Fantasy's posted comments

  1. On seventeen seconds:

    posted about 9 hours ago

    very sad

  2. On They have no lawyers, and their women go topless:

    posted about 12 hours ago

    i’m trying to come up with a sequel for this…..I got nothin’

    sorry!

    but it’s still very interesting…..

  3. On Interrupted:

    posted 2 days ago

    WTF?? HOLY CRAP!!!

    haha yay more drama!!

  4. On Interrupted:

    posted 2 days ago

    WTF?? HOLY CRAP!!!

    haha yay more drama!!

  5. On They have no lawyers, and their women go topless:

    posted 4 days ago

    freaky….but in a good way!!

  6. On Getting Into Character Part 3:

    posted 4 days ago

    i wanted to keep what he did with the body a mystery. that, and to be honest, i didn’t want to go into detail with such a grotesque situation. But…maybe he’s got a secret place where he hides all the bodies, and he’s hoping the police don’t find it…....

    there are a million possibilities.

  7. On Nick J. Loses His Cool:

    posted 5 days ago

    AHH!! This party is turning into chaos!! ahaha.

    AWW!! Nickayyy is sticking up for us! :)

  8. On Teenage Dictionary (Abbreviation Edition):

    posted 10 days ago

    OMJ!!

    use it ALL the time

    but i’m sure you know that!! lol

  9. On Teenage Dictionary, Special Edition!:

    posted 10 days ago

    OMG NO CARS IN OKLAHOMA!!

    I HAVE A FREAKING SHIRT THAT SAYS THAT!!!!!!!! HAHAHA

    LOVE IT!

  10. On Teenage Word Dictionary, continued:

    posted 10 days ago

    OMG so freaking funny!!! Everyone at my school uses all those words!!

  11. On Beauty:

    posted 12 days ago

    i went a little overboard with describing the dresses and I didn’t take the story anywhere, i know.

    But I just had such a beautiful picture in my mind!! I couldn’t resist!!

  12. On Out:

    posted 13 days ago

    Ohhh!!! Christmas! And dresses!! YAY!!!

    HERE COMES THE SEQUEL!!!

  13. On Final Verdict:

    posted 14 days ago

    YAY!! THE SERIES IS BACK!!!!!!!!

    GREAT SEQUEL!!

  14. On Tierran:

    posted 14 days ago

    haha yeah..i’m planning on turning it into a series..

  15. On Petition To Have John Perkins Legally Declared Awesome. Sign It Or Your Cat Will Get Fleas.:

    posted 20 days ago

    john is awesome. JOIN THE LoA!!!

  16. On Requests:

    posted 22 days ago

    very interesting and very cool.

    i’d like to see a sequel!!!!

  17. On I Am Vaughn (battling with alter ego voices in my head):

    posted about 1 month ago

    mannnnn!! vaughn really DOES need to see a therapist! lol

  18. On I am Brit:

    posted about 1 month ago

    so sad….

    but such a great series

  19. On I am Nerd:

    posted about 1 month ago

    this is really turning into a great series!

  20. On The Only Friend He Has (Great Supporting Characters Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    very good. i know he shouldn’t, but Tony creeps me out.

    I feel bad for Noah, I can see why he needs Tony.

  21. On Marty (Great Supporting Character Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    i know the rules said you could use as many ficlets as you wanted, but I did it the old fashioned way and just made one ficlet. It was hard to fit everything in!

  22. On Last of the clan of Eleclaire.(The Others Chapter 6):

    posted about 1 month ago

    i like it. you really developed the idea well.

  23. On A long way from home.(The Others Chapter 5):

    posted about 1 month ago

    not vague at all. very vivid, actually.

    good work! :)

  24. On So Long...:

    posted about 1 month ago

    amazing!!

  25. On Split Personality?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    man! this series is just messed up!

    and i mean that in a good way. it’s so sinister…it’s one of the best ficlets series i’ve ever read!

  26. On In the Blue of My Oblivion [Lyrics Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow…really good! mysterious and depressing.

