Ficlets | invisibility_disability's posted comments

lol, moisturizer bottles.
i myself have some experience with that.
my sister was being stupid one day and threw a bottle of hand sanitizer at me and it gave me a fat lip.

On Ferdinand Forgotten [Twisted History Challenge]:

posted 7 days ago

... it was Francis or Francesco Ferdinand.
i really really really hate to correct you, but franz ferdinand is the awesome band. :)
lol. i was in that class.
@ trifalmadorian_mighty-joe young: i don’t understand your comment at all.

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 10 days ago

hahahah.

On A (Hopefully) Cryptic Response to Ana Christina's Scavenger Hunt Challenge:

posted 14 days ago

no, breakable was the song. (good job john!)
i put the “fake” facts because you can never be too careful.. so the birthplace, year of birth, and nickname i won’t say.. but they are in there.

On Art of Concentration:

posted 15 days ago

good ficlet!
the focus… focus… focus… at the end reminded me of Dragonball Z. i was half expecting a ‘hammehammehammehammehammehammeHAHHH!!!!’ (giant burst of energy)
i’m sorry. blame my friends for the DZ reference…

On An Outline of a Plan:

posted 15 days ago

nice. :)

On Ed and the Wonderball:

posted 15 days ago

ok, whoa.

On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

posted 15 days ago

OH MY GOSH, I FINALLY GOT INTO MOST POPULAR!!!!!!!!
sorry. i have been trying and trying and now i have. so..
YAYYYYY!

On A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

posted 15 days ago

um… deadliest catch isn’t a sitcom.

On Scavenger Hunt Challenge: A Walk with Timmy:

posted 15 days ago

favorite subject history, yes???

On Scavenger Hunt Challenge: A Walk with Timmy:

posted 15 days ago

favorite subject history, yes???

On um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge):

posted 15 days ago

1.) year = 1996
2.) pet = shadow/spike
3.) birthplace = memphis
4.) best friend = jimmy
5.) book = inkheart
6.) song = no idea
7.) number = 47
8.) nickname = molly
9.) subject = creative writing
10.) sitcom = home improvement
how’d i do?

On Official Business in a Treehouse [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]:

posted 15 days ago

wow. nice one..

On The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!:

posted 15 days ago

entered!!! some of my facts are little bit obvious and others are really difficult to figure out.
great challenge and congrats!

On A (Hopefully) Cryptic Response to Ana Christina's Scavenger Hunt Challenge:

posted 15 days ago

be careful. i put some fake facts in there!!! try and figure out which are real. :)

On Nothing is as what it seems:

posted 15 days ago

innnnteresting. lots of hair colors…

On The Life and Relationship of Rachellll:

posted 17 days ago

... oops.

On The Life and Relationship of Rachellll:

posted 17 days ago

OMGZZ LMAO!!!
They truly seemed to fom such a bond that not even earth-invading aliens with huge-ass rocket ships could rip apart.
i’m definitely writing that down. XD
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On The Life and Relationship of Rachellll:

posted 17 days ago

OMGZZ LMAO!!!
They truly seemed to fom such a bond that not even earth-invading aliens with huge-ass rocket ships could rip apart.
i’m definitely writing that down. XD
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On The Life and Romantic Squabblings of Mariaaaa:

posted 17 days ago

lol. “that’s what she said.” i haven’t used that in suuuuccchhh a long time. XD
i love the last line.. i saw an icon like that.
nice job. :)
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On The Life and Romantic Squabblings of Mariaaaa:

posted 17 days ago

lol. “that’s what she said.” i haven’t used that in suuuuccchhh a long time. XD
i love the last line.. i saw an icon like that.
nice job. :)
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On Sweeney Todd: Children's Barber of Sweet Street (Genre Blender Challenge):

posted 20 days ago

yes, i am re-commenting because now i finally understand all the references.
(i like how you used the word “succumbed,” like Antony asks Sweeney in “No Place Like London.” nice detail.)
although i have to ask… was one of those children named Toby, perhaps?? :)
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On Friggatriskaidekaphobia:

posted 20 days ago

yeah, i agree with sarah. the picture is amazing. (sketches it quickly)
fantastic friday-the-13th ficlet. :)
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On I am Ceirra:

posted 20 days ago

the way you describe things remind me of Twilight.

