Ficlets

Laine P. Grey's posted comments

On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted 1 day ago

Invisibility—
I changed it now to a more Twilight worthy one.
On A Formal Affair:

posted 3 days ago

Haha, I rather liked this. Not bad. Not bad.
On Killing Two Birds with One Perscripton.:

posted 3 days ago

Definitely took a darker turn….well, you know what I mean. Let me ponder about this for a while before I sequel.
On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted 5 days ago

Cool, maybe I’ll enter again!
On Pipe Dreams and Bad Plumbing:

posted 10 days ago

Snicker I liked that! He was so human.
On Frozen in Time:

posted 10 days ago

Hmm, the beginning reminded me of Christopher McCandless.
On Walkin':

posted 10 days ago

I would definitely like to read on.
On The Spinster:

posted 10 days ago

Nice descriptions.
On Freakish Love (Twilight Challenge):

posted 10 days ago

Whoa! That was a different twist!
On Discomfort:

posted 10 days ago

I’m most certainly gonna keep track of this. Very interesting.
On Lilith's Song {Twilight Challenge}:

posted 10 days ago

Nice. It definitely resembles the Edward/Bella relationship.
On Pretty Things:

posted 11 days ago

Wow, I loved the contrast. I am very interested in finding out where this goes.
On Cole's Novelty:

posted 11 days ago

Mmm, this was brilliant. I could practically smell the almond danish.
On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted 11 days ago

August 2nd (or some date near that) Breaking Dawn comes out!
On A Stranger In NYC:

posted 11 days ago

Hmm, nice descriptions, although, you need to watch your spelling.
On Castle in the Distance:

posted 11 days ago

Mmm, I loved the imagery, and it practically begs for a sequel.
On White Pain (Twilight Challenge):

posted 11 days ago

I know it technically didn’t have to be Twilight based, but it’s a piece of what I felt that Emily was feeling after Sam ripped up her back…. Or, it could be non-Twilight people. Either way.
On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

posted 11 days ago

OMG!!!!!!!! Everyone knows I have to enter this…as soon as I come up with an idea.
BTW, did you see who was playing Jacob? I’m rather upset about it.
On And the Rain Fell:

posted 16 days ago

Hmm, very nostalgic. I really enjoyed this.
P.S. watch for spelling.
On One Vmapire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.9:

posted 20 days ago

Tsk tsk tsk… Probably wouldn’t believe her if she told them.
On One Vmapire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.6 :

posted 20 days ago

The plot thickens.
On Held Up at Customs:

posted 20 days ago

Lovely… Yes, I did just use that word in reference to your finger stealing story.
On "This Is Just To Say..." [The Apology Challenge]:

posted 22 days ago

Brilliant! I love NPR… and PRI, and APR….
On Mrs. Robinson's Turn:

posted 22 days ago

Snickers
My, my, my! Mrs. Robinson! Very funny.
On "Why Mrs. Robinson I Do Believe You're Trying To Seduce Me":

posted 22 days ago

Oh my goodness! This was, by far, my favorite ficlet that you have written.
On Serious as a Heart Attack:

posted 22 days ago

My goodness. That was – - suprisingly enough, I liked it.
On Some Stories:

posted 22 days ago

I was just talking about stories like this!
I hope you don’t mind my sequel.
On Hiding Secrets:

posted 22 days ago

I liked how you had him excuse his behavior.
On The Toast That Wasn't:

posted 25 days ago

Sorry, thoroughly.
On The Toast That Wasn't:

posted 25 days ago

I really really enjoyed that. Throughly brilliant.
On Floating Facedown:

posted 25 days ago

Hmm, not sure how I can follow that…
On You Have to Be Nice Sometimes (Nice Things Challenge):

posted 26 days ago

Haha, thank you! Although now I’ll have to live up to those words of praise.
On Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge):

posted 27 days ago

Not sure….there was some speculation on that subject.
On A Day in the Life Of Celestic23:

posted 27 days ago

Hooray, I’m number 13 on your list!
I liked how she was trying to finish before the sun came up.
On One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4:

posted 27 days ago

I’m drawn to vampire/werewolf stories, but this didn’t quite do it for me.
While it’s an interesting concept, I found the dialogue a bit hard to follow (“enter” everytime someone else starts speaking), and felt it could have had a bit more depth.
I do plan on following this series, because I want to know what happens.
On Colours:

posted 27 days ago

Wow, that was undeniably the best Ficlet I’ve read today.
I hope you don’t mind terribly if I sequel it.
On Love and Let Love:

posted 27 days ago

A lot to think about, but nicely tied in with the last line.
On Russian Girls:

posted 27 days ago

I thought that was positively brilliant! I could almost see his arrogant swagger.
On Confessions of a Highschool Socalite :

posted 27 days ago

I rather liked that, though you might want to watch for spelling errors.
On The Insurgenceez Haz Beginned:

posted about 1 month ago

Oh, my…
On The Flying Lie:

posted about 1 month ago

Haha, I liked the way the salesman is trying to “sell a dream”. How much does a dream cost?
On Poo poo, the sequel tot he smelly challange:

posted about 1 month ago

Now, that’s just really annoying. I hate it when people do stuff like this.
On 222 Challenge:

posted about 1 month ago

On your comment about no one entering your challenge and the subject of this one: this one is a bit trite, darling. Everyone and their grandmother has “challenged” us to write a different genre that what we’ve attempted before.
It would have been better if you’d asked us to write a Ficlet about the number 222, that would have been interesting.
On Family Now:

posted about 1 month ago

Please don’t tell me this is about the Jonas Brothers! eh.
On The Corridor And The Rose:

posted about 1 month ago

Very nice descriptions; I would like to read more.
On Postcards for the President:

posted about 1 month ago

I really like this, and it isn’t too bad of an idea.
BTW, noticed the “Calvinball” thing – - nice.
On Postcards for the President:

posted about 1 month ago

Brilliant!
On The Smelly Challenge! Its Challenge time!:

posted about 1 month ago

I’m you’re first entry.
On The Don't Get Defensive Challenge:

posted about 1 month ago

K, mine is posted.
On Vivian:

posted about 1 month ago

Okay, so I’ve got a proposition for ya, Stovo—how’s about we join forces for this series?
On You Had Me at Appetizer:

posted about 1 month ago

Very funny. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
On Vivian:

posted about 1 month ago

Nice addition….not to be a real pain, but that was the rewrite of my medieval series, and, like I said in my profile, I wanted to sequel it myself.
On If Only:

posted 2 months ago

Thanks, I’ll try to write some more.
On Clean Clothes (Celestic's Scent Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

I really liked that/
On 5 Awkward Things to Do or Say Right Before the Lights Go Out:

posted 4 months ago

Hey, you know about “free rice”, too?
On 200 posted comments= my first challenge!:

posted 4 months ago

Good idea, now I just need to find lyrics to fit with the story.
On A Little Inspiration Quiz..:

posted 4 months ago

This sounds super fun.
On The Greys:

posted 4 months ago

Nice. I liked the humor and assumptions.
On Faintly Bewildered:

posted 5 months ago

Hmm, I liked how the character can’t make heads or tails of anything.
On So Why Am I Not Scared?:

posted 5 months ago

I liked this, especially the rhetorical question at the end. By the way, I love Calvin and Hobbes.
On A night at home (vamp. challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Nice, it took me a while to figure out that you meant Bugles. A rather slow start.
On No time to wait, 137th ficlet, I NEED A CHALLENGE NOW!:

posted 5 months ago

Freaking awesome: Vampires! Yes, Stovohobo, I am eating this up.
On Lone Writer's 50th Ficlet: Crossover Challenge:

posted 5 months ago

I have finally entered.
On Winners: The Post-It Challenge:

posted 5 months ago

Thank you
On Big John (a poem):

posted 5 months ago

I liked that, for some reason.
On 58 Ficlets: The Post-It Challenge:

posted 6 months ago

Nice idea. Mine kinda branches off of the post-it thing. That isn’t the main subject, so….
On The Sims has just become Oh So Much More:

posted 6 months ago

Wow, I liked how the two worlds fit together.
On Some Lists Shouldn't Be Made [360 Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

