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On Dark League [League of Awesomeness 2075 Or Beyond Challenge]:

posted about 17 hours ago

nice THX this would kinda scare me.. if I wasn’t on the ‘right’ side.
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On Hall of Fame [Part 2] ((2075 or Beyond Challenge)):

posted 1 day ago

well.. Ficlets isn’t really banned.. we just have to write and then print it out. we can still use word and such to write, just can’t post it on the internet. ya know?

On Sinking and Floating (egnellahc sdrawkcab):

posted 1 day ago

very intriguing! I would where her scar came from, which is a very nice touch BTW. And what thata ox had to do with anything! Can’t wait to read more.
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Thanks for entering as well!
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On Hall of Fame [Part 2] ((2075 or Beyond Challenge)):

posted 1 day ago

Ah, I knew someone would say something about that… But all I have to say to it is this, Krulltar: Rules are meant to be broken! Which you showed in your entry as well. =)

On Petition To Have John Perkins Legally Declared Awesome. Sign It Or Your Cat Will Get Fleas.:

posted 1 day ago

I must argee as well. John Perkins is pretty awesome. And I think it would be silly of him not to note THX right this minute and ask for a spot in the LoA!! Of course.. if he’s not on.. he should do it as soon as he does sign on! =)
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On League Of Awesomeness 2075 Or Beyond Challenge.:

posted 1 day ago

Sorry!! I entered but I ended up using two ficlets.. I hope you don’t mind too much!! And I hope you like it anyways.
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On www.ficlets.holo [League Of Awesomeness 2075 Or Beyond Challenge.]:

posted 1 day ago

haha, this would be pretty sweet!! I really like where you took this one. =)
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On Sobbing:

posted 1 day ago

Oh lord!!! I can see she is a little.. dense? or wait.. Ron likes April right? gahhh

On A desire to resist oppression is implanted in the nature of man ~Tacitus (LoA 2075 Challenge):

posted 2 days ago

haha, love it. very nice job. =) I agree with all of the above as well.
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On Exposing The Secret (egnellahC sdrawkcaB):

posted 3 days ago

i agree totally with Ana. Go for an epiloguge! and I have one question.. isn’t Tony working for Sloan?? if so.. why did George go with him?
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but still nice work John! I wasn’t expecting them to all be after a cookie recipe!
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On Rogue Rage (egnellahC sdrawkcaB):

posted 3 days ago

yes me too. wow john, thiss is getting amazing!
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On Wait In The Car (egnellahC sdrawkcaB):

posted 3 days ago

aah, so that’s why she shows up ~~later~~ earlier. nice job John.
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On Making An Entrance (egnellahC sdrawkcaB):

posted 3 days ago

very nice. I totally agree with Ana, good job with the pacing and details!
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On Entwined Arms:

posted 4 days ago

awe, so beautiful! very nice continuation. although.. it could still end badly..
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On Open Arms?:

posted 4 days ago

intriging! i like where this is going even though we don’t know what happened before!!
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On What did you just say? [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]:

posted 4 days ago

I must admit, I had to read it over again as well. I like how you made it so sutle that you really have to pay attention to notice!
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On A Sunset Moment [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]:

posted 4 days ago

oh wow.. that would totally suck! poor girl..
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On Conclusion/Beginning: The Meaning of Freedom [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 4 days ago

Amazing Ana! This was writen beautifully, and I was hooked through each and every sequel. Nice job, thanks for entering!!
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On The First.:

posted 4 days ago

wow. this is really intriguing. Thanks so much for entering! I really liked the format of this.
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On Stuck in the Storm [Egnellahc Sdrawkcab]:

posted 4 days ago

oooh! I love it! So intriging!!! I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for entering.
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On Cold Steel (egnellahC sdrawkcaB):

posted 4 days ago

nice so far John! I’m loving this!! =) Thanks for entering, and you should really keep going.
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On Bawwwwk! (Backwards challenge):

posted 4 days ago

good entry. I don’t really understand what’s going on.. but maybe you could write a sequel?

And thanks for entering. =)
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On The Girl in the Photograph [Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge]:

posted 9 days ago

i was thinking of something along these lines as well Ana, but you did a much better job of describing it then i would have. =)
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On Overreacting ((Unexpected Twist)):

posted 10 days ago

Jeesh T_M~JY.. It’s just a story.. this hasn’t happened to me.. I wasn’t the friend or the girl it happeed to… I’m glad you told your mom you loved her.. but I am not mean for writing a story like this.. At least I do not believe so..

