Luuvvxiz_90's posted comments

  1. On My Name Is Elena -2:

    posted about 1 month ago

    yeah i know i didnt have a lot of time to write so this is what came out of it.
    the next one will be longer…and better (hopefully)

  2. On Random Ramblings 5:

    posted about 1 month ago

    thanx for the comments. its great to get feedback!

  3. On Paper Weights on My Heart:

    posted 2 months ago

    I’m Screaming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Does anybody hear me?????

  4. On Please don't..:

    posted 2 months ago

    You just get how life is and you hold up the mirror to others so that they can realize that they are hiding all the time.

    Guess what world! this is my friend and she is showing you all how it is!

  5. On Just to Feel:

    posted 2 months ago

    Good Lord! i most seriously got goosebumps from that one.
    I totally get it and it’s scarily wonderful.! ; ]

  6. On A Living Breathing Work Of Art:

    posted 2 months ago

    You got a point. And just keep in mind that in the end the good guys really will win!!!
    I wish i could read whats on your mind sometimes cuz i can tell you are a serious thinker hidden behind all the punk. Its nice to see a little of it on the page. (or computer screen) Keep up the originality its nice to know someone has some still.

  7. On Random Ramblings 5:

    posted 2 months ago

    havent done ficlets in a while so i’m a little rusty. but hope you chuckle a little bit. even if it is on the inside…. ; ]

  8. On My Name Is Elena:

    posted 5 months ago

    this is my first “as-i-go” story. so bear with me as i go. Hope your hooked already! happy reading!

  9. On Listen...Don't Speak:

    posted 6 months ago

    you know whats funny? thats how I feel. go figure.

  10. On The Black Iris (part 17):

    posted 6 months ago

    hum…. another twist!.i luv it!
    waiting…. to c if he tells…

  11. On The Black Iris (part 16):

    posted 6 months ago

    flowers! for me?... oh… not for me boo hoo. jk
    waiting… to c what she made 4 breakfast…

  12. On That Road:

    posted 6 months ago

    yes i did mean you’re. thanx for pointing that out. i love that ppl r checking out my stuff!

  13. On Under With You:

    posted 6 months ago

    I really like this poem. I havent written one that i like in it’s entirety in a long time. hope you like it too.

  14. On A Heart in the Sand:

    posted 6 months ago

    babe! that was terrific! me likee very much.
    in the name of herman the worm i say BRAVO!

  15. On R-r-r-r-raaandooommmm:

    posted 6 months ago

    i love the word random and anything that ensues! great job. all in the name of toast and toe jam!

  16. On Then and Now:

    posted 6 months ago

    and i like the rhyms.

  17. On Then and Now:

    posted 6 months ago

    wonderful. definitly beautiful in it’s own special way.

  18. On 3:27 AM:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow! this is so like me when i wake up from a dream. good or bad. i really like this. keep writing!

  19. On That Road:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’ve been on a ‘paths that lead to somewhere unknown’ kick. hope you like it.

  20. On The Black Iris (part 15):

    posted 6 months ago

    hee hee… he loves her he wants to kiss her (again)
    waiting…. for the romantic fess up…

  21. On The Black Iris (part 14):

    posted 6 months ago

    oooo… stiches!
    waiting…for the reaction…

  22. On The Black Iris (part 13):

    posted 6 months ago

    Elizabeth! hey thats my middle name!
    waiting …to see who this new woman might be…

  23. On The Black Iris (part 12):

    posted 6 months ago

    oh so she’s lost her memory eh?
    waiting…. will she remember?...

  24. On A detained meal:

    posted 6 months ago

    oooooooooo
    i cant wait to hear more.
    i am so far on the edge of my seat that i think i see a stain on the carpet!

  25. On Sister Dearest: Lovely Lora (I miss you):

    posted 6 months ago

    This is soo goregeous. I feel your pain through this poem but i want you to keep your chin up. luv ya

  26. On The Black Iris (part 11):

    posted 7 months ago

    to be a dream or not to dream that is the question.
    waiting….is it a dream?....

