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On Invisible [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Great story, I have not heard the song that inspired it but I will go look it up. I love the fight she has with herself over the razor blade, very real.
On Siren Song:

posted 3 months ago

Oh noes, you have armed the criminals. Great read, and adds a lot of excitement to the mix. But, I personally believe that the chipmunks are good any time of the year.
On No Place Like Home (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I loved the classic remnant from the “dream” that still exists even after the fact. One day he will regret wanting to leave the Zen masters hideaway so quickly.
On Bagman: Would You Please Die, Sir?:

posted 3 months ago

Above and beyond on the action scenes, the last paragraph is awesomely hectic.
On Everybody's Envy (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Great twist, really incredible use of wording too. The last line is a killer, “From the roof, baby!” , almost made me snicker despite the graveness of the suicide.
On {The Dead Tell Tales Challenge} Dead Men Tell Tales:

posted 3 months ago

I managed to write something for this, had to fight my writer’s block through the whole thing though. Don’t think mines really macabre, but I did my best. Great challenge by the way!
On Bagman: DataBomb:

posted 3 months ago

That’s the most exciting decking scene I have ever seen. Really crazy and high tension and the Cerberus3 line was awesome.
On Careless:

posted 3 months ago

Excellent moment, again. I think your daily writings are the ones I look forward to the most, there are so many possibilities in them.
On That Bastitch Dr. Seuss [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Incredibly written, and really original. The twist didn’t really knock me off my feet though, since it seems like you sort of gave it away with the title.
On Cleanup {Scavenger Hunt Challenge}:

posted 3 months ago

I’m guessing your favorite show is Black Books? You hid the year born very well, I’m not 100% sure on it but I’m thinking it’s hidden in the number guessing part.
On Bagman: Fire and a Fight:

posted 3 months ago

Getting intense, I love the switching points of view covering the action. It gives it such a greater feeling of action, and a wider view of the situation is neat too. Keep em coming, I love this series.
On Foreign Hands:

posted 3 months ago

Bravo. The heartbreak and sadness was tangible, I could really feel it. Powerful stuff, Cidneylou. Write more, k?
On Bagman: Full of Surprises:

posted 3 months ago

Awesome intro to a fight scene. Great line thrown at the secretary.
On Release The Hounds (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I think I’ve picked out a few of them. Awesome job hiding ‘Jennifer Government’ in as favorite book. Killeen or Bruce Lee are my guess for pet names, and Kristen equals friend?
On Musically Conflicting [The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!]:

posted 3 months ago

@Ana Cristina: Weeds is my favorite show, good catch.
@BernerOberland: Got the pet name right, and the year I was born as well.
@Mistress Elsha Hawk: Got the favorite subject.
@John Perkins: J-Pod is fantastic, the show based on it was pretty good as well. You got my favorite number, friends name, and sort of the city… it’s a different Bangor though.
@Cidneylou: Got the nickname, though not really fair since you were there when it was given to me.
On The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!:

posted 3 months ago

Congratulations on 600, that is an epic achievement for certain!
On Spin. Click. Pass.:

posted 3 months ago

Thanks guys, I was really uncertain about this one so it’s awesome that you liked it. 8D
@John Perkins: The line in question used to be _”...balanced on top of it was that…” but I had cut it down to fit the character limit. It was tough to make this one stay under for certain.
On Nobody Gets Hurt (Twisted History Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

Great story, amazing ending. You took it somewhere hilarious and that’s always awesome. High five!
On One Sick Puppy:

posted 3 months ago

So… Karl has a sleeping disorder, is a veteran, owns an anemic rabbit, and performs magic tricks? When I am as old as him I certainly hope my resume of oddities includes things that incredible. His line at the end was extremely creepy though.
On Zombie Emancipation:

posted 3 months ago

Ouch, I was a gas station attendant for a few weeks way back when. I must not of lasted long because I only meet one of those three described perimeters. Great story and another great sound effect with the ‘squelch’ at the start.
On Anne's Resolve [Twisted History Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, excellent choice of a historical event to switch around. Loved the terseness of the dialog, how she snaps at him near the end.
On Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}:

posted 3 months ago

@Trifalmadorian_gameshowhost: Ha Ha, yeah well, when a cowboy dishonored his boss he didn’t have to commit suicide.
@PyroPunk: Awesome alternate take on a historical event. Although the 10 years later seems like an awful long time to wait.
On Zombie Hegemony:

posted 3 months ago

Ha ha, another great one-liner at the end there. Also I think “chunking” as a sound effect word is pretty nifty.
On Nobody Expects It (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I was expecting some sort of butter related randomness, but the Spanish Inquisition… that came out of nowhere. Now I have to go find and watch that skit again, havn’t seen it in so long.
On Define Exists (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I love your zen master, and this story so far. I’m hoping that Todd does get some answers, cause the reader is just as much in the dark as he is.
On Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}:

posted 3 months ago

The ending blindsided me completely, made me laugh and I didn’t see it coming at all. Great fight scene descriptions all over.
On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!!!:

posted 3 months ago

Editing never gets on my nerves, I am honestly really grateful for it.
On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!:

posted 3 months ago

You’re both priceless, I adore the feedback and grammar catches.
On "Can I tell you a story?":

posted 3 months ago

@Ana: I wasn’t happy with the block of text either, but I had reached the character limit. I have managed to move some things around and it is split up now.
On The Future's Bright:

posted 3 months ago

Really wild things going on, I like it. The way it’s written really gets the intensity of the situation across, I can’t wait for more.
On "Can I tell you a story?":

posted 3 months ago

Just seeing what its like to write a character telling a story, dunno where this is gonna go yet
On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!:

posted 3 months ago

To be continued!
On Bold as Brass:

posted 3 months ago

I can absolutely relate to Prandi in this one. When I moved to Canada I went through a phase where I changed a lot about myself to try and fit in, and I went nuts over local history and such. My Grandparents would constantly tell me I was being ridiculous. Great entry!
On So Many Variables, So Few Guns:

posted 3 months ago

That last line was great, you have a talent at describing things that happen without actually having to outright mention them. It’s as though you write around an action, if that makes sense?
On Hear Ye, Hear Ye: Winners of the Out-of-Order Challenge (Part 1):

posted 3 months ago

Excellent choices, those stories were all incredible. I have some ideas for challenges, but judging is a pretty intimidating task so I’m probably going to leave those ideas for some sort of ficlet milestone.
On Live Fire Test:

posted 3 months ago

I think maybe the reason why it seemed off to me is that the only contact I’ve had with military personal has been Canadian and British, but the snipers attitude does seem less obnoxious if I keep what you guys said in mind while reading it over again.
On Live Fire Test:

posted 3 months ago

Great writing, as always, but for some reason when I read ‘Dead Bang’ I had pictured this Tom guy as being a stand out, calm headed, clear thinking and intelligent sniper scout. This turned him into a callous, impatient, and disrespectful grunt. Oh well. Favorite part was the second paragraph.
On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Well my curiosity got the better of me and I looked it up, for anyone that cares the song was used as a basis for a movie of the same name in 1988. Check it out… http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095930/
On No map, no exit:

posted 3 months ago

Wow, crazy. Right into the action and leaving a lot to imagination at the moment, I love that.
On You Got Served!:

posted 3 months ago

Karl is great, and Prandi keeps being so surprising. I think this series is most definitely in my “must keep reading” list.
On Rutaffo, the Super Ref [Great Supporting Character Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Excellent super hero scene, hilarious in it’s awesomeness. I wish I could tap in to whatever well of knowledge you pulled those rules and regulations from.
On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Was this song in a movie? I could swear it was, but for the life of me I cannot remember for sure…
On The Crane Wife 4 [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

I think it’s done now… I had only planned on writing one entry but twenty or so minutes would pass and something would call me back to writing another one. I really suggest listening to the song if you have not heard it before. It’s The Crane Wife by The Decemberists and it is in 3 parts, so… go listen and hopefully enjoy it.
On Find Me:

posted 3 months ago

I have fished many books out from under my bed over the years, and I wonder if any of them ever felt like this. Really good writing, I … think I’m going to go look under my bed for books right now.
On What's In A Name?:

posted 3 months ago

I honestly felt a little bad for him when I first read this. Getting your nose broken while experiencing a hangover in the early morning hours is not all that pleasant. He did have it coming though, certainly.
On The Crane Wife [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