On Locked Out:

posted 12 days ago

Wow.. I kinda saw that coming.. I mean, who has 14 keys and locks ALL of them humm? lol. Nice twist though!
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On In A Breath:

posted 12 days ago

wow, beautiful! a little on the sad side.. but still beautiful.
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On Don't Hate Me:

posted 12 days ago

wow, that’s reallly good! Nice job MBTM.
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On Wonderball...or man?:

posted 13 days ago

huh, interesting way to take the series!
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On Official Business in a Treehouse [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]:

posted 15 days ago

Must agree with everyone above.. Although I dindn’t pick out any of the clues.. =/ So nice job!
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On Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]:

posted 15 days ago

That’s really cute! It kind of shocked me when I read your favorite song, seeing as that’s is that is playing on my iPod right now! =)
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On That Bastitch Dr. Seuss [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

posted 15 days ago

Love it! And Pyro is right, you have out done yourself.
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On Overreacting ((Unexpected Twist)):

posted 15 days ago

Thanks Ana, I’ve fixed it. And THX I believe I hit ” ~ ” and it went _tiny =)

On He Returns:

posted 15 days ago

” ~ ” “_{” ~or…}

On Summertime Memories (unexpected twist challenge):

posted 16 days ago

Haha, I really wasn’t expecting that! Nice job. =) I agree with John, I thoroughly enjoyed this.
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On Jefferson Davis' Gettysburg Address (2) (Twisted History):

posted 16 days ago

Yeah.. I must agree with THX and Jenunique. But it was well written!
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On Nobody Gets Hurt (Twisted History Challenge):

posted 16 days ago

haha, wow. Didn’t see that coming at all! Nice job.
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On Unexpected Twist Challenge:

posted 17 days ago

oh yeah! Congrats on hitting 50 ficlets and 500 comments in your first month-ish here!!
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On Unexpected Twist Challenge:

posted 17 days ago

This is a very cool challenge! I don’t have time ATM.. but I am deffinatly saving this to my clippings and will enter when I get a spark of GENIUS or mayybe just when I have time.. =)
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On Nobody Expects It (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

posted 17 days ago

Huh? I don’t get it.. But I’m not sure what the Spanish Inquistion is.. Other wise, I like the lead up to it!!
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On White Patent Shoes [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

posted 17 days ago

Okay, I didn’t see that coming at all! Very nice! But now.. after reading the comments I’m a little confused. Is it Sophie that died or her mother? It could almost be either.. uhm a little help pwease??
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On Morning realization (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

posted 17 days ago

This was well written! Nice job. I liked this one. =)
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On PeterPan My Life:

posted 17 days ago

Peter Pan is amazing, =). And at least yours is a healthy obsession to have
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On WINNERS OF 200something CHALLENGE!:

posted 18 days ago

Congrats to the winners!!
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On The Worst Thing We Can Do Is Nothing (Twisted History):

posted 18 days ago

wow, this is really good. If he had been shot and it had ended the Nazi party, W.W.II could possibly have been avoided.
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On Googler challenge!!! (Oy's make ur own Challenge challenge!!):

posted 19 days ago

This is a really cool challenge! Nice job Bartimaeus.
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On and if she's everything you've ever wanted:

posted 21 days ago

i agree with Bart in his comment.
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but very nice begining here!
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On If she's everything you've ever wanted, Part 27:

posted 21 days ago

wow this is really cute. huh.. I’ll have to find the begining of this and read it from there. But this could actually be a stand alone ficlet.
Nice job =)
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On Backwards Challenge!:

posted 21 days ago

well.. the last one has to be the first one you write. and if it is good people will want to know why it happens, so then write what happened leading up to it.. get it?