Brilliant ending.
On More Odd Choices, Geekily Done [360 Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

Haha. But the explanation of the Ryans was a bit awkward.
On Our Geekophilic List Continues Unabated [360 Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

Nice. I’m guessing that your list is the superheroes. Nicely integrated.
On Geeking Out On Superheroes [360 Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

I rather liked this. I’m interested to find out where you go with this.
On my dum dum dum stupid triple stupid ugly dum list:

posted 6 months ago

While your… um… guts is admired by many, I wonder why you target me for your nonsense.
On Gods Work Shall Be Done:

posted 6 months ago

Wow, completely unexpected.
On Saviour:

posted 6 months ago

Brilliant work. It was wonderfully written.
On La Vie Avec Éclat:

posted 6 months ago

It caught my eye with the French, and I rather liked the ficlet.
On *Ist it better to write in 1st or 3rd person?*:

posted 6 months ago

Personally, I find that first person is my favorite. It makes the character seem more vulnerable and more human.
Although, third person allows the reader to view the minds of many characters.
On This Would be what Happens when you Piss Off your Secretary:

posted 6 months ago

Haha! Wow, I suspected something when she mentioned the funeral.
On Vreemdeling:

posted 6 months ago

Thanks for picking up on that.
On Second Choice:

posted 6 months ago

It’s actually supposed to be a kid’s battle with cancer, but I like the different interpretations.
On Read, Rate, Comment:

posted 6 months ago

Btw, you could also send me a note to tell me which of my other ficlets is the best.
On What's With All These New Challenges? (Otherwise Known as Stovohobo's 300th Ficlet):

posted 6 months ago

Schveet. I shall enter as soon as I find the time.
On {Gumshoe Challenge} What a Doll:

posted 6 months ago

Eh, I liked the first half, but I felt that you should have put part two in another ficlet.
On Murder You Don't Say {gumshoe challenge}:

posted 6 months ago

Hmm, a few spelling errors, but otherwise okay.
On Stella Starr and The Dead Man's Hand: Just a Girl {Gumshoe Challenge}:

posted 6 months ago

Yes! I loved it! Nice twist, there.
On Brain Surgery: A Diary:

posted 6 months ago

I liked the beginning, the end was a bit sketchy.
On Ladd & O'Hanley Detective Agency :Part 3 ;Apprehension: Case Closed:

posted 6 months ago

Hmm, not quite as good as the first two… perhaps it needed more snazzy lingo ;)
On Ladd & O'Hanley Detective Agency :Ladd Solves the Case: Part 2 [ Gumshoe Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

I am glad you sequeled it! Very good.
On Yay! Finally, someday_93's 100 Ficlet Challenge!:

posted 6 months ago

Question: Can it be a word in another language? I usually use words in another language for my character names, based on their personality.
~
Kermitgorf, why do have a website for everything?!?
On The Study of Names:

posted 6 months ago

Yes, I loved it!
On Reduced to Dick:

posted 6 months ago

I just read it over, and it’s not nearly as bad as you think. I rather enjoyed it.
On Reduced to Dick:

posted 6 months ago

Haha, I’m assuming that the word had a different meaning then.
On Secretly I Want to Bury in the Yard, the Grave Remains of a Friendship Scarred:

posted 6 months ago

I would like to read a sequel.
On {Gumshoe challenge}Ladd & O'Hanley Detective Agency: Ladd Gets a Call :Part 1:

posted 6 months ago

Haha, I rather liked it, but I felt that you were trying to incorporate all of the lingo in there. I am eager for a sequel, though.
On Doc Malone, Private Eye (Gumshoe Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