    ..........sorry abou the guy that broke your heart :(

  27. On With A Little Help From My Friends (Your Theme Song Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    awwww!! cute!!!

  28. On With A Little Help From My Friends (Your Theme Song Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    awwww!! cute!!!

  29. On Möbius Strip: Wake the Princess - Part 2:

    posted about 1 month ago

    very creative! good sci-fi ficlet.

  30. On Möbius Strip: Wake the Princess - Part 2:

    posted about 1 month ago

    very creative! good sci-fi ficlet.

  31. On Got to Make That Breakthrough: Your Theme Song Challenge:

    posted about 1 month ago

    very cool. incorporating lyrics into a ficlet about music, from a musical ficlet challenge. I like it.

  32. On I Did It My Way{ He Did It His way}(Theme Song Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    you made a good character. he sounds very honorable.
    it almost reminds me of Morrie from Tuesdays With Morrie.

  33. On Gronlandic Edit [Your Theme song, Your Story Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow! really good! great incorporation of lyrics. this has potential to become a series!

  34. On Do sleep-deprived engineers dream of electroplated tofu?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow…really unique. nice vocabulary!

    i like it

  35. On Shivers:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ohh….sounds like Trance Garden is either an omnipotent force, a cult, or simply a club that a troubled man gets far to attatched to, in order to feel loved.

    ........but, i’m most likely way off. i just like to guess where the story is going for fun.

  36. On Deep Space Disaster:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahhaaha…funny!! i like it.

    i’m curious to see if this will turn into a series….........

  37. On A day of hard work (make me laugh challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    amazing!! SOOOO true!! i think all guys who have stay-at-home wives with kids say the same thing, “what do you do all day?”

    as thebetweenspace said, payback!!!! lol

    LoA

  38. On The Fire Heist:

    posted about 1 month ago

    this is cool

  39. On Filching Fire:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ummmm…what does this have to do with the prequel The Fire Heist????

    LoA

  40. On Me and JB 92:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow..you must really hate miley cyrus….YAY!! you’re someone i can relate to!!!! :)

  41. On Me and JB 94:

    posted about 1 month ago

    HAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD I’M LAUGHING RIGHT NOW!! OMJ I LOVE THIS STORY!! GREAT JOB!!!!!! SOOOO FUNNY!!!!!! I’D GIVE IT 100 STARS IF I COULD!!!!!!

  42. On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 4: Girls:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i’m not entirely sure how true this is….but it sure is funny!!!

    and, not ALL girls are that mean.

  43. On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 3: Staff Species:

    posted about 1 month ago

    this just proves that every middle school is exactly the same. lol

    LoA

  44. On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 2: Social Classes:

    posted about 1 month ago

    sooo true

  45. On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 1: Introduction:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i forgot to add in my last comment that, considering you’re only in middle school, you’re an AMAZING writer!!! keep up the great work!!

  46. On Supermarket on the Brain [Make me Laughe Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahaha!! that’s sooo funny!! and yet…it makes me feel a bit sad inside. this is what our world has come to, that small children don’t even know what something from nature is. they only recognize the industrialized, chemical filled, urban objects of the modern era.

    but, it’s still really cute that Isaac only liked the vegetable for the sticker. i loved stickers when i was little, too.

  47. On Jesus ain't gettin my truck.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahahahaaaa…..funny

  48. On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 1: Introduction:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i know plenty of dumb blondes that get A’s on their report card. what are these teachers thinking??!

  49. On When You Blow Your Microwave Up [[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    luckily, i have hurt my microwave yet. my mom AND my dad have though. it caught on fire for my mom, and started sparking like little bolts of lightning for my dad.

    LoA

  50. On Lame Clown (Make Me Laugh Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    okay, i have to admit, when i read the beginning and middle, i thought it was a little stupid. but, by the time i got to the end, i was laughing out loud!! that is SOO funny!!!!