On Hello Ed:

posted 20 days ago

this one confused me. how can Ed time travel? (thanks for finally sequeling, by the way. saved me a lot of angry comments.)

On Poor unfornate soul:

posted 21 days ago

why are you having a corny competition? i don’t understand.

On This is WAR, E!!:

posted 21 days ago

um… ok?

On Confessions of a Guilty Mind:

posted 21 days ago

extremely impressed.
beyond impressed. i never thought about whether or not the Nazis ever considered the fact that millions of innocent peoples’ lives could end with a flick of the wrist.
verrrrryyy well-written. kudos.

On A Fun But Insane Quiz From Insert Pen Name Here's Very Insane Mind (Hopefully this really really long title will grab your attention: CLICK ON MEEE!!!):

posted 21 days ago

yayyy quizzles!!!

On Hope For It...:

posted 21 days ago

hahahahahah.
sucks for him.
AWESOME SEQUEL!!!!!!!
:) :) :) love it.
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On A weakness in the Wonderball?:

posted 22 days ago

um. i thought she was stuck in bed and the wonderball was on the windowledge…

On Wonderball makes new Friends:

posted 22 days ago

...
i would spellcheck and grammar check this one.
but interesting development, though sudden.

On Not So Fast:

posted 22 days ago

great twist.
also, you might want to separate the 3rd paragraph where emily and the man speak. i got a little confused there…

On Figment of the Imagination:

posted 22 days ago

this reminds me of The Host / Tom Riddle in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.

On So Long...:

posted 22 days ago

what happened to the wonderball…?

On To Play or Be Played:

posted 22 days ago

haha, that thing is scarrrrryyyy!!!

On The Wonderball's Warning:

posted 22 days ago

is it her friend that hurts her?! WHAT HAPPENS?!

On Room 34:

posted 22 days ago

completely agree with uselessness.
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On The Cryptic, Unpredictable Wonderball:

posted 22 days ago

great one!!!
eeegghh, i’m a nitpicker too. last line says this: would have to would face it alone.
great ficlet, though!

On The Room Awaits...:

posted 22 days ago

stovohobo, you quoted captain jack sparrow and i love you for it!!!!!!
great sequel. i wonder… will she go???

On Wonderball Comes to Life:

posted 22 days ago

this definitely reminds me of hitchhiker’s. haha. but anyway, creepy stuff!
“What is the answer to life, the universe, and everything?”
“42.”

On A Diary Entry Revised:

posted 22 days ago

just a note:
this is inspired by a shirt i saw at Hot Topic that i definitely came extreeemely close to buying.
i must give credit to the store because this is based off of their shirt.
also, that store rocks. :)

On lovers demise:

posted 23 days ago

wow. this chain is super duper long. i never meant to start this, hahah.
we were simply studying poetic devices and i was like, “hey, a couplet!” and WHABAMM! a whole chain of couplet ficlets!
this is awesome! thanks to everyone who contributed! now i think i have to do another one… hmm…

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 27 days ago

lol, entry 56 is interesting. i wonder what kind of music he composes…

On Deep Space Disaster:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahah! awesome!!
i want to have a cookie party… ;)
great job!
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On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted about 1 month ago

lolololl. you have too much time.
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On Shakespeare Academy: Not Very Long Lived:

posted about 1 month ago

(sarcastic gasp) i wonder who it could be?!?

