Amo de Tuus Aetas et Mors' posted comments

  1. On aftermath:

    posted 2 months ago

    A fine ending to a crappy series…. Kudos! Such fine writing!

  2. On toby sex:

    posted 2 months ago

    To start off topic of the story, most of the reviewers seem to be biased based on “Omg furry taht r BAD!!1”. Just because there is, well, dog sex in the story doesn’t mean you should judge it for that…

    ...I mean, isn’t there so much more to judge it based on? (The previous comments summed up my opinion on this story, btw.)

  3. On My Dad's Best Joke [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

    posted 4 months ago

    Lolz. Clever, and well told. Nice :D.

    Hope it wins.

  4. On Home:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh, how I can relate!

    I’m really not too sure what to say. It’s awesome; but in an undefinable way. The connection probably is the main cause of this, but anyways, keep it up. Stuff like this is the literature of the Gods. :D

  5. On Bagman: Hot Pickup:

    posted 4 months ago

    Nice, man. It seems sort of like an anime, spread out over episodes, especially with the multiple viewpoints… which I like. a lot.

    You’ve inspired me to write cyberpunk again, dude. :D

  6. On Dodge It.:

    posted 4 months ago

    Please put this as mature. Excessive cursing is a biiiiig no-no here on ficlets.

    Either way, it seems rather odd. Perhaps it is my misunderstanding of junior high (or high) school female culture, or my inability to read swiftly typed text messages, but I’d make the series a little more accessible to the general public.

  7. On www.Anti-Zombies.org:

    posted 4 months ago

    Same as BARomero, I indeed did check out the website. Just, nice.

    It leaves a slight bit of mystery around the end, which is nice. Are the main characters against the AZC, or for it? Are they killing the zombies, or are they raiding the HQ? No one can know, though the section which speaks about how they wish to find “their evil plans” speaks volumes which are unspoken… Nice.

  8. On Soldier:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with Stovohobo. That was a good line. :)

    It’s all deep, man. Nice metaphors, this is all-around awesome. I see a sequel opportunity, perhaps similar with the other side of the combat? Just sayin’.

    Also, nice subject choice. =)

  9. On The Stupid Question:

    posted 4 months ago

    Lol, nice socially based laugh. I can’t find too many problems with this that aren’t based on my own biases, so I am not going to put them here.
    ... Though ya could prequel it. :P

  10. On Prosopagnosia: Escape:

    posted 4 months ago

    Punkin, stop asking for people to sequel you. Its shameless and makes them not want to sequel you even more.

    On Topic: The series is excellent. One thing I’d watch out for is keeping a reader’s interest though. If something is simply all mystery and no even vague clues to tempt the reader’s interest, it sways them from really feeling the plot. So add some very vague, imprecise clues. You should have a grand scheme of what is going on, and only give small bits of information to the reader.

  11. On But I:

    posted 4 months ago

    Nice series. Might wanna improve grammar and capitalization a little though; it tends to turn people off a bit if it’s bad.

    Otherwise, it is very nice. :)

  12. On Cindy Lou Comes Clean:

    posted 6 months ago

    =X This is a really interesting series! Great work. Throat Wolf = For The Win. =)

  13. On Woohoo its a CHALLENGE!!! SPRING IS HERE:

    posted 6 months ago

    Had to try this… Judge soon.

  14. On The Civil War? WHAT Civil War?:

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks :D. I am thinking of spawning a few sequels.

  15. On Ego Libido Amo Tu In Aeternum, 20:

    posted 7 months ago

    Thanks. :D

  16. On Ego Libido Amo Tu In Aeternum, 10 (Now with Tags!):

    posted 7 months ago

    Yeh, if I am anything, I am a final Fantasy buff. xD Final fantasy IS the ultimate, almighty, demi-godly goodness above all >.>

  17. On Golden Amnesia:

    posted 8 months ago

    Nice work! Keep going, make it into a novel >:3

  18. On A Delightfully Awkward Philosophical Exploration of my Pen Name: Mrs. Fitzwilliam Darcy:

    posted 9 months ago

    Musical Fanfare Interesting!

  19. On Penaltys of Love:

    posted 9 months ago

    What a bitch… I’d sequel this if I had some dang inspiration.

  20. On 200 posted comments= my first challenge!:

    posted 9 months ago

    This is gonna be fun. Already wrote something, it sounds kind of awkward xO

  21. On Do you like children? [Minimum Length Challenge]:

    posted 9 months ago

    What a laugh and a half!

  22. On Golden Penthouse:

    posted 9 months ago

    =O Nice job… You’ve taken something that sounds like a more random ficlet and stretched it to a series… I <3 it!

  23. On a challenge?:

    posted 9 months ago

    Is the challenge still open?

  24. On Barn's Nobles Decision:

    posted 9 months ago

    I set this one up for prequeling and sequeling; i.e. modular. Prequel or sequel meh ;)

  25. On Magic's Mark [21]:

    posted 9 months ago

    Nicely done! I like the dynamic point of view throughout the series; it adds flavor en masse. With a little luck, I can learn to type on this god-forsaken laptop enough to continue my series. Your story has truly been an inspiration; for that I thank you.

    :D

  26. On A Tormented Conscience:

    posted 9 months ago

    O_O… Interesting…

    I just pictured five scenes this series could’ve been…

    ....Awesome…. Collapses from mental overload

  27. On Subsistence:

    posted 9 months ago

    O.O….. I… love… your… story….

  28. On through the eyes of the dead:

    posted 9 months ago

    Pretty interesting. I can’t seem to find the meaning, though… Perhaps people in heaven looking on Earth?

  29. On A Dream of Dirty Water:

    posted 9 months ago

    Interesting. It’s symbolizing…. Kind of real life, how the feelings of others can often cause you to change your actions. Sequelworthy… but I haven’t the time, nor the inspiration.

  30. On Ego Libido Amo Tu In Aeternum, 6:

    posted 9 months ago

    :) It’s part of a long running series. A bit strange, but… whatever. Feel free to write your own endings, or whatever, because until Christmas (or after!) I probably won’t.

    In fact, I encourage others’ sequeling or prequeling of this series. The official story will be all written by me, though.

  31. On Ego Libido Amo Tu In Aeternum, 6:

    posted 9 months ago

    This is gonna be the last ficlet in the series for awhile. D: Christmas holidays interfere with writing.

  32. On VAMPIRE CHALLENGE!!:

    posted 9 months ago

    How’s mine?

  33. On The breakup :

    posted 9 months ago

    That story put stars in my eyes…. I need to write a sequel.

  34. On The Second Siege of Boston:

    posted 9 months ago

    Yes, none of this actually happened. :P

  35. On 5 Things I've Never Told Anyone:

    posted 9 months ago

    Wow… I don’t think this would qualify much as a story….

    But this is a pretty nice comedic narrative. :)

  36. On Golden Digestion:

    posted 9 months ago

    <3 Nice decriptionary work. I love it. :D

  37. On The Lone Hero:

    posted 9 months ago

    It’s a good ol’ poem, comment or prequel/sequel please? :D

  38. On Nuclear Winter:

    posted 9 months ago

    Thanks. :D It’d kinda jumbled, but… hey. My first ficlet :D

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