On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

posted 23 days ago

i agree with hunting beauty! nice instalment. =)
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On Return to the Wonderball:

posted 24 days ago

so Sandra and uhm Sol-lek (or somethin’) can still comunicate threw the wonderball even though Emily is in it??!
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On Return to the Wonderball:

posted 24 days ago

so Sandra and uhm Sol-lek (or somethin’) can still comunicate threw the wonderball even though Emily is in it??!
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On Dana Sees the Light:

posted 24 days ago

Hmm.. Stovo.. I don’t know if they were using the toy.. or if maybe they were just stuck inside of it..
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Nice story!! This is amazing how everyone is contributing!!
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On Wonderball makes new Friends:

posted 24 days ago

wow, that was a really good sequel! To bad Emily is inside the wonderball now.. wonder how she’ll get out..
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On Not So Fast:

posted 25 days ago

Nice take off of the series! Very nice job. =)
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On Can't Stop Loving You:

posted 26 days ago

AWE! I like.. just read this for some reason. But it is really good!
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On To Play or Be Played:

posted 27 days ago

oh my.. will it explode? Can’t wait for a sequel..
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On The Wonderball's Warning:

posted 27 days ago

is it Dana who will hurt her?? gah!
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On Room 34:

posted 27 days ago

ew.. omg.. that like.. SUCKS.
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On The Essential, Indispensable Wonderball:

posted 27 days ago

so now it can TALK? amazing story!!
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On The Room Awaits...:

posted 27 days ago

oh lord.. now what??
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On The Wonderball's Message:

posted 27 days ago

gah!! who what where when. WHICH ROOM 34?
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amazing sries you guys!
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On Wonderball Comes to Life:

posted 27 days ago

what?? 34 what? hours, days? AH
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On The Future Is Unwritten:

posted 27 days ago

oh!! thank you for the sequel! this is just as good as the first! =)
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On Ask the Wonderball:

posted 27 days ago

wow, I saw this featured and actually read the end first.. But it’s much better fom the begining!! haha.
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very good and grats on being featured.
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On and you wonder why...:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this was really good! =)
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On Why Should I?:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this is really good! =)
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On The Tear (Precise Maneuvers Challenge Sequel):

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this was just as good as the first! nice job. =)
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On The Dagger (Precise Maneuvers Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

this was really good. I love the girl’s name ;)
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On uselessness's PRECISE MANEUVERS Challenge!:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, grats on 250! This sounds like an awesome challenge.. but I’ve gone dry on the creativity meter ATM.. =/ Good luck to everyone who enters though!
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On Good evening and goodbye, Kevin (come to the chain guys!):

posted about 1 month ago

I agree with Bartimaeus. I’ve only been here a short time yet my writing has improved greatly. ((At least my fictional writing.. my essays are not all the great yet =X))
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Nice little letter Bartimaeus!
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On For He's a Jolly Good Fellow ... [Join the Kevin Lawver Chain!]:

posted about 1 month ago

awe, such a nice letter! very heartfelt =)
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On I AM: Jealousy:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this was really good. And I agree with Celestic, these could totally be song lyrics!! =)
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On I Am (200something challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

wow.. that’s sad.. but really well written too.
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On The Sharp Teeth of my Bite (200 something challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this was REALLY good! I like it alot.
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On Love Stinks:

posted about 1 month ago

awe, nice sequel! I’ll get around to sequelling again. I’m sorry I didn’t take it the way you wanted, it was kinda my intention. But I’m glad you liked it. =)

On I Am... I Think [[I AM Challenge]]:

posted about 1 month ago

I like the line Mistress said. Overall, nicely written!
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On I am... (200something Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

exactly what MBTM said.
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On One Wish [I AM... Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

really beautiful! nice job.
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On 200something CHALLENGE!:

posted about 1 month ago

Congrats! And sweet challenge. I’ve just entered =)
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On Wisp of Insecurity(I AM challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

this is really good!
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On I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

awe, very cute Blu. I think many girls.. and maybe some guys, can relate to this.
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On Diary of Hanna M.E. Banks (New series):

posted about 1 month ago

wow, this is beautifully wrtten! nice job.
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On When my heart broke:

posted about 1 month ago

wow… this is really sad yet beautifully written!
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Hmm.. i think i have an idea..