On Tragedies:

posted about 1 month ago

w-o-w.
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On Nature (I Am Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

very nice. it makes me think of a really huge redwood like those ones in california. you know, the ones that are, like, 350+ feet tall?
great job at this. :)
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On Moments of Happiness:

posted about 1 month ago

awwwww. wow, this is sweet and a little bit strange coming from you. :)
(i meant that in the most best way possible.)
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On The Kind That Hate Was Bred In:

posted about 1 month ago

pardon this blunt comment, but, is there anything you can’t write?!

On Human For Sale:

posted about 1 month ago

hmmmmm…. where will this go to?

On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 1: Introduction:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahahah.

On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 2: Social Classes:

posted about 1 month ago

according to this, i fall mainly under the “nerd” category, and i am proud. :)

On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 3: Staff Species:

posted about 1 month ago

i don’t remember having a vice principal or dean of students at my school…
(verrrry small school. less than 200 kids total.)

On The Comprehensive (Compressed) Guide to Middle School Life, No. 4: Girls:

posted about 1 month ago

hahah. what promises broken & backs turned is way too true.
i have been to a Catholic school dance and i was scarred for life. (shudders)
ooh, flashback there.
also, yes, this was probably a very helpful guide although usually i just come out and say stuff because i’m a freak. :)

On PARTY!:

posted about 1 month ago

omgomgomgomgomg, such a great ficlet!

hahah, those meerkats and their silly songs… XD

FAVORITE PART: “Ever notice how singing makes people smile?”

On Safari Mishap (invisible's challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

i’ve always wanted to go on a safari… :)
thanks for entering!
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On Paper Flowers: The Soundtrack (PBBT's challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

GOOD SONGS!!!!!!! ♪♫

On Fallen Angel (Pt. 10):

posted about 1 month ago

awwwwwwww!!!

On Moms & Robbers:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahah, i love the ending. :)
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On Inconceivable!:

posted about 1 month ago

PRINCESSBRIDEPRINCESSBRIDEPRINCESSBRIDEPRINCESSBRIDEPRINCESSBRIDEPRINCESSBRIDE!!!!!!!

i absolutely love that movie more than anything.

On Escape From Bad Cafeteria Food:

posted about 1 month ago

ahh! must… read… sequel!!!!

On Facedown in a Snowbank:

posted about 1 month ago

you’re 12?!!!!!??
i’m sorry, i’m still in shock.
great job, once again.

On An Auschwitz Sensation:

posted about 1 month ago

you are TWELVE?!
WHAT??????!
judging on your writing, i thought you were, like, 20-something at least. i feel so inferior…

you are officially at the top of my Amazing List.
(deep bow)
congratulations.

by the way, this is rrrreeeaaallllyyy good.

On Becoming Human:

posted about 1 month ago

(holds mouth) ow…

On Off to Deutschland:

posted about 1 month ago

concentration camp-type-place related to germany? hmmm…
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On Warm-Blooded:

posted about 1 month ago

this is a sweeeeet series! :)
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On The New Enemy:

posted about 1 month ago

vaaaammpppiiiiirrress. XD yessss.
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On Just a Dream:

posted about 1 month ago

ohhh, perhaps not just a dream?
i agree with kermitgorf, great line there. :)
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On My Name Is Jake And I Don't Know What Is Happening.:

posted about 1 month ago

ohh, scary.
good descriptions.
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On Fallen Angel (Pt. 9):

posted about 1 month ago

hey, orangeoreos hasn’t sequeled yet. so boo on him.

On DO NOT READ:

posted about 1 month ago

roflcopter. that is my only response to this.

