Freedom's posted comments

  1. On The Real Deal:

    posted 1 day ago

    Okay, well note me!

  2. On Less than Thrilled:

    posted 1 day ago

    Oh god. What’s gonna happen now? I’m glad Jameson is still in love with Prandi though, that’s for sure. And this Sassy turned her head from the front seat, bringing unwanted memories of The Exorcist to Jameson’s mind. He shuddered. made me laugh. I had to go to Google to read about the movie. Haha. Can’t wait for a sequel.

  3. On The Real Deal:

    posted 1 day ago

    Kinda cheesy but whatever. THE END. We need a new series, Blu ;) hahaha

  4. On Risky Biscuits:

    posted 2 days ago

    WHOA! And here is my long comment for you all. I’m finally caught up with the series. YAH! “How’s life in the slammer, Risky Biscuits? Please tell me you were violated.”
    Haha, isn’t Paul just the best friend everyone is asking for?
    And the last little paragraph made me happy. He’s still crazy for Prandi and not Becca. Can’t wait for the sequel.

  5. On Strange:

    posted 2 days ago

    Sorry. I’m in a pissy mood already.

  6. On Strange:

    posted 2 days ago

    And some advice for you, Wyatt. Read it from the beginning and then write me a note on advice, if ya like. http://ficlets.com/stories/35384#review-74131

  7. On Strange:

    posted 2 days ago

    Um, yeah. I guess I won’t make this my first time being rude on Ficlets … so Thanks whatever for your advice, Wyatt. I’ll see what I can do.

  8. On Revenge Challenge!!! Grrr!!!:

    posted 2 days ago

    Okay, okay. I’m going to enter. I promise you. Give me some time before you close it ;)

  9. On FICBLOG!:

    posted 2 days ago

    Great idea :)

  10. On Sparks:

    posted 3 days ago

    Doesn’t matter. Its great. I’ll sequel tomorrow or something.

  11. On Together:

    posted 3 days ago

    Haha, a walking quote maker! That’s a nice one but … you are. No offense. And you always have great little phrases. LOL :) but really, you’re awesome, Blu.

  12. On Achieving the top of the World!!! (300 Ficlet Challenge):

    posted 3 days ago

    Congrats Blu on 301! Haha. I like this challenge, just gonna figure out what to do.

  13. On In Sight:

    posted 3 days ago

    Great job. I love this line for some reason. I just like how it flowed. I felt the familiar, uplifting, soaring of my soul over the stream below.

  14. On If Only:

    posted 3 days ago

    This is amazing. Very well written. And that first comment made me laugh.

  15. On Snapshot:

    posted 3 days ago

    I love how you described this. And the picture goes along great :)

  16. On Coffee:

    posted 4 days ago

    I agree. Don’t worry about the sequel because I”m not to sure about mine. Great job on this though. I love it!

  17. On Daddy:

    posted 4 days ago

    I cried on my keyboard. This is amazingly written but so heart-breaking. Thanks for entering!

  18. On Pink Roses:

    posted 7 days ago

    Sorry, I’m having a bit of writers’ block. Give me some time :)

  19. On Catoptrophobia:

    posted 11 days ago

    Yeah, we all have that longing, Blu. I think we as people have to act it and show it and be it because no one, like you said, thinks about your clothes or your jewelry like you do. I loved writing this little thought because I knew I’d get some comments with strong feelings and that’s what I was going for. Btw, anyone can sequel this if they have ideas to add on.

  20. On The End of a Generation:

    posted 11 days ago

    Whoa, this is an amazing sequel. You can feel the intensity of this scene. A father with his daughter. Just great, great job.

  21. On Perkins Always Dies Twice or Kevin Lawver must die.:

    posted 11 days ago

    Haha, this is hilarious! I love the part about the Powerpuff girls. Great job on this.

  22. On The End of It All:

    posted 11 days ago

    Someone can sequel it if they want. Thanks for the comments. It was just a random story. There will be a lot more coming. I had to get my mind off series for a bit.

  23. On About as Thinly Concealed as Katy Perry's Lesbianism:

    posted 11 days ago

    Very well written. You one of the best on suspense. And the Katy Perry title was a nice touch.

  24. On Morals:

    posted 11 days ago

    You can end it if you want.
    Or we can just keep on going.

  25. On Very Angry:

    posted 12 days ago

    Oh, great sequel. I love how you described Zeke’s conflict.

