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Dr. Mousse's posted comments

On Remembering Laundary:

posted 13 days ago

Lol, nice. Good to have you back! I hope you write more of this series! I missed it!
On I am Jesse (Take that!):

posted about 1 month ago

Dang. Well, he solved that problem. Although, when I saw the mature tag I was afraid they were going to beat up Jesse, but no worries there. Nice job, can’t wait for the sequel!
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On I am Anima (Happy):

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. Very cute, a bit short though.
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On I am Jesse:

posted about 1 month ago

Oh, dear. The boys are going to give him a bit of trouble. Here we go…
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On Remembering Rain:

posted about 1 month ago

Hmmm. I’m trying to remember that convo. It’s somewhere in the back of my head.
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On I am Cooper:

posted about 1 month ago

I was going to say the same thing. He is a very…hmm…intriguing character. Let’s see what happens next.
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On I am Cooper.:

posted about 1 month ago

What? What’s with the name change. Whatever, too curious about Cooper to worry about it. Good job!
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On Remembering Rain:

posted about 1 month ago

Hmmm. I’m trying to remember that convo. It’s somewhere in the back of my head.
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On I am Vaughn:

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. Poor Vaughn.
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On Credits:

posted about 1 month ago

Aww cute, you should write more. THis is definately one of my new faves too!
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On Lost:

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. I just hope something bad doesn’t happen.
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On Lost:

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. I just hope something bad doesn’t happen.
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On Afraid of Heights:

posted about 1 month ago

THat is sooooo cute.
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On Secrets:

posted about 1 month ago

Say what? How does she have the right to say that and act that way?
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On Prey:

posted about 1 month ago

Oh, well. At least Tyler isn’t treating her like scum or something.
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On No Past:

posted about 1 month ago

Yayayayay! Knight in shining armor!
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On Everyone is Invisible:

posted about 1 month ago

Gah! Chris, where are you???
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On Willing:

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, that’s really sad.
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On The Sign:

posted about 1 month ago

Oh boy. Hehe.
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On Izzy:

posted about 1 month ago

Aw dang, please don’t let that be his gf. Maybe it’s just a girl who wishes she was? crosses fingers
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On Beautiful:

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. I have been reading this series addictively for the past half an hour-ish, and I’m finally stoping to make a comment. It’s an awesome series, and although I will agree, it is chick-flicky, it is very cute.
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On Remembering the Kitchen Floor:

posted 2 months ago

Yay Drew! But, oh dear, no more sequels for a week. Whatever shall I do now?
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On Remembering the Monster:

posted 2 months ago

Oh gosh Drew! Please, go back! I can’t live with another main character dying!
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On Memory 3/ Remembering Her Face:

posted 2 months ago

Hmm..his mind is starting to change. It’s mixing Cynthia and Paige, or rather, replacing Cynthia with Paige?
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On Remembering Crying:

posted 2 months ago

Wow, this a really emotional part where we finally get to see some of the feelings Paige has stuck inside her. I absolutely loved the last part as well.
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On I am Brit (Deciding):

posted 2 months ago

Awww. Very cute. And I agree pc18; let’s hope he really is good now.
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On Remembering Shepherd's Pie:

posted 2 months ago

Oh dang, didn’t Cynthia make Shepherd’s Pie the first time Drew came over???
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On I am Vaughn (Hating and Hesitating):

posted 2 months ago

If he does go over, that’ll be a very interestingly awkward and strange conversation.
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On I am Brit (Confused):

posted 2 months ago

Yes! Go Cooper! Way to tell it to her how it is. Now if Brit’ll just believe it. Nice job. =]
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On Too Hot, Way Too Hot:

posted 2 months ago

I agree with THX 0477, cute and a nice description.
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On Dinner. ((For Real This Time!)):

posted 2 months ago

Aww, very cute and realistically awkward. Nice job.
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On Pizza at Seven, or Eight:

posted 2 months ago

Wow, nice job you guys! Maybe a little more communication next time? Uh-oh, Ryan!
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On Returning her Notebook:

posted 2 months ago

Cheater, cheater! =]
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On Remembering Keen:

posted 2 months ago

Oh my goodness, this is getting really good and you’re doing an amazing job with the suspense Dreamer! Keep it going and sequel soon please!!! =]
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On You Lost Her, Dude:

posted 2 months ago

Awww. That stinks. =[
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On You Lost Her, Dude:

posted 2 months ago

Awww. That stinks.
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On Chance Encounter?:

posted 2 months ago

Definately clingy.
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On More Than Nothing:

posted 2 months ago

Dang. Pushy boyfriend!
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 2 months ago

Ooh. Not the best day back to school. Maybe it’ll improve?
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On I am Cooper:

posted 2 months ago

Awww. Very cute. Now he just has to tell her that.
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On I am Brit:

posted 2 months ago

Haha. It’s so funny how much Brit beats herself up over every little thing she does.
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On Remembering Evasion:

posted 2 months ago

Me too! I have been going absolutely insane over this series!
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On Remembering Friends:

posted 2 months ago

OMG!!! Wow. I completely forgot they were both from Florida and even so, Florida is a big place so I don’t think I’d make the connection. Dang, that’s big…
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On Remembering Leaving:

posted 2 months ago

Wait to go Paige!
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On Remembering Sickness:

posted 2 months ago

Finally. Nice suspense going on here.
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On Remembering Why:

posted 2 months ago

Come on Paige, just let up. She’s been lecturing Drew about being open and now she’s not opening up to him.
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On I am Brit (Giving in):

posted 2 months ago

This was very realistic and I think a lot of us can relate to this. Nice job.
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On I am Vaughn:

posted 2 months ago

Hmmmm. I wonder how far Brit is going to take this?
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On I am Brit (losing it):

posted 2 months ago

Hehe. Yeah, I sometimes ignore my friends opinions when they aren’t to my liking.
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On I am Vaughn:

posted 2 months ago

Haha. This must be new for him.
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On I am Anima (Nervous):

posted 2 months ago

Agreed. Very very cute!
On I am Ceirra:

posted 2 months ago

Ugh, I hate how teachers join in on the stereotypes too. It disgusts me.
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On Remembering Disarray:

posted 2 months ago

Nice. I really like it. I’m also bouncing on my chair waiting for a sequel cause I WANNA KNOW WHY SHE CAN’T SLEEP! Whew. Got that out well enough.
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On I am Jesse:

posted 2 months ago

Wow, it’s so sad how much stereotypes hurt people and get in the way.
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On Remembering Nothing Else:

posted 2 months ago

Wow. I really can’t say anything else.
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On Remembering Being Tired:

posted 2 months ago

Will we finally figure out what is going on with Paige? Please, please, please!
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On Remembering Getting Dumped:

posted 2 months ago

Hmmm…this “getting dumped” story seems a bit strange. Or maybe it’s just my mind wanting something else.
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On Remembering the Song:

posted 2 months ago

Waaaiiit. She prolly wrote it for Drew! Yay!
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On Remembering Singing:

posted 2 months ago

Awwwwww. Sooo cute.
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On Remembering Driving:

posted 2 months ago

Haha. I don’t think she realizes that while describing her aunt it sounds like she’s describing herself!
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On I am Brit:

posted 2 months ago

I think its not so much the though of a jock and emo kissing, penguincaptain18; she is just pained because she never thought she could lose Jesse, to anyone, not just someone lower in the status quo.
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On Remembering Money:

posted 2 months ago

Haha. I have the benefit of rich relatives, too. Although, they send me money without me moving out. Quite nice.
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On Remembering Family:

posted 2 months ago

Sometimes the strangest people will mesh better than family. Strange, but true.
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On I am Anima:

posted 2 months ago

Aw, shoot. Darn cliques and stereotypes. This kinda reminds me of Grease, you know how they couldn’t be together cause Danny was a greaser and she was a good girl. Maybe it’ll end like Grease and Ceirra will change for Jesse?
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On Confessions of a Lost Soul:

posted 2 months ago

Yeah, I wrote this for English class this year and I just found it. I thought it fit with this series, so Voila!
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On Strange Meetings:

posted 2 months ago

I just started reading this series. Hmm…I wonder where its going to go? Nice beginning.
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On Confessions of an Obese Kid:

posted 2 months ago

Well, I tried. Not my best work, even I can see that. I’m just trying to get out of this darn writer’s block. Hm…any suggestions?
On I Am Jesse:

posted 2 months ago

LOL. Oh, this is gonna be goood.
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 2 months ago

Cooper, that’s what possessed her.
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On I am Brit (Attempting to avoid Cooper):

posted 2 months ago

Haha. Wow, she must be reaaally confused. Like, why in the world are you talking to me?
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On Remembering Coal:

posted 2 months ago

Aww, he’s concerned about her. Drew is so much better. Yay!
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On Remembering the Reason:

posted 2 months ago

Darn it.
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On Remembering Movie People:

posted 2 months ago

Aw dang. Does he know more?
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On Not So Fast:

posted 3 months ago

Woah, two people as the wonderball? That’s interesting…
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On Who are you?:

posted 3 months ago

OMG! I fell out of my chair screaming. Almost. But, pretty much.
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On Split Personality?:

posted 3 months ago

Gah! Don’t just stand there, throw it somewhere. Good idea Hunting Beauty, out the window is perfect!
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On I Am Vaughn (battling with alter ego voices in my head):

posted 3 months ago

Haha, me too. And then by the time my alter self and I have reached a consensus, it’s too late to act. I like the somewhat parallel to the most recent I am Anima and how she starts out, “Ugh. Mondays.” I don’t know if it’s intetnional, but it’s pretty cool.
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On I am Anima:

posted 3 months ago

Very cute. I like how you started out with an ugh feeling then moved into joy.
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On Remembering Parents:

posted 3 months ago

Aw, darn it. I really wanna know. Maybe Drew’ll keep asking. Sequel please!
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On Remembering the Music:

posted 3 months ago

Oh, boy. Will she tell him? This is getting really good.
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On Remembering the Night Before:

posted 3 months ago

As if she hadn’t been sleeping? I wonder…
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On Remembering Nightmares:

posted 3 months ago

Wow. That would be terrible.
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On I am Brit:

posted 3 months ago

Aww. They really like each other.
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On Remembering Problems (Ficlet #500):

posted 3 months ago

So maybe Drew doesn’t know the whole thing. Congrats on #500!
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On Remembering Finances:

posted 3 months ago

Forgive her? Did she get pregnant or something?
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On Remembering Paige's Present:

posted 3 months ago

I love that story! And I love how he contemplates over what this could possibly be about.
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On Remembering to Think:

posted 3 months ago

Sooo, maybe he does know about her parents?
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On Remembering Changes:

posted 3 months ago

Finals. Reminds me, I should probably start studying for mine.
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On To Play or Be Played:

posted 3 months ago

Huh? What’s going to happen now? Really suspenseful, nice job.
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On Room 34:

posted 3 months ago

Wow. Dang, I don’t know what to say.
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On The Essential, Indispensable Wonderball:

posted 3 months ago

Hmmmm. What’s gonna happen now?
On The Room Awaits...:

posted 3 months ago

OMG. Will she go? Cause she knows she’s gonna get a coma now.
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On I am Nerd:

posted 3 months ago

Ah. Identity issues are the teenage form of identity theft.
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On The Wonderball's Message:

posted 3 months ago

Woah. That’s suspenseful. The ellipses at the end really add a lot of suspense.
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

