SunEyedGirl's posted comments

  1. On The Only Date That's Certain:

    posted 4 months ago

    i really like this, i’ve been there before

  2. On The Trip:

    posted 5 months ago

    is her mom kidnapping her? say it aint so…

  3. On A little Hope:

    posted 6 months ago

    aw this is good, if only thats what really happened in situations like that. usually you just go home and watch the hills reruns with your buddy ;)

  4. On Squinting Mistake :

    posted 6 months ago

    Arg thats so how it goes…

  5. On 3:27 AM:

    posted 7 months ago

    it’s kinda eerie like most dreams are. I like the sentence “streaked fingerprints in the dust”, its very descriptive. A+

  6. On Just A Breakup Poem :

    posted 8 months ago

    you’ll get through it girl. good poem

  7. On Then and Now:

    posted 8 months ago

    fancy. ;)

  8. On Green:

    posted 8 months ago

    actually thats why i wrote this because it goes both ways. it could be either, whatever you want to see

  9. On Just For Now, I Promise:

    posted 8 months ago

    Really good, I actually felt like somebody was telling me this to comfort me about something. So you’ve got good writing style.

  10. On 444:

    posted 8 months ago

    An oxer is a set of fences as a jump for the horse. And so 3’2’’ is the height. :)

  11. On Anthony:

    posted 9 months ago

    i like it… could this be the same day you texted me about oscar??? lol

  12. On Alright:

    posted 11 months ago

    good stuff… i wanna kno what happens next

  13. On Hello Fire:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Fire because it’s symbolism can be both intense and passionate, but also destructive and devestating.

  14. On Fond ,Flames Fond:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Omg luv it!! haha i was laughing out loud, but in a good way, deff sequel!

  15. On That place you go:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Really good, i think anyone who loves autumn and hates to see it go can relate to the inspiration of this

  16. On Hearts:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Good, I kno where this is coming from, and its just as intense as it sounds, luvvs

  17. On Sasha's Promise :

    posted about 1 year ago

    yay! man these stories are good home girl

  18. On That Kiss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    fabooluss lurve it

  19. On Angst of a kitten:

    posted about 1 year ago

    haha i love the kitties : )

  20. On the only thing i can think about is JB!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hahaha i luv this it reminds me of my thoughts, oh and jonas brothers are TO.DIE.FOR : D

  21. On Dead Lions and Closed Umbrellas :

    posted about 1 year ago

    i likey : ) very interesting and good

  22. On Frida Kahlo Syndrome :

    posted about 1 year ago

    verry hilarious : D

  23. On My Favorite Song:

    posted about 1 year ago

    haha jonas brothers, nice : D

  24. On Sequel to "And then the Trees":

    posted about 1 year ago

    very good

  25. On Our Place:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I dont know if this is the story you wrote me a note about… but it is really good. It has a really good feeling

  26. On No-one:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very cute

  27. On Numb:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow… I love this, awesome, awesome, awesome
    5 stars!

  28. On Empty:

    posted about 1 year ago

    this is really good, great imagery

  29. On The Edge Of The World:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow… love it! : )

  30. On SMOLDERING(not really a story or a poem, more of an observation):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yesss…

  31. On Would you?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hahaha wow i didnt think that but now that you said it, its really funny. haha lena lamont pshhh : )

  32. On My Dream:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very good, especially the writing of the first part, its really easy to get caught up in it and picture yourself there. Very sweet too (too bad its just a dream! lol)

  33. On Home Part Four:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Really good…

  34. On Desires in Scales Reflected:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very good sequel, thanks for using my poem!

  35. On The Sailor:

    posted about 1 year ago

    haha this one makes me think of persuasion…

  36. On Believe only half of what you see:

    posted about 1 year ago

    great work, excellently descriptive

  37. On Teenage Nightmare:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is very good, I know it comes from real experience. It makes me a little sad though cuz I feel like your talking about me… better not be!! jk jk nah its a good peice

  38. On Show Me How Deep Your Hurt Is:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow, love how you write whats in your heart, keep it up! From all of the experiences we face there is a pearl, keep knowing whats in you.

  39. On The Real Hurt:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Love it!!! I especially love this line “I feel so safe here in your embrace and find it absolutely sexy that you are so strong that you could crush me in an instant but instead you hold me softly but firmly, like you will never hurt me ” Awesome…

  40. On After Hours:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Awesome, love it!

  41. On Science Fiction...ey (Part 2):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very good, I feel like I’m watching star trek. I’ma call you Cap’n Kirk : )

  42. On Medicine:

    posted about 1 year ago

    haha thats funny but idk you could write a poem about someone giving you mono, i would!! lol maybe not

  43. On A Hug:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is awesome. You can really tell that you write what you live and I like that about it. It’s so relate-to-able

  44. On Cant you see i love you?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I love it that this is how you feel about someone, I deff. do too so I like reading this because it reminds me of something i was going to write! good stuff

  45. On From Tears To The Water Of Life:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like this series alot, I hope more is coming

  46. On Forevermore:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is awesome, it has beautiful imagery I love it! five stars

  47. On Home Part Two:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like reading about Fawn because the stories actually make me feel bad for her like she is a real person and thats good writing.

  48. On Typical Summer Day:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like this story alot, it has a feeling i can relate to. Good work.

  49. On Medicine:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hahahahaha I know what this one means : O

  50. On Call The Cops:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like the mystery of this one, Im waiting to see where this one goes.

  51. On Scribbled out memories:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like this, its an interesting subject matter and really there are so many instances of this type of writers block in peoples lives where when you go to write the words arent enough. So good job! : )

  52. On A Kiss Among Friends:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Aww its cute, it kinda like goes along with mine a little bit too. This must be on our minds!

  53. On Will you remember me?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very good, very real, the emotion is good, keep up the good work : )

  54. On young love:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like this because at some point and time we have, most of us, felt this way. Sometimes I even catch myself doing it and i like your last line “dont you just hate it” i do, nice work.

  55. On The Dancer:

    posted about 1 year ago

    really good play on this pic, i like it alot

  56. On Uncomfortable meetings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I really like this because instead of having a wimpy ending it has a really empowering yeah-you-dont-have-to-take-that-sister ending. Good job! : )

  57. On Home:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like the internal struggle this represents. very nice : )

  58. On The Shadow:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very cool, i like the mystery (oh and thanks for explaining it to me haha) good job

  59. On Science Fiction...ey:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Verry good, i like that you make it feel like your actually there, good work.

  60. On The Siren:

    posted about 1 year ago

    great ficlet!

  61. On Sunset yellow:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very good, it makes me think of coldplay ( a little influence pehaps?) but nevertheless a really good poem. I like the line “then I must say yellow is the new color with which I shall paint my world” really touching and sweet… good job!

  62. On I Love-Hate You:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very good, something we all can relate to

  63. On Who am I?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I really like this one because it’s feeling is really familiar to me, I love to be inspired by everyday things and the simplest things really do sometimes give more joy that the things people try their whole life for. I guess its just how we are made and some people just refuse to accept it. Good job!

  64. On I can't smile anymore:

    posted about 1 year ago

    this is really good, i can really relate, the emotion in this poem is really strong, i like it

  65. On Illusion:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very good! (nice last line ; )

  66. On Ruins of thought.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice work, the development from the picture is really creative.

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