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On What Does Your Bookshelf Say About You? (bookshelf challenge):

posted 22 days ago

Fun challenge. Though I wrote more about my makeshift bookshelves, I hope it still counts ;)

On Where To Find Him:

posted 22 days ago

Nice work, you did a great job with the descriptions.

On Where To Find Him:

posted 22 days ago

Nice work, you did a great job with the descriptions.

On Where To Find Him:

posted 22 days ago

Nice work, you did a great job with the descriptions.

On Unseen Beauty [Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge]:

posted 22 days ago

Beauty in it’s most haunting form. Excellent work describing the moment in a way that brings the reader to feel empathetic with both the victim and his beloved. Great job!

On A Good Walk... :

posted 23 days ago

Very nicely written, great job!

On A Night's Sky:

posted about 1 month ago

Beautiful sequel. I love the line: Words like “hate” didn’t exist, and never had. Great work!

On My Life in Technicolour:

posted about 1 month ago

Interesting turn of events, will he now be able to see his future as well? I like how you portrayed his childhood memories; very well done.

On Mistakes I Made in an Alley in London:

posted about 1 month ago

I agree, great dialogue. Nice work.

On Prof. Revilo (googler challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

Hehe not bad…a real live professor? And such a coincidence that his first name is his last name spelled backwards :D

On That Butterfly in Chaos Theory:

posted about 1 month ago

My goodness, I envy your skills. Brilliant work.

On Unconventional Zen Master Challenge:

posted about 1 month ago

Congrats congrats and once more, welcome! Great challenge, I hope I can come up with something fitting.

On The Religious Observations of a Common Canine:

posted about 1 month ago

Very nice, I love the dog’s simplicity.

On Helpless:

posted about 1 month ago

I know that feeling. Don’t get caught in that web; no matter what you do, it’s ulitmately his decision. Nice work!

On Jeans, Vintage T, and Vans. What More Needs To Be Said?:

posted 2 months ago

I love the style that this is written in, I can’t quite describe it, but it’s great.

On Make Me Laugh Challenge:

posted 2 months ago

Congrats and thanks for the great inspiration! Keep up the awesome work.
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On The Eyes Image (When I Grow Up Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I agree, great poetic fluency. Truly lovely.

On Vet by Day, Madonna by Night [[If I ever grow up I wanna be...]]:

posted 2 months ago

I love how the mom’s filming this, it really adds to the sweet sort of innocence. Nice work!

On Studying Physics (Part 2):

posted 2 months ago

The last line really pulls this all together; I love last line punchlines. Great work!
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On Fata Morgana:

posted 2 months ago

Amazing descriptions, they pull the reader into the story and give it a slightly eerie mood. Nice work!
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On One More Day:

posted 2 months ago

Hmm now I want to know what’s going on between those two, I think I may just have to read the rest of this series. Nice work!
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On Copernius Drewberry:

posted 2 months ago

Nice sequel, it leaves me wondering if there’s a chance the two will meet.
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On Fool's Hiding:

posted 2 months ago

Parents just don’t want to see their kids miserable. But it’s still no excuse.
Nice work.

On Jerry is a God:

posted 2 months ago

Very nice, definetly made me laugh (slightly out loud).

On I Was Mature For My Age Then [When I Grow Up challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

This made me smile. I think some people are just born with that predetermined little something that makes them find the perfect future. Great job!
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On Dreams Only Last for a Night {{Grow Up Challenge}}:

posted 2 months ago

That would be pretty awesome…too bad I can’t play an instrument and my singing makes small children cry. Sigh…maybe author is better suited for me.
Nice work!
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On Saturday Waffles [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Hey who cares if it’s not like the others? For me that’s a plus point. Very nicely written!
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On The Bad Habit [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

I wanted to be a nun too…the simple lifestyle intrigues me. And I think I considered paleontology in fourth grade also. Great work!
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On Saint Chuck's When I Grow Up Challenge [100 Ficlets]:

posted 2 months ago

Ah well I think we’re all still a bit awkward, no worries =)

On I Want To Be A Hero (When I Grow Up Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I think I’m going to give myself a few more years before coming to terms with my non-superhero existence. Great entry!