  26. On Whatever Normal Is:

    posted 13 days ago

    Haha evil laugh Hmmm…

  27. On I Like It:

    posted 13 days ago

    Haha, I’ll check it out. And Edward is the BEST part :)

  28. On I Like It:

    posted 13 days ago

    Haha, Twilight. I know what you mean, Ana. Hey, have you read The Host?

  29. On Whatever Normal Is:

    posted 13 days ago

    Yeah, we’ll just have to wait and see?

  30. On Him:

    posted 13 days ago

    So true, Ana. Its kinda weird though.

  31. On I Like It:

    posted 13 days ago

    Hah, Twilight. I totally agree, Ana. And tbs, my old boyfriend actually said that to me.
    :)

  32. On Nightmares:

    posted 14 days ago

    No, this scene was from a year ago, OrangeOreos. And this is what makes Jack who he is.

  33. On My First Series (The Wonderful World of Ficlets): Part Two:

    posted 15 days ago

    I mean no worries! Ugh, the stupid stars won’t work.
    FIVE STARS!

  34. On My First Series (The Wonderful World of Ficlets): Part Two:

    posted 15 days ago

    I agree :) And thanks. Do worries. I was really worried about our first series too! Haha! Thanks for writing another sequel that mentions me! You were one of my first friends on this great site.

    Freedom :)

  35. On Just When I Need Him:

    posted 15 days ago

    Awww, thanks Blu. Well in the words of Ana, you got sequel!

  36. On Just When I Need Him:

    posted 15 days ago

    Well, its acutally from Emotions but whatever. Thanks for the idea!

  37. On Just When I Need Him:

    posted 15 days ago

    The next sequel might be a little late.

  38. On Just When I Need Him:

    posted 15 days ago

    I’m just glad you’re reading it, OrangeOreos. Hmmm, tbs, your comment on the last sequel just gave me an idea about Jack. The net sequel might be a little late.

  39. On Good Morning:

    posted 15 days ago

    Haha whorehouse.
    And thanks, OrangeOreos. I like the thought of an unoffical grammar editor. Besides, my grammar sucks. I’d be screwed if I didn’t have spell check and all those things on WORD.

  40. On Change:

    posted 15 days ago

    Thanks :)

  41. On Lost in the Woods:

    posted 15 days ago

    Very well written. I agree with the above. An entertaining read :)

  42. On Shrouded in Fog:

    posted 15 days ago

    Woah. This is great. It really puts you in the characters’ shoes. Great sequel, Ana.
    The ending – ugh cliffhanger!

  43. On Who to Believe?:

    posted 16 days ago

    Oh, oh. And I think it should say “she” Then he looked at Wes… Yeah, that makes more sense now.

  44. On Who to Believe?:

    posted 16 days ago

    Wait, I’m confused. Who said, “It was all him. Ow, my head hurts.” was it Wes or Zeke?

    Btw, we both are talking in different tenses but it doesn’t really matter.

    GRRREAt SEQUEL!

  45. On Something:

    posted 16 days ago

    No. Not at all, OrangeOreos.

  46. On I Guess:

    posted 16 days ago

    Yeah thebetweenspace, summertime love is the tag for the whole series :)

  47. On Confusion and Regret:

    posted 17 days ago

    I agree. Great sequel. Sorry its taking me so long to sequel.

  48. On Execution:

    posted 17 days ago

    I agree! That line was amazing!
    This was an entertaining read :)

  49. On Telling Him Everything (Backwards Challenge):

    posted 17 days ago

    OOOOHHHMMMYYGOSH!
    She’s pregnant?? Now that’s a shocker.

  50. On Knocking on the Door (Backwards challenge):

    posted 17 days ago

    Ok, its getting a little clearer now. Great job on this :)

  51. On Standing Outside my Door (Backwards Challenge):

    posted 17 days ago

    Whoa, now I’m confuzzled.

  52. On Happiest Person Alive (Backwards Challenge):

    posted 17 days ago

    I agree with bandbaby, going to read on…

  53. On On Their Side Now:

    posted 17 days ago

    Oh! This is great! I’ve got an idea! Hehehe :)

  54. On I am so Done:

    posted 17 days ago

    Whoa, this seems like its real.
    Hmmm…
    Great job on this anyway. The feeling, like you’re in this person’s
    shoes is very well described. Or, um how should I say this?

