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  1. On yurrgonnaneedsomestichesbabe.:

    posted 14 days ago

    ooo. is she gonna tell him why she was really crying? cause no matter how much of a “screwboy” he is, he’s the only one that’s seemed to care about her since this story started. so is she gonna trust him?

    i like this. quite a lot.

  2. On runforyourgodaxnlife:

    posted 14 days ago

    i love this. it’s not some cheesy “damsel in distress” crap. it’s stuff that really happens everyday and people can actually relate to this and not feel like it’s just another “love & heartbreak” story.

    in other words, i love the way you write

  3. On Thehappycoupleandthebystander.:

    posted 15 days ago

    aw poor girl! i really like this tho, don’t stop. keep this up.

  4. On You said you wanted honesty.:

    posted 15 days ago

    oooo!! burrrn!! you tell em girl! ooo i love it when sassy confident-boosted girls who randomly go and tell the guy who made their life he-double hockey sticks!!!

  5. On ButIloveyou.:

    posted 15 days ago

    aw I am so sorry. I know what it’s like being the third wheel. even the 5th. but to love on of the people you’re tagging along with? that’s hard. and it hurts more than people can really imagine. you did a good job writing that out, as always.

  6. On To Write Love on Her Arms:

    posted 15 days ago

    hey, it’s a good description of the pain people feel. But God can fix it. No need to curse him for not being quick enough in wordly time. God has his own plan for you remember? Just be patient. He’s here. He’s always here.

  7. On andwhenyousaidthosewords.:

    posted 18 days ago

    oh my gosh. i havent been on here in a while, and now i see what i’ve been missing out on. you tend to start in the middle of a story, but at the most captivating part, and i lOVE it. please tell me you’ll sequel this one!

    amazing job, seriously.

  8. On Here's the difference:

    posted 22 days ago

    All I know to tell you is that God answers prayers in different ways. Maybe He gave me hope in the form of a person so I could build up trust in people again.

  9. On Twilight Story Challenge: When One Hurts, the Other Hurts:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oooo yess sequal

    “an otherwordly feel” describes it perfectly =)

  10. On Sight for sore eyes;;[[Twilight Story Challenge.]]:

    posted about 1 month ago

    looovely darling. =)

    sorry i havent read ur new series lately. i’ve JUST started getting back on ficlets and apparently i have a LOT of catching up to do haha. read it when i can though!

  11. On New Home:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aw thanks =) haha fixed it

  12. On Taking Off:

    posted about 1 month ago

    baha what the heck to that last comment? XD

  13. On Boarding:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i think the last night they had together was too precious for her to be mad at him. and i love this millie person =)

  14. On Scrapbook:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aw, i love scrapbooks.

  15. On Goodbye Sugarview:

    posted about 1 month ago

    even with that, i think that’d be a pretty amazing day too KwriteM =)

  16. On Food Fight!:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ...sorry but that was really confusing.

  17. On Lunch Fun:

    posted about 1 month ago

    well SOMEBODY’S got a mean streak X) haha

  18. On On Fire:

    posted about 1 month ago

    haha nope nope they dont

  19. On Rebel:

    posted about 1 month ago

    hahah that is soo something i would do too

  20. On Dancing In the Rain:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aw i love this =)

  21. On Not That Bad:

    posted about 1 month ago

    mmmmmmmmmhm go girl. dats right blake. you just keep yo hands AND LIPS to yo self

    haha good story girl

  22. On Bad In a Good Way:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ooo my my my! haha “QUI BON BON. QUI BON BON. THIS BOY’S GIVIN ME TROUBLE.”

    haha and for all? i KNOW it’s bon qui qui. qui bon bon is a joke between me and this writer.

    only thing is the 3rd line down? it should be “her skin” not “my skin”

  23. On Too Lovely:

    posted about 1 month ago

    alskdjalksfdjs

    “his breath kissed her neck ever so lightly. her heart raced, the beating matched the music.”

    ooo and “she looked up at blake, and his eyes were waiting for hers.”