On It Wasn't Funny [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Awesome ending. I never know what to expect from your stories, other than that I know better than to expect the expected. Great work.
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On What I wanted to be when I was seven! (Saint Chuck's Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I definetly wanted to be a rock finder when I was little. I think I even managed to find a few fossils…Nice work!
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On Island Life [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Man now you got me dreaming. Who needs college and a career when you got a desert island?!

On The Truth about Writing [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Love the whimiscal side to this. Great work…and keep dreaming :)

On A Day In My Life:

posted 2 months ago

You said it!

On Kofi's Wall [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Great entry, the last line really says it all. It sums up the boys aggressions and hopes all in one. Nice work!

On Alone:

posted 2 months ago

Haha ich bin total begeistert, dass du auch hier bist! =D Und nicht schlecht für die erste Geschichte, ich glaub meine war halb so gut ^^

On Alone:

posted 2 months ago

Great concept, I think almost everyone feels like this at one time or another. But I think you could formulate it a bit differently to make the reader care more about the character.

On I'm going to be.. (When I grow up challenge):

posted 2 months ago

This is a great twist on the superhero dream. Nice work and thanks for entering!

On 8/6/45:

posted 2 months ago

I agree with OT,OC. This really peaked my interest. I’ve always known the basics of this, but now I feel intrigued to learn a bit more.

On Death to the Innocents:

posted 2 months ago

Hearing something like this from a personal point of view makes it all the more heartbreaking. Very well written.
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On Little Boy:

posted 2 months ago

Great work on bringing to life one of the most tragic events in history. No easy feat, ice job.
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On Gramps and His Memory:

posted 2 months ago

I agree, heartbreaking in a way. Very nice.
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On Realization! (MY 200 FICLETS CHALLENGE!) Challenge on!:

posted 2 months ago

Thanks for the inspiration! =)

On The Perfect Metaphor for Pale Blue:

posted 2 months ago

Beautifully put. Simply beautiful. Great work =)
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On The End of the Deja Vu Challenge:

posted 2 months ago

Well I didn’t participate, but I’d still like to congratulate all the winners! Great work.
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On More Belated Quiz Answers Just Cuz:

posted 2 months ago

Very nice answers, made me chuckle.
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On The Only Way To Walk Is Moving:

posted 2 months ago

Brilliantly formulated, this is something that I’ve never been to put into competent sentences before. Nice work!
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On Nobody Ate the Plums [The Apology Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Brilliant is all I can say.

On Leona's Black Horse:

posted 2 months ago

This is really beautiful
I love the line, “She’s too pretty to be dead.”
Nice work.
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On Mmmmmm...:

posted 2 months ago

Ok well I admit I cheated and read the last line first…but great story, I love the descriptions. If I hadn’t cheated I really would have been rather confused.
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On Innocent Fun [apology challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Haha this is great. It sounds so innocent.
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On Well, Didn't Your Mother Ever Tell You to Eat Your Words?:

posted 3 months ago

I agree with all that was said already, very powerful. Your descriptions really make the words seem like more a character than the person. Great work.
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On "This Is Just To Say..." [The Apology Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Aw jeez I’ve been on this site for almost a year and still haven’t hit 100. But congrats on your awesome feat!
And great challenge ide!
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On A Series of Unlikely Events:

posted 3 months ago

Very entertaining. Must be a pretty difficult power to control. Nice work.
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On Not What She meant:

posted 3 months ago

Ooh that’s harsh. Guys are so clueless sometimes, but what can you do? Nice work capturing the awkwardness of the situation.
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On Random Thoughts from a Frustrated 17 Year Old [Diary Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Hehe the last line is great. I think you captured the essence of the average teenage girl pretty well.

On Cat the Dancing Mouse's "Philosophical Exploration of the Pen name.."Contest: And the winner is...:

posted 3 months ago

Thanks so much!
I really got quite a kick out of this challenge.
And the fact that people are still confused with my gender is rather entertaining also.
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On How to Irritate Your Wife [One More Word Writing Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Brilliant as usual. The guy acts like his wife’s the one doing something wrong.

