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  1. On Remembering Problems (Ficlet #500):

    posted 2 months ago

    somtimes the hardest problems to fix are your own…
    .
    oh i hope he doesn’t spy or do something stupid to make Paige mad.

  2. On The Wonderball's Warning:

    posted 2 months ago

    i wounder what i was saying while it was in her back pack?

  3. On To Play or Be Played:

    posted 2 months ago

    creepy keep going! i had the feeling something like this was going to happen! from a couple parts ago

  4. On The Wonderball's Warning:

    posted 2 months ago

    penguincaptin that was exactly what i was thinking!!

  5. On Room 34:

    posted 2 months ago

    does she read it?

  6. On The Wonderball's Message:

    posted 2 months ago

    dont go, Dont Go, DONT GO!!!!

  7. On Ask the Wonderball:

    posted 2 months ago

    hey i didn’t even notice that pyropunk thanks for pointing that out. that really makes me wonder.

  8. On Ask the Wonderball:

    posted 2 months ago

    awsomely chilling.

  9. On twenty-three (numbers challenge):

    posted 2 months ago

    can i sense a continueation? Beacuse this is good.

  10. On The Tortoise and the Hare:

    posted 2 months ago

    this is hilarious i love it.

  11. On I am Cooper:

    posted 2 months ago

    hmmm. now i don’t know what to think now….

  12. On I am Slut:

    posted 2 months ago

    you go brit!!!

  13. On I am Slut:

    posted 2 months ago

    you go brit!!!

  14. On I am Nerd (and my Alter Ego):

    posted 2 months ago

    i love the reference to the other half of the series “That’s as insane as jocks dating emos!” hats a perfect way to keep the two peices of this story link are small things like that…

  15. On I am Ceirra:

    posted 2 months ago

    sorry double post

  16. On I am Ceirra:

    posted 2 months ago

    yeah it was nice of his to take that she may not like something into consideration and what foods you like can say some stuff about you…

  17. On I am Ceirra:

    posted 2 months ago

    yeah it was nice of his to take that she may not like something into consideration and what foods you like can say some stuff about you…

  18. On I am Anima:

    posted 2 months ago

    i am honestly happy for all of them.
    .
    they will need these friendships to get through any gossip that may be on the way

  19. On I am Jesse:

    posted 2 months ago

    he’s such a gentalmen. but he tries a little too hard to be i think

  20. On Remembering to be a Regular Friend:

    posted 2 months ago

    not only is she solving his problems but possibly her own as well

  21. On I am Ceirra (Epiphany):

    posted 2 months ago

    i like what penguincaptain18 says. “people never really like it when people start breaking down the social barriers…” i have one thing to add to this. the people who really dont like it are the ones at the top of the social ladder.

  22. On I am Jock:

    posted 2 months ago

    im glad i got involved with your “Just a litte series or i may have never started to read this fabulous one.

  23. On I am Jock:

    posted 2 months ago

    im glad i got involved with your “Just a litte series or i may have never started to read this fabulous one.

  24. On I am Jock:

    posted 2 months ago

    im glad i got involved with your “Just a litte series or i may have never started to read this fabulous one.

  25. On Remembering Happiness:

    posted 2 months ago

    well thats one way to get through to an emotionally blocked person. Cry. its almost as if she knew thats what would get to him

  26. On Remembering What I'd Wanted:

    posted 2 months ago

    hmm so this whole time he didn’t knowingly know what he wanted but subconciously he knew he wanted to be happy again and that part of him realized that Paige was the way to make that happen…

  27. On Remembering Interesting:

    posted 2 months ago

    either way its amazing how she can read his reactions and precisely what it was to.
    .
    but i wonder how this story would be if the one girl at the begining hadn’t told her about Cynthia.

  28. On I am Jock:

    posted 2 months ago

    uh oh dizzy is never good.

  29. On Remembering over Ginkgo:

    posted 2 months ago

    i think he needs to get the music taken away for a couple days. especially how he paniced when there wasn’t any when he woke up a couple ficlets earlier in the series

  30. On Change ~ a poem:

    posted 2 months ago

    it sums up so many feelings you have to read it several time to find what probably isn’t even half of them.

  31. On I am Brit:

    posted 2 months ago

    i like how she guessed all little ages first you know when parents let you have a sip as a joke….

