Yes, this is crap as a stand alone piece, but really its part of about five that are in progress. So for the love of pickles please leave comments if your going to rate it.
I agree with THX 0477. As awful as it might feel to be “weird” now, those will be the things that will enhance your character later in life. So, try to enjoy for now, withe the knowledge that some time in the future it will get better. Take it from the girl who once thought there was a better “someday”, but is finally learning to enjoy the present. Keep your head up!!
Work this, the concept is great and it can go a lot of places! I may try my hand to add a chapter or two, but I’d like to see where your going with it first! Jesi
Ms. Kit Kat, I know you have a limited amount of characters to work with, but I want to know where this is going. I’m not sure, but there are a lot of places it could go, so be sure to develop your characters with some sorta vibrancy, and your plot with follow. I did enjoy this story, because I can relate, I have been that girl. Best of luck , Jesi
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