Ah. Get on with it. You can do it Cooper!
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On I am Cooper:

posted 3 months ago

Then change Cooper!
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

Penguincaptain18’s having computer troubles I belive. But oh well, that’ll make the comment number on Dreamer go up. Anyway, Go Brit!
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. That’s great. What’s she gonna do?
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On Wonderball Comes to Life:

posted 3 months ago

34? Hm. Can’t wait for the sequel!
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On The Future Is Unwritten:

posted 3 months ago

Wow. I would flip out if that happened to me.
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On Ask the Wonderball:

posted 3 months ago

Wow. This had a very chilling effect and I loved the ending. Congrats on being featured!
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On I am Nerd:

posted 3 months ago

Nice.
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

Yeah, let’s see if things continue.
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

Yeah, let’s see if things continue.
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On I am Brit:

posted 3 months ago

Haha.
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

me too. i’m scared. i dont want him to screw up his life over a girl.
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On Remembering My Secret:

posted 3 months ago

Gah! I wanna know about her parents!
On I am Jesse:

posted 3 months ago

Thanks for the explanation Dreamer.
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On I am Jesse (overdoing it):

posted 3 months ago

Oh, no. biting fingernails
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On I am Jesse:

posted 3 months ago

Cemetery, huh? That’s kinda funny.
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On Memory 2:

posted 3 months ago

Awww. I remember that convo. So sad.
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 3 months ago

Very cute, but this seems to good to be true. crosses finger
Please, stay good.
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On I am Jesse:

posted 3 months ago

Yay. Date time! Oh, I looked at the car, that is pretty sweet.
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On I am Jesse:

posted 3 months ago

Yay. Date time! Oh, I looked at the car, that it pretty sweet.
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On Remembering Ginkgo:

posted 3 months ago

So, after all this time, all it took for Drew to open up was Paige breaking down? Interesting…
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On Remembering Losing my Temper:

posted 3 months ago

Danggggggg, no words.
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On Remembering Interesting:

posted 3 months ago

Dang. Kinda stalkerish [if that’s a word], yet kinda…interesting.
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On Remembering the Worst:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, her dad. That sent my mind into overdrive. Guess I better read the sequel.
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On I am Ceirra (Epiphany):

posted 3 months ago

Aw, dang it. Stinkin’ slow computer.
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On Remembering Emptiness:

posted 3 months ago

Aww. He’s getting worse again.
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On Remembering the Cookies:

posted 3 months ago

haha. i agree with penguincaptaptain18.
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On I am Ceirra (Epiphany):

posted 3 months ago

They’re gonna have to break the status quo. But, yay, she finally realized that she likes him.
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On I am Ceirra (Epiphany):

posted 3 months ago

They’re gonna have to break the status quo. But, yay, she finally realized that she likes him.
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On I am Ceirra (Epiphany):

posted 3 months ago

They’re gonna have to break the status quo. But, yay, she finally realized that she likes him.
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On I am Jock:

posted 3 months ago

Come on, come on, come on, just go with it!
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On I am Emo:

posted 3 months ago

haha. fighting within herself.
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On I am Ceirra (A very confused and self-conscious Ceirra):

posted 3 months ago

Woot woot!
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On I am Anima (Irony):

posted 3 months ago

Such contrast, I love it.
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On I am Anima (Irony):

posted 3 months ago

Such contrast, I love it.
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On I am Anima (Irony):

posted 3 months ago

Such contrast, I love it.
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On Deep Space Disaster:

posted 3 months ago

Congrats on geting featured! This is really funny. It made me laugh.
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On Remembering Color:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. I don’t like pink either. Probably would’ve had the same reaction.
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On Kissing in the Mud:

posted 3 months ago

Nice series-excuse me-mini series. I liked it.
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On Into the Mud Again:

posted 3 months ago

Woah. What happened with the comments? Its kinda cool though.
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On I've Fallen in Mud Before:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, I like how they both think its their fault she tripped.
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 3 months ago