On Say Something Nice Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Hehe great entry, I like your style.

On My last Quiz Answers. Eva. Enjoy.:

posted 3 months ago

Love that song =)

On Dream by Day Interupted:

posted 3 months ago

Oh dear…our classroom is on the top floor with big windows that are almost always open. They’re just beckoning to me, yearning to be stared out of. Well, at least better than jumped out of. Great story!

On Pencil's lament:

posted 3 months ago

Very creative! It’s strange knowing that I’m actually sympathizing with a pencil. But I’m always up for new expieriences. Great work!

On What We Are And What We Want:

posted 3 months ago

You set the scene very nicely, very realistic but yet not too boring. Nice work.

On I Guess I'll Be Nice (Nice Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Ah well, I try. And I’m honored to be called a muse, I’ve honestly never been called that before. Thanks, you’ve made my day =)

On When the ____ Hits the Fan:

posted 3 months ago

That’s a harsh reality, very nicely captured. The scary thing is that this is happening with an alarming frequency. Great work.
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On Parallel Kingdoms: The Magic Palanquin:

posted 3 months ago

Very well written. A softer sort of fantasy, but intriguing nonetheless.
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On 000000 (Black):

posted 3 months ago

The title is great, I like how it applies a bit to the story. Very nice how you captured his nervous feelings.
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On A Nice Dance to a Different Tune:

posted 3 months ago

I think the last two lines really tie together the story. He wants to make her feel better, make himself feel better. Very nice story, one of my favorites in a while.
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On Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Ok well this just made my day. Very fitting…I did actually write one of my most recent ficlets in school. Thanks and great job!

And to clear up the confusion…well actually, why should I clear up the confusion?

On Swing Life Away2:

posted 3 months ago

Wow okay, I so didn’t realize that this is actually a song lyric. Hehe maybe I ought to read the prequel first, or maybe you should just post some orignal stuff ;)

On Swing Life Away2:

posted 3 months ago

I love the repition in this, it gives this poem a lyric-like feel. You capture the feeling of living an average life but making the most of it very well. You have a great feel for prose, I wish I could write poetry like you.
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On Punctuations of a Downtrodden Life:

posted 3 months ago

You can make even the most brutal and unintelligent things seem eloquent and slightly less mundane than they really are, a quality I rather admire in you. Nice work.
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On New Rules:

posted 3 months ago

Great dialogue. I really must read the rest of this, I have no idea what’s going on.
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On Margie ends and Frida begins.:

posted 3 months ago

Really great sequel, I’ll have to read the whole series. Now that I actually live in Germany, I find the country’s history even more fascinating than before. And to see it depicted in such a creative way is a nice change from the textbook standard.
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On Love After a Storm:

posted 3 months ago

Great imagery, this is really well written. I like the metaphor of the phoenix, it really fits to the story.
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On Defy our Mortality?:

posted 3 months ago

It seems like people are their own worst enemies, destroying themselves from the inside out. Nicely put, short and sweet.
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On Life As Melia [(Your Pen Name Here) Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Excellent, great tribute to a great author.
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On When Life Gives You Lemons...Rub Them in Other People's Wounds:

posted 3 months ago

Brilliant. I like how you incorporated the quote without making it to kitschy or noticeably prominent. Nice work.
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On Jesus vs. Uncle Sam (Ficlet Number CL Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Awesome dialogue, I can see why you picked these two figures. Their contrasting views and influence on our world’s history make them an exemplary pair to put together.

On (Your Pen Name Here) CHALLENGE:

posted 3 months ago

I think every one of us is secretly hoping that s/he will have a story written about them. Great challenge!

On The Flying Lie:

posted 3 months ago

I don’t want no clown loving me! That thing has always scared the living daylights out of me… Great dialogue, way to sum up the average salesman in such a small amount of words. Nice work.