    LoA

  51. On Middleschool Woes [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i TOTALLY agree with stovohobo. feel bad for the geeks/nerds of middle school. it’s not easy. i feel for you.

    LoA

  52. On Demands (Make Me Laugh Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    OMJ!! dude, this is totally hilarious!! so creative!!!!!! i love it!!!

    sooo funny!!

    FIVE STARS!!!

    LoA

  53. On The Educated Soft Drink [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    does Dr. Pepper really cure zits? i need to know!!! if it does, i need to start buying some!! LOL!!!
    cute!

    LoA

  54. On My Neverland:

    posted about 1 month ago

    good. really good….and sad.

  55. On A chance encounter:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahaha…funny and creative! i like it. it pairs intellectual vocabulary with cute ideas.

    call me crazy, but i happen to think the monkey is pretty darn cute. and, thebetweenspace is right, you did a great job describing it.

  56. On Buying The Crock:

    posted about 1 month ago

    yeah…giving her the knife…NOT a good idea….LOL

    LoA

  57. On Ode to Backspace:

    posted about 1 month ago

    HAHAHAA!! this, i not only laughed at, but i can totally relate to!!

    i LOVE typing, i think it’s so much fun, and i always start out my stories thinking “okay, this is gonna be the best story i’ve ever written.” it usually doesn’t turn out that way.

    this is really cute and funny and unique and clever. that’s why i love ficlets!

  58. On I'm hopeless..Need advice.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ask him out. look at it this way: if he says no, then he’s not the right guy for you, and you can move on. if he says yes, then you’ll be happy. But, if you don’t even try asking him out, you might never see him again (or at least not for the whole summer) and you’ll definitely regret it!!! If you don’t ask him out, you’ll always wonder what he would have said if you took the chance!! so, take the chance!!!! like i said, if he says no, then he’s a loser, and you deserve better.

  59. On Things Always Happen for a Reason, P.4:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aww! he’s a vampire!! that’s cool….and kind of dangerous for the girl…i understand his frustration.

  60. On Things Always Happen For A Reason, P.3:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow….she’s got superstrength!!

  61. On Things Always Happen For A Reason, P.2:

    posted about 1 month ago

    exciting!!

  62. On Things Always Happen For A Reason:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oooohhh…i like!!

    LoA

  63. On Better:

    posted about 1 month ago

    could the tale be taking a turn, changing ficlets from someone’s hobby to someone’s obsession?

    I don’t know…someone please continue the series! :)

  64. On Ficlet Crack:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahah..i imagine that is what crack would be like.

  65. On The real My Space:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i can relate to this. great job!

    LoA

  66. On Home:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow….really cool!!! i mean REALLY COOL!!!

  67. On Me:

    posted 3 months ago

    this probably sounds rly confusing right now, but don’t worry. there will be sequels! and it will start to make a lot more sense.

    I intended for this to be confusing at first, it makes the story more interesting

  68. On If only it were this easy! -or- Education by Osmosis:

    posted 3 months ago

    is this gonna be a whole series or just this one part and that’s it? ummm…i have to admit that i yelled “ew!” when she took his brain out. cool idea..but gross.

  69. On For Real This Time:

    posted 3 months ago

    AWWWWWWWW!!!! :)

  70. On Family Now:

    posted 3 months ago

    yeah!! it is about the joans brothers!! I happen to like them!!!!!!!!

  71. On Final Decision:

    posted 3 months ago

    amazing but….why didnt he just drop the gun and not kill anyone? i’ll guess we’ll never know.

    either way, this series was fantastic!

  72. On You're Not That Girl I Met In A Snowstorm:

    posted 3 months ago

    ok, i know this is supposed to be sad, but i broke out laughing so hard when she said “if you tell me to hold on i’m going to slap you”

    SOO FUNNY!

  73. On Blow a Hole in the World:

    posted 3 months ago

    whoa..intense!! is he gonna shoot her?!

    LOVE it!