You’re in love, duh! Sequel please!
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On I am Emo:

posted 3 months ago

Oh, oh, oh, I get it!
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On Tripped into the Mud:

posted 3 months ago

Very very cute.
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On Remembering Curtains:

posted 3 months ago

Ah. House decorating, the best distraction.
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On Facedown in the Mud:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. Funny.
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On Remembering the Hideaway:

posted 3 months ago

Interesting…I’ll have to keep reading.
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On Remembering to Call Mom:

posted 3 months ago

Here we go….
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On Remembering Dreams:

posted 3 months ago

Tears. He is so different, it’s so sad.
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On Remembering Things I Don't Want To:

posted 3 months ago

Weird.
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On Remembering Her Son:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. She does not seem like a kid. I really wanna know what happened in her life though.
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On Remembering English:

posted 3 months ago

Pushy much? LOL. It’s all for the better.
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On Remembering Epiphany:

posted 3 months ago

Really? That’s interesting. Looks like we have another character with an interesting past.
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On Memory:

posted 3 months ago

Very sad. I agree with penguincaptain18.
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On Unaware:

posted 3 months ago

Hey, you’re back! It’s been awhile! Great to see you continue the first series I read.
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On I am Emo:

posted 3 months ago

I’m reaaaally confused. What’s going on?
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On I am Invisable:

posted 3 months ago

Huh?
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. Pregnant pauses. I have never heard that one.
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 3 months ago

Very very cute.
On I am Ceirra:

posted 3 months ago

Very very cute.
On I am Invisable:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. This is cute. I hope everything work out.
On Just A Little Talk:

posted 3 months ago

Nooooooooooo. I need to go cry somewhere. This has been a sucky day already.
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On Just A Little Talk:

posted 3 months ago

Nooooooooooo. I need to go cry somewhere. This has been a sucky day already.
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On Just A Little Knowing:

posted 3 months ago

OMG, Cynthia.
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On I am Jesse:

posted 3 months ago

Awww. I liked how you showed emotions through her eyes, it was a new and cool way to do it.
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On Just A Little Darkness:

posted 3 months ago

OMG! It’s his dream. Oh, God. Ahhh! Sequel!
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On Just A Little Reunion:

posted 3 months ago

Awwww. Yay!
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On I am Emo:

posted 3 months ago

I wonder how this convo will go?
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On I am Nerd (An eavesdropping Nerd):

posted 3 months ago

Haha. I hope he interrupts, that would be funny.
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On I am Slut:

posted 3 months ago

That’s really sad.
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On Splitting the 'I am' series:

posted 3 months ago

cool!
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On The Game Is In Full Swing:

posted 3 months ago

Haha. Shocker, I’ll love to see his expression after that comment.
On Just A Little Humming:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, her dad must be flipping out. I hope he doesn’t get drunk and do something stupid because he’s so worried.
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On Just A Little Roof Jumping:

posted 3 months ago

Very cute. Running away, huh?
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On Keeping Quiet:

posted 3 months ago

haha. this should be good.
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On Just A Little Confrontation:

posted 3 months ago

Do I really allude to myself that often. Oh, dear, I might want to stop that then.
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On I am Nerd:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, this is going to be reaaally awkward.
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On He Must be Jealous, Right?:

posted 3 months ago

You have no idea…
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On Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You:

posted 3 months ago

Nice series. I like it.
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On Industrial:

posted 3 months ago

Cool to see inside his reg. life.
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On Just A Little Confrontation:

posted 3 months ago

Awww, poor thing. Her dad better get his mindset straight because moving messes up a kid, I would know.
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On How It Has To Be:

posted 3 months ago

Oh my gosh! That was very quick.
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On She's Like Me, But She Isn't...:

posted 4 months ago

Wow, that stinks majorly.
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On I am Anima:

posted 4 months ago

Oh boy, let’s hope this doesn’t get screwed up.
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On Carry On, My Super-Human Son:

posted 4 months ago

Daang, I was close, but I did not expect this. Nice shock factor, this should carry on well.
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On Just A Little Embracing:

posted 4 months ago

Awww, very adorable.
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On Just A Little Clingy:

posted 4 months ago

Haha, nice one.
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On Ugh...Marc:

posted 4 months ago

Making a move?
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On Woken Up By No One:

posted 4 months ago

Wait, I thought of something. Considering they are named Adam and Eve, and they are the only of their kind, plus they just made a woman of him. Would they perhaps be reproducing to make more said “super humans”? Just a thought.
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On Just A Little Cryptic:

posted 4 months ago

Awww…very cute. Can’t wait for the sequel!
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On The 'Just A Little' Timeline.:

posted 4 months ago

Woooooow. And I thought I moved a lot. [3 states, 6 schools, currently in 9th grade.]
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On I am Jesse:

posted 4 months ago

Hahaha, nice one guys. I wonder how this will turn out, triple date?
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On Woken Up By No One:

posted 4 months ago

I wonder what it says…
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On Prepared:

posted 4 months ago

Self-destruct? Wow, I almost forgot he was a robot up until there. I like this series, it’s really different!
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On Again With the Quiet!:

posted 4 months ago

Wow. That stinks. I love his name too!
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On Just A Little Temper:

posted 4 months ago

Hahahaha. Wow, I’m wiping my tears from laughing so hard: “Dad, 1. I’d never do that on the floor, and 2. if you haven’t noticed, our clothes were on.” Ha. Nice.
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On The Shocking Truth:

posted 4 months ago

I changed it!
On Just A Little Police Problem:

posted 4 months ago

LOL. I love his dad. He sounds like he’s be Drew’s best friend or something.
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On Just A Little in Trouble:

posted 4 months ago

Like her dad can punish her, check your own life dad! You’re not much of an example!
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On Just A Little Bad Behavior:

posted 4 months ago

Dang, high on root beer and boys. I smell trouble!
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On Confessions of an Accused:

posted 4 months ago

I am part of the Sikh religion and this is a true story that stunned and hurt members of our religion very much. If you have any questions about anything I wrote, or the Sikh religion, just send me a note!
Dr. Mousse
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On Worrying:

posted 4 months ago

It’s a bit confusing with no quotation marks, but I like the mystery of it.
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On Bad news for him, Good for Her:

posted 4 months ago

I like it, poor drew though.
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On Party Plans:

posted 4 months ago

Mmm…pressure. What’s she gonna say?
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On I am... the Cute Cousin From Florida....:

posted 4 months ago

Dang. That would be pretty weird. I love this series, keep going!
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On Just A Little Hard:

posted 4 months ago

Daang. So many mysteries. Can’t wait for the sequel!
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On Just A Little Confusing:

posted 4 months ago

Come on, give Drew a chance. I mean, I did not realize that it had only been a day. I had to go back and reread the story. They’ve been through so much together! Nice job posing a conflict.
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On Just A Little First Kiss:

posted 4 months ago

Ha, I like how he’s so normal after he kisses her. “Me:I’ll see you at school tomorrow then.” =]
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On Glowing:

posted 4 months ago

This weird, yet cool. I like it, I think I’ll keep following.
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On Run:

posted 4 months ago

Daang. I feel bad for Dante, but at the same time I’m like, it’s his fault.
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On The Perfect Drug:

posted 4 months ago

I guess I somewhat forgive Dante, until I read the next ficlet. Then, I’ll see how I feel.
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On I Couldn't Care Less:

posted 5 months ago

Dang. War has been declared. This should get pretty rough. And although they did breakup, the way things usually work out, and I have seen this in the past, is that if they are trying to make each other jealous, that means they still like each other. I mean, why would you bother otherwise? Nice job by the way.
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On Fine, Be That Way:

posted 5 months ago

Well, he took that considerably well. But, then again, I guess he was expecting it.
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On This is WAR, E!!:

posted 5 months ago

I am completely and totally confused. What is this supposed to be about?
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On Just A Little Phone Call:

posted 5 months ago

LOL. Great mom. Nice job.
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On The Trust Factor:

posted 5 months ago

I agree with THX 0477. Maybe if you stopped before the last line (“We laid there for a while and then got up and went back to my house where we dried off.”) , it would’ve had a nicer ending.
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On Final Decision:

posted 5 months ago

Wow, great series. I agree with Melia, but I am definately satisfied with the way you ended it. Great job!
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On The Guys.:

posted 5 months ago

“Ah, but troubles come with being the female leader of an all-male outlaw group.”
No kidding.
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On Special Brand:

posted 5 months ago

That is so adorable! Tears
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On I Saw Her Alive:

posted 5 months ago

That is freaking amazing!
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On Ready:

posted 5 months ago

OMG! Tyler, hurry, save her! Hayley can’t die.
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On Just A Little Ride:

posted 5 months ago

Daaang. That’s freaky. Oh, don’t let her lose her dad, too!
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On Plate, Note, and A Golf Club:

posted 5 months ago

The note was braille. Good job. Very sad.
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On NATHAN!?:

posted 5 months ago

Crap. “I heard an “Mmm.” …I heard a noise similar to a plunger being pulled out of water.” We all know what that means!
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On Too Many:

posted 5 months ago

Haha. I like God interrupting to tell off his thoughts. If God interrupted my thoughts, maybe I could stay on track more. =]
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On Don't Have To Worry:

posted 5 months ago

I think you meant aloud, not allowed [last word]. Nice job giving us a little history on Hayley. I like it.
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On Worried Thoughts:

posted 5 months ago

Gah! Dante, come on! Oh my gosh, I am so mad at him.
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On A Choice Presented:

posted 5 months ago

Ah, choice versus fate, an everlasting war. I like the touch of español. It works nicely with the story.
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On Down to Me, the Change Has Come:

posted 5 months ago

Haha. Passing gas in morse code. Wow. This series cracks me up; and it’s very addicting!
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On Cindy Lou Comes Cleaner:

posted 5 months ago

Hahaha. Wow. That was quite a twist! Bravo!
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On Classical Gas:

posted 5 months ago

Haha. I laugh at how they came up with a system to communicate: “One for yes, two for no.” Ha.
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P.S. Me 7!
On Cindy Lou Says Goodbye Again:

posted 5 months ago

Wow. I love this series. It’s so different, yet interesting. Like Flute Loop, I’m hooked!
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On Epiphany:

posted 5 months ago

Daaaang. I KNEW something wass wrong with him, but what a surprise. This was not what I was expecting.
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On Time to Finish:

posted 5 months ago

Wow, that scares me so bad. What could the reading possibly say? Can’t wait to read the sequel!
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On Overactive Imagination:

posted 5 months ago

Her hair is shining beautifully in the moonlight as she stares down at Warren, whose hair was thrown about in a certain way that’d make an ice cube melt on the spot.)

Huh????
On Siblings.:

posted 5 months ago

Interesting. I’m a little confused about what’s going on, but I’m sure you’ll explain it nicely in the sequel.
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On Confessions of a Guilty Mind:

posted 5 months ago

I wrote this based off true facts and used the famous line from the Nuremberg Trials, “We were just following orders.”
On Just A Little Old Lady/ Just A Little Music:

posted 6 months ago

Very cute. I like it. Can’t wait for the sequel!
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On Just A Little Difficult:

posted 6 months ago

Ha. Sounds like my life minus the mom dying and dad getting screwed up.
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On A Blind Kid's Clothes:

posted 6 months ago

I cannot imagine not knowing what I’m wearing. I like how he picked out his clothes, very cool!
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On Flashes:

posted 6 months ago

My suspicions are growing that something is wrong with Dante. Let’s have a sequel so I can see!
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On Another Meeting in the Hallway:

posted 6 months ago

Hmmm. Something seems strange, like something is going on with Dante. I’l just have to read the sequel and see!
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On This is Why:

posted 6 months ago

“And a good boyfriend.” Autumn added, and kissed me.
???
I think you may have gotten two of your stories mixed up, Never Explain. But, on the other hand, the story is very good and realistic. It made me smile.
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On Blindly Surviving:

posted 6 months ago

Very cute and realistic. Reminds me of some of my friends. Chuckles reminiscently.
On The Betrayal:

posted 6 months ago

Lucky you, unfortunately for me, this is a real story. AKA, welcome to my life.
On The Betrayal:

posted 6 months ago

Lucky you, unfortunately for me, this is a real story. AKA, welcome to my life.
On Jamming:

posted 6 months ago

Crosses fingers
Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel. Please be Mel.
On So Far, So Good:

posted 6 months ago

dang. she’s going to find out soon. Hayley will probably say, do you see that constellation or something. Never mind, I’ll just leave it up to you. Lol.
On Drawing of a Girl:

posted 6 months ago

awww. very cute.
On Quiet:

posted 6 months ago

Hmm…interesting. Definately something new. I’ll keep watching.
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On Fin:

posted 6 months ago

To Blusparrow, the note said You do now. What Tom wrote to Ashely “forever ago”. To the writers of this series, amazing job! I’ve been a fan of this series for quite some time and this is a great ending! True, I’m not a fan of cliffhanger endings, but this is definately an exeption. Well, now that I’ve just typed the world’s longest comment….
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On BOOM! Jack attack!:

posted 6 months ago

LOL. So like Jack to come in at the wrong time. Dang, baaaad timing.
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On Miracles:

posted 6 months ago

Really good. Basically the same as THX 0477.
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On Kiddnapping and Laughing:

posted 6 months ago

aww. thats cute. I really like this series! very cute.
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On Waiting:

posted 6 months ago

aww. thats not his fault. poor hayden!
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On Found In the Rain (Sorry, not Kait):

posted 6 months ago

lol. does Autumn’s mom not know? either way, very cute.
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On Confessions of a bottle-tipper:

posted 6 months ago

nice. you conveyed the feelings nicely.
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On Meaning Alot by Just a Little :

posted 6 months ago

awwww. so cute.
On Blake's Story- Part 3:

posted 6 months ago

wow. interesting story. i liked it.
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On NO!!!!:

posted 6 months ago

omg! what is she doing? gahhh! get her macy!
On Big Fat Misery Bomb- Nirvana!:

posted 6 months ago

no problemo. that was very good. very nice job on conveying Judie’s feelings towards Blake.
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On Absolution in the Food Court:

posted 6 months ago

lol. that was so good.
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On World War lll (Six Word Memoir Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

This reminds me of a quote by Einstein my history teacher told or class. After the invention of the a-bomb, Einstein was asked what WW3 would be like, and he said he didn’t know. But, he knew WW4 would be fought with sticks and stones. LOL. That still makes me laugh.
On Ten Minutes:

posted 6 months ago

sequel please!
On The Valentines Day Challenge:

posted 6 months ago

I hate valentines day. Gives me a headache every year. Ugh. Well, it shows in my sequel.
On More Conversation With the Big Guy Upstairs:

posted 6 months ago

wow. i would not be able to do that [kill someone i loved]. great job.
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On To a Beautiful Boy (Six Word Memoir Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

aww. thats so cute.
On Our Song:

posted 6 months ago

thats so cute!
On Step 1, Be as inconspicuous as possible:

posted 7 months ago

ouch. that has to hurt.
On I Still Want That Surprise, You Know!! :

posted 7 months ago

yayay. im excited, yet scared. what’s next?
On Make Or Break:

posted 7 months ago

omg! whats going on!
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On Make Or Break:

posted 7 months ago

omg! whats going on!
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On Quite The Prank Caller:

posted 7 months ago

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