On Go Girly; Girly Gone:

posted 3 months ago

Now that is one twist that I was not expecting. Poor girl, that must have been one hell of a shock for her. Great stuff.
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On Trying to be NICE! [flute faerie's Comment Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Ah thanks THX. I must admit, I always do a little dance of joy when I get a comment from you on one of my stories, they’re always so supportive and constructive.
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On One For the Angels, Part 5 (Conversations With Dead People Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Love the series, you have a real flair for storytelling. Nice work.
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On One For the Angels, Part 1 (Conversations With Dead People Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Wow, brilliant. I don’t know why that hit home for me, but it did. Great work.

On The Breakfast Club:

posted 3 months ago

Wonderful…the suspensful twist is great!
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On What Really Counts :

posted 3 months ago

The last line is really great, very true. Nice work.

On Growing Statistics:

posted 3 months ago

We need a cultural overhaul. Our society has become ridiculously undereducated, ignorant, and desensitized. Great eye-opening piece.
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On Adipose Tissue:

posted 3 months ago

Chilling last line. Does the reference to a tutor indicate that s/he’s homeschooled or problems at school? Nice work, great sequel.

On Sucks To Be Me:

posted 3 months ago

Great spin on the new girl cliche, nice work. I like that you left it open for sequels.
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On Define "Wrong":

posted 3 months ago

Hmm I’ll see what I can do about that line, thanks.

On Define "Wrong":

posted 3 months ago

Well the female perspective isn’t all that hard for me ;)

On Aftermath:

posted 3 months ago

Really nicely written. Normally I want sequels, but I think this calls for a prequel.
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On Visitations of a Pointless Nature [Conversations with Dead People Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Hehe very nice. People are people, even dead. The charachter trys to act tough, but you can still sense her apprehension.
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On The Rider and the Fog:

posted 3 months ago

I agree, very intense image. Nice.
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On Crazy Apes (Set Sentence Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Very cool entry, got me laughing. I would go insane babysitting a monkey, I mean our puppy is already enough work.

On Define "Wrong":

posted 3 months ago

Not my best, but it fits to the challenge.

On Getting Out Of Here:

posted 3 months ago

Great work, this character is very easy to relate to. I love her determination and can really feel the slight detachment she feels from the rest of the world.
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On Harsh Excitements:

posted 3 months ago

Really well written. Leaves me wondering what exactly is on that piece of paper. Nice work.
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On Days Like These:

posted 3 months ago

Now that my friend, is what I call a bad day.

On Regrets or Rewards?:

posted 3 months ago

The last question is great, it kind of sums up the whole thing, but also shows some apprehension. Nice work.
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On The Way That Jack Died:

posted 3 months ago

Heavy stuff, but intriguing. Why is he being killed? What’s the story behind this…?
Nice work.
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On is it me?:

posted 3 months ago

You pose interesting questions…I can definetly relate to that feeling, that everything seems the same, but yet totally different. Nice work.
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On Political Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Oh and congrats on comig up with a unique and actually challenging challenge, desperately needed. And of course, congrats for your amazing ficleteering.

On Political Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Just what I needed. Now that I’m officially a foreigner, I need feel no shame in mercilessly expressing my opinions about the politics and way of life of America.
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On American Dream:

posted 3 months ago

Now this makes me glad I moved the hell out before things get even worse ;)
Nice work!
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On American Dream Cont'd:

posted 3 months ago

Love it, very cool.
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On Mum:

posted 3 months ago

This is really sweet, nice work. But try breaking up the sentences a bit, then it would be easier to read and comprehend.
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On Confessions:

posted 3 months ago

This is brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I agree with Melia, the foreshadowing is great. And the last line really pulls the whole thing together, without revealing too much. Sequel coming up?

On Breaking Free:

posted 3 months ago

Nice…very cool twist on a teacher’s seemingly ordinary day.
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On Conversations with Dead People (A Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Definelty gonna enter this later, really cool idea. Congrats on your 100th Ficlet!

...is it normal that I always capitalize Ficlet?
Ah well, normalcy has never been my strong suit.

