Blusparrow's posted comments

  1. On I'm really bored, and can't think so I will write crappy ficlets.:

    posted 3 minutes ago

    I liked it too. lol, darn paparazzi. Short, but to the point and funny too.
    LoA

  2. On She Didn't Mean It:

    posted about 9 hours ago

    Uh oh, her mom is starting something. Good sequel, I have and idea! =D
    LoA

  3. On Experimental Ficlet No. 3:

    posted about 10 hours ago

    This is cool! Stovohobo really started something hasn’t he?
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  4. On I Will Shout it Out!:

    posted about 10 hours ago

    I wished so Ana, but sadly no…
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  5. On I'm Sorrry:

    posted about 11 hours ago

    omg, that is so sad. Very nice Ficlet!
    LoA

  6. On Wondering Away:

    posted about 12 hours ago

    It does seem like they are always just standing there. You move ahead but they stay there. Pretty deep. Loved it!
    LoA

  7. On Is there really a God? Evolution? Heaven or Hell?:

    posted about 17 hours ago

    You are thinking the same way I do, but people seem to get very offended when you say you think that way. There is nothing wrong with being open minded on the situation. I lean towards evolution too, but I don’t completly pick a side. Nice job on marking it mature.
    LoA

  8. On Compromise Could Change...:

    posted about 17 hours ago

    Well, you will have to read the sequel to understand it… ;)
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  9. On Hall of Fame [Part 2] ((2075 or Beyond Challenge)):

    posted about 20 hours ago

    I hope this wont happen, I don’t want Ficlets to be banned! I will be a part of history though, which would be cool!
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  10. On Hall of Fame [Part 1] ((2075 or Beyond challenge)):

    posted about 21 hours ago

    hehe! You never know, that might happen!
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  11. On Hiding Something:

    posted about 24 hours ago

    OMG! Is she going to tell him that she like him! I can’t wait for the sequel!
    LoA

  12. On Sobbing:

    posted about 24 hours ago

    oh my. That is not good. Now its Jay’s turn to step in!
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  13. On Thinking of You:

    posted 1 day ago

    Very nice poem! It is nice when you have someone to talk to about anything and everything.
    LoA

  14. On Sweet:

    posted 1 day ago

    Five stars.
    LoA

  15. On Sweet:

    posted 1 day ago

    From BOOM to happy. Like a roller coaster. This is going to be some interesting summer. =)
    LoA

  16. On Drama King:

    posted 1 day ago

    Ya Trey! Explain! Awesome right now, reading on!
    LoA

  17. On The Lake:

    posted 1 day ago

    =O omg! Big shocker! I can’t wait to read the sequel!
    LoA

  18. On Summer:

    posted 1 day ago

    All of the good then the BOOM! I love it!
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  19. On We'll Talk:

    posted 1 day ago

    Omg, I think I have an idea, but I need to put it together. I will sequel tonight. Awesome job on this!
    LoA

  20. On Of Course:

    posted 1 day ago

    Ya, I don’t think I would be happy if someone pushed me into the water. Nice sequel!
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  21. On A Hint:

    posted 1 day ago

    Most jocks are stupid, it’s true. I am still wondering what the surprise is. It reminded me of this from transformers.

    Sam Witwicky: [laughs a little] No, it’s about the link between brain damage and football.
    [Trent looks really angry, while Mikaela hides a smile]
    Sam Witwicky: [nods head] No, it-it’s a good book, Your friends will love it. You know, it’s got mazes in it and, you know, little coloring areas, sections, pop-up pictures. It’s… a lot of fun.

  22. On Us:

    posted 2 days ago

    I am enjoying it too. I wonder what his surprise is.
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  23. On Until Tomorrow:

    posted 3 days ago

    she really really likes him. Sequel! I want to see what Trey is up too… ;)
    LoA

  24. On Your Just The Boy...:

    posted 3 days ago

    There will be others. You have tons of time to find other guys. I know it doesn’t seem like it now, but keep your head up and look ahead. =)
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  25. On Your Just The Boy...:

    posted 3 days ago

    There will be others. You have tons of time to find other guys. I know it doesn’t seem like it now, but keep your head up and look ahead. =)
    LoA

  26. On Couldn't Give me Love:

    posted 3 days ago

    Nirvana! =)
    LoA

  27. On Oh So... +insert word here+ ((Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge)):

    posted 3 days ago

    Oh darn, I would hate that really bad! Good job!
    LoA

  28. On Entwined Arms:

    posted 3 days ago

    Oh and so it does! Congrats in getting one of the top most active!
    LoA

  29. On Open Arms?:

    posted 3 days ago

    Omg, this is really good. Maybe love can triumph over what has happened. I always wanted to give a guy the key to my heart.
    LoA