On Pink Cigarette (song lyrics challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

wow. that was good. i.. i’m at a loss for words honestly.
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On Pizza at Seven, or Eight:

posted about 1 month ago

haha. lack of communication. Very nice. =)
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On The Scary Part Is...:

posted about 1 month ago

haha. Nice blu. =)
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On Up In Flames:

posted about 1 month ago

ouch.. He is hurt! I lilke how you brought back Lee for a guest apearence of sorts. haha. Nice job. =)

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On Sweet lips, a modern fairytale - The fairest of them all:

posted about 1 month ago

this could be an interesting little series you’ve started here. Nice job =)
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On The Scary Part Is...:

posted about 1 month ago

well is it??? IS IT? Oh wait.. i’m eciding that. O:-)

Very nice sequel O_M, love it!
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On What if...:

posted about 1 month ago

Thanks guys! and O_M Iove writing this series with you as well. =)
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On Our little secret:

posted about 1 month ago

This is interesting.. It would be a little easier to read if you had paragraphs though..
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On Orlando Comforts Lynde:

posted about 1 month ago

awe, really cute! I will sequel this I promise.. when I find time.. =)
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On Alien:

posted about 1 month ago

Love the last line.. and the part about the antennae.. and well.. the whole thing. =)
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Congrats on being featured!
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On A Loaded Gun in the Mailbox:

posted about 1 month ago

I don’t really get the last line.. Maybe I’m just to tired tonight.. But I love the rest of it. Very odd situation. =)

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On When Your Eyebrows Are Tattoos:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, I never really thought of this.. This is sad yet cute. And very nicely written. =)
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On YYYEEESSS! 185 ficlets! Okay, so maybe be it's kind of a weird number, but it still calls for a ((Start/End)) challenge!:

posted about 1 month ago

congrats on 185 ficlets! I’ll have to think about this and maybe I’ll enter.

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On Between Judge And Lawyer:

posted about 1 month ago

woo!! Sequel??
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On Clumsiness Isn't So Sweet, In Fact It Hurts {Twilight challenge}:

posted about 1 month ago

awe! poor girl! but i think it’d be funny to see.. not funny to have happen to you.. =)
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On Love Him (Twilight Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

cute and sad all in one! Nice line choice too.
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On Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, nice entry! =) I like that she went through with what she wanted to say even though she got nervous.
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On All Hail the King [Louise Madison's Hear Ye Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

Oh my! Didn’t see that coming at all. I wonder why.. sequel perhaps? very nice.
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On Currents [Twilight Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

awe, that was cute! Nice job!
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On Slamming Doors:

posted 2 months ago

cute!! I’ll have to sequel later though.. i’m to tired to think.

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On (Your Pen Name Here) CHALLENGE:

posted 2 months ago

Sounds like an awesome idea! I’m in. Well.. I guess I should enter this first shouldn’t I?

On The Babe of the Band (Band Baby!!! Name challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I’m flattered you choose me! =) I don’t play the horn though.. Percussion is more my thing ; ) But nice take on my life. =D
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I love the last line. And the descriptions of.. everything. Good story!
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On Of School, Leaks, and Secret Revenge:

posted 2 months ago

So thats what P.S. stands for! =) This looks like a good series.
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On If Only...:

posted 2 months ago

This looks like it could be a really cute series!
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On You Lost Her, Dude:

posted 2 months ago

awe! poor guy.. Nice continuation though. =)
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On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted 2 months ago

Laine, I’m rather upset by all the cast. The only thing I’m hoping for is good make-up artists! =) For those of you who havn’t read this read it! I absolutly love this book. I kinda understand that some people don’t like it.. but I think lifeless is right and Stephanie hid drugs in her pages. I couldn’t put those books down if I had them pulled ou of my hands! =) Great challenge.. if I wasn’t so busy I’d enter.
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On Rosaline, PLEASE!:

posted 2 months ago

who cares what kinda plate..?
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Very nice MBTM. =)
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On Again With the Quiet!:

posted 2 months ago

Bernard Michael! Sooo cute! absolutly love it O_M =)
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On Dear Diary... I Cut Myself Today {OTOC's entry challenge}:

posted 2 months ago

So proud of you for stopping! It can be hard, I know.. =)

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On We Fell in Love (Apology Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

this was very cute! ..in a sad sorta way though.. =)
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On Breathless:

posted 2 months ago

The music was a very nice touch Never. =)
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On You have always loved me (One More Word Challenge Entry) Nirvana!!!:

posted 2 months ago

I love that last line! Very cute. =)
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On (Your Pen Name Here) CHALLENGE:

posted 2 months ago

Awesome challenge. And I must admit.. I agree with Ana and Saint Chuck… ((hint hint)).

