blackbearsrock's posted comments

  1. On It All Goes On:

    posted 10 months ago

    that was great

  2. On One Moment Can Make You Think.:

    posted 10 months ago

    well I thought it was good and don’t worry about the spelling

  3. On The Trees Have Ears:

    posted 10 months ago

    the people deffend the trees the bulldoser comes to scare them away and the trees and the people fight with the bulldosers and no one ever messes with the tress again- the end?

  4. On laughing:

    posted 10 months ago

    that was good, but next time you should add a little more- but overall it was great

  5. On Mute Witness:

    posted 10 months ago

    if you’re going to read this then please comment!

  6. On My Dead Boyfriend.:

    posted 10 months ago

    wow that was good I remember this when you were drafting it

  7. On In the woods:

    posted 10 months ago

    if you are going to read this, then comment even if is a piece of crap!

  8. On Maybe, Just Maybe, I'll Reconsider.:

    posted 10 months ago

    I hope she goes out with him, he seems like her really likes her!

  9. On Finally, His Question:

    posted 10 months ago

    I really want to know her answer! It really good-keep it up!

  10. On Mom! Leave! ..NOW!:

    posted 10 months ago

    These stories are so good, gonna go read the sequel

  11. On My World is Silent:

    posted 10 months ago

    that was good, nice inspiration::)

  12. On Camp Mowapi 6:

    posted 11 months ago

    thats good

  13. On Camp Mowapi 6:

    posted 11 months ago

    I think that you should get a conflict or a issue going, but the description and the rest of piece is good.

  14. On Camp Mowapi 5:

    posted 11 months ago

    I wonder what’s going to happen

  15. On Camp Mowapi 3:

    posted 11 months ago

    nice description

  16. On Camp Mowapi 2:

    posted 11 months ago

    I like it

  17. On Camp Mowapi:

    posted 11 months ago

    Can’t wait to read the sequel

  18. On 1000:

    posted 11 months ago

    wow jen thats really good

  19. On Whoops:

    posted 11 months ago

    Can’t wait for the sequel, these stories
    are really good!
    Keep writting

  20. On Falling Without a Parachute:

    posted 11 months ago

    that’s great!

  21. On If...:

    posted 11 months ago

    that was beautiful

  22. On Pervert targets girls on Ficlets (THIS IS REAL):

    posted 11 months ago

    Thanks:)

  23. On No Reason..:

    posted 11 months ago

    Can’t wait for the sequel, keep writting

  24. On Arguements Within My Mind:

    posted 11 months ago

    wow- I really want to know what’s going to happen
    Good Job!

  25. On Sushi Buffet Meow:

    posted 11 months ago

    awwww Sushi!!!!

  26. On Ditched//part2:

    posted 11 months ago

    good job

  27. On Flying:

    posted 11 months ago

    I’m glad you liked it, I’m bad a spelling as you can see.

  28. On It's almost midnight Alice:

    posted 11 months ago

    its really good-but so sad

  29. On New girl.:

    posted 11 months ago

    you should write a sequel

  30. On Kiss the sky:

    posted 11 months ago

    That’s really good, I liked it.

  31. On Obsessed I tell you!(sequel to STOP DAYDREAMING RYAN):

    posted 11 months ago

    To bad it was all a dream

  32. On If Only:

    posted 11 months ago

    I liked it

  33. On Speak of the Devil:

    posted 11 months ago

    You should write a sequel, that was good.

  34. On Boy Troubles:

    posted 11 months ago

    I’m going to read the sequel!

  35. On What Santa did when he went to ElfBucks (sub. of starbucks):

    posted 11 months ago

    I agree, good job!

  36. On Waking into a midnight dream:

    posted 11 months ago

    that’s one werid dream
    Anyways, I thought it was nice

  37. On Don't waste a minute:

    posted 11 months ago

    *write
    I’m tired

  38. On Don't waste a minute:

    posted 11 months ago

    thanks I really didn’t know what to right

  39. On She can go to hell. :

    posted 11 months ago

    It’s good. I think I know what you’re talking about—-

  40. On She can go to hell. :

    posted 11 months ago

    It’s good. I think I know what you’re talking about—-

  41. On Dancing on Pointe:

    posted 11 months ago

    Wow that was wonderful!

  42. On Pieces of Me:

    posted 11 months ago

    I like the last line of the poem, that was great!

  43. On Origami Stars:

    posted 11 months ago

    That was a nice poem, I liked it.