  30. On Love Stinks: Part 1:

    posted 4 days ago

    That is all tangled up. That is crazy. I can’t wait to read this series.
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  31. On The Park:

    posted 4 days ago

    Clear head for sure. He needs to try to prove it to her that he is worth it. Jack is a jerk. I guess I was wrong, this one turned out to be right down the middle.
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  32. On Jack:

    posted 4 days ago

    Oh great. This is either really good or horribly bad.
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  33. On Beka's Fight:

    posted 4 days ago

    Hmm… what shall I do with him. Good sequel, I like that Beka was able to get him with her mind.
    LoA

  34. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 11:

    posted 5 days ago

    Oh no… Well if I was her, I would want to ask him out but I wouldn’t have the guts to.
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  35. On Plan?:

    posted 5 days ago

    Well, everything can’t be happy forever dreamer or there would be no fight.
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  36. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 9:

    posted 5 days ago

    Lol, he likes you! not massey. This is really good!
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  37. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 8:

    posted 5 days ago

    oooooooo, harsh but really funny! SHe kind of deserved that.
    LoA

  38. On After the Before he Cheats (Sing-Song Challenge):

    posted 5 days ago

    This story is the after “Before he Cheats” by Carrie Underwood.
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  39. On Sing-Song Challenge!:

    posted 5 days ago

    Omg, I don’t know how I missed it either. I have the bestest idea!
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  40. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 7:

    posted 6 days ago

    I would slam the door in her face. lol, jking.
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  41. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 6:

    posted 6 days ago

    I know, you can’t really ever get everything on his face in you head, not perfectly. I sense some anger coming from her.
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  42. On Would you Ever?:

    posted 6 days ago

    Here is a hint. Six words: You, can, take, my, breath, and away.

  43. On Next:

    posted 6 days ago

    I know what needs to happen next! I really like this! It is a very heroic moment. You seem to be good at that!
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  44. On Interesting:

    posted 6 days ago

    Five stars!
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  45. On Interesting:

    posted 6 days ago

    Oh darn. A set up. Jack is a whimp for not asking you out himself.
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  46. On Would you Ever?:

    posted 6 days ago

    This was inspired from a song. Can anyone guess what it is?
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  47. On They will Rule?:

    posted 6 days ago

    I fixed it. Oh btw I hit Nirvana. Even after I fixed it I was still at Nirvana. Lucky huh?
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  48. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crushing: Part 5:

    posted 6 days ago

    Well, sometimes the unexpected is the best of all. When it hits you by surprise, you feel it the most.
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  49. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crushing: Part 4:

    posted 6 days ago

    Who is that someone? Is it Jason. Hm… reading on.
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  50. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 3:

    posted 6 days ago

    I love that line too! Although, none of the girls my age think that way, we just think all of them are buttheads.
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  51. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 2:

    posted 6 days ago

    I am guessing, Blake. =) Reading on! You never now when you might find someone special. I met the guy I like in health class. lol.
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  52. On The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 1:

    posted 6 days ago

    Oooh good start. Boy scouts. Hmm..
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  53. On Plan?:

    posted 6 days ago

    I like this. I have the most awesome idea!
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  54. On Kelly's Dream [scavenger hunt challenge]:

    posted 6 days ago

    That is a very interesting dream. Once my friend had a dream that Pop- eye the Sailor Man rowed on his boat into her bath room and said the house is sinking then left. lol. =D I got some of them!
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  55. On Pushing Thoughts of Her:

    posted 7 days ago

    Thank you Freedom! You’re so kind! =D
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  56. On Perfect:

    posted 7 days ago

    Thebetweenspace is right. Kit is probably jealous about something. I love how we expect the dates to always be perfect. It is like we set ourselves up to fail.
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  57. On Friday:

    posted 7 days ago

    Nice sequel! I love how she got irretated with the ring back. You can get rid of those extra sequels by making them drafts.
    LoA

  58. On Should Have Known:

    posted 7 days ago

    Oh no. I want to see what happens now!
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  59. On Too Hot, Way Too Hot:

    posted 7 days ago

    I like it! I love pizza! Then again, who doesn’t?
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  60. On Dinner. ((For Real This Time!)):

    posted 7 days ago

    Awww. Sorry it took me so long to finally read this.
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  61. On This One's For You, Johnny:

    posted 7 days ago

    Yess, it is. Good job. It gives a great mental picture.
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  62. On A Twist:

    posted 8 days ago

    Omg, awesome sequel!!! I loved it!!! I will sequel tomorrow.
    LoA

  63. On Just Memories:

    posted 8 days ago

    Nice poetry! If this is true, they guy for you is out there. He just wasn’t it.
    LoA

