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On Deep Space Disaster- To the Brig:

posted 2 months ago

I love your stories, really funny.
On Deep Space Disaster:

posted 2 months ago

I liked it alot, very funny, in an off set sort of soft chuckle way. Keep it comin
On Singing "Hero" (Lyrics Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

Wow. Hahhahaha, it would never have occured to me to use this song.
On READY SET GO NEW CHALLENGE :

posted 2 months ago

done =]
On Motion City Soundtrack- Everything is alright- lyris challenge:

posted 2 months ago

I love this song, and I hope it works as well as I thought it would.
On I won't last a day without you:

posted 2 months ago

It sounds like all you did was take the lyrics and throw in a really miniscule back story. No bueno bud.
On Banana Pancakes (Lyrics Challennge):

posted 2 months ago

It was cute, but not interesting sorry =[
On Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}:

posted 2 months ago

Cool, I liked it. The lyrics really wrapped into the song well.
On Yesterday (The Song Is I Kissed A Girl By Katy Perry.. Don't Expect Any Beatles.=]):

posted 2 months ago

Dont really get it? Oh and that song stinks.
On Somebody Told Me (READY SET GO LYRICS Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

i dont know bout that
On Somebody Told Me (READY SET GO LYRICS Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

i dont know bout that
On I really miss you! <3:

posted 6 months ago

Fantastic!
On Rude and Crude Valentine Message:

posted 6 months ago

I thought it was great. It seemed real, like it could have happened to my friend in grammer school. Good Job!
On Poem #2:

posted 6 months ago

A little gory, but it rhymed, and it was interesting. So well done!
On Jake Brown Road, Weird New Jersey (part two):

posted 9 months ago

Good, again with the spelling and better vocabulary could have been used but it was okay
On Jake Brown Road, WEIRED New Jersey:

posted 9 months ago

Fix the spelling, but I definitly will read more!
On Post-It Notes:

posted 9 months ago

Interesting. The fact that she was blind made me pity her, I really want to know whats on those post it notes!
On Origami Stars:

posted 9 months ago

Good its like a poem and story combined well written.
On Betrayed:

posted 9 months ago

Hmm odd, bad grammer. But its exceptional.
On Evidence:

posted 9 months ago

ewww creepy!
On Ghosts From The Past:

posted 9 months ago

Good, I liked it very entertaining.
On A believer:

posted 9 months ago

Nice, not the best but entertaining.
On Signs:

posted 9 months ago

Wasn’t blown away, but good attempt.
On Plan:

posted 9 months ago

Hmm interesting twist.
On Maybe Just Maybe:

posted 9 months ago

I read your sequel first but this one was equally as intriguing do continue!
On It Was Him?!:

posted 9 months ago

Really nice, It was good and it seems like it could be close to home for some people. I want to read more about the girl!
On Waiting for His Return.:

posted 9 months ago

Some spelling mistakes, but I got the jist. Nice attempt, sad and I am sure many will identify with it.
On Trap:

posted 9 months ago

Bad grammer, confusing with an equally bad story line. You had good intentions though, and it wasnt boring.
On But Who Knew?:

posted 9 months ago

Hmm i have to agree with someday. I got confused and I dont really know how to rate it sorry!
On He's gone.....forever:

posted 9 months ago

Oh wow. We all have had that one horrible friend, and this really got me thinking about her. Nice.
On It's over:

posted 9 months ago

I can understand how you feel, It describes so many frustrated emotions. Very good.
On I'll Soon Be Out:

posted 9 months ago

Did not appreciate it. The “and so i’m like…” parts I did not like. Maybe you could rewrite it, but it wasn’t amazing.
On Whoops. Why Hello...:

posted 9 months ago

Interesting, Intriguing, and sort of confusing, I think hes a ghost?
On signs of lost love:

posted 9 months ago

Nice. A fair attempt, fix the grammer and I will reread it. I usually like these poems, but it got a bit boring I have to admit. You had good intentions though.
On Dreams:

posted 9 months ago

Whoa, I was just taken with this. I prefer these poems to the typical rhymed poems and it was beautiful.
On I Wish for You:

posted 9 months ago

So nice, I loved it. A simply beautiful attempt. I love poetry and I was just pratically reduced to tears. Well done.
On I don't need that anymore.:

posted 9 months ago

Short, but to the point I suppose. I wish there was more detail but I can sense the feeling just from those five lines. I am getting angry reading it! Very nice.
On Dancing on Pointe:

posted 9 months ago

Beautifully written, I could almost see the woman holding the ballet slippers! I absolutely adored it. I would sequel it ,but I do not dance and wouldn’t know what to say, but I hope you, or someone else does.
On the it hit me:

posted 9 months ago

dissapointed
On From the Mouths of Babes:

posted 9 months ago

I really enjoyed it, it kept my attention.
On jfjg : ) ksufks : (:

posted 9 months ago

COMMENT MY FICLETS !!!!!
On BLOCKED:

posted 9 months ago

is this a continuation of the sci fi-ish story and how is this mature again?
On And the story continues:

posted 11 months ago

i thought making sam a burn out would add some mystery. Now this is the perfect set up to make it a real alien experience or just an odd dream!
On I Dare You! (Sequel to Is it Over?) JD Series:

posted 11 months ago

can anyone say guilty pleasure?
On Fisherman Jumps:

posted 11 months ago

This is the first story i ever started and i hope everyone feels free to add on!
On Deranged and confused:

posted 11 months ago

I personally would love to see someone sequel it to make it that the main character was some evil guy hahaha i dont know i think im done sequeling it i really want other people to add on i will check up on it and comment still.
On The Lights, Man ,What They Do to Your Mind:

posted 11 months ago

Actually this one wasnt that bad it was the others that were horrible sorry.
On The Lights, Man ,What They Do to Your Mind:

posted 11 months ago

You people totally butchered my story.

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On I won't last a day without you:

On Banana Pancakes (Lyrics Challennge):

On Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}:

On Yesterday (The Song Is I Kissed A Girl By Katy Perry.. Don't Expect Any Beatles.=]):

On Somebody Told Me (READY SET GO LYRICS Challenge):

On Somebody Told Me (READY SET GO LYRICS Challenge):

On I really miss you! <3:

On Rude and Crude Valentine Message:

On Poem #2:

On Jake Brown Road, Weird New Jersey (part two):

On Jake Brown Road, WEIRED New Jersey:

On Post-It Notes:

On Origami Stars:

On Betrayed:

On Evidence:

On Ghosts From The Past:

On A believer:

On Signs:

On Plan:

On Maybe Just Maybe:

On It Was Him?!:

On Waiting for His Return.:

On Trap:

On But Who Knew?:

On He's gone.....forever:

On It's over:

On I'll Soon Be Out:

On Whoops. Why Hello...:

On signs of lost love:

On Dreams:

On I Wish for You:

On I don't need that anymore.:

On Dancing on Pointe:

On the it hit me:

On From the Mouths of Babes:

On jfjg : ) ksufks : (:

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On And the story continues:

On I Dare You! (Sequel to Is it Over?) JD Series:

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