Bag of Sand's posted comments

  1. On 656 Feet Down:

    posted about 1 month ago

    No problem.

    No I’m not a war vet, but I’ve got some in the family. No Navy men, though.

  2. On 656 Feet Down:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I had achieved “ficlet nirvana” so I figured the apostrophe would hold.

  3. On Shadows and Light:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Nice ending. It definitely piques my attention as to what, exactly, is going on.

    Nice work.

  4. On Free [Bag of Sand's 18 to 1 Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Very well done. The story was nicely shrouded until the word count got smaller and the story became more clear. Give your brain a rest – you earned it.

  5. On The Last Gift:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the detail in this story. I also like the implications. My favorite kind of Ficlets are the ones where I make up what happens next, so this one is great on that front.

    Personal too, I take it.

  6. On From 18 to 1:

    posted 6 months ago

    Here’s a challenge – this story has 18 lines and 18 words in the first line. The second line has 17 lines, the third 16 and so on all the way to the last line of one word. The story also achieves “ficlet nirvana.” It was challenging, but fun.

  7. On Morning:

    posted 6 months ago

    Interesting. You learn a lot about Mr. Pipkin in a short amount of time.

    Are you planning more?

  8. On Before Taking The Ice:

    posted 6 months ago

    The story was originally about Curling, but I went with hockey at the last minute :)

    Thanks for reading this. The encouragement is very nice.

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