On And This Is Why I Don't Date Stupid Asses {Set sentences}:

posted 3 months ago

Hehe I would honestly be a bit freaked out if my boyfriend wanted to paint a portrait of me with mayonaise. Normally I’m open for a lot of things, but this is just a bit too creepy.

On Set Sentence Challenge ~It's my 210th ficlet!~:

posted 3 months ago

Yeah okay, very cool. I’ll have to enter this when I find the time aka tonight while supposedly studying French or whatnot.

On Condom Conundrum:

posted 3 months ago

Hehe very nice. You never really think about all the careful deliberation behind these kind of things.

On BULLeehmiCK:

posted 3 months ago

Heavy stuff here. I love the whole arrogant feel to this story, the feel of carelessness and ignorance. Very nicely done.

On Oh, The Elephants Know:

posted 3 months ago

I like how you personified the elephants to the likeness of a typical highschool clique. Very nice.
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On The One Word That Won't Make You Dead:

posted 3 months ago

I agree, very clever. Very professional approach to torture, followed by a quick twist at the end, leaving you wondering.
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On The One Word That Buys You Some Time:

posted 3 months ago

Love this, very…I’m not sure exactly what I’m trying to say here. But vocabulary deficit aside, great story.
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On Titles( Non-Fiction)- { More of a Rant than a Story}:

posted 3 months ago

Agreed! But I must also say that titles that are longer than the content of the acutal Ficlet are rather irritating also.

On I'm Here For You:

posted 3 months ago

Ok yeah normally I don’t stand for stuff like this, but this is really sweet.
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On Don't Say That To Me:

posted 3 months ago

I can understand that she’d want to be alone. Great emotions in all of this.
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On The Letter:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, that’s harsh. But makes for a great twist in the story.

On You're Not That Girl I Met In A Snowstorm:

posted 3 months ago

Love this…I haven’t read the rest of the series, but this makes me want to read all of it. Nice work.
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On What Is It Story Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Great description, very funny twist on such a common problem.
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On The Don't Get Defensive Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

And congrats on your 3000th comment! three cheers and such

On The Don't Get Defensive Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

As always, brilliant. Definelty have to enter this over the weekend.

On The Life and Times of a Nancy-Boy:

posted 3 months ago

Now this is just begging for a sequel…nice work!
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On Be truly happy:

posted 3 months ago

I absolutely love the last line…made me tear up a bit. Nice work.

On Why did you tell her? (64k Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Hehe this made me laugh. Again, blunt and slightly arrogant. I love how you pull this off in only one sentence. Nice work.

On The Nightmares' Song:

posted 3 months ago

Great…I love the twisted, flowing imagery you portrayed here. Very nice.
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On Bloody Knees:

posted 3 months ago

Heavy. You can really tell she regrets this, even before reading the last line. Nice work.

On [Challenge] Baby Names:

posted 3 months ago

Congrats! Let’s see if I come up with something suitable =)

On Life's Definition (64K challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I like this, though I do agree with THX. I’m not comfortable with the fact that someone else is the only reason I live my life. Because that someone else won’t always be there. And what happens then?

On And the Kitties Danced the Night Away:

posted 3 months ago

Beautiful imagery, slightly sad but hidden under the cover of pretending to be something for once. Loved it.
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On The Mischievous Marquee (Living Descriptions Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Hmm now I rather liked this story, very nice personification of something that normally doesn’t get a second glance…I don’t know what posseses people to waste their no doubt invaluable time leaving comments like that, but I can quite imagine that they’re of the pubescent, highschool boy type.

On Why can't we make love? (64k challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Hehe love this. Blunt and slightly arrogant. I rather like how you incorporated the title into the story.

On 64k (250th Ficlet Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Love, love, love this challenge. I entered the other one before, now I’m pumped for the chance to do it again!

On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices Introduction:

posted 3 months ago

I agree, some things can get a bit annoying, but everyone is entitled to their opinion, and of course, has every right to voice it. I for one, cannot stand Ficlets with titles that could compete with the actual story for content.

