Fuchsia Deviant's posted comments

  1. On revenge:

    posted 11 months ago

    Oh wow! That’s an intense story! Gotta love the mom…with a knife under her chin, she’s got the cojones to yell “F* you”. That’s great.

  2. On haunted story 4:

    posted 11 months ago

    Wow! Wasn’t expecting that, lol. Great… can’t wait to find out what it was that attacked her.

  3. On haunted story 3:

    posted 11 months ago

    Wow…I like how you included her thoughts concerning her love for her parents and her being sorry for everything. It’s very realistic… a person on the verge of what seems like impending death would likely have these kind of thoughts.

  4. On Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 2:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yeah, same here…I’ve felt that kind of apathy about life as well. This story captures that emotion (or, lack of, really) well.

  5. On Drip..Drip..Drip:My Three Sons:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow…that would be quite a twist. Good story.

  6. On When You Gaze Into the Abyss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow…that’s creepy. Excellent.

  7. On Heaven on Earth:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Beautiful…and very descriptive. It makes you form a very clear mental picture of what would certainly be a wonderful sight to behold. I especially love the line about the light cast from the moon onto the garden

  8. On Her name was Lola:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Okay, that first sentence…absolutely wonderful. It would be impossible not to read on with a first sentence like that. Great story idea (and honestly, it wouldn’t be shocking if something like this were to really happen on reality TV, lol).

  9. On I hurt... He hurts...what to do?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Love it… I really liked how you described the yearning for the person…yet being afraid of being hurt again. I can totally identify with such a feeling. Very raw.

  10. On Good Vibrations (pt. 1):

    posted about 1 year ago

    I love the way that you lead up to that last, crucial sentence. Very descriptive.

  11. On Inspiration:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Oh wow, you are a really, really good writer. Anyone who can come up with such a story about not feeling inspired…that’s brilliant, lol.

  12. On The Edge of the World:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow…beautiful. It’s very atmospheric and wonderfully descriptive.

    And I can totally relate to this kind of feeling.

  13. On Tragedy Strikes:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Deep…I really like it.

    I agree with the other comment…love the description of the baby. That line is so descriptive and imaginative.

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