  74. On A Choice Presented:

    posted 3 months ago

    oo….maybe shooting her at this very moment is the bad thing he’s going to do. She should have just left the guy alone!!!!

    thebetweenspace said it perfectly. tug of war between fate and choice.

  75. On Salvation or Something Else:

    posted 3 months ago

    actually, i was gonna ask where on earth you found the gun? on the ground??? lol

    great series

  76. On Time for Me to Fly 25:

    posted 3 months ago

    OOOOOO….....SO SWEET!!!!!! glad that Paul didn’t fall while spinning in circles…LOL

  77. On Time for Me to Fly 24:

    posted 3 months ago

    yep…sure sounds like one of their concerts!!!! :)

  78. On Time for Me to Fly 23:

    posted 3 months ago

    awww…....Bright is in love with Trey!!
    lol

    great series!

  79. On Making A Scene On Television:

    posted 3 months ago

    just a little too excited???

    hahahahaha!!! :)

  80. On Salvation Wtih Luscious Curves:

    posted 4 months ago

    great series. i agree with band baby, the last line is great.

  81. On Time for Me to Fly 22:

    posted 4 months ago

    please sequel soon!! i love this series!!!

  82. On Time for Me to Fly 21:

    posted 4 months ago

    ooooo Bright and Trey!!! lol

  83. On Time for Me to Fly 19:

    posted 4 months ago

    Bright Elisabeth Owen…..that’s a totally cool name!

  84. On You Asked for a Distraction:

    posted 4 months ago

    I love how you incorporate humor into a story where someone is getting murdered. It’s very unique and refreshing.

  85. On The Ellen Degeneres Show :

    posted 4 months ago

    OMJ this is awesome

  86. On Surprise Performance:

    posted 4 months ago

    SOOOOO perfect!!! nice incorporation of some lyrics, i love it!

  87. On Just A Small Bruise:

    posted 4 months ago

    POOR WES!!

  88. On Awesome... Psyche!:

    posted 4 months ago

    OWW!! that’s gotta hurt!!! LOL

  89. On Time for Me to Fly 20:

    posted 4 months ago

    awww!! this story is so cute!

  90. On Nick J. Is Off Da Chain:

    posted 4 months ago

    awesome!!
    he is sooo off da chain!!

  91. On Time for Me to Fly 18:

    posted 4 months ago

    please write a sequel soon! i can’t wait to find out what happens next!

  92. On Time for Me to Fly 18:

    posted 4 months ago

    AHAHAHHA!!! I can just picture Trey doing that as a little kid!!

  93. On Time for Me to Fly 17:

    posted 4 months ago

    AWWWWW!! I WANT A HUG FROM TREY!!!

  94. On Time for Me to Fly 14:

    posted 4 months ago

    ahahahahahaha!! that is soo funny!! that is soooooooooo joe!!!! totally what he would say!

  95. On Time for Me to Fly 12:

    posted 4 months ago

    ahaha! took dizzy a while to figure it out! LOL

  96. On Time for Me to Fly 10:

    posted 4 months ago

    ooo..dizzy is gonna freak! i know i would!

  97. On Time for Me to Fly 8:

    posted 4 months ago

    Dizzy is lucky! and she doesn’t even know it!! LOL

  98. On Time for Me to Fly 5:

    posted 4 months ago

    this is awesome!!!!!!! i think u got their personalities exactly right! and i like how you used the name paul! good idea.

  99. On Time for Me to Fly 2:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha, funny!

  100. On Time for Me to Fly:

    posted 4 months ago

    OMJ i love it!!! yep, sounds just like nick!!

  101. On The Jonas Robbery Part 34: Arriving At Dallas:

    posted 4 months ago

    thanks! :)

  102. On Good Morning Nick:

    posted 4 months ago

    SWEEEEETTTTT!!!! :)

  103. On Meeting Mr.Jonas:

    posted 4 months ago

    This is so great. Sometimes I feel so jealous that Wes gets to become friends with jb. I have to remind myself she’s fictional! LOL

  104. On Oh Thank Heaven For 7/11!:

    posted 4 months ago

    NICE!! Wes is brave!!!