  27. On The Black Iris (part 10):

    posted 7 months ago

    i dont know what has he started?
    waiting…. to see what he started….

  28. On The Black Iris (part 9):

    posted 7 months ago

    what kind of life is this sick man thinking of?
    waiting….. for a good explanation…

  29. On The Black Iris (part 8):

    posted 7 months ago

    argh i dont likee this man! shun the evil one!
    waiting…. for some revenge…. is it in the future?...huh….

  30. On The Black Iris (part 7):

    posted 7 months ago

    WHAT!!!!!??? his father is a real poop head. i shall never go to doctor named Thorn.
    waiting…. i’ve been warned…. almost off my seat now….

  31. On The Black Iris (part 6):

    posted 7 months ago

    yay!!! a hero emerges from the depths of moodiness.
    waiting…. who would do such a thing?...

  32. On The Black Iris (part 5):

    posted 7 months ago

    i knew it she LIVES!!!!
    waiting….. to see how bad her breath was…

    Bri: I cant believe I didnt comment to this, prolly real eager to see the rest of story. lolz. And Ah ha i knew it.

  33. On The Black Iris (part 4):

    posted 7 months ago

    geez you even make a dead girl sound really pretty. how do you do it?
    waiting….to see if she really IS dead…

  34. On The Black Iris (part 3):

    posted 7 months ago

    i love stairways your not to sure were they are headed till you get to the top. i like the winding ones.
    waiting….on the first step…

  35. On The Black Iris (part 2):

    posted 7 months ago

    i like how you said “a dark silhouette” awesomeness….. still waiting…

  36. On The Black Iris (part 1):

    posted 7 months ago

    nice begining…. im waiting on the edge of my seat….

  37. On howhardlifeis' challege! its quiz time 2:

    posted 7 months ago

    yeah you can refer back to the last post on the original. that pretty much says it all. even though you have much more to say. we luv you for that.

  38. On howhardlifeis' challege! its quiz time:

    posted 7 months ago

    yup that sounds like you but then again you are full surprises ! cuz remember u r fun size!

  39. On China Doll (part 2):

    posted 7 months ago

    yes you need to live on for all of us that love you with all our hearts.

  40. On China Doll (part 1):

    posted 7 months ago

    oh my i just want to squeeze you tight. ! i love you. gorgeous writing. just like you.

  41. On Change:

    posted 7 months ago

    i love the last line its just calls to my very soul. you just have that knack. i lurv you for that.

  42. On Always There:

    posted 7 months ago

    arrrrggggghhhhh ….. u person. you know that i would have if i had a car!!!! lurv u.

  43. On Life is...:

    posted 7 months ago

    my goodness! for someone who forgets what the heck they are going to say next you sure can put it down on paper or computer.

  44. On Shout Out to Music Lovers (LOLZ):

    posted 7 months ago

    si i watched them all…. me love till they get ragged around the edges but then they are more huggable.(bri agrees)

  45. On Expectations:

    posted 7 months ago

    i think that you were being me when you wrote this. Seriously. im not kidding. its me to a T

  46. On Rythymly Rhyming:

    posted 7 months ago

    tee hee i like the rhyming cuz that is kinda my style too ya know. very nice.

  47. On Inspiration:

    posted 7 months ago

    THANK YOU THANK YOU i am one of those friends and she is talking so highly of ME!!! lol. jk

  48. On Lies and Truths:

    posted 7 months ago

    dag ur on the ball with this one! i wish i had wrote it fiirst! HARUMPH!

  49. On He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not:

    posted 7 months ago

    oh so true and adorable. makes me think of a certain little girl i babysit. (its her fav thing to do in the summer even though she doesnt have someone to love or not.)