    Let’s go with: I LOVED IT!

  55. On Revenge Challenge!!! Grrr!!!:

    posted 17 days ago

    Sounds like a good challenge.
    Haha REVENGE
    Hmmm, I’ll enter when I can :)

  56. On Waiting for you to Come Around:

    posted 17 days ago

    This is good. Well written.
    Sorry, I’ve been M.I.A for a couple days but I’m back.

  57. On Compromise Could Change...:

    posted 17 days ago

    Haha sorry. I couldn’t think for a while. I’m good now :)

  58. On Compromise Could Change...:

    posted 21 days ago

    Whoa. That’s extreme. What am I gonna do about Zeke? I’ll sequel tomorrow :) AMAZING SEQUEL

  59. On Help Is On The Way:

    posted 21 days ago

    This is good.
    Very well written.

  60. On Walking Away:

    posted 21 days ago

    OHHH! BURN!
    That must hurt Stephen badly. My turn! Hmmm…

  61. On Protocol:

    posted 22 days ago

    Whoa, that was was extreme. I couldn’t help but laugh about the enhacement drugs though…Great sequel.

  62. On The Trip (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 22 days ago

    Thanks :)

  63. On The Trip (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 22 days ago

    Thanks :)

  64. On Pleasure Principle:

    posted 22 days ago

    Haha civilians, that’s going to be interesting.

  65. On Your Worst Nightmare:

    posted 22 days ago

    Haha, the Karl comment was hilarious. And Sassy really IS his worst nightmare. Haha. This is a great series. Extremely entertaining.

  66. On Your Worst Nightmare:

    posted 22 days ago

    Haha, the Karl comment was hilarious. And Sassy really IS his worst nightmare. Haha. This is a great series. Extremely entertaining.

  67. On Couldn't Give me Love:

    posted 23 days ago

    This is great. I’ll sequel when I can :)

  68. On Liars and Dungeons [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    Loving it so far. Yet its so … painful and the way you wrote it seems like I can actually feel Angela’s pain.

  69. On Snapped [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    Again, great job. You’re an ahhmazing writer.

  70. On Snapped [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    This explains it all.

  71. On Truth [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    The last paragraph is very well written. Its cool how everytime I read on, it like pieces together the puzzle of this Backwards Challenge.

  72. On Precise as Knives [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    Ana, everytime you write something, it makes me want to read more and more. Great job on this. Its such a sad, sad story though.

  73. On The Art of Patience [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    The last two lines were breath-taking.

  74. On Beautiful You:

    posted 26 days ago

    Whoa, thats really deep. Very VERY well written. Its sad but I love it.

    btw, I’m sequeling for the series tomo :)

  75. On Next:

    posted 26 days ago

    Thanks :)

  76. On Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

    posted 26 days ago

    I agree too. This was a really good read. A sequel would be interesting.

  77. On Would you Ever?:

    posted 26 days ago

    I don’t know. What is it??
    Well written btw :)

  78. On They will Rule?:

    posted 26 days ago

    Whoa. Just wanted to point out a few things. One, I think you might as, As soon and I finish off the kid, and also that Wes and Beka went off into another land and were alone.
    Besides that, awesome sequel. I’m not sure if I know where to go with this.

  79. On Plan?:

    posted 26 days ago

    BLU, I left you to figure out what Master Bill’s group plans to do with power. Good luck.

  80. On Should Have Known:

    posted 26 days ago

    Thanks again :) I need some grammar work.

  81. On Pushing Thoughts of Her:

    posted 27 days ago

    THe last paragraph was very well written :)

  82. On Friday:

    posted 27 days ago

    Thanks :)

  83. On Should Have Known:

    posted 27 days ago

    Sry, I’ll fix it.

  84. On Pushing Thoughts of Her:

    posted 27 days ago

    Woah, this is ahmazing. GReat great sequel!!!!

  85. On Possession [haiku]:

    posted 27 days ago

    This is great. Three lines and its ahmazing. I haven’t read a good haiku on Ficlets but you’ve got the title now.

  86. On Preparing to fight:

    posted 28 days ago

    Mkay, I’ll sequel tomorrow.

  87. On Tell Me Why:

    posted 28 days ago

    Oh…I wonder what will happen next?? I like this series so far :)

  88. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    Well, thanks for all your advice. I’m going to chanfe it now.