The song a 3-parter with the same title as the ficlet, by a group of neat people known as The Decemberists. I have a bit of an obscure musical taste, I guess…
On A Dose Of Her Own Medicine:

posted 3 months ago

I love the constant thickening of the plot, its fantastic.
On Heart of Ice:

posted 3 months ago

Awesome stuff, really stunning scene and the clashing emotions are perfect. Chilling, really.
On The Beast:

posted 3 months ago

Couple of little errors, but they don’t really detract from the horror of the situation. Nice short little scary story, you’ve got a good imagination.
On Bug:

posted 3 months ago

I kinda like moths, don’t get me started on dragonflies though. And I dunno if you meant ‘walk away’ instead of ‘talk away’ in that 7th line.
On An Impossible Room (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

This is great, I like how a stranger in the darkness is calling him ‘dude’ and trying to calm him down. I know if someone started talking to me from the darkness in a never ending plane of bamboo my fears would NOT be relieved at all.
On The Stairwell to Nowhere (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

posted 3 months ago

I love the urban legend set-up, and how the proof is from a friend’s relatives friend. Can’t wait to read where this goes.
On Unconventional Zen Master Challenge:

posted 3 months ago

Haha, good challenge. I think I actually know some unconventional zen folk, though they may border on being a little “too” unconventional to write about… hmmm
On Sing-Song Challenge!:

posted 3 months ago

I thought for awhile about which song I would like to write a bit about, when the perfect one came on… so I just went with it. Great challenge.
On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Hilarious dialog, really got me laughing with the last few lines especially. I’m really becoming a fan of conversation only stories.
On White Patent Shoes [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

I think that the nature of the challenge makes it so that everyone reading knows a twist will eventually be coming, and so we’re looking for it. The biggest twist would be to make an entry with no twist at all. I liked this entry, got an inkling as to where it was going with the album as well.
On Hitman [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Fixed Thanksgiving, I will remember some day that dates and such get capitalized.
On Unexpected Twist Challenge [Results Posted]:

posted 3 months ago

Good challenge, I have also entered… not 100% happy with it but I’ve been pretty creatively dry lately so writing anything at all makes me happy.
On Daddy's Home Part IV:

posted 3 months ago

I can understand how you couldn’t contain this to just 2 ficlets. I found the ending to be abrupt, but I think it needed to be for the last line to really be as powerful as it is. Good stuff.
On Sweet Oblivion:

posted 3 months ago

I’m kind happy that this is the way their evening ended, much better than what I thought was coming.
On The Houdini Bar Danceoff:

posted 3 months ago

Haha, nice scene. The majority of my siblings are female, so I have seen some dance practices during my time… always found em to be pretty strange.
On Pyro punks and Sailor Emo's Juliet and Romeo:

posted 3 months ago

I got nothing right now, pretty much creatively dry the last couple days… maybe once the mental gears get going again.
On Great Supporting Character(s) Challenge (The Big 250):

posted 3 months ago

I’ll be sure to enter something as well, not even a trickle of an idea in my head though…. harumph.
Congratulations on 250
On Dennis Yunker and His Senior Moment:

posted 3 months ago

Excellent, so much tension here you could make a stew. I love the one line so much, “painting the whole porch with potential harm”, amazing wording.
On Instructions Not Included:

posted 3 months ago

Haha, I love his attempts at firing the nanobots. “Shabba Lama Ding Dong” especially made me laugh, good stuff.
On Death at The Diner (Out of Order):

posted 3 months ago

Wow… fantastic story and I think a really great entry into the challenge.
On The Aftermath (Out of Order):

posted 3 months ago

Neat start, really interested to see where it goes
On Explosion:

posted 3 months ago

I dunno, I suppose I’m cooling it off a little and letting ideas build… hmmmmmmmmmm
On An Unsettling Realization:

posted 3 months ago

Incredible line, gotta love it when an unsavory type gets shut down.
On Selling The Drama:

posted 3 months ago

Prandi has been my favourite character since you folks introduced her into the story. Really love the flow of all these stories, they are awesome.
On Bagman: Deadline Run:

posted 3 months ago

I really loved the last few entries, good windows into all the characters personalities. Can’t wait to read some more of your action scenes though!
On Living is a problem because everything dies:

posted 3 months ago

Inspired by…
“Living is a problem because everything dies” by Biffy Clyro.
The last 2 lines are lyrics from the song.
On The Teacher Arrives:

posted 4 months ago

To the students the teachers smile looks like a sneer, he’s assuming they are all ignorant and that he has the answers to all their questions… so his smile looks a bit derisive I guess
On The Teacher Arrives:

posted 4 months ago

Fixed it, thanks for pointing that out. Robots frighten me, for serious.
On In The Neighborhood:

posted 4 months ago

This does a great job emphasizing how large Agent Lefleur is. I like the way this story is coming together.
On Be nice to the Halfling:

posted 4 months ago

The intermingling of fantasy action with the role players dialog is neat. It’s been a good 6 years since I played a pen & paper session of anything, this made me want to get a group together…
On Bagman: Payday:

posted 4 months ago

“Fan-fucking-tastic.” was my favourite phrase for a long time. Seeing it here made me grin. I personally don’t understand the purpose of the push off and slide at the start, I just chalked it up to the character being a little jumpy and unstable.
On Bagman: One Shell Square:

posted 4 months ago

I know a lady, works as a desk secretary, who honestly practices her facial expressions. But anyway, neat story so far and I like the detail of the smudge on the 35th floor button to highlight the dirtiness of the character.
On Making It Count (Challenge by Numbers):

posted 4 months ago

Good story, as was said earlier if it wasn’t for the challenge I probably wouldn’t have noticed the count up.
On Nanobot offensive:

posted 4 months ago

As Alice would say… “curiouser and curiouser”, thumbs up for hitting me with the completely unexpected!
On Trying to sneak it in [Challenge by Numbers]:

posted 4 months ago

Also, and this is accidental, but if you include blank lines between paragraphs, the story is 18-lines long as well.
On Trying to sneak it in [Challenge by Numbers]:

posted 4 months ago

Yeah, the number I was going for was 18 but only mentioned it outright once with the bottles of water. In total, if you take out things like decimal places and zero’s, theres 8 mentions of 18.
On Chain of Authority:

posted 4 months ago

I love the details, like the words characters use and the way they refer to things. The way Jack calls the narrator an ‘it’ chilled me a little.
On Home From Shopping:

posted 4 months ago

Great scene, for some reason houses with brick walls and iron gates have always scared me. I think you missed an ‘h’ in the third sentence, when the guard is lowering his head.
On The Kind That Hate Was Bred In:

posted 4 months ago

Great story so far, I got the same feeling as THX did about the character knowing the way things work, but not being entirely sure how to act.
On Trying to sneak it in [Challenge by Numbers]:

posted 4 months ago

Picked one number and tried to work it in as naturally and as often as I could, without outright putting it too many times.
On Dead To Rights:

posted 4 months ago

‘Irish Car Bombs’ Now theres a deadly drink. In my experience they have never lead to fully unregrettable circumstances…
On Gronlandic Edit [Your Theme song, Your Story Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Dialog is from Gronlandic Edit by Of Montreal.
On The Mark (2):

posted 4 months ago

Good stuff, I love the line about Darwin. Can’t wait to read more.
On The Mark:

posted 4 months ago

That ending was terrificly surprising, killer story!
On The Really Evil Voice:

posted 4 months ago

They make a pretty disturbing couple of characters, I gotta admit. I am also wondering who is at the door.
On Over the Edge:

posted 4 months ago

I originally wrote this for uselessness’ Precise Maneuvers Challenge, don’t know why I changed my mind.
On Spy vs Villian [Precise Maneuvers Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

This was hard, descriptive fight scenes take up a lot of characters.
On Over the Edge:

posted 4 months ago

My titles suck.
On Backhand Fury: uselessness' PRECISE MANEUVERS Challenge:

posted 4 months ago

Perkins comment made me laugh, which I needed after reading this entry. Incredible scene THX, really powerful and hard hitting. Pun intended.
On Into the School:

posted 4 months ago

Added the semi-colon, but I’m afraid I don’t have room for the possessive. Good feedback though, and I’m glad ya liked it.
On your move (precise maneuvers challenge):

posted 4 months ago

Oooh, and the first thing that came to my mind when I read “ebony queen” was an African transvestite… but that’s probably because I watched a Jerry Springer rerun earlier today.
On your move (precise maneuvers challenge):

posted 4 months ago

Made me laugh! Good stuff, my first thought when I read ‘precise maneuvers’ was chess too.
On A Score To Settle:

posted 4 months ago

I like this series, I like it a lot. Lot’s of brewing drama and great dialog, and characters that can be related to as well… which is a hard thing to do especially with more than 1 author writing them ,so… high five!
On Never Trust A Big Butt And A Smile:

posted 4 months ago

I love the intermingling of humor with brutality, and the last sentence was great, good turn around.
On Ode to Backspace:

posted 4 months ago

Excellent! I rewrote this comment 4 times because I was not happy with it. But seriously, really good capturing of a common occurrence, at least for me.
On Misshapen Fairy of Unhappiness:

posted 4 months ago

Great stuff, Gordo being so light hearted amongst the horror of the scene is off putting and makes him scarier.