Now.. who to pick..
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On Never Explain: Plays Well With Others:

posted 2 months ago

I like this. And I like how you ended it. It really seems like Never is involved with a series with almost everyone on here. =) Well.. maybe not everyone..
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On Yessir?:

posted 2 months ago

ooh, I like it. =)
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On The Game (One More Word Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

haha, that’s cute! =)
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On The Exploding Man:

posted 2 months ago

wow, that’s different. But also kinda scary to think about..
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On A Day in the Life of Someday 93{Name Challenge}:

posted 2 months ago

Awe, this was very cute. =)
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On Look Away:

posted 2 months ago

same here! =)
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On Popped The Question:

posted 2 months ago

awe!! That is really cute! =)
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On Mixed Up, Matched Up:

posted 2 months ago

oooh. this could be interesting..
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On DruggerDoodles (New Series):

posted 2 months ago

ooh, this looks really cute!
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On My entry for the Nice Things Challenge:

posted 2 months ago

awe, thanks MBTM! I am still trying to think of a topic I swear. =)
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On A Day in the Life Of Celestic23:

posted 2 months ago

This was very cute! Loved her trying to be done by sunrise.
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On The Everyday THX 0477 [Pen Name Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

haha, loved the visual! This is totally how I would have pictured THX’s day. =)
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On Running Outta Space!! ((Nice Challenge)):

posted 2 months ago

thanks for the mention OTOC! You are amazing =)
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On The Nice Challenge! [My Entry]:

posted 2 months ago

awe, thanks NightMadien!
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On I Love you Guys! Nice Things Challenge Part 2:

posted 2 months ago

nice job slitting it into two. And thanks! =)<3

On Too Many To Name...But All Loved {nice things}:

posted 2 months ago

I had a ton of fun writing that series Someday! =)
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On Nice things to say (Flute Faerie challenge):

posted 2 months ago

awe, thank you! I love your writing too.
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On Popcorn Fight!:

posted 2 months ago

ah! i would kill to learn to surf!! =)
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On Touch:

posted 2 months ago

wow, Never. intamite much?? haha, it’s still good. =)
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On So Many to Pick From! (Flute Faerie's Niceness Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

*
^specially kevin because we wouldn’t be here without him.

On So Many to Pick From! (Flute Faerie's Niceness Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

there are so many! I ran out of room in my ficlet. I love all the writers on here!! t be here without him.^

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On flute faerie's 1000th Comment Challenge, The Nice Things Challenge! :

posted 2 months ago

hmm.. who to write about.. =) Awesome challenge!
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On Nice Things for Awesome Ficleteers (Flute Faerie's nice comment challenge):

posted 2 months ago

whoop Kevin!! =) Agree an all these.
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On Awesome ficleteers (flute faerie's Nice Things challenge):

posted 2 months ago

haha, thanks Dreamer. Even if I was an after thought ;-) jk! You are awesome tooo.
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On The Oder of LoA( Flute Faeries Nice Comment Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

haha, love it. =)
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And don’t worry THX.. Kermit didn’t start the LoA.
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On Trying to be NICE! [flute faerie's Comment Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

they are all great people! I just love how you ended it. =)
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On Be Proud (Elsha's Mirror Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I love the last line. =) And it was goo even if it was slightly rushed..
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On Putting Things Off in Mirror Land [Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

very good. Love the describtions and such. =)
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On The Puppet master:

posted 2 months ago

huh, this is interesting. Paragraphs would make it a little easier to follow though… I like the idea and plot behind it either way!
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On He Returns:

posted 2 months ago

^hmm? ...

On Reflections of A Girl:

posted 2 months ago

just as beautifully witten as your other one! Absolutly amazing! You truely are an amazing writer.
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On Lie:

posted 2 months ago

wow, this is really beautiful Someday.. Very nice! and i’m am so sorry if this really happened to you.. =/
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On Underwater World: Eaten Alive [Living descriptions challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Totally agree with every thing above. =) Very good descritptions.
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On High School days-Confusion:

posted 2 months ago

was this before or after “mike” asked her out?? This could make a very good series. =)

On High school days-The Reunion:

posted 2 months ago

haha, very cute!
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On Kiss and Make Up?:

posted 2 months ago

whoops, typing to fast. Never Explain sorry!