On The Limits of Insanity:

posted 4 months ago

Now that would be just a bit scary…nice seqeul.

On For the Good of Mankind - Well, Except You, Of Course:

posted 4 months ago

Slightly twisted, but nonetheless brilliant.

On Stay for a While [Music Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Hehe very nice. I agree, that fact that it’s a true story makes it so much better.
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On "Out of my mind.":

posted 4 months ago

Wow, this is really great. I love the surreal feel to the whole story. And the reverse script at the end is a very nice touch.
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On Student and Master (Retro Music Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

This coming from another person not alive in the 80s…very nice, this could definetly become a sequel.

On Not Your Typical Storyline:

posted 4 months ago

Hehe love the last line. I like how you set up the story, with a subtle sort humor behind it.

On Detached From Awesome:

posted 4 months ago

As the word of the day goes, awesome! I love the continuation of the sort of disconnected feel that David has.
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On Cat the Dancing Mouse: A Philosophical Exploration of the Pen Name That Rocked Your Socks...And a New Contest: CLOSING DATE ANNOUNCED:

posted 4 months ago

Come on, pick some winners! You know the challenge can’t stay popular forever.

On The Turning Point:

posted 4 months ago

You have quite a flair for vividly describing the darker side of things. Very nice.
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On The secret sect of the noble men:

posted 4 months ago

Written rather ubruptly, which makes the story loose some of it’s emphasis.
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On A bead for every...:

posted 4 months ago

I love the sentiment that you managed to portray in this story, the idea of this is really quite beautiful.

On The Morning After:

posted 4 months ago

A most well recieved start I’d say. This could go in some many directions, as everybody has already said. Let’s see if I can formulate some competent sentences and sequel this.

On To Be Touched by a Stranger:

posted 4 months ago

Aw thanks guys, all these comments have really made my crappy week a whole lot better. =)

On Desperate For Attention:

posted 4 months ago

Great first ficlet, and may I say welcome from all of us?
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On sentences without words:

posted 4 months ago

I like the subtle frustration behind this, it’s not too overwhelming, but still gets the point across. And may I just say to Bridget4552 (Cassie is it?), let her write what she wants, it’s a better outlet than bitching about it, isn’t it?
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On In Sin City:

posted 4 months ago

I agree, you really got the Vegas feel in this story. You can tell that this guy has a pretty laid-back, slightly arrogant attitude, which fits nicely into the Vegas scene.

On To Be Touched by a Stranger:

posted 4 months ago

Oof I guess my grammar is a bit off since I’ve been talking/writing/living German. Ah well, noted and edited, thanks.

On Zombies Are People Too:

posted 4 months ago

I’ll have to read this from the beginning. If the other parts are as good as this one, I’m sure I’ll love it.

On Is This IT?:

posted 4 months ago

I agree, I’m hardly a productive member of society. And after reading this, I don’t think I want to become one either.
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On I'm No Superman:

posted 4 months ago

You can tell that this person really cares about her, and wants to be able to help her. Great job.

On Spaceships Are Us:

posted 4 months ago

Ah the infamous interesting. But I must agree, love the idea, even though I don’t know how you’re going to deal a horse in one of those things.
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On Dawn:

posted 4 months ago

I like how you set the mood of this story, very erethreal and slightly haunting. I can very much get a feel of what this girl looks like, nice work.
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On What's a Girl To Do?:

posted 4 months ago

LoA. Damn it I need to get in the habit of that.

On What's a Girl To Do?:

posted 4 months ago

Great descriptions…and love the cliff-hanger ending.

On Senses on Fire:

posted 4 months ago

LoA…yeah I keep forgetting that.^^

On Senses on Fire:

posted 4 months ago

I like how you describe that he can still feel and sense everything, even though he’s blind.

On Parents:

posted 4 months ago

Someone’s feeling teen angsty are we? Treat your parents as people, and they’ll must likely do the same, that’s the best advice I can give you.

On The end of all things:

posted 4 months ago

All good things must come to an end as they say. Now if mankind can be considered a good thing, that’s a different question. Nice work.