On my response to NEW QUIZ!!!!:

posted about 1 month ago

lol, yeahhh!!!!!!!

grant: “I’m pumping as fast as I can!“

On Orangeo's answers to a most entirely random quiz.:

posted about 1 month ago

haha. you mean that goblet that’s in your basement?! it didn’t look broken to me…

On Hallucinations:

posted about 1 month ago

sigmas!
foci!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha. i love algebra class. :)
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On Time:

posted about 1 month ago

interesting…
this is a really good line: time was ticking away.
so was his life… (gasp) so dramatic!!!
what are the three challenges?!
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On Onward to Snickleforgabomshilifondo!:

posted about 1 month ago

CONVINCE THE PRINCE rhymes.
...
i like rhymes. :)
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On Dear Jordan...:

posted about 1 month ago

ooo, what happened?!
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On How It All Started...:

posted about 1 month ago

aww, i love how he says “funner.” silly sixth grader grammar. :)
this is cute. i love it!
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On Pyramids! As in Egypt, Not Geometry:

posted about 1 month ago

yay, danger!
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On Alone (six-word-memoirs challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

wow, i like this.
kind of how i feel with friends sometimes, especially when they’re all hyped up off Monsters and i’m the only “sane” one.
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On The First Time [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

oreos. yum.

On A Beautiful Day in the Neighborhood [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

hah, yeah, this reminded me of a bud light commercial or something.

On The Educated Soft Drink [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

i. love. dr. pepper.
(and this ficlet.)
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On Demands (Make Me Laugh Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

hahahahaha. charlie brown…

On It Wasn't Funny [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

okay, i absolutely loved this story, #1 because it was hilarious, and #2 because i am a caulrophobic (no joke, i absolutely hate clowns.) so i sympathize with derrick… but still laugh at him all the same. :)
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On Serious Misgivings [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

haha, “for chocolate!”
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On Stand-up comedy: In line at the pharmacy [Make me laugh challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

haha, i hate the pharmacy. it’s a complete stranger in front of you, and you learn all about their terrible medical conditions and so on. (shudders)
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On my response to NEW QUIZ!!!!:

posted about 1 month ago

yeah, it is. mythbusters: my obsession. O.o

On NEW QUIZ! My AWESOME Answers:

posted about 1 month ago

lol. no, never over an innocent girl’s head…
nice.
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On Shakespeare Academy: Lost:

posted about 1 month ago

romeo!!! (swoons) ... teehee. O.o
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On Shakespeare Academy: Wake Up Call:

posted about 1 month ago

haha, pathetic little fork.

On Play Dough Powers:

posted about 1 month ago

yesss, play dough.
dude, i wish i had that awesomeubersupermegadeluxe power!
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On Pretty Women:

posted about 1 month ago

LOL SLURPEE!!!!
loved it.
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On circus of interplanetary refugees:

posted about 1 month ago

ok, you lost me.

On Why there isn't anything left in this world but packing peanuts:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahahaha, i love this part:
That was the end of everything, because in another six hundred eighty-six characters the story would have to end, and there was nothing she could do, no way to prolong Armageddon, except to hope for the lifesaving sequel, that afterlife of the short story character, to save her from such premature death.
it made me laugh. hard.

On talk less ... say more.:

posted about 1 month ago

trust me, ms kit kat. you don’t want to see the story. it was baaaaad.

On #220 and #221:

posted about 1 month ago

hee, i like, i like.
five star rating yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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On Its About Time to Face My Fears:

posted about 1 month ago

depressing in a kind of good way.

question: why “mature”?

On talk less ... say more.:

posted about 1 month ago

yes. i am aware that this ficlet has pretty much nothing to do with the photo it’s inspired by. but it started out as a (lame) story with that as the last line … but … well … since the story was lame, i just kept that line.

that is my explanation.

On What A Crab!:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahahaha, i really like this. sounds like some guys i know. :)
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On Creatures on Earth:

posted about 1 month ago

OOOH! will they be friends?
i’ve always wanted an alien friend.
... maybe i have one … hmmm …
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On Enrique Makes A Mistake:

posted about 1 month ago

hahah. enrique.
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On Alien:

posted about 1 month ago

hahahaha, i love the last line. :)
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On Möbius Strip: Perfect Plaything:

posted about 1 month ago

ooo. good. :)
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On Hope (Invisible Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

holy moses, this is really good. :)
it makes me really want to know: who is coming for you??

great! thanks for entering. :D
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On Fallen Angel (Pt. 4):

posted about 1 month ago

haha. good. :D

On Victim Or Invitation?:

posted about 1 month ago

hahaha, good.
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On 300 Comment Challenge:

posted about 1 month ago

i actually like commenting, although sometimes they just sound stupid. ... good challenge.