  32. On Remembering Things I Don't Want To:

    posted 2 months ago

    not to pester but there is a type-o
    .
    “the thouht brought another wave of guilt”

  33. On Remembering to Try:

    posted 2 months ago

    I don’t know what to think about Paige. It’s nice that she wants to help but she is annoying but that may be what Drew needs is some one persistent like that

  34. On Remembering Drew's Mom:

    posted 2 months ago

    im sorry second to last

  35. On Remembering Drew's Mom:

    posted 2 months ago

    i love the second last line “Your mom will.”
    thats classic

  36. On Remembering Gossip:

    posted 2 months ago

    totally right. its a fine line between being the gossip maker and the gossip taker

  37. On Remembering Blood:

    posted 2 months ago

    this isn’t about the story but.
    .
    wow you write fast!! i walk away for five minutes and i come back there are four more!

  38. On I am Slut:

    posted 2 months ago

    yes thats true but i have a sense of foreboding for Vaughn if he gets too involved something might go wrong… either with him or him at school or something. i don’t know

  39. On I am Anima:

    posted 2 months ago

    the problem with being the “invisible one the that when ever your with a group you feel you have to hide the other parts of you say at the time im hangin with the emos i’d have to hide everything else or they wont lets me in and eventualy youre locked out of everywhere and really are alone.

  40. On I am Vaughn:

    posted 2 months ago

    exactly they force people worry too much over grades. that’s why when finals come up every one flips out and im just fine. if you get nervous you over think and second guess and we all know whats happens when you do that.

  41. On I am Slut (Brit):

    posted 2 months ago

    this is adorable
    .
    Dreamer this is the like third series you got me wrapped up in

  42. On I am Nerd (Vaughn):

    posted 2 months ago

    perfect way to portray a nerd they, um.. we always over analize things.

  43. On I am Invisable:

    posted 2 months ago

    this is so me except one detail…

  44. On Remembering Epiphany:

    posted 3 months ago

    thanks you ruined it for me part of that was the wondering…. jk or am I?

  45. On Remembering Reactions:

    posted 3 months ago

    i like how so far it a little bit of a deja vu. its like introduceing two new characters except one of them we’ve known all along.

  46. On Just A Little Screaming:

    posted 3 months ago

    was he hit by a car?

  47. On Just A Little In Love:

    posted 3 months ago

    definatly one of the best ive ever read!!!

  48. On Just A Little Humor Makes the World Go Round (Or in this case, makes a sad girl smile):

    posted 3 months ago

    i have tears welling up in my eyes either beacuse of how cute it is or from how hard im laughing

  49. On Just A Little Humor Makes the World Go Round (Or in this case, makes a sad girl smile):

    posted 3 months ago

    i have tears welling up in my eyes either beacuse of how cute it is or from how hard im laughing

  50. On Just A Little Happy:

    posted 3 months ago

    oh how sweet you can just sense the atmosphere

  51. On Just A Little Bad Behavior:

    posted 3 months ago

    i agree with Dr. but at least he stopped when she asked…

  52. On Just A Little Old Lady/ Just A Little Music:

    posted 3 months ago

    i love this series i love that last line it sums up so much. :-)

  53. On Just A Little Unusual:

    posted 3 months ago

    oh its like a umm i don’t know all i know is that this series is incredibly good. i feel like i’m reading a book.
    .
    now if only i was sitting in a comfy chair….

  54. On Just A Little Goofing-off:

    posted 3 months ago

    hmm i wounder if that will happen next year when im in chem.???
    .
    lol

  55. On The Painting(Paint a Picture Challenge):

    posted 3 months ago

    i like how you used the word “coagulating” right after the word red. beacuse that word always makes me think of blood but thats just me…

  56. On Earth Gazing:

    posted 3 months ago

    what are htey dooing that would affect earth? hmmm thinking

  57. On Tower:

    posted 3 months ago

    I write this to commemorate an evil project from school

  58. On Do sleep-deprived engineers dream of electroplated tofu?:

    posted 3 months ago

    i don’t get it reaching for dictionary
    .
    lol good story

  59. On Time:

    posted 3 months ago

    the suspence
    .
    what are the three challenges?

  60. On Sunrise:

    posted 3 months ago

    its so peaceful but maybe too peaceful
    .
    great imagery

  61. On Stick the Landing:

    posted 3 months ago

    wow i like the last line.
    .
    it sort of give this sci fi ish story a real world connection

  62. On Angels are Actually a real Bother:

    posted 3 months ago

    i know its been long but i caught up i still like this series!

  63. On One Fool Too Many:

    posted 4 months ago

    never mind

  64. On The Trees Crawled with Death:

    posted 4 months ago

    beautiful simply beautiful
    it has a poetic feel to it.
    .
    i noticed that you wrote that. she let it full? up her lungs. just so you know

  65. On Condom Conundrum:

    posted 4 months ago

    very good much better than i thought

  66. On Wings Like Fire, Voices Like Thunder:

    posted 4 months ago

    one of the best ive read lately
    .
    it’s just WOW on so many different levels

  67. On Girls Just Wanna Have Fun:

    posted 4 months ago

    hmmm i wounder if she and charlie hook up eventually?