You have an extra ‘p’ in septic, by the way.
On INT. HOSPITAL - MIDNIGHT (Out-of-Order Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

Good job, this entry is my favourite of the 4. The victorious announcement part made me smile.
On Nosepickers Anonymous:

posted 4 months ago

Unique and funny! The fact that the guys family staged an intervention, to me, was the funniest part.
On Bagman: Through a Killer's Eyes:

posted 4 months ago

This series is intense, but that last paragraph of action in this entry is incredible. Freaking brilliant.
On Simple Case 2 [Out of Order Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

I love grammar lessons, fixed the misplaced contraction. Thanks for the tip!
On Simple Case [Out of Order Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Switched the $ sign around.
On Picking Teams:

posted 4 months ago

I read the whole thing, and I realize the seeds of mistrust were sown back during the melting soldier scene. Just trying to say that the written distrust of Jen makes me question her background just as much as the main character does. Great writing and I can’t wait to see where it all goes.
On Simple Case 2 [Out of Order Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Yeah, the line felt really off to me as well, I couldn’t think of what to add to make it better… in retrospect maybe ”...to one of the forensic unit working inside.”
On More Pressing Matters:

posted 4 months ago

The flow of your dialog is so good, and that last line is pure gold.
On Gentrax Secondary:

posted 4 months ago

Never heard of Jennifer Government. By itself this really isn’t much, you are right. I see it as being more of a foundation for something more, maybe I’ll sequel it.

I did have a little fight with myself over how to reveal the nature of the school, and making it a casual mention instead of a surprise twist won out, but just barely.

Thanks for the feedback.
On Picking Teams:

posted 4 months ago

Ah, gotta love a healthy amount of paranoia.
On The Out-of-Order Challenge!:

posted 4 months ago

I’m going to try my hand at this as well, though I’m not sure how well it’s going to turn out. Like Perkins said it’s going to be difficult to pull off with ficlets.
On PBBT's Soundtrack Challenge:

posted 4 months ago

Korn and Damien Rice on the same soundtrack! I think I love you.
On Networks Without Tongue:

posted 4 months ago

Really funny, I love the guys nonchalant responses to her trying to get a rise out of him.
On My Name Is Jake And I Don't Know What Is Happening.:

posted 4 months ago

For some reason during the first read I imagined the legs as literally being ‘on fire’. I did not sleep well last night I guess.
Well written, really gets the confusion the character it feeling across.
On Tiny Life:

posted 4 months ago

Very depressing atmosphere, gritty and real. If I hadn’t of been listening to happy music while reading it, I would probably have felt slightly frightened by the descriptions.
On Intruder:

posted 4 months ago

I had to look up what a ‘gilet’ was, which is awesome because that took me on a tangent of learning about clothing for almost an hour.
Great scene, superb descriptions.

“that particular shade of black that really is just a lack of colour.”

That’s my favourite shade of black.
On landings:

posted 4 months ago

Had me at the opening line. The whole thing really catches the imagination and makes for a cool scene in my minds eye.
On Payment Pending:

posted 4 months ago

Yup, the dialog is New Orleans “Yat” inspired, with a bit of coastal Irish thrown in.
On Lyrical Lovers:

posted 4 months ago

The dialog is taken from the lyrics of songs that played, on shuffle, from my music library. I’ll give you a high five if you can name any of the songs…
On Bagman: Live at the Scene:

posted 4 months ago

The way you wrote the camera parts really gets across the erratic feeling of the scene, I could picture the entire thing. Really, really, neat.
On Bagman: Live at the Scene:

posted 4 months ago

The way you wrote the camera parts really gets across the erratic feeling of the scene, I could picture the entire thing. Really, really, neat.
On In a Room, High in the Castle in the Air:

posted 4 months ago

I love the description of the scholars study, really took me there with it.
On Duel in a Clearing:

posted 4 months ago

Good call with the word choice, and thanks for the comment!
On Revealations:

posted 4 months ago

Thanks! I really liked your original and this twist just sort of came to my head unexpectedly, I’m glad you liked it.
On I've got a Crush on you...:

posted 4 months ago

“I have made it quite clear to myself that I’m intrested in finding out what makes you…tick…”