    AMAZING GIRL!

  24. On Meeting New People:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ooo alex and blake.

    or annoying and hott

    or T* AND *D

  25. On An Invite:

    posted about 1 month ago

    CANDI?!

    haha well at least there aint no br where the C is girly

  26. On Friends:

    posted about 1 month ago

    gee, THIS STORY SOUNDS FAMILIAR.

    =) love you

  27. On Cherry Muffins for tomorrow:

    posted about 1 month ago

    haha what is it with you and muffins?? hahha i guess it’s better than listening to you crunch the hound outta them pretzels!!

  28. On New Client:

    posted about 1 month ago

    gees people! just because Godzilla hasn’t terrorized the whole planet in two ficlets you guys freak out! let him tell the story!

  29. On Old Mr. Bound-to-Fail:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I agree with Mistress E.H.

    The ending makes it seem like something bad is about to happen. But I like this sequel a lot. =)

  30. On call:

    posted about 1 month ago

    i like this story too. it’s different than stuff people usually write about on here. like, i havent read people talking about their childhoods and stuff, and then tying it in to the present. it’s cool though and i like it =)

  31. On relief:

    posted about 1 month ago

    aw i like this guy. :)

  32. On paranoia:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ? who’s Kellin?!?

  33. On paranoia:

    posted about 1 month ago

    ? who’s Kellin?!?

  34. On Save it.:

    posted about 1 month ago

    oooo…wow. good!

  35. On Numb:

    posted about 1 month ago

    Lance is in Jack and Anna and Taylor’s hotel ransacking all their stuff..=)

  36. On Numb:

    posted about 1 month ago

    thanks =)

  37. On Numb:

    posted about 1 month ago

    thanks =) and yea i get it X)

  38. On Torn by conscience...:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww poor baby =/

  39. On fly away.:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww poor baby =’/

  40. On the hall.:

    posted 2 months ago

    awww poor dear =(

  41. On Always There:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha ur funny

  42. On pizza:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha same here

  43. On every song.:

    posted 2 months ago

    these words are so true.

  44. On Ignore:

    posted 2 months ago

    ooooooo!!! now he FREAKING KNOWS!!!! haha that’s happened to me before and when i finally told him it felt SOO just like satisfying to be like “NOW DO YOU GET IT?!” in my head

  45. On thoughts:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww this is sad but so realistic cause this happens all the time. haha i sound like a dork

  46. On maybe?:

    posted 2 months ago

    whoah this is different! haha i’m so glad ur writing again girly =)

  47. On maybe?:

    posted 2 months ago

    whoah this is different! haha i’m so glad ur writing again girly =)

  48. On The car.:

    posted 2 months ago

    i like this a freaking lot. =)

  49. On parking lot.:

    posted 2 months ago

    girrrl!! you need to sequel this one! =) haha i dont care if you’re on vacation or something FIND a computer and type it up!!

  50. On Lost:

    posted 2 months ago

    Could not have said it better myself.

  51. On disapearing Sebastien:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooooo i like that X)

  52. On disapearing Sebastien:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooooo i like that X)

  53. On I am girl with high hopes.:

    posted 2 months ago

    hahah aww i like this a lot a lot.

    ..and yes i said a lot 2 times on purpose..geez people. X)

  54. On im driving.:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha aw this is cute =) you’ve been starting some good series lately!

  55. On Sucess:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha aww!!

  56. On Wound patch.:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww!! i like this a lot =) keep this going or imma..or i will not give you a cookie!!!

    (haha i know imma dork. no need to say it)

  57. On Wound patch.:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww!! i like this a lot =) keep this going or imma..or i will not give you a cookie!!!