  68. On Tomato Meet Banana, Banana Meet Cucumber:

    posted 4 months ago

    i glad to see someone picked up on that.
    .
    i was trying to give her that kind of personality

  69. On oct:

    posted 4 months ago

    does this have to do with your user number being 666? and your new to ficlets.
    .
    kind of like saying… im user 8666 and im coming to ficlets.
    .
    Right?

  70. On Titles( Non-Fiction)- { More of a Rant than a Story}:

    posted 4 months ago

    yes exactly plus there are some yonger kids on the site if they accidentally stumble on a story that isn’t marked mature that should they might not be aloud back on

  71. On Sheen the Blueberry:

    posted 4 months ago

    good inspiration not much of a story

  72. On The Tomato. Vegetable or Fruit.:

    posted 4 months ago

    really i though it was very VERY cheesey

  73. On Smells Like Teen Spirit:

    posted 4 months ago

    no prequel!!! why are they fighting?

  74. On No Book:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh come on keep going

  75. On Now Don't Get me Wrong, I'm no Stranger to Falling:

    posted 4 months ago

    earthquake perhaps???

  76. On Status Quo:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh lol i love the last sentence

  77. On Cindy Lou Comes Cleaner:

    posted 4 months ago

    another strange turn

  78. On Cindy, Will You Come Out Tonight:

    posted 4 months ago

    can’t comment
    .
    MUST… KEEP…. READING

  79. On Cindy Lou Dresses for Success:

    posted 4 months ago

    speechless…... again…....

  80. On Cindy Lou Goes Down the Hole:

    posted 4 months ago

    this should come with a warning
    .
    Warning: WEIRD BUT ADDICTING
    lol

  81. On Yogurt Was Never Like This:

    posted 4 months ago

    i agree with blu

  82. On And Then I Had a Shower:

    posted 4 months ago

    huh….. now that was a strange turn

  83. On And Then You Had to Go:

    posted 4 months ago

    i thought you were being metaphoric about eating her

  84. On You Had Me as Appetizer:

    posted 4 months ago

    i’m speechless but i’m going to continue to read so it must be good right?
    .
    lol

  85. On You Had Me at Appetizer:

    posted 4 months ago

    awsome personallity for the waitress

  86. On The Don't Get Defensive Challenge:

    posted 4 months ago

    i entered

    good challenge the second i read it i had ideas rushing through my head

  87. On The Dumbest Plan I Ever Made (Don't Get Defensive Challenge):

    posted 4 months ago

    oooooooh so sweet can you prequel and tell me more about their relation ship?

  88. On They can't win if they can't score. (defensive challenge):

    posted 4 months ago

    i don’t know if it’s clear that i wrote this as a soccer game. just so you know

  89. On You're Not That Girl I Met In A Snowstorm:

    posted 4 months ago

    beautiful
    .
    totaly worth five stars

  90. On An Extraterrestrial View of Earth {Storykeeper's Birthday Challenge}:

    posted 4 months ago

    wow you should sequal this
    .
    what does the little one do to help

  91. On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices #7: Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation:

    posted 4 months ago

    i tend to miss commas

  92. On R_M's Ficlets Best Practices #1: Paragraph Spacing:

    posted 4 months ago

    for me my single paragraph end up being my ficlet. i have long paragraphs so i limit each one to about one paragraph. i like to add detail to give a crisp clear picture of what im writing and like several others have said

    some times there just isn’t room.

    and about taking words out a lot off of those unneccicary words are what add intensity and character to the story

    im on here to have fun. its nice to write with out thinking your graded on such things

  93. On A Brief Bout of Multiple Personality Disorder Forces Stovohobo Into Writing This Rather Boring and Drab Ficlet for an Exceedingly More Creative Challenge:

    posted 4 months ago

    i feel the same way except it seems im not on the computer at all its been two weeks since i was last on

  94. On [Conversation with yourself challenge] An Unfortunate Incident:

    posted 4 months ago

    this is actually a challenge write worth sequalling in to a story

  95. On The War Continues:

    posted 4 months ago

    cool i got first comment

    this series is still good but whats a familia? i don’t recall them

  96. On It's All Yours:

    posted 5 months ago

    awwwwwwwwww

  97. On Off White Frosting and Pale Pink Writing:

    posted 5 months ago

    yay a birthday party

  98. On My Turn:

    posted 5 months ago

    why was he down there?

  99. On Dog Daze:

    posted 5 months ago

    awwwww how cute

  100. On Dinner with My Parents and His:

    posted 5 months ago

    continue? wheres the continue button? i must continue

  101. On "I'm so sorry Aea..":

    posted 5 months ago

    what the what?!