On Trying Dialog A Deux: A Trialog:

posted 4 months ago

Hehe brilliant dia(tria?)log. This could be me talking to myself at times. Damn those cookies…

On Insanity Encouraged (Acceptance Speech):

posted 4 months ago

Love this line ‘and what’s worse…we like it.’ I agree with THX, I like your slightly different stance compared to the other entries.

On One Person At A Time:

posted 4 months ago

17 minutes can really make someone’s day, just that small bit of attention might be all someone needs.

On Regret of Omission [Saint Chuck's Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Sometimes doing nothing is the worst thing to do. Very nicely written, as always.
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On Saint Chuck's Challenge: Regrets:

posted 4 months ago

Short, sweet, yet with pained undertones. Nicely done.

On Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland:

posted 4 months ago

Very nicely put, I must say I agree with everything you’ve said.

On Anthony: Numbers:

posted 4 months ago

I envy your talent.

On Adam: Explanations, the Unexplainable, and a Picnic Table:

posted 4 months ago

I love this…a mix of sci-fi and philosophy and very compelling characters. Brilliant, as can only be expected coming from you.

On Anthony Petrov:

posted 4 months ago

I don’t know why I find this character so compelling, but this leaves me wanting more.

On Rebirth:

posted 4 months ago

I’m not sure if this is the right word, but I find this story empowering. No, that’s not the right word, is it? Anyways, I agree with Nadia, you do have a great great grasp of words.

On 115 Criss Cross Applesauce! Another Crossover Challenge!:

posted 4 months ago

As Kermitgorf said, congrats on 115…I can’t say I’m #2 on your list, but that’s understandable. I’ll see if I can come up with something for this nifty little challenge.

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 5 months ago

Love it. I’m guessing you’re also one of the people who can remember absolutely random facts but nothing school related? If you are, welcome to the club ^^.

On teenage stupidity:

posted 5 months ago

This could definatley spin off into a great series if you continue with it. Nicely done, I like how you captured their emotions and fears without watering it down.

On When we were young..:

posted 5 months ago

I’d give anything to be that age again. I miss the days of having nap-time in school and being able to spend the day coloring and playing, instead of torturing my way through physics and French .

On People make horses bite:

posted 5 months ago

I like the metaphor you used, using the horse as a symbol for her own problems.

On Anger in Suburbia:

posted 5 months ago

Best series I’ve read in a long time. I assumed it would be some little 5 year old kid, but this is oh so much more interesting.

On The Suburbs.:

posted 5 months ago

Hehe I would love to have that guy as my dad.

On Awkwardness:

posted 5 months ago

Cute, I can just imagine that poor little guy, nervous as can be.

On Ficletholicism:

posted 5 months ago

Hey I’ve been around quite a while too. Nine months now…first ficlet was number 3127. Wow…that seems ages ago. And I still haven’t written 100 ficlets.

On Boys, Gotta Love 'Em II:

posted 5 months ago

Ah, the musings of a dejected and broken-hearted schizo. Sounds amusing, until you have to deal with it in real life. Very nice story though ^^

On The Dying Thoughts of One- I Erase Myself:

posted 5 months ago

Chilling and poetic. It sounds a bit like a suicide note without all the teen angst thrown in.

On The Superhero Obituaries:

posted 5 months ago

Brilliant.

On The Man Across The Hall:

posted 5 months ago

Love the descriptions of the character, I can imagine what kind of a guy he is.

On A Four Letter Word:

posted 5 months ago

Sweet and innocent, but with a hidden context that you can’t quite make out. Love it.

On Lyrical Break-Up (flute_faerie7's lyrics challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Brilliant. This is one of my favorite White Stripes songs of all time.

On "Winners" of lyrics challenge:

posted 5 months ago

Aw darn, I actually like my entry…but congrats to the winners. Well I’m sure there’s many a challenge I can enter.

On Reminders of who we have been:

posted 5 months ago

Absolutely brilliant sequel. You took a story with no direction and gave it the push it desperately needed.