  64. On The Trip (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 8 days ago

    Wow, either you have a lot of friends or pets or both. I got the rest, except for you fav song. Good little snipit about a girl that loves to complain.
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  65. On Somewhat Cinderella :

    posted 8 days ago

    I would go weak at the knees for a rose, but I do have to know the guy that gives me the rose and if he is my kind of guy. Good sequel, Trey is a interesting name.
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  66. On Roses:

    posted 8 days ago

    Nice start. I have a feeling that this series is going to be really good! You know I am going to sequel at some time.
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  67. On Preparing to fight:

    posted 8 days ago

    Freedom, I kind of left you to do the fight scene. Or part of it. If you need help with it, note me. =)
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  68. On Stunned:

    posted 8 days ago

    Save her! You know you want to! =D
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  69. On Ready to Go:

    posted 9 days ago

    omg, this series is going a bit short. Let’s see if we can’t string out the battle a bit. Yes, I love the romantic moment. I will sequel tomorrow! =D
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  70. On Saving her, Part Two:

    posted 9 days ago

    Please tell me if you like this and if there is anything I can do to change it. I seems a bit rushed to me.
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  71. On Talking:

    posted 9 days ago

    Hmmm, things are not looking good for Stephen are they. Still rooting for him. I picking a perso nand standing by it!
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  72. On Realizations:

    posted 10 days ago

    Awww, good for you faith! I don’t know how late this sequel is but I just found it. Never late then ever.

  73. On Into The Shurb:

    posted 10 days ago

    Good start! =D what is it?
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  74. On Talk?:

    posted 10 days ago

    I hope she wont get into trouble.
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  75. On The Note:

    posted 10 days ago

    ouch, thats not cool. I want see what happens next!
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  76. On I Hate You And I'm Glad About It:

    posted 10 days ago

    I am still rooting for Stephan. ;)
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  77. On The Car Ride:

    posted 10 days ago

    =O! I knew this was going to happen. Not good! great sequel though!
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  78. On Not For Long:

    posted 10 days ago

    Hmmm… I am going to have to think of a plan
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  79. On A Visit with History (Summer Vacation Challenge):

    posted 13 days ago

    Have you been to Gettysburg before? It is creepy there. You can pratically see the people still fighting. Good explaination, I can picture the vacation.
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  80. On Wandering:

    posted 13 days ago

    Very interesting that he shows up infront of her house. I wonder what he will do.
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  81. On Labels:

    posted 13 days ago

    Hollister has some good stuff, but it’s pretty exspensive. I go to Aeropostale. Good sequel! =)
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  82. On White {Part 1 - Unexpected Twist Challenge}:

    posted 13 days ago

    oh my gosh. You might not know everything, bit you do know what is going to happen next…
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  83. On This Is Just, Yet Another, A Ficlet All About You:

    posted 13 days ago

    lol, you are right Ana! =D
    LoA

  84. On Smiles:

    posted 14 days ago

    Wow, way to bring a possible hero down. I can’t be as pessimistic as you. I have an idea!
    LoA

  85. On Scared:

    posted 14 days ago

    oh dang. Beka is so strong though, she can get him. Reading on.
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  86. On This Is Just, Yet Another, A Ficlet All About You:

    posted 14 days ago

    Wow, I just wrote a ficlet like this. You are not the only person that misses someone they like. =) You are easy to relate to women!
    LoA

  87. On Dream Flashes Raise Questions:

    posted 14 days ago

    ok, can’t wait!
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  88. On Babysitting Night:

    posted 14 days ago

    Oh great. Stephan’s beach vs. James. I think Stephan’s was WAY much better! Hey, I am a romantic ok! =)
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  89. On Hanging By The Moment:

    posted 14 days ago

    I used to and sometimes do that when my ex walks past me. I don’t cry ( much different relationship we had), but I get a bit nervous because there was so much drama surrounding us. Some of my friends here on ficlets know that, if they remember anyway. Enough about me, good ficlet that appearently people can relate to. I also probably just wrote more than you needed to know.
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  90. On Dream Flashes Raise Questions:

    posted 14 days ago

    I hope you like this. It seems a little sketchy to me…
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  91. On Plans:

    posted 14 days ago

    I like it! My turn.. hmm…
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  92. On Nine Inch Nails, The Hand That feeds:

    posted 14 days ago

    Is it Mel?!? I wanna know! Sequel!
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  93. On Stan:

    posted 14 days ago

    This is Mel… Good sequel! =)
    LoA

  94. On Cleanup {Scavenger Hunt Challenge}:

    posted 14 days ago

    wow, now I am correcting myself, I meant You have not I have. stupid me…
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  95. On Cleanup {Scavenger Hunt Challenge}:

    posted 14 days ago

    I found the 1969 thing and I was going to say that I found basically all of them, but now you gave the answers so now it means nothing. I think you have a typo… I have no where to talk though because you are always correcting be because lets face it, I stink at grammar. I have I’m thinking on a number. I am sure that you know the correction. Unless I am wrong… Wow, I really babbled on… =)
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  96. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 14 days ago

    most of the sitcoms anyway. They all look like soap oprahs that only show once a week or less…
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  97. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 14 days ago

    I don’t care if Deadliesst Catch isn’t a sitcom! I don’t watch most of them..
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  98. On The Basement:

    posted 15 days ago

    oh no! Stephen stop her! Good sequel Freedom! I knew James was no good, that snort using drugie!
    LoA

  99. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 15 days ago

    oh ya, the comma, my bad.
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  100. On The Mission Is NOT Most Important:

    posted 15 days ago

    awww… He really really cares. I have an idea!
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  101. On Trip to the Hospital:

    posted 15 days ago

    I thought one person dieing on the series was enough. And besides don’t you think Faith has been though enough all ready.
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  102. On Neither Would I:

    posted 15 days ago

    oooo a relationship is her weakness because of that. I have an idea.
    LoA

  103. On That Night:

    posted 15 days ago

    Nice! Aww he showed he cared…
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  104. On The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!:

    posted 16 days ago

    oh wow! I am totally doing this! Great challenge Ana!
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  105. On Assignment:

    posted 16 days ago

    =) I love to make people laugh. It makes my day!
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  106. On One Decision, that can Change Your Life:

    posted 16 days ago

    I love how you added the perv thing. =) I don’t like James. I am so pro Stephen!
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  107. On Thoughts:

    posted 16 days ago

    omg! Awesome Freedom! Hehe we are off to a great start. I just have to get one more sequel in because an idea just came to me.
    LoA

  108. On Assignment:

    posted 16 days ago

    Nice job Freedom! You totally got into the sci-fi thing A relationship would definitly be my weakness. That and.. well dark chocolate.
    LoA

  109. On Some Magic and A Fake Smile (New Series!):

    posted 16 days ago

    Ya I like that name, thought is was kind of funny. Well, give it a try Freedom, can’t wait to see what you come up with.
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  110. On Daydreaming:

    posted 16 days ago

    =O no! Stephen is so much better for her! He is so much more cute! Who randomly kisses a girl in the hallway anyway, probably a perv.. lol sorry couldn’t help myself.
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  111. On Truly Amazing:

    posted 16 days ago

    reminds me of two songs Everything by Lifehouse and Amazing by Lone Star. I am a big music listener and these songs just popped into my head after reading it. =)

  112. On We'll Have Our Chance:

    posted 16 days ago

    I love it. Has a lot of meaning and I can also relate to it.
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  113. On Strange Meetings:

    posted 17 days ago

    the same guy, that’s funny! I wonder what is going to happen.
    LoA

  114. On Shock Collar:

    posted 17 days ago

    It is halirious! That is so colleen!
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  115. On Stupid Joshua:

    posted 17 days ago

    Hahaha, not bleeding much huh? nice!
    LoA

  116. On Macy 86: Four Minutes Could Change The World:

    posted 17 days ago

    I like! Thomas seems cute! Great ending! =)
    LoA

  117. On WINNERS OF 200something CHALLENGE!:

    posted 17 days ago

    Yey! Second place! Thank you and congrats to the winners!
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  118. On An Outline of a Plan:

    posted 18 days ago

    ok, I just read the whole thing! Good wonderball series guys! I can’t wait for the sequel!
    LoA

  119. On This World.:

    posted 25 days ago

    Ya so much for. The school year isn’t oveer yet. ; )
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  120. On FICLETS FUTURE VISION CHALLENGE:

    posted 25 days ago

    I would. That series you did with the airplane would be a cool video game.
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  121. On Ficlets of the Future:

    posted 25 days ago

    That would be awesome if their was a book called Ficlets. I may actually like to study that for school.
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  122. On A Ficlets Magazine:

    posted 25 days ago

    omg that would be awesome because then people on here could be on the magazine.
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  123. On FICLETS FUTURE VISION CHALLENGE:

    posted 25 days ago

    Ya, great challenge! I may have to sleep on it for an idea. I just finished studing for exams so my brain is fried.
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  124. On New Life:

    posted 26 days ago

    What a nice end Freedom. I am going to miss this series. This is one of the longest ones we have ever had.
    LoA

