months ago

    Maybe you’re my long lost twin or something. I didn’t have enough room, but I also say sure like ‘shore’ and mom like ‘mum’

  38. On Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge):

    posted 9 months ago

    Ah, ok. Thanks

  39. On Uncommon Love: Fritz and Cindy [challenge]:

    posted 9 months ago

    Nice description of the characters appearance. A very original idea.

  40. On Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge):

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank you, but I’d say yours is more original than mine.

  41. On What Time Changes:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank you, it’s actually an idea for part of the book I’m working on now- I just changed the names.

  42. On Uneasiness:

    posted 9 months ago

    Wow. much different from the sequal I wrote. But still very good!

  43. On `crayola.'s 50 ficlet challenge: A Unique Love Story:

    posted 9 months ago

    Hmmm. Isn’t that what makes the greatest love stories great? Not being excepted by society? In any case, I’ll try it.

  44. On The Third Kind of Rain:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank your very much

  45. On Irony and a Mental Thank You Note:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank you!

  46. On Shiny Mudballs:

    posted 9 months ago

    Interesting read, but consider rating mature for languege. Or perhaps I am just too picky there myself. Anyway, nice job.

  47. On The Third Kind of Rain:

    posted 9 months ago

    I’m going to becoem big-headed from all this praise… But thank you again!

  48. On Lady Luck Smiles Maniacally:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank you very much! _
    The car I describe in the story is a mirror image of one my dad used to own, though I didn’t have enough room to describe the way it growled, as if it wanted to go back to sleep everytime dad drove my brother and I to day care.

  49. On The Third Kind of Rain:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thanks muchly! The sequal is here:
    http://ficlets.com/stories/18385

  50. On The Third Kind of Rain:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thank you! Both for the kind comment, and for welcoming me.

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