Save the Soccer Player, Save the World's posted comments

  1. On The Paranormal Sufferings of CJ Motley:

    posted 6 days ago

    i like it!
    and we need to talk about that ;)

    but yeah pretty good.. just more transition.. like it was kinda randomly put in there about what happens at your house

  2. On untitled- Chapter 1~part 1:

    posted about 1 month ago

    it was ok.. needs work.. but still good. u keep ur audience wanting to read more

  3. On Outlaw Cloaks (Rough Idea):

    posted about 1 month ago

    very guy-esque but still good. nice descriptions.
    now read mine except for the stupid brian one. i was very hormonal when i wrote that. lol

  4. On Clique Re-Vamped - paragraph1:

    posted about 1 year ago

    it was pretty good but it basically was a knock-off of the real thing.

  5. On Please Say Yes (The Letter):

    posted about 1 year ago

    People who write a sequel.. please write what you think his response would be. Thanks :)

  6. On Alone:

    posted about 1 year ago

    this was one of the best stories i ever heard :)

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