Elliot Ryan's posted comments

  1. On Goodbye, Pie Lover:

    posted 12 months ago

    Hahaha!

    That’s awesome!

  2. On Life with Kids:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I did actually make it! :) Thanks for asking. I also had “we’re not gonna make it.” in my head the entire day.

  3. On An Unreasonable Request Prequel:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Excellent beginning. I love the way you set up her character, for the original.

  4. On Surrendering the Pie:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I can’t let the story die! Pie is just too important.

    The wheezed lackluster victory laugh had me giggling.

  5. On The Confrontation:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Not the giraffe! Say it isn’t so! Nice direction with teh funny.

  6. On A Very Special Pie:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is awesome. Honestly, I had no idea where it was going to go, and you nailed the seriousness of a pieing situation. har har

    Alas, I’m hungry now.

  7. On An Unreasonable Request IV:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Bah. After some noodling, I changed the scream to a quiet faint.

  8. On An Unreasonable Request IV:

    posted about 1 year ago

    The reason the woman screamed is entirely up to the person writing the next part. Did she drop her ice coffee, does she realize she’s been sick? Is the quarantine making her unable to get to her kids? Is the realization that she’s been totally cut off from the other colonies making her freak out.

    It’s up to you!

  9. On Let Me Speak Your Name:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Alas, Jane will have to recite more of this eloquent prose, should we hear from her again.

    This is more than just sensuality wrapped in lyricism. This is chocolate pudding covered in whipped cream, each spoonful selfishly savored.

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