  105. On Priceless, There ARE Somethings Money Can't Buy:

    posted 4 months ago

    SEQUELL!!! I LOVE IT!!

  106. On Wes Meets Emily ~Crossover Challenge~:

    posted 4 months ago

    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! THANKS FOR PUTTING MY CHARACTER IN ONE OF YOUR STORIES!!!!!!

  107. On Take My Hand Tonight:

    posted 4 months ago

    i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweeet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  108. On Simply Jenna: Parents:

    posted 4 months ago

    i’m seriously out of ideas here. please right a sequel!!

  109. On The Jonas Robbery Part 24: Posters:

    posted 4 months ago

    thanks again. i always write something wrong! LOL

  110. On The Jonas Robbery Part 23: Teasing:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahahahahaah!!!!!! i didn’t mean to give myself a rating at all, i accidentally clicked a star and then couldn’t get it to go away. LOL!!!

    you always make me laugh!! thanks!! :)

  111. On We're In This Together:

    posted 4 months ago

    i can only use one word for this…............
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  112. On Incognito:

    posted 4 months ago

    AWESOME!!!!!! great job of distracting the crazed fans!!

  113. On I Can Run So Fast:

    posted 4 months ago

    goood plan!!!!!!!! awww!!!! nick is so nice in this series!! (not that he isn’t in real life too!)

  114. On The Jonas Robbery Part 23: Teasing:

    posted 4 months ago

    okay, i know the series is getting slightly boring right now. But, don’t worry, it’s going to be getting much more exciting very soon.

  115. On The Jonas Robbery Part 19: Getting Out Of The Hospital:

    posted 4 months ago

    i know my story titles are becoming incredibly lame but i’m running out of ideas. LOL

  116. On Saved By Inseperable:

    posted 4 months ago

    OOOOO!!!!! exciting!!!!!!

    great incorporation of a song into the story!!!

    poor JB!! they have too many fans!!!

  117. On Hugs Aren't Overated:

    posted 4 months ago

    I LOVE THIS!!!! I WANNA BE WES!!!!

  118. On Falling Apart:

    posted 4 months ago

    AWWWWW!!!!!!

  119. On Sudden S.O.S:

    posted 4 months ago

    soooo sad…and sweet!!!

  120. On It's A Call He'll Never Get:

    posted 4 months ago

    it would be awesome to have really really red hair!!!!!!!! Kevin’s right, she’s unique, and that’s great!!! ....i hope Moe’s okay. And her shoulder….

  121. On Better Believe I Bled:

    posted 4 months ago

    i’m so lovin the titles of these stories. OOO!!! i wanna know what color!!!!

  122. On The Jonas Robbery Part 15: Arriving At The Hospital:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahahhaa!!!! thanks lone writer!! LOL!!

  123. On Six Car Collision:

    posted 4 months ago

    come on!!! write a sequel!!!!!!!

  124. On Six Car Collision:

    posted 4 months ago

    Really cool…..and exciting.

  125. On Not Quite Walking On Broken Glass:

    posted 4 months ago

    WOW!! She is really taking charge!!!! Poor Moe! Again, sweet title!

    Great job JSG..oh….um…i mean Lone Writer, LOL!!

  126. On Voices Aren't The Only Things That Break:

    posted 4 months ago

    ooooo!!!! so exciting!!!!!! haha, i like the title!!

  127. On An Unexpected Twist:

    posted 4 months ago

    okay, this is probably just my own stupidity. But, i don’t get it…

  128. On Catching the Bass:

    posted 5 months ago

    uh oh…is tommy going to get in trouble?

  129. On Arguments:

    posted 5 months ago

    exactly how old are these girls supposed to be?

  130. On Playing For The Boys:

    posted 5 months ago

    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  131. On The Fight Is On:

    posted 5 months ago

    and the story ends just when the excitement begins!

    ..i wonder if there is another reason this fish wants tommy to catch this bass…....