On Memories:

posted 5 months ago

Short, yet eloquent and slightly haunting. I like your style.

On Laughing at Scissors:

posted 5 months ago

Simple and cute…I like it.

On Absolution in the Food Court:

posted 5 months ago

Brilliant sequel, as always.

On Never Let A Boy Hold Your Hand:

posted 5 months ago

Halfheartedly chucks a shoe in Kermigorf’s direction.

On Never Let A Boy Hold Your Hand:

posted 5 months ago

I love playing mind games…until I get confused on how to play and only end up embarassing myself.

On six words long:

posted 5 months ago

Well said.

On Only Six Words:

posted 5 months ago

I don’t know why, but this made me laugh.

On Six word memoirs CHALLENGE and a word from our subconcious:

posted 5 months ago

Hehe, very nice.

On J.B.Williams response to the six word challenge:

posted 5 months ago

Well said.

On Love does'nt Conquer..Not always anyway:

posted 5 months ago

Painfully sweet. The opening lines seem a bit bland compared to the rest of the story though.

On Painful Memory:

posted 5 months ago

The simple descriptions say a lot more than any flowing piece would have said, nice work. And love the last lines.

On The Jump:

posted 5 months ago

Vivid descriptions, you can almost smell the soldier’s fear.

On The Jubilee of Austere Birchwood:

posted 5 months ago

Vivid descriptions, it makes you really fall in love with the character.

On Circles, Like Words, With Two Uses:

posted 5 months ago

I may just have to read the prequel(s) to this. Your stories have a subtle humor that I rather enjoy.

On Stump the Stovo! Answers #1:

posted 5 months ago

Ok, but I actually need the answer for a project in school ^^

On To a Beautiful Boy (Six Word Memoir Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Lovely.
Two thumbs up.
So four altogether, if you count Orange Oreos’s thumbs.

On {Six Word Memoir} What I would be, what I am:

posted 5 months ago

Brilliant. Absolutely brillaint!

On The Miller's Daughter:

posted 5 months ago

Great atmosphere.

On Too Deep Inside:

posted 5 months ago

Sad but sweet.

On Shy and Hopeful and Hopeless:

posted 5 months ago

Very sweet. Valentine’s Day was always such a big deal in grade school, everybody was poking fun at the people who recieved valentines, all the while wishing they had recieved one too.

On The Valentines Day Challenge:

posted 5 months ago

Man I hate Valentine’s Day, no matter if I’m single or not. Too tacky, commericialized, and all around nervous-making. I may be able to use this agression towards a Ficlet ;)

On Valentines Day Break Up (Valentines Day Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Rather boring, but the idea is a really good one.

On Walmart Intrigue (Cat's Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Hehe this is the best one so far.

On 3:

posted 5 months ago

Great work…I don’t know where you come up with this stuff, but man do I love it!

On A Night of Wild Cycles:

posted 5 months ago

Hehe…very nice.

On Derek the dork:

posted 5 months ago

Hehe I guess we all have people like that in our lives…but you told it in a very interesting and likable way.

On The Insurgenceez Haz Beginned:

posted 5 months ago

Hilarious, but now I’m just a bit afraid. I always knew those things were up to no good.

On How James and I Ended Our Friendship [Kiss Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

Great story…it reminds me a bit of one of my best friends, though I never had the chance to know him 10 years.

On A Kid A Ball A Dream {LoA Challenge by THX0477, Grand Awesome Marshall}:

posted 6 months ago

I can just imagine this whole rag-tag group of kids…great story =)

On Thirteen Minutes 'Til Freedom:

posted 6 months ago

I can totally identify with this. I got the chance to start over too…not exactly freewillingly, but it turned out to be great. Everybody needs a life overhaul sometime.

On An Awesome Dream [LoA Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

Oh man I can’t wait to sequel this…no time right now, but give me a day or two.

On Creatures:

posted 6 months ago

Now is that a good thing or a bad thing? Now it’s absolutely true of course. I just sat down and started writing with no plan in mind. But I’ve always considered bizzare as a compliment ^^