I read the series so far… it’s amazing. It reminds me alot of what my own situation was. Except the hosptial part. It got bad… thats where the love of hoodies and jeans came from… I think the series will really touch some people. And it is awesome. I find it hard to beleive that you arent writing form expereince. Reading this brings tears to my eyes as I remember those times. The bad times. So thank you for wirting these. It really hit home with me. Keep writing.
Anything is possible with faith, hope, and a bit of love. You just have to believe that you can eventually acheive your goals if you continuously work at them.
Im not mad if you stop and you apologize for labeling people. Yeah its one of those people and I dont apreciate it.. im not emo .. far from it!!! Who are you??? BTW Katie and Rachel read this…
this is what i mean… it seems like you are trying to be her friend… maybe she led you on a bit but if you dont want to be her friend dont make it seem like you do.
ohh.. i try to stay out of those situations because unless your my friend the number one person in my life is me. I care about others and all but if they are getting picked on i stay out of it. so unless your my friend dont expect much of a reaction. if that sounds shallow or selfish oh well.
okay seriously..do know my every feeling…andmy everythoughtor are you just good. I dontknow if you’ve been through this or if you are writing from what i say..but either way its good.
i understand how you fell but just not for the same reasons. when your life takes a drastic change you see everything differnetly. if someone isnt in your life anymore then life without them is way diferent. same as if you go through a personel change then you will see everything with a different light. I undersatnd exactly. its a possibility that you will never see those things the same again but then agian you might… really you never know.
the message is strong.. you should always be faithful to who you are.. no one should change you but you.. you are perfect the way you are and any one whos has a problem with that should double check themselves because everyone has faults.
you said that you are being pushed to be someone who you arent. and… it says that your not sure who really cares… and well who can blame you after the fight we had and the fight that ended you and tibbs friendship. really serioulsy… more people care than you think.. you just need to look deeper into some people and you’ll find who really cares. look around carefully at everyone you come across… to see if they care. you’ll find so much more than you think…... including me.
that was really good….. i think we all have converstions with our selves except usually its our conscience talking.. the way you wrote it was creative and very thought provoking.
looking back at some of the stuff that was said i agree with the people on this site… this fighting was disgraceful and just dumb… im gonna save whatever I ahve to say for in person and looking at your poem its pretty good. oh and Kevin Lawver she wasnt the one getting hated on through storys, that was me and thats exactly what she was doing with this story…but we are cool so it doesnt matter any way.
I love the lower case ‘i’ in that particular line… it gets the piont across that you arent just break rules but that your rewriting them…it makes sense and really makes that line stand out.
WTH….Whatever I haven’t told any of your F’n secrets and if you tell mine I ‘ll tell all of yours. So if both of us keep our mouths shut then we can both go on with our lives seperately. So whatevs I dont care. I thought we had a plan!!!! If you still feel that way I dont have to play pretend any more! Forget it plan done!!! I dont want any part in your general hypocrisy. Leave me alone Forever!!!!
Gee I wonder what thats about!!! And by the way the mean things that you where talking about in that ‘poem’ that we ‘didnt’ mean I do mean them!!! Okay take a hint!!! I dont want to be your friend!!!
oh whatevs i dont care if people read that. It’s nothin big. But thanks for the concern!!! I cant wait until history there is something I have to tell you. But hey whatevs you probably wont read this for days anyways so I’ll have to write it in a note tonight.. See ya later whore. c( : LOL.. Write back when you do get this!!
That was absolutly awesome. Slightly disturbing but overall fantastic!! Keep writing down the funnies. Your really good for a laugh. I literally Laughed Out Loud. The people around me probably think Im pysco.
I get those ideas at the most inconvient places. At restaraunts they end up on a napkin. When Im in the bath and I get a good idea I rerun it in my head over and over. If Im in bed usually the idea is gone because once Im in bed I stay there. Some writer I’ll make. LOL.
That was funny. Really. I had to go back and read it a second time because toward the end I got the characters dialogue mixed up. But I love your writing style. Btw I was the person you told to take it to Live Journal. I didnt apprecaite the critisism because you didnt know what you were talking about but now that I look back I can see where you were coming from so any time you want to head on over and read my storys feel free. I made it obvious that they are fiction this time. Thanks for helping me….
Sometimes people make mistakes and they should learn from them. but other times if someone makes a mistake about loving someone even though the person is a bad person sometimes it may be hard for that person to stop loving them. Yes its a mistake and yes they keep making it over and over but sometimes you’ve gotta look from their point of view. Sometimes its a mistake that they have to make.
Well for O.T.O.C thigns probably wont get better for a while. Face it most men are immature. For Lena-Thanks] For THX 0477- You sound unlike most guys. You should have no s=reason to apologize. Your apologizing for agony you didn’t cause. You sound very mature and so forgive my saying this unmanly. Most guys would never apologize for anything and they wouldn’t apologize where everyone could see it. So to you thank you. Because you have shown me that there is hope. Not everyone is ‘dumb’.
Wow I love you Tib. And Lena maybe I dont want to forget the past. Maybe if I never forget I can actually learn from it. Probably not but it cant hurt. and if I don’t trust anyone but my Tib because of past experience then oh Freaking well. And of Course I trust my Tib-Tib. I mean seriously!
Stop while your ahead Hailey! Your just going to start more drama! If you just accept the fact that things are not going to change then all this will stop! So dude just stop!!!
This poem is about how love is a disease. It leaves you with scars and still throbbing wounds. Love. Then people smother you with Im sorrys and its okay when you know it will never be. You need a break. You need a rest. But you are still pestered by the same people. Love hurts. Forever.
Of course it’s fictional. The entries are meant to be in a collumn form! If it wasn’t fictional I would be a total pysco. I change names so I don’t hurt someones feeling if these stroies are based on a friends life. I assumed that this site was a place where you could publish stories with out them getting critisized like your doing but i guess I assumed wrong! Thanks alot (sarcasim)
I’m me. There’s only a few people who know who am i really am. And those people are my best friends.
If you were to ask anyone about me they’d probably say… that I’m fun and energetic. But pretty loyal. You can always count on me.
I’ve been through enough to know how to handle most situations. Which is where my poems come from. They’re basically advice that I give from my personal expereinces.
I love writing and I love the rest of the arts: Guitar Piano Vocals Art and just being creative.
I love who I am. And will stand up for myself and others. I figure if you don’t love yourself who will…
My personal feelings are shown through my poems and I love that style of writing.
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