  89. On The Trip (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted 28 days ago

    Um…yea :)

  90. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    OKAY, I’VE MADE MY MIND UP. I”M STARTING THIS SERIES ON MY OWN AND ANYONE WHO WANTS TO SEQUEL, JUST LEAVE A MSG BEFORE YOU DO :) Sry, I change my mind, alot alot. ENJOY!

  91. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    haha its okay

  92. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    Actually, anyone can sequel this. Msg me

  93. On Siren Song:

    posted 28 days ago

    This was a great read. Can’t wait to read on. “That’s what we get for jacking a car across the street from the police station.” Laugh out loud worthy.

  94. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    Thanks. I’ll look into the spelling :)

  95. On Stunned:

    posted 28 days ago

    Do you like the change?

  96. On Stunned:

    posted 28 days ago

    Do you like the change?

  97. On Roses:

    posted 28 days ago

    New series I’m starting with myself :)

  98. On A Feeling:

    posted 29 days ago

    I completely agree.

  99. On Saving her, Part Two:

    posted 29 days ago

    A hundred stars :)

  100. On Saving her, Part Two:

    posted 29 days ago

    OMG, I loved it. I have an amazing idea.

  101. On Saving her, Part One:

    posted 29 days ago

    Good so far. Reading on…

  102. On Talking:

    posted 29 days ago

    Don’t know where to go with this yet. I’ll probably sequel later. Sorry :)

  103. On Talking:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is good. Great job :) I’ll sequel later maybe.

  104. On I Hate You And I'm Glad About It:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Woah, those are some deep thoughts Sarah.

  105. On The Note:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’ll sequel sometime tomorrow :)

  106. On The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This sounds like an ahhmazing challenge. I’m going to try it, but I can’t be sure of anything good. But still, great idea!

  107. On My tour with the Jonas Brothers part 3:

    posted about 1 month ago

    For some advice, I think you should make paragraphs so that the eye can rest. And quotations for when they speak. And some other stuff.

    Other than that, I love it!
    The Jonas Brothers are my favorite band :)

  108. On My tour with the Jonas Brothers part 3:

    posted about 1 month ago

    For some advice, I think you should make paragraphs so that the eye can rest. And quotations for when they speak. And some other stuff.

    Other than that, I love it!
    The Jonas Broters are my favorite band :)

  109. On The Note:

    posted about 1 month ago

    woah. thats sad but on the other hand, I’ve got an idea now!

  110. On The Car Ride:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OHMYGOSH! This next sequel is going to be interesting…

    GREAT SEQUEL!!! :)

  111. On The Car Ride:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OHMYGOSH! This next sequel is going to be interesting…

    GREAT SEQUEL!!! :)

  112. On The Car Ride:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OHMYGOSH! This next sequel is going to be interesting…

    GREAT SEQUEL!!! :)

  113. On A Letter From a Grieving Father to his Son:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is very well written but just so sad. Jeez, I’m tearing up.

  114. On A Fight Ahead for Zeke:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Yeah, I feel the same way.

  115. On Dream Flashes Raise Questions:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Its good. I’m gonna sequel now.

  116. On Zeke Fights for Her:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I mean, I guess its not funny, but it was just something about the way I read it…anyways, the SEQUEL. Getting on it :)

  117. On Green Stuff:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Good sequel. I love the playful flirting even though they’re both really high.

  118. On Zeke Fights for Her:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’m sorry but I was laughing so hard at Wes’ weakness. His knee? OH, now you know I’m going to make a BIG scene of that later on. Great Sequel!
    I’ll sequel later on today :)

  119. On Official Business in a Treehouse [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Haha, google Victorville. This was quite a challenge. All I got was the year: 1977, I think.

  120. On Official Business in a Treehouse [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Haha, google Victorville. This was quite a challenge. All I got was the year: 1977, I think.

  121. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  122. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  123. On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  124. On Hi, My Name is.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I agree with Ana too! This is a great start! I can’t wait for a sequel!

  125. On One Decision, that can Change Your Life:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Or so they say. Hahaha :)

  126. On Zeke Shows Sympathy!?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OMG!!!

    Can you say lllooovveee??

    Great sequel, Blu!

  127. On One Decision, that can Change Your Life:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh my god, this is great! I can’t wait to sequel this!