On Kiss and Make Up?:

posted 2 months ago

hehe, thanks Never Explina. =)

On Let Me....:

posted 2 months ago

awe! That is really cute Never!! =)
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On Wapato:

posted 2 months ago

wow, this was really pretty. I can deffinatly see the trees and lake in my mind’s eye thanks to your description! =)
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On Brush N' Dry:

posted 2 months ago

awesome Lone! =)
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On Run:

posted 2 months ago

yes. very nice job! I totally got what was running through his mind.

But how am I suppose to write a series with you if Dante ran away?!!! Oh well. he just has to come back. =)
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On Scrub!:

posted 2 months ago

awe! yay!! I hopee the JB’s.. well their parents.. get coustody!
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On Lemon Juice!:

posted 2 months ago

gah!! I hope so too!!!
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On Conversations with Dead People (A Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

neat challenge. =) I’ll enter.. well tomorrow since I should be sleeping now. O:-)
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On Visitations of a Pointless Nature [Conversations with Dead People Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

woooow. haha. Love the dialoge THX!
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On Gas Is Not An Issue...That Much:

posted 2 months ago

woo.. little confused.. was that two guys? Nothing wrong with it, that’s a cool wayy of writing a series. =) Nice job.
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On Change:

posted 2 months ago

awe, this is really cute, yet kinda sad.. But thanks for entering!! =)

On Understanding:

posted 2 months ago

hehe. Sorry Never. =) I just love making Dante look bad. O:-)

On "It's Right Here." (Don't Get Defensive Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

very nice. I agree with what everyone else has said. =) Wonderful Stovo.
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On Shake It Off:

posted 2 months ago

oh no!!!! =’(
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On Burn! :

posted 2 months ago

hahaha. LOVE it!!
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On Too Quick:

posted 2 months ago

awe.. =(

On The Best Thing:

posted 2 months ago

Did I miss somethin’? Dante was just being very sweet to Eve and ya’ll are hatin’ on him?!
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Cute NE. I like it! =)
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On Upset:

posted 2 months ago

Exactly what Blu said!!
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On Helena: Intro. To Music:

posted 2 months ago

love the line “the butterflies in my stomach turned into firebreathing dragons”! =)
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On A Show On the Road:

posted 2 months ago

whoa is right.. What suspicion??
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On Not the One Dying:

posted 2 months ago

ah!!
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On Sirens (New Series):

posted 2 months ago

uh-oh.. what happened?
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On In Goes the Door:

posted 2 months ago

yay! go Bernard!! =)
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Good thinkin’ makin’ this mature OM. the swearing may have caused some trouble.. even if it is only like 3 words..
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On Duct tape and Plastic (Don't Get Defensive Challenge ;):

posted 2 months ago

Haha. I remember this! ‘Least I remember hearing about it.. =) Nice job.
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On Out The Door:

posted 2 months ago

whoop whoop! =)
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On Prom is Coming...:

posted 2 months ago

awe.. =( That sucks for Drew.. This could be a very good series though.
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On He Returns:

posted 2 months ago

< hmmm
>huh?
huh?

On Family Now:

posted 2 months ago

awe! sooo cute! =)
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On The Don't Get Defensive Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Woo! Congrats on 3,000 comments. =)
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I’ll have to remember to do this when I get home from tennis. hehe. That already gives me an idea.
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On Tales Waiting to be Told {uselessness's Living Description's challenge}:

posted 3 months ago

Absolutly amazing! I love it, really and truely being soo into reading myself. It really brought the books to life. Very nice job.
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On Oh no!:

posted 3 months ago

awe! very cute. i wonder if she’ll fogive him? or if she’ll shoot him down because she’s soo hurt. Could go either way. ;-)
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On Chloe and Kevin:

posted 3 months ago

whoops-ie!
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On Special Brand:

posted 3 months ago

awe, adorbale OM =)
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On Ready:

posted 3 months ago

ahh. She can’t die!! awe.. =(
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On You're Not That Girl I Met In A Snowstorm:

posted 3 months ago

awe, that was sweet! I hate crying after soo log of not cryring but you’ve really needed to, ya know?