    (haha i know imma dork. no need to say it)

  58. On im an idiot.:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww i like this! haha keep this guy human and this should be interesting XD

  59. On im an idiot.:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww i like this! haha keep this guy human and this should be interesting XD

  60. On i am girl who wasnt joking.:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha this sounds so muchlike twilight..but different details X)

  61. On i am girl who wasnt joking.:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha this sounds so muchlike twilight..but different details X)

  62. On I am girl with good dreams.:

    posted 2 months ago

    awww that was so cute! i love the whole dream idea and then she falls into his arms X)

  63. On A tour of the Orphanage:

    posted 2 months ago

    the last part is cute….i still don’t like this guy >=/

    ..want me to let a bird loose in his face? XDDDDDD hahhahahahha he won’t be able to sleep cause he’ll be afraid he’ll wake up blind.

    ...for everyone else? i’m no crazy, that was just an inside joke.

  64. On I am girl whos blood ran cold.:

    posted 2 months ago

    i like it!!!!!!!!!!

  65. On Fading Into Love:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha noo “funny business” is him being seductive haha

  66. On Fading Into Love:

    posted 2 months ago

    just for everyone else to know? Bartimaeus is a huge stinkerpoot and likes to tease my stories hahaha so ignore his comment thank you very much. XD

  67. On Some Playful Banter and a Deal.:

    posted 2 months ago

    “more like ate his face” hahahah XD i like it

  68. On I am girl who doesnt understand.:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooo continue!!!! and please don’t let me go crazy again!! this would be a good time to write several more sequels all at the same time haha!

  69. On ill never leave:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww i love this!! i really do!

  70. On ill never leave:

    posted 2 months ago

    aww i love this!! i really do!

  71. On I am girl who doesnt understand.:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooo continue!!!! and please don’t let me go crazy again!! this would be a good time to write several more sequels all at the same time haha!

  72. On I am girl who doesnt understand.:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooo continue!!!! and please don’t let me go crazy again!! this would be a good time to write several more sequels all at the same time haha!

  73. On I am girl who doesnt understand.:

    posted 2 months ago

    oooo continue!!!! and please don’t let me go crazy again!! this would be a good time to write several more sequels all at the same time haha!

  74. On A Beautiful Lie:

    posted 2 months ago

    amazing as always =) and if this is what i think this is about, then i dont need to ask “wonder what she did” like everyone else…hehe i feel special =)
    <3 see you tomorrow!!

  75. On pretend.:

    posted 2 months ago

    i really like this =) it is indeed very poetic but it’s not cheesy like a lot of ones are. Good job girly =)

  76. On Meeting 'Mystery Man':

    posted 2 months ago

    ...there’s something about him. I don’t like it. Hahah I could see myself as another kid in the orphanage just goin up to the man and he’d be like “well hey there!” and I’d slap him and walk away. X)

  77. On I am girl who tells the truth.:

    posted 2 months ago

    ok it should be ILLEGAL to let someone go crazy this long waiting for you to SEQUEL!!!!

    ...X)

  78. On My sister, Laia:

    posted 2 months ago

    bahahahhaha i mean SEQUEl now. gah am I that tired?

  79. On My sister, Laia:

    posted 2 months ago

    ooo comment! NOW! X)....please?

  80. On I am girl who tells the truth.:

    posted 2 months ago

    omg!! INSANE!!!! ....and amazing =)

  81. On headlights:

    posted 2 months ago

    SEQUEL!!! holy crap this is insane but good!

  82. On I am girl who wants an answer.:

    posted 2 months ago

    SEQUEL. NOW. OH MY GOSH!! =DDDD

  83. On Forced to Explain:

    posted 2 months ago

    hahah thanks girl =)

  84. On I am girl with a bad sence of humor.:

    posted 2 months ago

    haha! omg i LOVE this! XD

  85. On A restless night:

    posted 2 months ago

    ooo I like it. it’s a good thing I’m not sleepy. X)

  86. On The truth can hurt...:

    posted 2 months ago

    this is so true on so many levels. i have had like pretty much the exact conversation with my mom. ooo drives me crazy too. but i know you’re writing this on a deeper level..