    And Blu, I have to disagree. I’m starting to like James more because he’s so mysterious and dangerous. And you know, in real life, everyone falls for adventure.

  128. On A Toast From Afar:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is good. I totally agree with Pyro.

  129. On Getting our Horses Together:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Great sequel. I love how the horse knows its Zeke and isn’t happy about it.

  130. On Assignment:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Hah. You’re hilarious. Chocolate for me too, though I’m not sure about DARK chocolate.

    And thanks!

  131. On Some Magic and A Fake Smile (New Series!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    THIS IS COMPLETELY NEW GROUND FOR ME!

  132. On Some Magic and A Fake Smile (New Series!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Good start. I’ll try.

    Haha. Master Jone.

  133. On Lies :

    posted about 1 month ago

    ACtually, never mind. URGGHHH

  134. On Lies :

    posted about 1 month ago

    OH! Never mind, you got it! I think I’m gonna sequel though.

  135. On Lies :

    posted about 1 month ago

    OH! Never mind, you got it! I think I’m gonna sequel though.

  136. On Her Scream:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, this is really good. Very well written.

  137. On Daydreaming:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Haha. Its okay. I love your hilarious comments. You always make me laugh, Blu.

  138. On Jonas Part 81: Rearranging Ride:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Haha, that’s extremely funny. Can’t wait for a sequel!

  139. On Jonas Part 79: Crazy:

    posted about 1 month ago

    “Yeah,” Nick whispered, “unless it’s his normal thing to try to force the bar off the person in front of you while pushing them off of the seat. If that’s the case, no he didn’t.. But I doubt it.”

    Haha he says this all so calmly. Great sequel.

  140. On "Can I tell you a story?" Finished:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Great job on this. I really did enjoy it.

  141. On "Can I tell you a story?":

    posted about 1 month ago

    I like it too. Going to read the sequel.

  142. On Spin. Click. Pass.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I agree. The last line was ahmazing. Very well written.

  143. On An Outline of a Plan:

    posted about 1 month ago

    It does. Thanks :)

  144. On Flattery:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I totally agree.

  145. On An Outline of a Plan:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is an ahhmazing series and I was just wondering if anyone could sequel or if you guys have a certain group of writers?

  146. On Macy 86: Four Minutes Could Change The World:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Sorry I had to end it this way. I needed something that pulled away from Shane, Macon and Derrick. So, for the last sequel, introducing…
    THOMAS
    Hahaha. I’m sorry that like no one is going to like the ending, but I hope you enjoyed the rest of the series. Stay tuned for more series that are coming soon!

    Freedom :)

  147. On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I love this series! Someone please sequel.

  148. On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I love this series! Someone please sequel.

  149. On Outta My Head:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Ohhhh, that’s gonna be interesting.
    SSEEEEQQQQUUUEELL?
    Btw, I love this series so far.

  150. On Green Eyes:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OHHHMMYYGOD!
    this is good because now i have an idea

  151. On Green Eyes:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OHHHMMYYGOD!
    this is good because now i have an idea

  152. On What Goes Around Comes Around:

    posted about 1 month ago

    haha Paul finally got what he deserved. Great sequel.

  153. On Count Down (Challenge by Numbers Challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Very cool. I love how you were counting down to one.

  154. On Macy 85: Realized:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ugh NO. there’s only about two sequels left in this series. [tear, tear. sniff, sniff]

  155. On The Wonderball's Message:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Woah. What a thrill! I can’t wait for a sequel. Great job on this. Completely had my heart beating fast.

  156. On Missed it due to Dream:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OMG, bailed out?

  157. On Test of Trust:

    posted about 1 month ago

    We sure did. It was…interesting. Um, just wanted to point out the quotation marks instead of our regular way. But I don’t care because its better. Change if you want to. GREAT SEQUEL!

  158. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Stupid button. Make me click it three times. Ughh.

  159. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Got a good set idea about it, but go right ahead today if you like.

  160. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Got a good set idea about it, but go right ahead today if you like.

  161. On You Love Me, Right?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Got a good set idea about it, but go right ahead today if you like.

  162. On An Upcoming Test:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh Jeez, you’re tempting me with the “death” idea, but I’m trying to steer clear of that. Hmm…

  163. On An Upcoming Test:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I like the summary too. I think I have an idea and don’t worry about not sequeling. I was in a bad mood when I sent you that message, so no worries. Great sequel.