On The Attempt (Invisible Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

YES.
RHYMING!!
haha, thanks for entering. :)
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On Bugs! (Invisible Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

yay, ladybugs! :)
thanks for entering the challenge.
keep writing!!!
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On Fallen Angel (Pt. 2):

posted about 1 month ago

sorry. there was a misunderstanding.

On Fallen Angel (Pt. 2):

posted about 1 month ago

:) nice sequel.
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by the way, everybody, orangeoreos and i are officially starting this series together.

On Extremely Optimistic. (64k challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, thanks for all of the comments, guys!

On YYYEEESSS! 185 ficlets! Okay, so maybe be it's kind of a weird number, but it still calls for a ((Start/End)) challenge!:

posted about 1 month ago

haha, i just created a challenge really really really really really similar to this today!

On Mornamentor the Inventor [little prince challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

i’m sorry that this doesn’t make sense. i’ll try and fix it.

On the definition of awkward. [twilight challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

hehe, thanks. ^-

On Farewell to Purple Faces and Leprechauns:

posted about 1 month ago

AHHH WHO IS IT?
lol. i looooove this part:
The Croatian smiles at Sir D.
“Bob sounds good to me,” Sir D replies. The Croatian man smiles wider.

hahahaha. great story.
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On Dee the Healer:

posted about 1 month ago

thanks to Greta... who ate all the pudding.
good times!!! :)
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On A Tough Life (Invisible Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

uh-oh! what’s going to happen now?!

i love how the bandit feels bad for the horse. i always do too, whenever i have to kick them in the side to make them speed up. :(

great job, thanks for entering!
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On Out of the Ashes:

posted about 1 month ago

ooo, good starter. :)
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On I've Never Done This:

posted about 1 month ago

i am oh so very confused. i thought his name was michael

On Rhode Island Games:

posted about 1 month ago

just one question:
why is this marked mature…?

On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted about 1 month ago

good challenge. SO entering!!
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LAINE P. GREY !!!! YOUR … ICON … IS … ABSOLUTELY … AMAZING.

(anyone who doesn’t know what i’m talking about, head to makingfiends.com. LOVE IT.)

On The Beautiful Horizon of Your Mind:

posted about 1 month ago

i like this poem, and i LOVE the last line.
you’re good. :)
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On One-Woman, One-Dog Mission to Space [The Little Prince Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

good answer, but … i’m sort of confused … wasn’t the challenge to write about a silly-ish adult?

good story, though.

On The Little Prince Challenge!!!:

posted about 1 month ago

GREAT BOOK!!!
entering….. now.

On Le Maître des Jeux (Part Un):

posted about 1 month ago

i like this, and french is an awesome language.. :)
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On Colorful Awakening:

posted 2 months ago

(gasps) whoo es ze mahn?!!
sorry.. i felt like being french today.
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On Electric Triangles In Conversation (One More Word Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

haha.. i wish i played the electric triangle.
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On Meal At The Zoo:

posted 2 months ago

aw, poor lion.
he goes hungee. :(
greeaaatt ficlet. :)
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On Good Morning, Sunshine! (Mirror Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

i totally pictured this guy in my head. great imagery. :)
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On Crazy Apes (Set Sentence Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

lol, i love this line:
Even inside the toaster.
great job. :D
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On Something Mysterious in the Cosmos:

posted 2 months ago

whoaaa, what WAS that?!
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On Enrique Dreams of Earth:

posted 2 months ago

yay aliens!!
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On Amongst the Stars:

posted 2 months ago

ooooooo…
good sequel.
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On Salvation Of The Misguided And Quite Random Teenager Who Was To Be Presently Tortured With Mathematics (Or, The Return Of The Double Parentheses):

posted 2 months ago

hahahahaha, great stuff.
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On The Mischievous Marquee (Living Descriptions Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

hahaha. that’s really funny. good job.
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On uselessness's LIVING DESCRIPTIONS Challenge!:

posted 3 months ago

congrats on the 200.
i’ll start on this now. :)