  87. On I am girl who breaks rules:

    posted 2 months ago

    i know i really like it! I like they way you show her thoughts and i LOVE ur “i am girl…” sentences! it’s so different but perfect for this series! =) hahah i get so excited with your stuff

  88. On Clocks:

    posted 2 months ago

    whoah!!

  89. On Clocks:

    posted 2 months ago

    whoah!!

  90. On Clocks:

    posted 2 months ago

    whoah!!

  91. On I am girl who is terribly confused:

    posted 2 months ago

    i’m gonna be ur mom for min.
    “SEQUEL NOW YOUNG LADY OR I SHALL NEVER GIVE YOU A COOKIE AGAIN.”

    i just hope you love cookies. hahah

  92. On I am girl...:

    posted 2 months ago

    this is so different but I love it. With all the sentences that start with “I am Girl…” DUDE i can totally relate to like all of them. and you already got a boy in there. love it X)

  93. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 42:

    posted 2 months ago

    awww this is so good honey!! the only thing is you spelled stuck like stuxk. haha and what bartimaeus said about the part 42 thing. but you never fail to amaze me. love it girl!

  94. On Hate.:

    posted 2 months ago

    ooo this is good. you should sequel =)

  95. On She's No You:

    posted 2 months ago

    woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my computer messed up realllly bad. sorry about that.

  96. On She's No You:

    posted 2 months ago

    oh come on girl sequel please!! haha i just started this series today so i’ve been spoiled by being able to just click the next sequel on & on!! i really like this series =) a LOT a lot! =))))

  97. On She's No You:

    posted 2 months ago

    oh come on girl sequel please!! haha i just started this series today so i’ve been spoiled by being able to just click the next sequel on & on!! i really like this series =) a LOT a lot! =))))

  98. On She's No You:

    posted 2 months ago

    oh come on girl sequel please!! haha i just started this series today so i’ve been spoiled by being able to just click the next sequel on & on!! i really like this series =) a LOT a lot! =))))

  99. On She's No You:

    posted 2 months ago

    oh come on girl sequel please!! haha i just started this series today so i’ve been spoiled by being able to just click the next sequel on & on!! i really like this series =) a LOT a lot! =))))

  100. On Ay Bay Bay:

    posted 2 months ago

    i have to agree with everyone that the song lyrics are really cool =) and I love the way you write the dialogue and what he thinks at the same time.

  101. On The killer of killers:

    posted 3 months ago

    haha wow! that was funny but really good! i will have to say like everyone else that I didn’t get it at first, but I get it now. I havent read alll the prequels yet but I will. haha (thanks for the date-rape comment….?) XD

  102. On "I'll be here...":

    posted 3 months ago

    bahhahah alright

  103. On Sorry: The Biggest Understatement:

    posted 3 months ago

    well it’s true that you don’t know me or my situation. otherwise you would know how wrong your comment is. You have to know how much of a brother this kid is to me and you have to know how much i take these things to heart. if you knew me at all, (which you don’t) you would know that no matter WHAT the results were I’d be sorry that he had to feel pain and hurt. because i’m not shallow, and you shouldn’t critisize all other apologies as such.

  104. On What If...:

    posted 3 months ago

    I know you’re mad at me for some things..but never the less I’m here for you to rant to. I knew you were still pissed about her..I just didn’t realize it was still this much.

  105. On What If...:

    posted 3 months ago

    I know you’re mad at me for some things..but never the less I’m here for you to rant to. I knew you were still pissed about her..I just didn’t realize it was still this much.

  106. On Entwined Arms:

    posted 3 months ago

    ummm good storyline…molly and i wanna know what the crook of your nose is. not trying to be funny either.

  107. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 38:

    posted 3 months ago

    oh this is so sad! it’s horrible but so realistic! keep writing girly!

  108. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 37:

    posted 3 months ago

    aww!! nooo!!! that’s horrible!

