In the 2nd sentence “where” should be were, welted=wilted 3rd sentence should be “came INTO my life” right? And in the last sentense it should be “so you could be the rain a I a radiant flower” No tbeing mean! I’m just trying to help out =D lovely poem! I hope to see more! (Im adding you as a contact by the way).
GAH! EDWARD CULLEN!!!! I’m sorry, I know that you love the jonas brothers… BUT DUMP HIM AND GO WITH MR.SEXY!!!!!!!!!! (Sorry… i have the twilight syndrome…. lmao)
gah! When I read the ” I like to keep my visitors” i was like RAPE!!! RAPE!!!! CREEPY OLD GUY!!!! lmao the whole time. But wouldn’t that be wierd if Dana started reading and suddenlyy… RAPE...RAPE!... Jk! LMAO
BIG GRIN BIG GRIN BIG GRIN!!!! This story is awesome! You have made my day because for some odd readon this story made me realize that IT”S SUMMER!!!!!
I like the fact that now they are getting names. It means that they are becoming a more rounded and realistic character. . . . WHAT HAS SCHOOL DONE TO ME?!? And KEEP YOUR CANDY!!! (he’s a smart kid lol)
Damn. Now my wrist hurts!!!!!!!!!!! I have never cut my self on purpouse but I have accadentally (I am clumsy with knives) And now i’m having a panic attack
ACK!!! Twilight!!!! ACKKKKK!!! Sorry… twilight should come with a warning lable WARNING: After you read this, you will read it again. and again. and again… Then you may also annoy people to the point of insanity untill they, too, read it. And so on.
DISCLAMER Works best with ages 7-50billion…. overdose is possible. But don’t worry, it’s a good thing…=}
I just use the bright, happy colours when I drink coffee, but I really don’t need it…. That’s what MOUNTAIN DEW is for… Crazy hyper expression WHAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOUNTAIN DEWWWWWWWWWWW!!! he…hehe…heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee aNy waaaayyyysss….
Hehe untill it got to the part “He’s not perfect. He snores.” I thought that it was Bella talking… This is good! I can see this really happening. Thanx for entering the challange!!!
WOW. I kinda wanted them to get together (dating people dating!) but I liked the way that RWS was playing it out. But I like this too (even though now they might not date…=(
Awwww… That was so sweet! And ps:The books are AWESOME! You should read them! But for some reason most guys don’t like them… i don’t know why though =( Oh well! Thanx for entering
HAHA!!! Bacccuuunnnnn…. this is random but listen. This vegetarian that I went to church camp with was upset because she couldn’t eat some of the food that they were serving one day, and so I told her to go get some of the beans. She said that she couldn’t because she was vegitarian, and that beans werew meat. No lie. loved the ficlet btw!
O.O! YAY! Your Vamp stories are awesome!!! Is this going to be a serise? I can toatally see a whole story behind this one piece! That was good and very shocking!
Hehe, this is kinda like at my school lol! But I must say that I would be some where in that little group (it would be a big group at my school but that’s beside the point =)) Nice way of adding in the Sentences! So have you read them?? It sounds like you own Twilight and New Moon…
I’m going to be all… insightful(?) for a moment. I think that this is really good because just the night before their daughter was killed but since everyone reacted the same way that the narrorator did, no one knew. It’s sad if you think about it. =(
{Mistress Elsha Hawk} I think every one pictured the ppl differently, I couldn’t really picture Edward (too perfect!) but Robertt P. fills in quite nicely! Ps {I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!} Thank yooo! And Orange Oreos… Watch your back…
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