  102. On Surprise.:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is soooooooooooo good

    this should soooooooooooo be more than a ficlet but im glad it is one

  103. On Dropping the Bomb.:

    posted 5 months ago

    no fair ohno

  104. On Safehouse:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is reminding me of my favorite book

  105. On Go, Aea.:

    posted 5 months ago

    very awsome

  106. On Prince Blake:

    posted 5 months ago

    oOOOOOOOOOOo

  107. On Mid-Morning Flight:

    posted 5 months ago

    saw what must continue reading NOW!!

  108. On Did I Pass?:

    posted 5 months ago

    omg you must continue this

  109. On a high heeled shoe :

    posted 5 months ago

    yeah i know i just didn’t want to make a second ficlets for two sentences i do that right now

  110. On Make a Wish:

    posted 5 months ago

    this would make an awsome play

  111. On Piano Recital:

    posted 5 months ago

    excelent bravo nice imagery

  112. On Dar The Chronicles:

    posted 5 months ago

    then what does the cat or the count win?

  113. On 100 Ficlets Challenge. My Fourth attempt at a Challenge, Summerize Your Ficlets Journey.:

    posted 5 months ago

    im in this sound fun and fun with a ny meaning funny as well

  114. On Ficlets is Writing and so Much More (Ficlets Acceptance Speech):

    posted 5 months ago

    yeah you can watch as different or your writings morph over time. kind of like a time tunnel to your past about how you were like

  115. On Insanity Encouraged (Acceptance Speech):

    posted 5 months ago

    i love the beging nothing like the excitedness of when the first person comments on a story

  116. On Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland:

    posted 5 months ago

    the best part is these don’t melt in spring

    lol

  117. On Acceptance Speech Cont'd:

    posted 5 months ago

    fictles is an outlet it enables us to un leash the other part of our selves. im normally happy and up beat but when i go to write im a different person all that has happened that was hidden comes out afterwards im not pretending nothing bad happend but im truly happy about what i wrote and what others did to

  118. On About Ficlets (Acceptance Speech Cont'd):

    posted 5 months ago

    posted twice sorry

  119. On About Ficlets (Acceptance Speech Cont'd):

    posted 5 months ago

    yeah when you build off one another you end up with a book containing every ones writing style and point of veiw

  120. On About Ficlets (Acceptance Speech Cont'd):

    posted 5 months ago

    yeah when you build off one another you end up with a book containing every ones writing style and point of veiw

  121. On Our Acceptance Speech:

    posted 5 months ago

    ficlets is great beacuse you don’t need to write on a subject like in school. you can writer freely knowing its not graded and it is being read for pure pleasure and people aren’t looking for mistakes in it

  122. On The Best Intentions [part II]:

    posted 5 months ago

    wow i didn’t see that coming. the worst is that, that happens all the time in real life

  123. On Ficletholicism:

    posted 5 months ago

    i think more people need to know about ficlets. for how popular the site is, many ,many people have never heard of it.

  124. On Six Word Memoirs CHALLENGE:

    posted 5 months ago

    woah baby there is 107 of them

  125. On Murder by Engagement:

    posted 8 months ago

    i dont get it either

  126. On One Fool Too Many:

    posted 9 months ago

    be sure to read part one first

  127. On OHMYGAUD ITS OTOC'S FIRST CHALLENGE!:

    posted 9 months ago

    hey this looks fun can you find me a partner please. i’m willing to work with any one i’m not picky ;-)

  128. On The Trees Have Ears:

    posted 9 months ago

    little bit of both its kind of for the reader to decide

  129. On The Trees Have Ears:

    posted 9 months ago

    what happens next someone tell me!!

  130. On A Post-it Ending:

    posted 9 months ago

    Any one notice that the collors are in the order of the rainbow?

  131. On A Post-it Ending:

    posted 9 months ago

    Challenge entry
    any constructive criticism is welcome

  132. On Post-it Note Life:

    posted 9 months ago

    that is one hundered percent my mom

  133. On The Dreaming Tree:

    posted 9 months ago

    wow its wow i love it i captures the emotions so well just wow

  134. On It's Never the Scary Ones:

    posted 9 months ago

    its nice to hear you like it

  135. On Inside the Death Star:

    posted 9 months ago

    wow thanks

  136. On Inside the Death Star:

    posted 9 months ago

    woo-hoo story number two-hoo!!!

  137. On It's Never the Scary Ones:

    posted 9 months ago

    tnx everyone

  138. On It's Never the Scary Ones:

    posted 9 months ago

    This is my first story. I hope you like it.

  139. On It's Always The Cute Ones:

    posted 9 months ago

    I loved it it perfetly symbolizes the school atmosphere and how a day can go from bad to worse

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