  44. On I don't need that anymore.:

    posted 11 months ago

    I get the point but maybe you could a litttle more, it’s still good though- Keep writting jen

  45. On May As Well Have Some Fun:

    posted 11 months ago

    I like your scoccer stories even though I don’t play, I could see it in my mind. You should write a sequel your a great writer. Keep writtting!

  46. On Writer's Block:

    posted 11 months ago

    that’s a good idea Compound Fracture.
    Don’t worry sometimes you can write your best and sometimes not, but you just got find a way to get those creative juices flowing.

  47. On Religion:

    posted 11 months ago

    that was really good

  48. On Ending 2 ((a solider's wife)):

    posted 11 months ago

    This one was sad but it’s life and it is true, but I think ending one was nice becuase that sometimes happens and we all want it to.

  49. On Ending 1 ((a solider's wife)):

    posted 11 months ago

    that was a good ending :)

  50. On A Soldier's Wife:

    posted 11 months ago

    wow that’s really good I’m going to read the sequel

  51. On Don't you cry:

    posted 11 months ago

    thanks!!

  52. On Northbound:

    posted 11 months ago

    that was good

  53. On May As Well Have Some Fun:

    posted 11 months ago

    you should write a sequel

  54. On Exit:

    posted 11 months ago

    that was really good. I’m assuming it was about moving on and getting out there

  55. On These are what make a heart:

    posted 11 months ago

    that’s true-
    good job

  56. On If You Ever Want To See Her Again... :

    posted 11 months ago

    that’s really good you should write a sequel

  57. On Lock down:

    posted 11 months ago

    A weird one

  58. On I want to meet you again//chapter2:

    posted 11 months ago

    I knew it

  59. On Last Beats of a Soldier:

    posted 11 months ago

    wow that was a good ficlet for Vetern’s Day.
    You were thinking of Mr. Moran weren’t you?

  60. On I don't know why. :

    posted 11 months ago

    you still love him
    that was good anyways

  61. On Season Haikus:

    posted 11 months ago

    Those squirrels are pretty evil- thanks for the comments guys!!

  62. On Lonely:

    posted 11 months ago

    write a sequel
    that was good

  63. On I want to meet you again//chapter2:

    posted 11 months ago

    and that “You” poem
    is probably abut him
    I bet he is in our lunch wave
    I’m not that stupid

  64. On I want to meet you again//chapter2:

    posted 11 months ago

    yeah you do totally

  65. On You. :

    posted 11 months ago

    awww….

  66. On Trick or Treat and your dead:

    posted 11 months ago

    you are so nice

  67. On In the Backseat:

    posted 11 months ago

    You are a good writer

  68. On Repression...:

    posted 11 months ago

    That was awesome!

  69. On Change is Inevitable...:

    posted 11 months ago

    You get deep in the poem in the beggining and then you wrap up with it being funny, which was surprising- I liked it :)

  70. On Freeze-Frame:

    posted 11 months ago

    Your poem shows how much we wish we could stop time to remember somebody and I think you wrote it well to fit that motive

  71. On Freeze-Frame:

    posted 11 months ago

    Your poem shows how much we wish we could stop time to remember somebody and I think you wrote it well to fit that motive

  72. On Freeze-Frame:

    posted 11 months ago

    Your poem shows how much we wish we could stop time to remember somebody and I think you wrote it well to fit that motive

  73. On Hourglass:

    posted 11 months ago

    That as really good, I get what you are trying to say and the description was good too.
    Great Job!

  74. On Trapped with candy:

    posted 11 months ago

    thank you!!

  75. On Becoming Myself:

    posted 11 months ago

    thanks, I’m glad you can relate and that you get what I’m saying :)

  76. On I want to meet you again//chapter2:

    posted 11 months ago

    nice- jen you said you didn’t like
    I think you totally still do

  77. On Becoming Myself:

    posted 11 months ago

    I’m just lost

  78. On I'd do it. :

    posted 11 months ago

    here is my rating

  79. On I'd do it. :

    posted 11 months ago

    That was good-

  80. On Trapped with candy:

    posted 11 months ago

    If you read it you got to comment it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  81. On Trick or Treat and your dead:

    posted 11 months ago

    If you are going to read this- you must leave a comment please! I need to know how it is-
    And anyways I never have gotten a commment:( (except the ones that I post..:)

  82. On Alone:

    posted 11 months ago

    Its sort of a poem I guess-

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