  132. On You are a lying catfish:

    posted 5 months ago

    ...interesting. If I were Tommy, I would have run away a loooong time ago.

  133. On Sandwich, Bass stuff:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha, very cute story

  134. On Ew, mest cetch!:

    posted 5 months ago

    very creative concept

  135. On The Art of Being a Jennifer:

    posted 5 months ago

    i really like this. it’s funny.

  136. On Hurry Up!:

    posted 5 months ago

    ooooooooooo….very cool! i wish i had that power!!

  137. On Consumed:

    posted 5 months ago

    oh my god. i thought tracker was going to be a character with good intentions. This is a total shock to me, but the sudden twists and turns of the story are so exciting! it’s really keeping me interested!

  138. On Death Water:

    posted 5 months ago

    go right ahead and right a sequel then! I’m glad you like it!

  139. On Mystery Writing:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is a really good series. It has a lot of potential. You could really turn it into a great adventure/mystery if you wanted.

  140. On In a Nut Shell:

    posted 5 months ago

    i’m really liking this mutant-alien type thing. it’s cool!

  141. On Kazuko and Tadashi Part 7 edited part:

    posted 5 months ago

    it’s great!!!!! i really like it!!!

  142. On Snow Day Boredom:

    posted 5 months ago

    oooo!!!!! i really want to know what’s up there! sequel?

  143. On Sudden Calm After The Storm:

    posted 5 months ago

    i wanna know more!!

  144. On Playing For The Boys:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is awesome!!!!!! i love it! it’s a lot happier than my story, LOL!!

  145. On Sincerely Me:

    posted 5 months ago

    awesome awesome awesome!! love it!

  146. On Deleted:

    posted 5 months ago

    yeah, like lena said, it’s really deep. i feel really bad for you…

  147. On Skipping!:

    posted 5 months ago

    hahaha!! good for her!!!

  148. On Interference:

    posted 5 months ago

    ouch! LOL

    good story

  149. On Off to School:

    posted 5 months ago

    ooooo…......very ominous!

  150. On The Trouble with Children:

    posted 5 months ago

    this story is getting really good!!! please keep going!!

  151. On Discovery:

    posted 5 months ago

    oooo!!! i wanna find out more!!

  152. On What is That?:

    posted 5 months ago

    interesting!!!!

  153. On Something There:

    posted 5 months ago

    awesome so far!! i’m gonna keep reading!

  154. On Barbie When She's Bored:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is totally cute and creative!! i really like it! it reminds me of exactly what barbie would do or think.

  155. On How Good Are you:

    posted 5 months ago

    very very good!!!! this new character Tracker is very interesting. I think he will add a lot to the story.

  156. On Superman:

    posted 5 months ago

    SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I WANT A SHIRT THAT SAYS THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

    .....only i think mine would say nick instead of joe…..

  157. On Awkward!:

    posted 5 months ago

    LOL!!! i’m lovin this story!! i thought their body guard was big rob or big ron or something though….

  158. On Mutation is an Ugly Thing:

    posted 5 months ago

    your story is beginning to get a little confusing. you need to start explaining a little more.

  159. On The Jonas Robbery Part 8: Nick My Savior:

    posted 5 months ago

    i can only write so fast!! LOL

    i’m glad you like my story though!

  160. On Kazuko and Tadashi Part 6:

    posted 5 months ago

    it’s good!! i like it!!

  161. On Mutation Gone Bad:

    posted 5 months ago

    please write a sequel!!!!!!

  162. On An Stalled Car and an Awesome Surprise:

    posted 5 months ago

    love it!!! i can just imagine joe in a hat and scarf like on New Years!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!
    LOL

  163. On Truth VS Fantasy- Are Angels Scared of Planes?:

    posted 5 months ago

    nightmaiden, another excellent job!!

  164. On Hidden Mine:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha, nite nite.

    i love this series so far

  165. On Realization :

    posted 5 months ago

    i am speechless.

