Lindsay's posted comments

  1. On Passage of time:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It’s really good, Tyler…

  2. On My First Forever:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I love the way that at first it seems as if the main character is the one having the baby. It shows you how she feels, because when you find out she isn’t, you feel a burden lifted, but you also feel dissapointed that it isn’t her.

  3. On Sinking:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like it, it’s a really realistic ficlet, and I’m sure a few of us know that feeling a bit too well…

  4. On The Real Hurt:

    posted about 1 year ago

    That’s really good. I like it. Keep writing =]

  5. On The Girl in the Surf:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I positively love that. That’s just…like…can’t think of a word...dude…awesomeness right there…=]

  6. On Her last week.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    The last sentence was pretty good, and I’d call it the best part. It’s a good idea but I think that it’d be best as an actual book, not a short story, because in order to get the full meaning and emotion of it, you need a full plot and lots of details.

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