On The Girl With the Pom-Pom Stick:

posted 3 months ago

ROFL.
nice sequel. :)
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On Kiwi Kourage:

posted 3 months ago

niiiiiiiiiice.
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On The Pocket Dictionary Child (Xenoglossy Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

lol she will pwn.
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On From Death To Life:

posted 3 months ago

lol, i love the mini (exponent 5)
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On Life's Definition (64K challenge):

posted 3 months ago

hah, i like this.
i suppose it’s true, too. everyone needs someone to live for. :)
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On Courage [64k Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Nice thought: independence.
Great job.
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On [Challenge] Baby Names:

posted 3 months ago

congratulations on your baby girl!!!!!
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On Life of a Lemon:

posted 3 months ago

lollll.
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On A Purple Knight:

posted 3 months ago

bahahahaha… manly men. nice. :)
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On Shadows In the Distance:

posted 3 months ago

:) nice one, orangeo.
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On Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

yes, i am too a treehugger. :D

On 64k Challenge: Famous Last Words:

posted 3 months ago

hahahaha. :)
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On 64k (250th Ficlet Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

holyshcrap, this is HAARRRD.
good challenge. :)
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On Sweeney Todd: Children's Barber of Sweet Street (Genre Blender Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

hahaha. good stuff. :)
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On Flying with Two Leprechauns in a Hovercraft:

posted 3 months ago

omgomgomgomgomg. CARL AND MARINA!!!!
those were some good times… :)
Croatian man: XD BAHAHAHA.
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On You Shall Not Take My Brain! (Alternate Movie Ending Challenge: A Hitchhiker's Guide To the Galaxy):

posted 3 months ago

hehehehe i love that movie.
nice job.
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On As if There Isn't Enough Twists and Drama Already...:

posted 3 months ago

ohgeez. wow.
good luck, DY.
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On Fatal Fruits, Random Hovercrafts, and Bucket Kicking :

posted 3 months ago

lolllllllll.
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On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia: New Jersey Edition:

posted 3 months ago

YESSS YOU HAVE RETURNED!

On The Easter Parade Horror:

posted 3 months ago

lol. KILLER RABBIT! RUN AWAY, RUN AWAY!!!!
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On The Little Red Car:

posted 3 months ago

oooohoohoohoohoo, twisted.
nice. :)
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On This Dress:

posted 3 months ago

i have to say: I LOVE YOUR PENNAME. THAT IS MY FAVORITE SONG EVER!

On Erm, can't think of a title right now...:

posted 3 months ago

LOL POMPOM STICK good stuff. :)

On To Die Of Total Boredom And Mass Confusion or Not To Die Of Total Boredom And Mass Confusion (Or, How Professor Buttercup's Torture Was Planned In My Mind):

posted 3 months ago

lol. niiiice stuff. keep writing!!
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On Clipping Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

great idea! i’ll get right on this. :)

On My Child [Clipping Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

awwww…
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On Who Doesn't Love Chocolate Chip Cookies?:

posted 3 months ago

lol. man, that sounds good…
and the cookies from Meijer are pretty good. :)
nice story.
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On The Downward Spiral of No Abandon:

posted 3 months ago

oh. ... um. yes, i guess it is marked as a prequel. hmm, it wasn’t yesterday. (scratches head)
confused.
oh well.
good prequel!!!!
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On How To Trespass Safely On A Witch's Lawn (Awesomeness Contest):

posted 3 months ago

omg, lol. he was questionable. and with all the “like”s, that’s great, man. just great. :)
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On The Discussion:

posted 3 months ago

jealous prince of wannabe skillfullness. that is pretty dang hilarious, i gotta say.
great jobbb. :)
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On The Awesome Adventure of The Orange Princess of Ninja Stealthiness and Slapfu!:

posted 3 months ago

the slapfu princess.
daughter of…
her mom.
yesss!! <3
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On Intro to Idiotic Tales by Kale:

posted 3 months ago

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
heeheehehee… this’ll be fun. :)

On Written, Spoken, Rumor, or Myth Christen Caps it All:

posted 3 months ago

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah (gasps) hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (and not one out of order!!!)