    You’re only in 7th grade and you are an absolutely wonderful author!!!!!!!!

  166. On Mutation Gone Bad:

    posted 5 months ago

    cool so far…i want to know more

  167. On The Ride:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha, i just watched that movie The Invasion last night…how ironic.

  168. On You Sniffed Me:

    posted 5 months ago

    a bit confusing.

    but good

  169. On Break and Run:

    posted 5 months ago

    a well thought out plot.

  170. On The Control Group:

    posted 5 months ago

    very very interesting!!! i’m hooked on this series!

  171. On That Smell:

    posted 5 months ago

    very cool and strange

  172. On An Hour from Anywhere:

    posted 5 months ago

    very creepy!!! i want to know more! please continue this series!!

  173. On Two Little Warriors:

    posted 5 months ago

    love it love it love it!!!! you are a great story writer!! but, how do you know english if you live in greece?

  174. On You're not Alone:

    posted 5 months ago

    really really really good!!!!! very eery at first, then the puppy kind of brightens the mood.

    i want to read more! please write a sequel.

  175. On Kazuko and Tadashi Part 2:

    posted 5 months ago

    ok, i don’t mean to be mean, but you said not to be afraid to tell you how your stories are.

    i think your stories would be better if you didn’t say stuff like “these are Arisu’s thoughts” and “these are Kazuko’s thoughts”
    it makes the story sound too much like a script and not enough like a story.

    it’s just my opinion

  176. On Kazuko and Tadashi Part 1:

    posted 5 months ago

    good. they finally meet!

  177. On The Beginning of Kazuko and Tadashi:

    posted 5 months ago

    good so far, but why does it keep switching from past to present tense?

  178. On The Final Happy Ending 1/2:

    posted 5 months ago

    very sad…but good!

  179. On Dark Chocolate Coffee. Round Two: Fight!:

    posted 5 months ago

    i want a sequel!!!!!

  180. On Dark Chocolate Coffee. Round Two: Fight!:

    posted 5 months ago

    if i was ash, i would have done the same thing!!

  181. On Grape Soda, White Shirt. Round One: Fight!:

    posted 5 months ago

    i am lovin this story!!!!! HAHAHAHA!!!!! nice mention of jb!!! LOL

  182. On Pink Miniskirt:

    posted 5 months ago

    this series is awesome so far!

  183. On Leather Pants:

    posted 5 months ago

    awwww….why did you have to make the pants forest green?!!! that’s kevy’s favorite color!!! LOL

  184. On Leave Joe:

    posted 5 months ago

    OMJ!!!!!!! WOW lone writer! that is depressing!! but, it’s very good.

  185. On The Jonas Robbery Part 4: The Chase:

    posted 5 months ago

    nuh-uh. they were at the back of store, but they were inside…..unless i messed up somewhere

  186. On Stay Still And Listen:

    posted 5 months ago

    oooo…....excititng and interesting!

  187. On All Over A Boy!:

    posted 5 months ago

    wow…i really like it. it has a great poetic feel, with a great story behind it.

  188. On The Jonas Robbery Part 3: Face To Face With The Killer:

    posted 5 months ago

    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!

  189. On At the Crossroads:

    posted 5 months ago

    this sounds really cool so far. i can’t wait for a prequel or a sequel!

  190. On Animal Testing 2:

    posted 5 months ago

    i am officially never buying any of the products made by those companies even again!!!

  191. On Animal Testing:

    posted 5 months ago

    i agree!!!!!!!!!!! i love animals!!!!!

  192. On Clover High: Boys Are So Immature:

    posted 5 months ago

    OMJ i love this series i want to read more!!! i’m soooo excited to see what happens next!

  193. On The Jonas Robbery:

    posted 5 months ago

    hahaha!! ok, ok, i’ll write a sequel. LOL

  194. On The Lone Writer...um...Rap?:

    posted 5 months ago

    ahahahhahaha!!!! that is soooo funny!!!!!! LOL!!! :)

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