  50. On Secretly Secret (Part 2):

    posted 7 months ago

    good job. don’t do the usual and just quit on it. cuz i will bug u till eternity. (and u know i have that power)

  51. On Secretly Secret (Part 1):

    posted 7 months ago

    hey i like this. good begining to a story continue. me likee

  52. On I'm sorry:

    posted 7 months ago

    R-I-G-H--T ! sure. ur a nutball and u know it.

  53. On Turn It Up:

    posted 7 months ago

    ye-a-s this is bootifull! belissimo!

  54. On I'll Be There:

    posted 7 months ago

    me likee very much

  55. On This way:

    posted 8 months ago

    i agree with you a hundred percent.

  56. On I can't:

    posted 8 months ago

    this i good simple but makes an impact.

  57. On Sometime or Another:

    posted 8 months ago

    i have to admit not one of my favs. and i think you have done better but i do like the general idea.

  58. On Silently Screaming:

    posted 8 months ago

    Dag you were really mad at someone that day i can tell(obviously, im your buddy)
    i want a copy of this.

  59. On Rain:

    posted 8 months ago

    I know exactly how you feel sometimes the rain is like the only steady thing in my life. Gorgeous.

  60. On Silence:

    posted 8 months ago

    you do these poems so well. i’m jealous you have to teach me how to write like that.

  61. On Whenever:

    posted 8 months ago

    you know i luv this song. you have to teach me how to sing it the next time i c u.

  62. On A Baby-Sitter's Inspiration:

    posted 8 months ago

    this is my inspiration. I live everyday with them in mind.

  63. On What is freedom?:

    posted 8 months ago

    just stuff that i was thinking bout the other day. Were you?

  64. On Random Ramblings 2:

    posted 8 months ago

    true bout the raisins never thought of the damage factor!
    Good Show!

  65. On Random Ramblings 3:

    posted 8 months ago

    if you keep reading my stuff you REALLY must need a job,girlfriend, boyfriend or friend. Period!

  66. On My Name is Larry:

    posted 8 months ago

    my name is cameron and i am saree’s buddy i wanted to make a ficlet and here it is! I am 8 yrs old.
    (so go easy on my critisisim)

  67. On Love's Denile:

    posted 8 months ago

    You know that i lurv this one! cuz i told u that like a million times already!

  68. On The Park:

    posted 8 months ago

    Cameron, Saree’s lil Bro:
    i think that was the ….................um poopiest
    uuuummmmmmmmmmmmm… sentence ever!

  69. On The Park:

    posted 8 months ago

    Quite a lot to say for one sentence.!

  70. On Love Is The Magic Key:

    posted 9 months ago

    great song!
    (of course im guessing thats what it is.)
    dont hurt me if im wrong
    but its good
    maybe not your ultimate best but its good. u have to sing it 4 me kk?

  71. On Where Dumtree's grow:

    posted 9 months ago

    Saree: i like your new avatar. here kitty kitty kitty! this is like my 4th time reading this story.

  72. On Where Dumtree's grow:

    posted 9 months ago

    Josh L.:funny clever brilliant lyricisam but im a fan of monkeys! might you write one about monkeys? o-o a-a
    (this is not a joke)

  73. On Random Ramblings 2:

    posted 9 months ago

    Here’s another one. Thanx 4 reading it. (to all u ppl who r reading this)
    Tell me what you think! cuz u know i will!

  74. On Random Ramblings:

    posted 9 months ago

    ha ha bre ha ha

  75. On Till the End...:

    posted 9 months ago

    this is my song for my friends bre and alyssa! I luv ya amiga’s!(you can’t lose this one bre!tee hee)

  76. On Friendship:

    posted 9 months ago

    Perfecto !
    Magnific !
    Tee Hee lurv ya i FINALLY posted something you better be happy!:P

  77. On Ode to Oie:

    posted 9 months ago

    omg bre!... you didnt tell me to read this. It describes her so well! I got chocked up !

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