On A poem:

posted 3 months ago

omg, lol. :) your cousin’s writing is amaaaaaaaaaaazing. XD
ROFL
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On Not Again!:

posted 3 months ago

oh geez. more twists??
i’m getting tired of all this nonsense. ;)

On The Downward Spiral of No Abandon:

posted 3 months ago

Oh. ...is this a prequel to my Oracle?
if it is, please mark it as so. :)
nice job.
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On The Oracle.:

posted 3 months ago

somebody, please prequel/sequel!!!

On goodbye:

posted 3 months ago

erm, fighting on ficlets? disgraceful. :(
good emotion, though…
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On An Awesome Fairy Tale:

posted 3 months ago

interestingly awesome. :)
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On The "What If" Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

congratulations..

On Cracked:

posted 3 months ago

very, very, very, very, very, very, very creepy.
in a good way.
this might be my favorite horror series…
keep writing!
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On Lailah&Deszi [Character Generator Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

thanks for commenting, THX. :)
made my day.
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On Don't Eat the Fruit:

posted 3 months ago

of course, sir gavin would want to eat it.
silly sir gavin. :)
i want fabuLOUS, that is my simple request… that is definitely going to be in my head all day. thanks a lot. : P
the croatian man is officially my favorite character.
keep writing!
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On Soon it will all be over, dear.:

posted 3 months ago

yeah, it’s kind of supposed to be confusing.

On A Croatian Man Who's Too Close for Comfort.:

posted 3 months ago

OMGOMGOMG
(laughs hysterically)
perfect.
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On Dream, or Nightmare?:

posted 3 months ago

ahaha, this character is definitely one of my friends.
greattttt ficlets. :)
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On A Match Made in Hallway N304:

posted 3 months ago

congrats on getting featured!!! :)
great dialogue, yes i know i sound like an echo…
keep writing!
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On New Girl:

posted 3 months ago

reminds me of one of my friends. :)
lovable character already.
awesome job.
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On Bloody Coffee:

posted 3 months ago

whoa, why was he in jail the first time!? sequel!
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On Wallace:

posted 3 months ago

awesome. :)
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On Awesome Emily Vance:

posted 3 months ago

hmm. interesting…
sequel?
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On Emily's Awesome Responsibility [Character Generator Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

i love how the ghosts don’t use complete sentences. :)
great job.
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On You Awe Some, You Scare Some [Character Generator Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

“you’re cute, in a funeral sort of way.” that made me smile. :) therefore, 5 STARS!!
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On Lailah: Things are Always Changing (Character Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

i love how we both did the same character & storyline, but in two completely different ways. :) (btw, i like yours better.)
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On Childhood Memories:

posted 3 months ago

galoshes are rain boots, distant.. :)
they seem like really good friends, orangeo. (btw, that’s your new nickname.)
well-written.
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On Oh, Wonderful World, I Cry For Thee:

posted 3 months ago

very philosophical.
i like the way you wrote it through God’s point of view.
challenging… i think i might have to sequel this one sometime… :)
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On How To Remember:

posted 3 months ago

ok, response to first part: aww, she died…
ending: ...honeybun!!!? hahah.
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On Unloved Orphans (Character Generator Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

hmm. that’d be an interesting movie…
to hollywood!
(theme music plays)
:) great ficlet.
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On The Day It Rained Skittles:

posted 3 months ago

...
skittles=love.
thanks, now i need to go eat some candy.
:)
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On I am leaving............:

posted 3 months ago

what were you going to say!?!
good ficlet. :)
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On I............:

posted 3 months ago

very very good. :)
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On Rampage! (1980's Arcade Games Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