  109. On My Violet Hill:

    posted 3 months ago

    I will never leave you. And I believe that you would never hurt me for anything, and you have to know I wouldn’t hurt you for anything as well. I almost cried in happiness when I read this, I love you my brother!

  110. On Acidic.:

    posted 3 months ago

    amazing. not even lying. i LOVE this. like the way just his name kills you? i know it tooooo well haha. oh and feeling apathetic? the way you described it was GREAT! i love this i really do =) the ONLY thing, is doctor is spelled likt that. not like docter. but that’s just a grammatical error. your CONTENT is off the charts brilliant

  111. On My Dream:

    posted 3 months ago

    I love this. As depressing and like Ana Cristina said devastating as this may be, I can just..feel it. Like you said about my ficlet, I can connect. This story is so truthful, and that’s what’s so hurtful.

  112. On evereverafter:

    posted 3 months ago

    i have to agree with everyone else here! the end?? “leaving the murder site, because he just killed me.” GAH!! GREAT!!! it is SUCH a good comparison!

  113. On Well?:

    posted 3 months ago

    yea Ms Kit Kat has got a point. keep this up and just put pen to paper. er..fingers to keyboard?? haha whatever you get it.

  114. On I need a ride.:

    posted 3 months ago

    ooo both of them like each other and neither know!! haha good plot girly!

  115. On Viva La Vida:

    posted 3 months ago

    you told me you’d written a story with the song! i love this! you’re expressions are shown so vividly and I just gosh darn love it lil boy!

  116. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 33:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahahha i love YOUR sequels XD keep it goin girly

  117. On If she's everything you've ever wanted, Part 32:

    posted 3 months ago

    this is so great!!

  118. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 31 :

    posted 3 months ago

    love it. love it .LOVE. FREAKING. IT.

  119. On Cry:

    posted 3 months ago

    i absolutely without a doubt no fooling LOVE this ficlet. everything about it, and the message in it? incredible.

  120. On Dying boy...:

    posted 3 months ago

    wow..i like the idea of where you’re going with this. it’s really interesting haha and i mean that in a good way. not like people who say “it’s umm..interesting..?” when really they hate it and are just trying to be nice. no. i really like it =)

  121. On Bury me:

    posted 3 months ago

    =/ i wrote something like this. you said it it wasn’t my voice, it was the devil’s. the is the same case. and i was happy to read the part where you said “i knew it wasn’t true.” for many reasons. please just..call me or something everytime you feel the need to..do this.

  122. On Hidden Promise:

    posted 3 months ago

    awwww!!!! all you guys just made my day!!! love all you! =)

  123. On Results of Crash (Part 3):

    posted 3 months ago

    WHAT HAPPENED?!? GOSH DARN IT RYAN!! WRITE A SEQUEL!! hahaha dont make me come over there and beat you like a pinata!!

  124. On Results of Crash (Part 2):

    posted 3 months ago

    ahhahahaha XDD i love thomas in this story. hhahaha and i can def. see you throwing bread XDDD

  125. On Farewell, My Love:

    posted 3 months ago

    awwwwwwwwwwww dats so saddd

  126. On If she's everything you've ever wanted, part 21:

    posted 3 months ago

    SEQUELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  127. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 19:

    posted 3 months ago

    i LOVE THIS SERIES. HOLLLLLLLLY CRAP. =D

  128. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 17:

    posted 3 months ago

    OH MY GOSHH!!! XDD i love this!!

  129. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 15:

    posted 3 months ago

    hsdfkjlahs must i say again how i love ur detailing?

  130. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 10:

    posted 3 months ago

    GOOD LORD CHILD. I LOVE YOUR FREAKING WRITINGS! i love how ur simple descriptions can mean SO MUCH. gahh. love it.

  131. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 6:

    posted 3 months ago

    the first two paragraphs were insanely amazing in detail and i loved it. but the rest of it?

    eh…even better XDD

  132. On If shes everything you've ever wanted: Part 5:

    posted 3 months ago

    i love how ur descriptions are deep but simple and down to earth. “He left out charming, gorgeous seemingly reliable, jerk.”

    love that.