  125. On Why Wouldn't She Love Me?:

    posted 26 days ago

    What a tragic end. THX might of expected it, but I didn’t.
    LoA

  126. On Help Arrives:

    posted 26 days ago

    THX is right then again. Well, when is he ever wrong?
    LoA

  127. On The Aftermath:

    posted 26 days ago

    ya, the characters did change. Now Susan seems back to her senses and is saving people.
    LoA

  128. On Trouble at the Controls:

    posted 26 days ago

    Susan, Susan, Susan… That’s all I gotta say.
    LoA

  129. On Landing Downwind:

    posted 26 days ago

    Hmm…. Ya, almost foreshadowing doom.
    Reading on.
    LoA

  130. On Gonna Die:

    posted 26 days ago

    THX is totally right. I don’t think that relationship is working out for them.
    LoA

  131. On Landing Would Be Good:

    posted 26 days ago

    spoken like a true cowboy! Maybe they will live… maybe.
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  132. On You Shot Me:

    posted 26 days ago

    Someone needs to slap some sense into Susan. She crazier than Katie!
    LoA

  133. On I Knew I Was Going to Kill You :

    posted 26 days ago

    Well, if Susan just sat there and watched then she wouldn’t be the crazy character she is!
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  134. On Don't Know How to Fly:

    posted 26 days ago

    Lol, ya you’re on a roll Yoda!
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  135. On Around the Pattern:

    posted 26 days ago

    I didn’t expect that either! Good Job!
    LoA

  136. On Not So Fast:

    posted 26 days ago

    ya THX is right. What a perv…
    LoA

  137. On Greenlee and the Gun:

    posted 26 days ago

    =O oh my! She has some issues.
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  138. On "There's something I have to tell you...":

    posted 27 days ago

    oh no, no one else that dies. I wont let you do it. lol. Who is going to sequel? Is You Know You Love Mee! gone on vacation again? I don’t know…
    LoA

  139. On Farewell Kevin Chain!!! I Know you want to be Part of the Chain:

    posted 28 days ago

    Well, I started the chain first! lol! =)
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  140. On Demi's Withdrawl:

    posted 29 days ago

    OOO, nice. Avoiding a fight there aren’t ya? Nice job I have to say. I also have to say we are getting towards the end… Let’s not dewel on that though
    LoA

  141. On Demi's Withdrawl:

    posted 29 days ago

    OOO, nice. Avoiding a fight there aren’t ya? Nice job I have to say. I also have to say we are getting towards the end… Let’s not dewel on that though
    LoA

  142. On Father-Daughter Time (A City of Heroes Story):

    posted 29 days ago

    She blind? You never would of noticed until he said so. Nice sequel.
    LoA

  143. On Memories (A City of Heroes Story):

    posted 29 days ago

    Ooo a breakdown, not good. I think I will pick a day to read the whole thing, but I can understand even when I didn’t read the beginning.
    LoA

  144. On Test of Trust:

    posted 29 days ago

    opps! I will change it!
    LoA

  145. On It's More Than That:

    posted 29 days ago

    Ya, some guys have issues when it comes to things like that. You almost want to go up to them and say I like you and I know you like me so why don’t we just go out? Good job!
    LoA

  146. On That Vampire Poem Saved My Life:

    posted 29 days ago

    =) that is a good prequel Kevin! I can picture the whole story in my head.
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  147. On tt4n:

    posted 29 days ago

    Oh and all your editing comments push me to want to have edit free comment from you. I just had one recently from you and I was very happy that one ficlet out of tons that are not is grammar problem free. I check grammar a lot now.
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  148. On tt4n:

    posted 29 days ago

    You will be amazed at when you finally do, we all tend to back up each other like a big happy family. Lol THX, reminds of when Kev always says behave yourselves. =). You’re the little editor Pyro and even though sometimes I may get angry at your editing tips, I just want you to know now, that I am just being defensive and I I want (maybe need) your editing. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  149. On All They Had.:

    posted 29 days ago

    I wonder if her sis is popping pills?? Hmm.. that suspense on that is killing me!
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  150. On Test of Trust:

    posted about 1 month ago

    The Heather and Blake series! We so much fun with that one didn’t we Freedom! Heres the link to the start.
    http://ficlets.com/stories/19460
    LoA