Okay, probably not becuase that was a confusing statement.. BBut anyways, really cute and kinda fun but always sad.
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On Where's Joe?!:

posted 3 months ago

or maye he would. Very cute, love the series guys! =)
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On Run Away:

posted 3 months ago

awe! too cute. Amazing OM. =)
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On I'm Worried About You:

posted 3 months ago

‘Cause he loves you duh! ♥
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On The Secret Conversation:

posted 3 months ago

awe, that is adorable! =)
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On Go Talk To Her:

posted 3 months ago

AWE! that’s really cute. ‘Specially how Nick tells Em. =) er.. =( b/c it sucks Wes has to deal with that..
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On Don't Say That To Me:

posted 3 months ago

awe, poor Wes.. =(
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On Nice Try:

posted 3 months ago

hehe. =)

On Set Sentence Challenge ~It's my 210th ficlet!~:

posted 3 months ago

‘grats on 210! Awesome challenge, very cool. Better then mine.. but whatever. =)
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On Left It Open.:

posted 3 months ago

awe, this is cute! Love the monkeys in it =)
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On Boxing:

posted 3 months ago

Very cute. =)
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On The Pocket Dictionary Child (Xenoglossy Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I love how you used them both. =) And this was very cute, I must agree. But don’t be discourgaged into not entering because you think this is the winner! Go and try to write better one. =)
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On Confuse:

posted 3 months ago

well she did hit her head kinda hard you guys.. and i think there is a such thing as selective amnesia.. well if there’s not there is now =)
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Nice job OM. =)

On The Perfect Drug:

posted 3 months ago

gotcha. This is actually, if you read into it, very adorable! And NE, deffinatly no hard feelings from me. I love that you’ve caused trouble. hehe. It makes the series that much better. ((And keeps our readers attentive. =) ))
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On Music Challenge Winners (results) :

posted 3 months ago

woo! Congrats to the winners =)

On A Brief Bout of Multiple Personality Disorder Forces Stovohobo Into Writing This Rather Boring and Drab Ficlet for an Exceedingly More Creative Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

sounds like me. Half day at school half on the computer. =) Though I do go outside when I play tennis.. hehe.
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On Not the Worlds Greatest Writer { A Conversation with myself}:

posted 3 months ago

haha. Very nice Kermit. I’m the same way! But Coal is right. This is deffinatly better then crack. =)
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On Forever:

posted 3 months ago

awe. love it. much better then mine. <3

On Winter:

posted 3 months ago

AWE! OMJ. beautiful.
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On Look:

posted 3 months ago

wow that was realy cute and all 64 characters!! =)

On ATTENTION!!! MUST READ!!! HAYLEY AND TYLER SERIES CONTINUES!!!!:

posted 3 months ago

yay! awesome idea OM =) glad to see the series continue.
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On Why We Love Each Other(simple):

posted 3 months ago

I agree with Capital! very nice. =)
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On My Own World(64k challenge):

posted 3 months ago

awe, this is realy cute. =)
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On Leo Strikes Again:

posted 3 months ago

wow. intense! love how it was Leo who hit her.
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On 48 Hours:

posted 3 months ago

very interesting. keep it up =)

On My Expert Opinion (Xenoglossy Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

haha. Loved it! and I love the reference. =) Thanks for entering!!
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On Black:

posted 3 months ago

ow..? lol. nice series you’ve started NE.
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On Something Like That:

posted 3 months ago

hmm.. what is it.. and why doesn’t the trainer sound to.. comforting..?
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On Room 245:

posted 3 months ago

awe! love it. =)
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On "Come.":

posted 3 months ago

me too Blu!! =)
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Hmm.. what happened to the pain..?
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On Check Up:

posted 3 months ago

this is interesting so faar NE. =)
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On Life's Definition (64K challenge):

posted 3 months ago

awe, that’s really cute!! =)
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On Courage [64k Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Very nice. I like how something could have happened to make them not want to be pulled back again and I like how they are standing up on their own now. =)
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On Morgan:

posted 3 months ago

haha. nice way to introduce yourself. =)
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On Dying Artist:

posted 3 months ago

Excatly Blu. Eve isn’t the kind of girl who doesn’t care if her man isn’t just her man. O:-)
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On A Noteable Impression {64k Challenge :) } :

posted 3 months ago

hmm. very mysterious indeed!
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On Be Yourself [64k Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

haha, very cute THX =)

On Helena: Disspointment Game:

posted 3 months ago

huh.. interesting.. wonder why she let him go through with it then..
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On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices #7: Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation:

posted 3 months ago

I like to think I’m pretty good at punctuation, grammar, and spelling.. but sometimes I honestly don’t know. I’ve learned the rules, but never fully understood them. If there is something wrong in my story, I apoligize, but I also expect someone to let me know so I can change it and make it better. Isn’t that why we’re here? To help one another become better? I mean, everyone is bound to miss something
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On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices #5: Edit Yourself:

posted 3 months ago

I overwrite all the time. But adjectives are what make a story. Without them it woud be as visual..
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On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices #1: Paragraph Spacing:

posted 3 months ago

I like pareagraphs as well.. It’s how I learned to write in school and so that is how I write on here. But R_M.. I for one hate getting rid of my words.. I’m always well over the 1,024 limit, and sometimes it’s the paragraphs I sacrifice.