  164. On Any Last Requests?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Ohmygod! Sequel!

  165. On "I heard something":

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh sequel. This is good so far.

  166. On Cellar, Cellar Door.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I like the last line.
    This is good…in a sad way.

  167. On over damage:

    posted about 1 month ago

    woah thats intense.
    well written though.

  168. On What Now?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’m trying to run the series out instead of us ending it in like 2 more sequels.
    BLU?? SEQUEL??

  169. On Life Doesn't Work That Way:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Woah. That’s extreme. Good start for a possible series though. Love the last line.

  170. On All That I See:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Agree with howhardlife is. Plus, it was very well written.

  171. On Beauty and Love(200something challenge/I am challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Oh, I just realized where Six Feet Under The Stars, All Time Low! I love them! I wonder if that’s what your penname is from! Hmm…

  172. On Macy 82: Memories:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’ll fix that around. Wow, Blu, I’m touched. This is like the first time you haven’t guessed my plans. [evil laugh] and now I just have to figure out what they are. Hah.

  173. On Macy 82: Memories:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’ll fix that around. Wow, Blu, I’m touched. This is like the first time you haven’t guessed my plans. [evil laugh] and now I just have to figure out what they are. Hah.

  174. On Jonas Part 61: End of the Road:

    posted about 1 month ago

    omg tell her what?
    SEQUEL!!
    I love this series!

  175. On Macy 81: The Clash:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Hold on, hold on. Calm down, calm down. I’m deciding between two choices so just wait a day maybe.

  176. On What Now?:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks for the advice Pyro; I’ll check into it. Btw, Demi got cut.

  177. On I Am Finally Me. [I am...Poetry Challenge]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is really well written. Thanks for entering!

  178. On I Should Be Asleep:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is funny and really good.
    I am going to be so tired in the morning…
    My thoughts every late night. Thanks for entering!

  179. On I AM: Jealousy:

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is great. I agree too and thanks for entering!

  180. On Beauty and Love(200something challenge/I am challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is good and thanks for entering!

  181. On I Am (200something challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Woahh, scary intense. Thanks for entering!

  182. On I Am (200something challenge):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Woahh, scary intense. Thanks for entering!

  183. On Their Face (200something CHALLENGE!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    This is amazing. It’s sad but really good. Thanks for entering!

  184. On Macy 78: Walked:

    posted about 1 month ago

    So much for brighter…

  185. On Stronger because of You:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Wow, great job Blu. This is a great sequel, can’t wait for the next!

    One word: INTENSE

  186. On Enough For Now:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Sry its so short :)

  187. On Enough For Now:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Sry its so short :)

  188. On Enough For Now:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Sry its short :)

  189. On Enough For Now:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Sry its short :)

  190. On Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Thanks, my turn to sequel. Maybe tonite.

  191. On Realization Challenge WINNERS =D:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Aww thanks so so much! Blu, you’re soo sweet! “Supreme Honorable Mention Realization” I have my own title! Thanks for the great challenge! Next time I’ll enter earlier :]:]:]:]:]

  192. On Realization Challenge WINNERS =D:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Aww thanks so so much! Blu, you’re soo sweet! “Supreme Honorable Mention Realization” I have my own title! Thanks for the great challenge! Next time I’ll enter earlier :]:]:]:]:]

  193. On Macy 77: Not Nice:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I guess I don’t really mind, but seqeul it after my next one if anyone does it. And Blu, check your msgs.

  194. On Macy 77: Not Nice:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I guess I don’t really mind, but seqeul it after my next one if anyone does it. And Blu, check your msgs.

  195. On Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Jesus Blu. We have got to get you some therapy for your violent ficlets. Hah. Just kidding. You know I love drama.

    But I have the same question as Nissakit…

  196. On No:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Huh What Blu??

  197. On No:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Huh What Blu??

  198. On No:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Huh What Blu??

  199. On Not the Same girl:

    posted about 1 month ago

    OMG that explains it all, but ugh, Dylan what a JERK. great sequel though. I wonder what’s going to happen next…

  200. On The Memory:

    posted about 1 month ago

    whoa, intense is an understatement. going to read on…this is amazing

  201. On Realization! (MY 200 FICLETS CHALLENGE!) Challenge on!:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Ugh, I entered. But you know, I had so many different ideas and so I just wrote the first one that came to mind and…it’s um interesting. Hope you don’t mind. Great challenge btw! Love it!