  151. On Test of Trust:

    posted about 1 month ago

    btw, nirvana! woot woot!
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  152. On Test of Trust:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Check out our first series, it is way more intense! At least when I look back on it I think it was.
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  153. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    sequelled! Check it out! =)
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  154. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    You know what I am going to write next don’t you? =)
    LoA

  155. On Finally Get It Right:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I can’t wait to see what happens next! good sequel!
    LoA

  156. On Comics?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oooo, was it a dream? I wanna know!
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  157. On Forever.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    what I meant was it is good and bad not seeing some one. It is is a double sided coin.
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  158. On Forever.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Ya this is what sucks and waiting for that off chance that you get a phone call from him. That is the way I look at it too. Nice job!
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  159. On Unexpected Welcome:

    posted about 1 month ago

    haha, she beat you up. Well you kind of deserved it… lol good sequel!
    LoA

  160. On What?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    What!!!! Reading on!
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  161. On Get Going.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    uh oh, sounds like more trouble. We shall see.
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  162. On 207: The New Number 23:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I love the Divinci code! All though, even though it was fiction, my uncle is very religious so refused to think about anything like that in the move. He refused to watch it and forced us to turn it off. Keep your mind open guys because my uncle has some issues that he doesn’t even know are happening around him. I kind of went off on a tangent but this story of a part of my life came to mind. Very kind of chilling story!
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  163. On Challenge by Numbers :

    posted about 1 month ago

    OOO, I have an awesome idea too. I hope no one already took it.
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  164. On Ask the Wonderball:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, creepy. That’s what I don’t like those future things, they almost tell you what the destiny holds. I want to make my own destiny.
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  165. On Click.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Girl? Not even using her name? What a nice mom…
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  166. On Mommy.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Hmmm, A bit foreshadowing?? Reading on!
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  167. On Where I Saw Mommy.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ??? Where? Reading on
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  168. On Huh??:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I hate smokers too. They smell and are always coughing. Cool sequel.
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  169. On Goodbye Kevin (Join the Chain Ficleteers!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain! I love this site too!
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  170. On Bye Kevin (Join the Goodbye Chain!!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, you have been here since the beginning. Thats cool! I only wish I was.
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  171. On Not Everyday:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Nice! It has a good beat and flow to it. I am a sucker for poems, especially love poems.
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  172. On Macy 85: Realized:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ya, there below dirt and don’t care. Shane already knows how much pain he caused and Macon doesn’t give a darn. OO sequel I want to know if Shane beats the crap out of Macon.
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  173. On Macy 84: This Guy:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh dang! Macon needs a reality check… and therpy I reading on to the sequel!
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  174. On The Horror of Waking Up:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I can’t sleep on planes either, to loud and the fact that I am not on some solid ground. I hope you come back to write some good stories like this one! =)
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  175. On Farewell Kevin (Join the Chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Awesome, that word is just so Awesome! We all feel like we all owe so much to him, and we do. Man, Kev you must be feeling the love. Thanks for joining the chain.
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  176. On Join the Chain!:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining! We can never repay him for the hours he spent, but we can thank him for them!
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  177. On Goodbye Kevin (Join the chain!!!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    I have issues expressing my feelings to. I am even having issues telling you I have issues I expressing my feelings. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  178. On Thanks Kevin..=]=]=]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain Nissakit! =D
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  179. On THANK YOU KEVIN!! (contribute to the chain!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Short and sweet. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  180. On Three Cheers (Farewell Kevin Chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    WOOOO! or HOORAY!! It is my all time favorite favorite too and it is nothing like the other sites out there. Hopefully it stays different.
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  181. On A Ficlet-Holic Says Thank You (The Chain Is Growing! Come Join!!!!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    I love what Melia said about the ship thing, it was so cool. Thanks for joining the chain.
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  182. On Good evening and goodbye, Kevin (come to the chain guys!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    I hasve only been here for about 5 months to. I have changed so much sense then. Well, then again I am a teenager and teenagers are always changing, but you get it. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  183. On "I heard something":