  133. On If she's everything you've ever wanted, Part 11:

    posted 3 months ago

    GAH!! I NEED TO READ THE NEXT ONE!!!

    ...oh hey there it is =) imma clickerz it

  134. On Ride:

    posted 4 months ago

    ooo!! write more kiddo!!

  135. On After the Fight (Part 3):

    posted 4 months ago

    bahahhahha i can so see thomas saying that XDD love it ryan

  136. On The Fight:

    posted 4 months ago

    JOSH?!?

  137. On Washed away by an Ocean of Emotion:

    posted 4 months ago

    this series is really good story wise, and i mean REALLY good. but you know how this is gonna make me worry about you.

  138. On Lead Suicide...:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh my gosh..this is so heartbreaking, but what’s sad is it’s so real..

  139. On Why can't he stop?:

    posted 4 months ago

    do you know how much you’re little suspense theory KILLS ME?

    haha

  140. On Threatening:

    posted 4 months ago

    baha bartimaeus’s comment made me laugh XD

    but i like this =) it gives the story something new to work with and keeps up in suspense (just like you wanted it)

  141. On Nightmare:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh my gosh..

  142. On Call:

    posted 4 months ago

    “like she does (sarcasim)”

    bahhahahaha portrayed perfectly =)

  143. On The Fellowship Ch.8:

    posted 4 months ago

    oo!! they were already on the island!

  144. On Praying for a Hero:

    posted 4 months ago

    alright yea. aaron and i need to have a BEAT DOWN with this kid

  145. On Conversation Heart:

    posted 4 months ago

    awww! this is so sweet! a lot of writings have plots and heartbrakes and everything. but sometimes it’s just nice to have a sweet little romance scene like you wrote here. and thanks SO much for that comment u left by the way. it made me smile so big =)

  146. On The Fellowship ch.5:

    posted 4 months ago

    this is really good! i love all the descriptions in here that make it play like a movie in my head because i can see it so clearly! keep it up!

  147. On The Kiss:

    posted 4 months ago

    oooo Blake!!! let me at him and we’ll have a BEAT DOWN! C’MON I CAN TAKE HIM!! hahha

  148. On The Secret Place:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh my gosshhh!!!! I LOVE IT!! especially the last line!!

  149. On Eyes of Gold:

    posted 4 months ago

    love it. you were always good at writing. this just proves it even more so. =) defending your love from someone unseemingly harmful. so romantic and strong with passion. like i said, i love it.

  150. On Running:

    posted 5 months ago

    hahah i’m sorry but the part where it says “Yeah I’m leaving” hahah that cracked me up XD

  151. On Alone:

    posted 5 months ago

    that’s so upsetting!..i love it!

  152. On Lost Battle:

    posted 5 months ago

    omg!! john!!

  153. On A Conversation to Love:

    posted 5 months ago

    ooooooooo girrrlll!!! haha just one thing. on the 4th line? isn’t it supposed to say ”...the little stunt BLAKE tried to pull..huh?” instead of aaron?

  154. On The Unexpected Kiss:

    posted 5 months ago

    OOOOH MY GOSHH!! you’re making aaron sound like Edward Cullen!! I LOVE IT!!!

    (and now blake REALLY reminds me of kyle.)

  155. On The Beginning of a Long Night:

    posted 5 months ago

    bahahhaha blake reminds me of kyle and marshall and matthew XD

    but hey. WHY IN THE WORLD DID YOU PICK NICK FOR A NAME? hhahaha jk

  156. On Just a Guy:

    posted 5 months ago

    oooooo! what happens?

  157. On Going back?:

    posted 5 months ago

    WHAT’S INSIDE??

    hahhah WRITE CHILD. X)

  158. On Failed:

    posted 5 months ago

    nothing short of a hero. nothing but the truth.

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