Brilliant! You captured the essence of the challenge.
On All Because of a Container of Low-Fat Yogurt:

posted 6 months ago

Nice story line, but it was a tad awkward. I felt it could have been written better.
On Song challenge- An interesting selection:

posted 6 months ago

Sveet! (yes, sveet.) I love Relient K.
On Just Slightly Eccletic: Playlist Challenge:

posted 6 months ago

I freaking love the White Stripes.
On Love is Strongest in its Departure:

posted 6 months ago

I liked the imagery. Simply brilliant.
On Ghostly Street Art:

posted 6 months ago

Haha, I liked that.
On Pertinent:

posted 6 months ago

Sorry, I tried to clear it up somewhat, and yes, Llama’s “silliness” did rather tick me off.
On Third World Innocence:

posted 6 months ago

I liked the title, it fit it perfectly.
On all hail the ferret named cheezy:

posted 6 months ago

Don’t do stuff like this. If you’re going to sequel one of my ficlets, TAKE IT SERIOUSLY!
On At Water's Edge:

posted 7 months ago

Thanks THX 0477 for translating it.
On Dear Gossip Girl: I Wanna Be Generally Unhealthy:

posted 7 months ago

Dear Stovohobo-
Positively Brilliant!
On At Water's Edge:

posted 7 months ago

The French part is from a French poem that Daniel Handler put in The End.
On The amazing explanation of BetwINeen:

posted 7 months ago

I totally got that.
On The Artists These Days Are Not What You Think:

posted 7 months ago

Rather insipid really.
On Britney Spears, Paris Hilton, Barbie, and..:

posted 7 months ago

I didn’t like it at all. Partially because of the way it was written, and also because of making fun of her kids.
On Public Service Announcement: Didaskaleinophobia and the Harmful Effects Your Child Encounters:

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, seemed a bit all over the place. I would suggest putting the first part in italics so that one knows it is a commercial/ script type thing.
On The Denial of the Twinkie Addict Extroirdinare:

posted 7 months ago

Brilliant, I found myself laughing yet remorseful at the same time.
On Honorable Mention cont'd.:

posted 7 months ago

I must admit, I forgot what this was for.
On Black Market Organs :

posted 7 months ago

Brilliant, I was just watching something to this effect, so it has been on my mind.
On 20 Ficlets: This Calls For A Challenge:

posted 7 months ago

BTW: Most of us did write a challenge at either our 20th or 25th, but as of late, it has become customary to write one every 50th or 100.
On Polyphobia :

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, it was nice imagining all of this transpiring.
On Something Like That:

posted 7 months ago

Nice descriptions. So vivid that I could see everything taking place.
On I Cured Myself:

posted 7 months ago

Positively brilliant! It shows you not to be afraid of living.
On An Ironic Fear:

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, I rather liked it.
On Really Bad Karma:

posted 7 months ago

I liked it, and here I thought I would have to point out the misspelling of your phobia! Then, I read on and realized it was intentional. I liked the linking of the different scenarios.
On What's That You Say? Althaiophobia? That Sounds Absurd!:

posted 7 months ago

Haha, rather nice. It was very funny, but I was hoping for sarcasm… I’m in that sort of mood.
On It's In the Eyes:

posted 7 months ago

Freaky, I loved the rosary piece.
On The Birth of Empira:

posted 7 months ago

Simply beautiful. I loved how the embers started everything.
On One boy One Girl 2 _you define me_:

posted 7 months ago

I like the opening paragraph, it drew me in.
On One Boy, One Girl _somethings are better left alone_:

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, rather nicely written.
On Get A Job:

posted 7 months ago

Sveet! I loved it!
On 20 Ficlets: This Calls For A Challenge:

posted 7 months ago

Okay, lemme first say, that linophobia is real. (fear of stringbeans) If it’s not, blame Lois H. Gresh.
On Stjarna- a freewrite dedicated to a Depeche Mode instrumental:

posted 7 months ago

Absoluely brilliant! I loved the imagery and clean cut style of the piece.
On Her name was Lola:

posted 7 months ago

It was okay, but I kept wanting it to be more satirical. Not to say that the sarcasm wasn’t there.
On The Defenestration of Prague:

posted 7 months ago

I wasn’t too fond of this. It was hard to follow, and frankly didn’t make much sense to me.
On A Night at the Theatre{April14,1865}:

posted 7 months ago

A lot of spelling mistakes. It seemed rather choppy.
On You're Nobody in Hollywood Till Your 1st DUI:

posted 7 months ago

Wow, I loved the “48” bit.
On Mole:

posted 7 months ago

Connection= Avogadro is an actual person said to have created the “mole”, a measurement. It is also called “Avogadro’s number”.
On The Girl in the Shadows:

posted 7 months ago

Sweet, I’m thinking about which direction to take it.
On Body in the Washing machine:

posted 7 months ago

Craps. I rather liked it, but much of it needs to be rephrased to eliminate awkwardness. Also, watch spelling.
On A Strange Connection:

posted 7 months ago

I did like it, which is odd, because I usually don’t like it when people sequel my stories without asking me first.
On YodaOnCrack Halloween Challenge:

posted 7 months ago

Ooo, can I be a judge?
On Twisted Fairy Tales:Modern Day Romeo and Juliet:

posted 7 months ago

Wow, it was marvelous.
On Detective?:

posted 7 months ago

I rather liked it. The direction wasn’t clear enough, though.
On Here Lies Gabriel H. Taylor:

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, makes me think of a “project” gone wrong.
On The Search:

posted 7 months ago

Hmm, not bad. I would have liked more descriptions, though.
On Literature 101: An Apology to My Students {part 2}:

posted 7 months ago

Haha, I’ve read the poems that you talked about, so it was very humorous for me.
On Literature 101: An Apology to My Students {a fun little exercise}:

posted 7 months ago

I loved the references!
On The Weirdest Challenge I've ever Read (and I'm the one that Thought it Up, Too):

posted 7 months ago

Sweet! I freaking love literary terms!
On H-E-Double-Hockeysticks (Euphemism):

posted 7 months ago

Nice job conveying the frustration, although, the storyline was a bit shaky.
On Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 5.:

posted 8 months ago

I loved this series of ficlets. Wonderfully written.
On The Whole World is Waiting:

posted 8 months ago

Greta job.
On musings of an oddball high school kid:

posted 8 months ago

It was nice, a tad awkward at times, but nice.
On 300 :

posted 8 months ago

By the way, please add it as a sequel!
On Find the Elevator, Save the World!:

posted 8 months ago

Wow, what drew me in was the title. I really liked this.
On Party Girl:The End of the Party:

posted 8 months ago

Sorry, but I didn’t like it at all.
On Party Girl:

posted 8 months ago

It was a nice idea, but it went wrong with the execution. My mind kept screaming “Chain Mail! Chain Mail!”
On Count Piggies Last Hallween:

posted 8 months ago

I liked the concept, but the overall story had an awkward tone to it. The “Hallween” bit was rather confusing.
On Becoming Human:

posted 8 months ago

Brilliant parallel to the Holocaust.
On Off to Deutschland:

posted 8 months ago

It was okay, but I didn’t like the “she was seventeen, after all” bit. It seemed rather forced and it could have flowed better.
On Warm-Blooded:

posted 8 months ago

I did like this.
On I Should Have Cried:

posted 8 months ago

It was pretty good. I would have added more descriptions.
On Mad, Mad I Tell You: Red Buttons & World Domination:

posted 8 months ago

It was okay, I, personally, would have written it dripping with sarcasm.
On Ficlet the 200th and the DOUBLE CHALLENGE!:

posted 8 months ago

Okay, now I have to think about what genre to do next.
On Honorable Mention 2:

posted 8 months ago

Sweet, I got “honorable mention”, and an award named after me!
On Until Death Do Us Part:

posted 8 months ago

I loved it. The imagery was beautiful, and you presented their relationship subtly. Bravo.
On Allusions Elude Me. Let's Stick To Lyrics.:

posted 8 months ago

Watch the spelling.
On The Perils of Losing Yourself in a Story:

posted 8 months ago

Very nice.
On The Thomas Children - Part 2:

posted 8 months ago

You need commas. It’s very hard to follow without commas… or even dashes. I agree with Yoda’s first comment.
On The Thomas Children - Part 1:

posted 8 months ago

Ehh, it’s okay. It doesn’t flow that well.
On 99 Years Back:

posted 8 months ago

Wow, I really liked this.
On The Fall:

posted 8 months ago

Great job describing emotions.
On The New Enemy:

posted 8 months ago

Oh my frigging gosh, I totally called that as a vampire story! Especially after reading the “contract I didn’t sign” bit.
I didn’t say anything for fear of being called crazy... or obsessed.
On Illegal Existence:

posted 8 months ago

Brilliant. I absolutely fell in love with this. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
On D'enouement:

posted 8 months ago

It was okay, it didn’t hold my interest that long, though.
And, denouement is one of my favorite words.
On A Newgrange Middle Mystery:

posted 8 months ago

Ehh, I didn’t like it as much as your other works. Maybe it was just the way it was written… either way, it didn’t satisfy me.
On (Genre: High School Angst!) Who Needs a Soul If You Have a Date to Prom?:

posted 8 months ago

It was amazing. Well, the title was at least. From the title, I was imagining something slightly darker, so I was a tad disappointed.
On I need...:

posted 8 months ago

Very nice.
On Untethered Mines:

posted 8 months ago

I agree with THX 0477, although I must admit that I skimmed it… sorry.
On Red Giant:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm. I rather like this.
On High School Hell:

posted 8 months ago

I actually had to read it over to find the songs. Not bad.
On The Flaming Man:

posted 8 months ago

Great, now I must decide what to do for my sequel.
On Both Sides Now (Side B):

posted 8 months ago

Eh, it seemed forced, didn’t flow as smoothly as one would have hoped.
On It Is Not Wise:

posted 8 months ago

Sorry. Pandai means “wise”, and Bolond and Norec mean “fool”.
On What's In A Name? (a challenge):

posted 8 months ago

Nice, this is how most of my characters get their names.
On J459212:

posted 8 months ago

You still don’t understand! The flowers represent hope, each day, she brings her new hope.
On A Thing For Beauty cont'd:

posted 8 months ago

You don’t underdstand, it isn’t the fact that he ate the flower, it’s the fact that he was wicked and vile.
On The Tide:

posted 8 months ago

I fell in love with it.
On AAAICOF Notice:

posted 8 months ago

I use it when I don’t really know what to say about a story, if it didn’t hold my interest long enough, if I wasn’t blown away by it, and/or if I want to say “Okay…” as in “awkward” but want to be nice about it.
Mostly, when I comment your ficlets using said word, it is because I am trying to decide if I should let it be, or sequel it. (Yes, sometimes it is because of the afore mentioned reasons.)
On A Night with Billy Joel:

posted 8 months ago

I feel as if it’s not really a story, just songs thrown together.
On Jealousy, your name is Thursday:

posted 8 months ago

Wow, this was simply the greatest.
On Politics and a Stapler:

posted 8 months ago

Nice, I love the Orwell reference. I didn’t really see the direction in it, though.
On K.P. (A Poem):

posted 8 months ago

I absolutely adore it.
On Life in the Checkout Lane:

posted 8 months ago

Brilliant title.
On Life of the Damned:

posted 8 months ago

Great job. I liked the way you described the character Grey.
On You Picked Me:

posted 8 months ago

“You picked me”- One Fine Frenzy, You Picked Me
“One pale thin ray”- Stephen Schwartz, Godspell
“Another Pyramid”- Aida
On Brick Wall's first ever contest (booyah):

posted 8 months ago

Sweet.
On The Dumbwaiter Incident:

posted 8 months ago

Yes, I shall have to think of something wonderfully wicked.
On Of Sneaking Suspicions and Stilettos:

posted 8 months ago

Yes! I have to think about this.
On Of Bad Advice, young love and Gangster Boatmen:

posted 8 months ago

Hehe. Okay. Not great, just okay.
On I <3 Money:

posted 8 months ago

Very nice, but I hate to tell you that the average presidential suite is more than two thousand dollars.
On Inspiration:

posted 8 months ago

Nice use of imageryand metaphors.
On The Safe:

posted 8 months ago

Ooo, more please.
On Entry 17:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm.
On Flabby Jowls:

posted 8 months ago

Great job.
On Bard's Bad Ballads:

posted 8 months ago

Ha, nice.
On A Series of Events:

posted 8 months ago

Merci. It all comes, I suppose, of reading the whole series (with the exception of the last two) within two months.
On Hello Old Friend:

posted 8 months ago

Nice. I’m assuming that’s German.
On Fin's Story: Part Four:

posted 8 months ago

Hooray! Florence! Don’t pay attenion to them, add as many as you want.
On Fin's Story: Part Three:

posted 8 months ago

Yay!
On Fin's Story: Part Two:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm, taboo. I love that word.
On Fin's Story:

posted 8 months ago

I love the descriptions.
On Stuck (not writers block, fortunately :D):

posted 8 months ago

Nice.
On 'Meeting' People:

posted 8 months ago

I adored the last part.
On Beep:

posted 8 months ago

Haha.
On Beep:

posted 8 months ago

Haha.
On The Orphans Did Not:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm, nice allusion to Oliver Twist.
On The Monkey and the Maiden:

posted 8 months ago

I love the comedy in it!
On The Perfect World:

posted 8 months ago

First of all, that was a great picture. Second, that was a great ficlet.
On A Series of Events:

posted 8 months ago

This is supposed to be a story that the Baudelaires find in the book on the island. Yes, it is supposed to be similar to ASOUE.
On The End of Harry Pendragon's Wicked Hairspray:

posted 8 months ago

You’re in the running for first prize.
On An Awfully Great Adventure:

posted 8 months ago

Just as an FYI, you’re in the running for first prize.
On And the Sky Wept:

posted 8 months ago

I loved everything about it.
On Diary of the Wizened Environmentalist:

posted 8 months ago

Finally, someone who isn’t totally denying global warming. I do agree with Chuck, however. The words are a tad off.
On You're More Important:

posted 8 months ago

OK, not great, just… okay.
On Grasshopper and the Caretaker:

posted 8 months ago

I feel like he’s going to the “happy hunting ground”, as Laura Ingalls Wilder would put it.
On Three Days, Three Minutes:

posted 8 months ago

Oh, my! Brilliant use of repitition, dearest.
On Edvard :

posted 8 months ago

Hmm.
On June's Story:

posted 8 months ago

I didn’t like this one so much.
On In A World Of Vision, Nobody Sees What Is Obvious:

posted 8 months ago

My gosh, this is the second time I’ve clicked on this without realizing I’ve already commented it.
On Ignored:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm. I don’t ignore you. I think you’re a grand writer.
On Untill next time:

posted 8 months ago

I fell in love with this.
On Florence's Story: Part Five:

posted 8 months ago

Okay, I’m gonna write a sequel.
On Florence's Story: Part Four:

posted 8 months ago

Again with the color motif! But, don’t worry, that’s my favorite part of this series.
On Florence's Story: Part Three:

posted 8 months ago

Yes!
On Florence's Story: Part Three:

posted 8 months ago

I love the color motif.
On Florence's Story: Part Two:

posted 8 months ago

Oh, so brilliant.
On Florence's Story:

posted 8 months ago

Great descriptions.
On Yes, Child. I Love You.:

posted 8 months ago

Great. Very touching.
On wait until dark:

posted 8 months ago

I liked the humaness of this… if that makes sense to you.
On The Shores of Fire Island:

posted 8 months ago

Brilliant descriptions.
On Street Musicians and Photography:

posted 8 months ago

Yay, I love your work.
On Mysteries Abound at Sea:

posted 8 months ago

I love pirates.
On Thomas wants to be a Pirate:

posted 8 months ago

I liked it.
On Hugo and Gilly:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm, if I might use my coined phrase, Interesting.
On Adoption Over Pizza:

posted 8 months ago

Very sweet.
On Deadly Wednesday:

posted 8 months ago

Nice, I must think.
On Idiosyncrasies of the Morning Meal:

posted 8 months ago

I loved it!
On Can I Take a Message?:

posted 8 months ago

Haha! Brilliant!
On Grasshopper Hops Away:

posted 8 months ago

Hmmm, I’ve always imagined grasshoppers being bossy.
On That Kiss:

posted 8 months ago

Och. Sequel please. Usually I’m leary of stories of this sort, but bravo, a great job.
On When Grasshoppers Have Doubts:

posted 8 months ago

Very nice bit.
On Tab and Lig:

posted 8 months ago

Oh, I want a sequel!
On Only Makes Me More Hungry:

posted 8 months ago

Aktorius is actually Lithuanian for actor. I named him that because the person he is modeled after is an actor.
On Wednesday Thomas:

posted 8 months ago

If you want, go for it.
On What? You Expecting Me To Do Something About It?:

posted 8 months ago

Not as good as the first…
On I Ain't Monkeying Around...:

posted 8 months ago

Brilliant! One of the best comedic pieces I’ve read in ages.
On The Playground:

posted 8 months ago

Nice imagery.
On Gold Medal:

posted 8 months ago

And the crowd goes wild!
On Silver Medal:

posted 8 months ago

Hooray!
On Bronze Medal:

posted 8 months ago

Hooray!
On Cinderella Maybe's:

posted 8 months ago

I absolutely fell in love with this.
On By love I shall speak:

posted 8 months ago

Sweet….
On Bon Chance! (A Challenge):

posted 8 months ago

I have decided to make this a contest. I shall pick my favorites the last day of this month.
On Sand Women IV- Sword of Lyfae:

posted 8 months ago

Hmm.
On The Girl in the Surf:

posted 8 months ago

I do like this version.
On A Debate Amongst Ourselves; A Resolution Of Action To Be Taken:

posted 8 months ago

Hmmm….
On a simple smile:

posted 8 months ago

This reminds me of a song called ; Hero by Superchic[k].
On Une Petite Plaisanterie (pour moi, quoi qu'il en soit) en français pour Toutes les Ficleteers Bilingues Futées Dehors là:

posted 8 months ago

Yay! I interpreted it! Without a translator! French freaking rocks!
On Adopted angels:

posted 8 months ago

Interesting
On When Care Bears Go Wrong:

posted 8 months ago

Warm and fuzzy, warm and fuzzy.
On Couplet of Faith I guess...:

posted 8 months ago

Sweet, I adore couplets.
On I Almost Feel Creative Tonight:

posted 8 months ago

Beautiful, beautiful writing.
On When You Breathe:

posted 8 months ago

I liked it.
On Throwing Down the Gauntlet:

posted 8 months ago

Nice.
On Honorable Mention:

posted 8 months ago

Yay!
On An Extra Pudding:

posted 8 months ago

Sorry, forgot one: “You Two”= “Chitty Chitty Bang Bang”.
On Disney & Pixar Allude to Other Movies in Theirs:

posted 8 months ago

Nice.
On Don't Mess With Cook:

posted 8 months ago

I read Dragonflight, too.
On Don't Mess With Cook:

posted 8 months ago

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