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, they must of heard the same thing. Very dun dun dunnnnn. Sequel!
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  184. On Just Random Doodles:

    posted about 1 month ago

    A drawing of what! You raise so many questions!
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  185. On Should I Let Them?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    omg what! Reading on!
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  186. On An Upcoming Test:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I am sorry I didn’t sequel yesterday! I am was so busy! I am so so sorry!
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  187. On Excuse Me?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ooo goood! =)! How am I going to sequel that! I am going to have to come up with something…
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  188. On Not just venting:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oh my! Way to add to the drama!
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  189. On Second Chances (A City of Heroes Story):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Awwww, I didn’t know you when you did this series. It sounds really good, if it is anything like you more recent ones!
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  190. On Byeeeee Kevinnn!!! [[Join the Chain!!]]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I am perfect! lol, jking. I hope who ever replaces him is even close to as good as he was too.
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  191. On Farewell, Kevin (Part of the Chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    It was sweet! Thanks for joining the chain!
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  192. On Just for Kevin (Da Love Chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain! Ficlets seems to get me away from problems of the world too.
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  193. On Just For Kevin [That gushing chain thing continues]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I don’t get it… w/e. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  194. On Kevin, Goodbye...(Joining the Chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    He is amazing! Thanks for joining the chain!
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  195. On Joining Chain of Farwells:

    posted about 1 month ago

    do say okay until you know Kevin, made this site! Thanks for joining the chain Freedom.
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  196. On Joining the farewell chain. Thanks Ficlets Father.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ya, nice. Thanks for joining the chain!
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  197. On Another Link in the Chain{Thank You Kevin}:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I know, I cried already. My family has company over right now so I will have to refrain from tears.
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  198. On Yet Another Link In The Chain (Thank You Kevin):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain! I love the first line, that’s halirious!
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  199. On Another link in the chain (Thank you Kevin!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain!
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  200. On Thank you!!! (joining the chain...):

    posted about 1 month ago

    He did handle the “bad apple” situation perfectly, after we put the pitchforks down. =)
    Thanks for joining the chain.
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  201. On Thanks Kevin! (join the farewell chain!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain. You are right, it is my second home.
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  202. On Just A Phone Call:

    posted about 1 month ago

    cool! I hate those purposeless phone calls. It does make you want to call them back and talk about something meaningful.
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  203. On Seconds:

    posted about 1 month ago

    You changed you name! =O
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  204. On Seconds:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Chilling, pretty scary. Also romantic, I wish there were more gentlemen in the world. Sigh.. Good sequel.
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  205. On Thank you Kevin! (Farewell chain):

    posted about 1 month ago

    I loved the last two lines! You are captain Kevin and it was a pleasure to sail with you! Thanks for joining the chain!
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  206. On For He's a Jolly Good Fellow ... [Join the Kevin Lawver Chain!]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for joining the chain Ana! =)
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  207. On Dear Kevin, ((join the Chain!)):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Such a nice little note! Thanks for joining the chain!
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  208. On Dear Kevin, ((join the Chain!)):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Such a nice little note! Thanks for joining the chain!
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  209. On Pink Cigarette (song lyrics challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow! That is very tragic and really good! I am speechless other than that! Congrats on geting most popular!
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  210. On READY SET GO NEW CHALLENGE :

    posted about 1 month ago

    I have another idea I really want to do. Can I enter twice?
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  211. On Singing "Hero" (Lyrics Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    You guys all know this song! It is “Hero” by Enrique Iglesias!
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  212. On READY SET GO NEW CHALLENGE :

    posted about 1 month ago

    Yess! I am so in!
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  213. On Farewell Kevin Chain!!! I Know you want to be Part of the Chain:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Comon do it! DOOOO ITTT!!!
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  214. On Deep Space Disaster:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Haha! That is so funny! How dare he drink all of the milk! Congrats on geting featured!
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  215. On Macy 83: Good Part?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    yes it is! (Takes out pom-poms) GOOOOOOO!!!! M-A-C-Y!!! MACY!
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  216. On All That I See:

    posted about 1 month ago

    It is a free write form of a poem. You should get into poetry, it is fun to write.
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  217. On Left Overs:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, bravo! It is kind of a poem and has a certain rythm and flow to it. Awesome job!
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  218. On Understood:

    posted about 1 month ago

    It is emotionally packed. I used to have a friend with the some ordeal. We went our seperate ways and it was all ok. Things will work out. =)
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  219. On Didn't Know:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Awww, I always tell my friends that too. Sometimes they tell me way more then I needed to know, but it makes me happy when I help them feel better.
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  220. On All That I See:

    posted about 1 month ago

    this was off one little thought I had and now it seems a bit short. Tell me what you think.
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  221. On The Year is 3090:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Good job. A very sad kind of future, but who knows what the future may hold. I just hope if that happens in our lifetime, that I am not one of the ‘sick’ genes.
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  222. On Macy 82: Memories:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hmmm… I wonder what is going to happen… No I really do. I have no idea where you are going to take this.
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  223. On I Did It My Way{ He Did It His way}(Theme Song Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Hey! I know that song! Good them song. Suits you well.
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  224. On Ficlets Challenge-Your Theme Song, Your Story:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ooo this sounds like fun. da da da! lol!
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  225. On Trevor's New Plan:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is an interesting series you have here. About how the kids now a days know way to much. 5th graders going out and a 16 year old has a kid. That is very interesting. He just wants to do you know what with her, it must be the name. Trevor is a name that says… well you can guess it.
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  226. On Stalk:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Not good at all… Nice job dude! Sequel please! =D
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  227. On Underground Subway Friend:

    posted about 1 month ago

    good one, at least she could stop before he was killed.
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  228. On Home Free:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oh comon. Josh, you got issues… lol
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  229. On What Now?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Demi it says right there
    he pushed the knife into Demi
    she dodges it, makes sense to me…
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  230. On {Uselessness's Maneuvers Challenge}: Pulling the Cord:

    posted about 1 month ago

    it makes you wince in pain. a very unexpected ending and very sad. You almost foreshadowed it in the beinging with the he hoped he remembered how to put the chute up. Awesome entry.
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  231. On Macy 81: The Clash:

    posted about 1 month ago

    what night? Which one? When? I wanna know!
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  232. On Macy 80: Hurt Her:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Ooo, Shane.. Macy you got some guts now.
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  233. On Macy 79: Easier:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh no! Derrick! Where are you!?
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  234. On Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late:

    posted about 1 month ago

    opps, that is typo. Sorry for the confusion guys!
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  235. On What Now?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OO, intense, that is word we use now on everything. good job, going to have to think hard about this sequel.
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  236. On The World Crashing:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ok so I didn’t exactly say he will live, but he is still awake and talking so it is leaning towards one way right?
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  237. On Not Ethan too...:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ooo, the pressure is on for me isn’t it…
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  238. On Kahn Makes a Decision:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Got it!
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  239. On Not Ethan too...:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oh my… goodness.We may be able to save him.
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  240. On When Monkeys Rule the World(Kitty-pom-pom's Randomness Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    That is funnay and alomost believable! I don’t think I will be going to Jersey anytime soone either!
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  241. On Make Me Laugh Challenge Results: The Tournament of Champions (Top 16):

    posted about 1 month ago

    oh darn I didn’t enter the challenge. I guess there is always next time. Congrats to all of the winners.
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  242. On Macy 78: Walked:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wooo! Oh ya! See ya Macon! So things are looking brighter. I still have no idea what kind of idea to come up with for our series. Do ya have anything?
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  243. On Kicked: I Remember This...(Pt 24):

    posted about 1 month ago

    ran out of room. I wish I could help you get threw this, but all I can hope is that you took every word that all of us commentors said to heart and we helped you in some way. That is really what is on my mind.

  244. On Kicked: I Remember This...(Pt 24):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, I was pretty strong with my comments but I don’t think i got what I had on my mind across because then I was just reacting to the anger I had building up about him. Ya know I love ya Freedom and all I wanted was to give some words for encouragment to help you get threw it and wytherwings is right, the past is the past and you have to forgive yourself and move on. He has made you stronger and I don’t know what I would do If I was in your situation. I wish I could really help you get threw this.
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  245. On Gossip (New Series):

    posted about 1 month ago

    nice start! Gossip sucks, I don’t get why people send rumors if they don’t like hearing about rumors about them selves. This is going to be some interesting series.
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  246. On Playmate [Reali(s/z)ation challenge - very late entry]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    lol, I read this but I never gave you my thanks. Thank you for entering and now I feel bad. I am sorry. It is a really good entry!
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  247. On Enough For Now:

    posted about 1 month ago

    nah it’s cute and to the point. aww he wanted to make up for the kiss.
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  248. On Just a Kiss:

    posted about 1 month ago

    yey! They kissed how cute. The awkward moment was not good, but if I was in that situation it probably would of happened to me
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  249. On Realization! (MY 200 FICLETS CHALLENGE!) Challenge on!:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aww, sorry Pyro.. I tried to make sure everyone entered.
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  250. On WARNING: I Remember This...:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Opps, sorry I already commented pretty strongly on all of them. I am glad people from you schoool are going to read this Freedom. They need to know HELP PEOPLE WHEN THEY LOOK LIKE THEY ARE IN NEED! I am ok.. I’ll be ok.. .pretend you didn’t read that…
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  251. On Stronger because of You:

    posted about 1 month ago

    btw, in the beginning of the series I hinted at the fact that Faith had some issues with Dylan, I just didn’t make it obvious.
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  252. On Night Walk [[Ideal First Date Challenge]]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    is this a true story?! Sounds perfect. =)
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  253. On