  202. On Dying:

    posted about 1 month ago

    very intense. um you spelled dieing wrong, its dYing. ugh , how am i gonna sequel this??

  203. On A story of life in 439 characters (200 challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    Great job and thanks for entering!

  204. On So Not Cool:

    posted 2 months ago

    yea gotta change that.

  205. On Macy 76: In His Head:

    posted 2 months ago

    Ugh, I ran out of room. Stupid word limit thing.

  206. On Macy 75: Needed:

    posted 2 months ago

    If only she could trust Shane….but I doubt she will. Well maybe.

  207. On Macy 72: Help Me:

    posted 2 months ago

    idk about the pigs. pigs are REALLY fat. Hah. Ok I’m done. I had to put that in there. Bad experience with school fields and farms.

  208. On Macy 63: The Club:

    posted 2 months ago

    lol you guys make me laugh.

  209. On Macy 61: Parents:

    posted 2 months ago

    Ugh my series are always so violent. I need to work on that.

    IE Apple, Aditi & Nissakit’s comments prove it. Ugh ugh ugh.

  210. On Macy 59: Sort Of:

    posted 2 months ago

    Yeah, Aditi. It looks like you got the point. It’s proving that in life, love is never set in stone and that feelings change no matter how crazy they already were. Plus, it shows how conflicted people get over who they really love. I’m so glad you like the series though.

  211. On Macy 58: Finally:

    posted 2 months ago

    it magically disappeared. oh idk.

  212. On Macy 56: Tell Me:

    posted 2 months ago

    lol Aditi. that would have been amazing.

  213. On Macy 51: Better:

    posted 2 months ago

    very interesting. just read on.

  214. On Macy 50: Ultimatum:

    posted 2 months ago

    lol. its bacon.

  215. On Macy 45: Surprise:

    posted 2 months ago

    You know, everything happens at dances. They either make or break you. Well, I should say they either make or break RELATIONSHIPS.

  216. On Macy 45: Surprise:

    posted 2 months ago

    You know, everything happens at dances. They either make or break you. Well, I should say they either make or break RELATIONSHIPS.

  217. On Macy 44: Friday Night Dances:

    posted 2 months ago

    dances ruin everything.

  218. On I Am Challenge( I am Doomed): A Poem:

    posted 2 months ago

    Good job. But how come no one is following the format anymore? Oh well. Thanks for entering!

  219. On I Am Challenge: I am Of the World:

    posted 2 months ago

    Totally different from the others! I like it. Thanks for entering!

  220. On I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    God Blu, you’re unbelievable. I don’t know how you manage to keep up with like two series and still do all of my challenges. Thanks so so much and sorry I couldn’t get in your last challenge. I’ll do the next for sure. :]:]:]

  221. On She's only beautiful to you when she cries. [poem]:

    posted 2 months ago

    This is amazing and well written. Sad, but I love it. Great job.

  222. On The Sharp Teeth of my Bite (200 something challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    That’s really really good. Disturbing and dark. Vivid and well written. Thanks for entering!

  223. On Macy 74: Run From:

    posted 2 months ago

    Blu, how is she going to trust someone like him? There might be other hopes though. Think about it.

  224. On Frantic:

    posted 2 months ago

    OH MY GOD! This is great I just don’t know where to go with it yet. Sequel tomorrow maybe.

  225. On Forever [I Am.. challenge]:

    posted 2 months ago

    This is good. Love the last line and thanks for entering!

  226. On I Am... I Think [[I AM Challenge]]:

    posted 2 months ago

    Agree completely with Mistress. Thanks for entering!

  227. On I am... (200something Challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    Agree as well. Thanks for entering!

  228. On I Am.. ((200somthing Challenge)):

    posted 2 months ago

    Agree with Ana Cristina and thanks for entering!

  229. On Wisp of Insecurity(I AM challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    Great job! I am a storyteller. Love this line. Thanks for entering!

  230. On Waiting on Him (I AM... Challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    Very well written. Thanks for entering!

  231. On One Wish [I AM... Challenge]:

    posted 2 months ago

    Great job and thanks for entering!

  232. On Macy 73: That Face:

    posted 2 months ago

    Hopefully not.