Struck me as being one of the creepier things anyone could ever say to anyone else. Laughed a bunch at some of the other lines he was sprouting though, especially…

“I’ve never had sex with a girl, a woman…or man, not that I want to have sex with a man, shit…”
On Song of the Swamp:

posted 4 months ago

The music I imagined while reading this was really quiet something… the way the phrasing is done seems to reflect the tune your musician is playing. Might just be me and my overactive imagination though, still… intense story.
On It's Always the Person You Least Expect:

posted 4 months ago

I like how nonchalantly the use of Godly powers is written into the story, makes it feel really casual and made me giggle.
On A Perfectly Normal Day:

posted 4 months ago

Really neat premise, the ending develops some good foreboding feelings. If you’re a plane guy, I gotta say the ‘Snow Birds’ have always impressed me more than the Navy’s ‘Blue Angels’ though.
On A New Member of the Gang:

posted 4 months ago

I love the authenticity of Hank’s accent, really neat detail.
On Möbius Strip: The Man Behind the Curtain:

posted 4 months ago

Really intriguing feeling to the whole thing, I dig it.
On Movements Beyond Human Control:

posted 4 months ago

I can recall being in the position of having to make the switch from sitting to hovering over a stall toilet, and I gotta admit you captured and described the scene really well. Very nice.
On Title That Demands Your Attention:

posted 4 months ago

Tepid exclamation of enjoyment followed by a quizzical statement, which leads into a respectful questioning of purpose. Ending with a phrase of parting, and an exclamation mark…!

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On Invisible [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On Siren Song:

On No Place Like Home (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

On Bagman: Would You Please Die, Sir?:

On Everybody's Envy (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

On {The Dead Tell Tales Challenge} Dead Men Tell Tales:

On Bagman: DataBomb:

On Careless:

On That Bastitch Dr. Seuss [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

On Cleanup {Scavenger Hunt Challenge}:

On Bagman: Fire and a Fight:

On Foreign Hands:

On Bagman: Full of Surprises:

On Release The Hounds (Scavenger Hunt Challenge):

On Musically Conflicting [The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!]:

On The Scavenger Hunt Challenge!:

On Spin. Click. Pass.:

On Nobody Gets Hurt (Twisted History Challenge):

On One Sick Puppy:

On Zombie Emancipation:

On Anne's Resolve [Twisted History Challenge]:

On Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}:

On Zombie Hegemony:

On Nobody Expects It (Unexpected Twist Challenge):

On Define Exists (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

On Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}:

On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!!!:

On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!:

On "Can I tell you a story?":

On The Future's Bright:

On "Can I tell you a story?":

On "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!:

On Bold as Brass:

On So Many Variables, So Few Guns:

On Hear Ye, Hear Ye: Winners of the Out-of-Order Challenge (Part 1):

On Live Fire Test:

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On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On No map, no exit:

On You Got Served!:

On Rutaffo, the Super Ref [Great Supporting Character Challenge]:

On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On The Crane Wife 4 [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On Find Me:

On What's In A Name?:

On The Crane Wife [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On A Dose Of Her Own Medicine:

On Heart of Ice:

On The Beast:

On Bug:

On An Impossible Room (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

On The Stairwell to Nowhere (Unconventional Zen Master Challenge):

On Unconventional Zen Master Challenge:

On Sing-Song Challenge!:

On Exotic Creature Inspiration [Sing-Song Challenge]:

On White Patent Shoes [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

On Hitman [Unexpected Twist Challenge]:

On Unexpected Twist Challenge [Results Posted]:

On Daddy's Home Part IV:

On Sweet Oblivion:

On The Houdini Bar Danceoff:

On Pyro punks and Sailor Emo's Juliet and Romeo:

On Great Supporting Character(s) Challenge (The Big 250):

On Dennis Yunker and His Senior Moment:

On Instructions Not Included:

On Death at The Diner (Out of Order):

On The Aftermath (Out of Order):

On Explosion:

On An Unsettling Realization:

On Selling The Drama:

On Bagman: Deadline Run:

On Living is a problem because everything dies:

On The Teacher Arrives:

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On In The Neighborhood:

On Be nice to the Halfling:

On Bagman: Payday:

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