...
um. i’m not familiar with arcade games except pinball and pacman.
so i didn’t really get it.
interesting, though. :)
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On Surviving Nighttime, Alone:

posted 3 months ago

:I depressing…
the emotion portrayal was perfect, though.
fantastic.
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On How Vice Principals, Suckups, and Burninated Cities Came To Be In My Life (Or, Where My Anger Led Me):

posted 3 months ago

burninating the countryside…
(sings)
TROGDOOOORRRRRR!!! ^-
awesome. keep writing!!!
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On Awesomely-Wicked-Green-Princess-Destroyer-Donuts:

posted 3 months ago

...Yeah, those are bagels.
Great ficlet anyhow!
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On Awesome: a ficlet witchburning tale:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, i’m going to have a nightmare about that…
and you used the word “caressing”!!
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On A World Of Amazing Lies and Liars:

posted 3 months ago

whoaa, creepy. :)
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On Awesome: a ficlet creeper:

posted 3 months ago

ooooh, creeeepy.

On An Awesome Exlposion of Pubescent Anger (Or, How I Managed To Embarass Myself In the Hallway In Between Sixth and Seventh Hour):

posted 3 months ago

(gasps)!

On A Handful of Statements In Parantheses and a Sprinkling of Strange Expressions:

posted 3 months ago

(gasp) did he fall down the stairs?

On The Most Awesome People in the World:

posted 3 months ago

W00T GO FRIENDS.

On Death By Candlelight:

posted 3 months ago

........

On You Ate My Pizza!:

posted 3 months ago

ahh, new person!!

On Not Quite as Scary as a Flesh-Eating-Baboon:

posted 3 months ago

hahah, moth.

On The Long of the Short?:

posted 3 months ago

urgh, now i have to think.

On And it Was All Just a Dream! ... Or Not:

posted 3 months ago

yesss, melanie’s back.
i was wondering if she was going to be a useless character…

On Angels Don't Like Pizza:

posted 3 months ago

with speed faster than cabbage.
LMAO. “fast cabbage!”

On Meaning of Life(hidden message challenge):

posted 4 months ago

i like the message.

On Why God Should Have Never Created Phsychiatrists or Cheap Candy:

posted 4 months ago

oh shoot.
i forgot to tell you the title made me smile like dr. sing-sing!

On Why God Should Have Never Created Phsychiatrists or Cheap Candy:

posted 4 months ago

how do you do this?
this…this…amazingness!
how is it humanly possible?!

On When Life Sucks and Gives You Lemons, Throw Them at the Ones You Love (Or Momentarily Hate, As the Case May Be):

posted 4 months ago

lmao, i looooove your ficlets. :)

On Shakespeare Academy:

posted 4 months ago

wow, sounds kinda like school. :)
WHO SITS THERE?!
sequelllllllll.

On Life Without Music Isn't:

posted 4 months ago

(cries) it’s so… so true!!! (blows nose loudly)
very nice.

On Off to Snickleforgabomshilifondo!:

posted 4 months ago

lol, love it!!! :)

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 4 months ago

LOL HITCHHIKERS!!!
(hugs towel)

On Shakespeare Academy:

posted 4 months ago

haha… i love how your next class is poise, and then you stumble into the room. :)

YAY, NEW CHARACTER!

On Robots:

posted 4 months ago

woww, this is good. :)

On Trapped like a zebra. (Is that even an expression?):

posted 4 months ago

thanks, blossom. :)
and i just wanted to say to everybody reading this…
yes, i know that the narrator is no longer aibfinnia. i decided that since she is unconscious at this point and hereby a prop, i should offer a different perspective of the story. so until she wakes up, you’ll get the other passengers’ points of view. :)