  233. On Macy 70: Destroy:

    posted 2 months ago

    Wow Aditi, you totally got the story line pegged. YAH I have everyday readers!

  234. On Never Explain's 'I am' [200something CHALLENGE]:

    posted 2 months ago

    LOL ego. Very well written though. Thanks for entering!

  235. On I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    This is so…lovely. Great job Blu and thanks for entering!

  236. On Clouds of Doubt (200something challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    Wow this is really good. I like the theme and almost the last line. Great job and thanks for entering!

  237. On Macy 71: Fix It:

    posted 2 months ago

    Good question.

  238. On Oy's Answers (WOOHOO! GO BRASS PLAYERS!!):

    posted 2 months ago

    OMG are you serious about the worm thing? Hope not.

  239. On The Attack after Shardik:

    posted 2 months ago

    Your stories are good. Only violent which is not really my type. But well written.

  240. On Chapter 3: Josh, Part 1:

    posted 2 months ago

    Interesting. Very interesting :]:]:]:]

  241. On Chapter Two: Reprecussions:

    posted 2 months ago

    Haha. Hot butter LOL.

  242. On Evil Parakeets Ch.1:

    posted 2 months ago

    Smurf? Awesome!

  243. On Jonas Part 50: Hospital:

    posted 2 months ago

    Woah. This is really good. I’m sorry I haven’t been commenting along the way, but I got so caught up in the story. LOL. Great job on this. Can’t wait for a sequel.

  244. On Macy 69: What Is Love?:

    posted 2 months ago

    Oh fine fine fine. I’ll just write the sequel to make my two daily readers happy. LOL. Hah.

  245. On Lies :

    posted 2 months ago

    No you got it backwards. But oh well.

  246. On Macy 69: What Is Love?:

    posted 2 months ago

    Hey everyone, I need at least five comments on who Macy should pick before I write the next sequel. And different people please, Blusparrow, because I know you love to comment. Hah.

    Okay everyone! Go for it! I want to know what everyone thinks before I annouce!

  247. On Just Dreaming:

    posted 2 months ago

    sounds really good. very well written.

  248. On All I Ask:

    posted 2 months ago

    thanks for the correction penguin!

  249. On Inspiration:

    posted 2 months ago

    You make me want to soar high above the world and bring you back a cloud.
    Love this line. Very well written.

  250. On Lost Stan:

    posted 2 months ago

    Oh this sounds pretty good. Sorry I’m just now reading it after 2 months but I think you should sequel it. At least once. Very well written.

  251. On A lot of Thinking:

    posted 2 months ago

    omg omg this is intense. I want to read on and on but there’s nothing there right now. umm SEQUEL??

  252. On Macy 68: What Does That Mean?:

    posted 2 months ago

    wytherwings, you are on the right path. You totally got that I was…sorta…trying to confuse everyone. My understanding of love is that its…strange. And unexpected. And challenging. But it rewards you in the end with what you really want. Now all I have to figure out is what or who Macy really wants.

    I’m so happy so many people love this series. I really don’t want it to end so I’ll be dragging it out for as long as possible. Enjoy.

  253. On The Accident:

    posted 2 months ago

    hmm…accident?
    sry it took me so long

  254. On Macy 67: Happy:

    posted 2 months ago

    Its supposed to sound, ok I admit it, like bacon. LOL :)

    Now say it out loud and laugh for an hour. Ha. Ha.

  255. On Macy 67: Happy:

    posted 2 months ago

    That’s the idea. See, it’s supposed to show how personality changing teens are. Plus, you have to read from the beginning to really understand how much Macon has changed. Right now, I’m guessing he’s enjoying the feeling of being in control of everything and everyone around him. Like he’s some king or something. But everyone’s rein has to end. So I hope everyone is enjoying this series. I know I am.

  256. On I Tried:

    posted 2 months ago

    Dang it, the stupid POST COMMENT button never works the first time. UGHH

  257. On I Tried:

    posted 2 months ago

    Aww man, I missed all the tense conversations. So not fair. Hah.

    Thanks for the advice, Andrew. You know when I first came to this site, that was how I wrote but I’ve changed in some of my other stories and just loved doing it like this with Blu. Thanks though. My English teacher did say that editing was not my thing. Hah.

    Great sequel. Now I get to follow it up! I love getting all my anger out with fight scenes. Though I’m in a good mood now so it mi