Also, there are some stories that have made the “Active” list that aren’t well uniformed. I mean, isn’t this site about improving writing skills not format??

On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices Introduction:

posted 3 months ago

I agree with some of what you say.. I too have pet peeves.. what really bugs me though is the people that disagree, don’t nessicarilly not ‘get it’. I think the comment you posted about them not geting it even if you told them to their face was rude. I can understand someones advice and choose not to use it. Sorry I had to say that..

On Like A Movie:

posted 3 months ago

awe! that was really cute. =)
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On Memory (uselessness's living descriptions challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Not sure if this is really good or not.. I tried to check my grammer..

On The Room With Him (Living Description Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

wow, very interesting. I lilked this. =)

On uselessness's LIVING DESCRIPTIONS Challenge!:

posted 3 months ago

hmm.. must get thinking.. congrats on 200 ficets btw! I just got there myself =)
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On Told You:

posted 3 months ago

awe!! that’s really cute! love it. it’s perfect. for now at least ;-)
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On Maybe Next Time:

posted 3 months ago

=( awe. This was a very good series you two! Sad to see it end..

On Maybe Next Time:

posted 3 months ago

Wait.. what’s with the fin~ ?? hmm? Is this over? Your just ending it?! =(
I hope not..

On Quick Kiss:

posted 3 months ago

grr. he sounds like a stupid-head.. I think she needs to get back with Tyler!! =(
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On I Can't Wait to be _Her Hero_:

posted 3 months ago

oh wow. that’s amazing. very very nice!

On What's Going On?:

posted 3 months ago

please say the JB will adopt her!! that’d be sweet!
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On The Letter:

posted 3 months ago

awe!! maybe the JB will adopt her…
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On Cyke Sensor:

posted 3 months ago

wow, nice twist! if my bestfriends weren’t here i’d sequel right away! tomorrow I promise.
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On End It:

posted 3 months ago

No kidding! Grr.. you’re really making me mad.. squints eyes in anger

But honestly, I’m glad to have some drama in here rather then just everything all perfect, ‘cause life isn’t like that.
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On My Marred Mind:

posted 3 months ago

really good peice. Looking at the picture I can almost veiw this as if the gum is talking and asking to be taken off the shoe..

okay probably not.. but still nice story!
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On If That's What You Want:

posted 3 months ago

really great quote Blu! hopefully she isn’t blind forever and figures out Nathan was lying..
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On Just Like Old Times:

posted 3 months ago

awe! that was absolutly adorable!! really and truely. awesome writing OM!
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On Making A Promise:

posted 3 months ago

yeah, that would be kind of embarassing.. but also really sweet!
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On How Not To Act On National Television:

posted 3 months ago

awe, very cute. I ~~was~~ am laughing soo hard =)
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On Making A Scene On Television:

posted 3 months ago

wow, haha. very nice. very cool =)
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On I Am This And That But Will Forever Be:

posted 3 months ago

Oh wow.. Very beautiful, and very nicely written! nice job OTOC!
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On It's Going to be a Long Day:

posted 3 months ago

awe… that sucks. I know what it’s like to have your mom like your ex..
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On A Good One:

posted 3 months ago

AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! like really!! cute! no joke. =)
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((sorry.. got a little carried away. =) ))

On Never:

posted 3 months ago

I’m not lliking him very much right now, Never Explain.. And this is gettin harder and harder to write as if I don’t know things like he’s acting and that he let Gabby kiss him.. Scowls at Dante
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On Anymore:

posted 3 months ago

wow, seems like Tyler and Eve are in the same boat. hehe. =)
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On Fine, Be That Way:

posted 3 months ago

ooo, ouch! hopefully they get back together!
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On Never Find Out:

posted