Karen of Mavarin's posted comments

  1. On Interest in Building:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Okay, good background. Now we need some forward movement!

  2. On Sneaky Sweatshirt Snare:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, heh, heh.

  3. On The Snag:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It will be interesting to see whether this person is capable of saying something helpful.

  4. On I found a treasure map:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Okay, I’m intrigued.

  5. On The treehouse accountant:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Even in a treehouse, it’s still all debits and credits. Will the new elevation help?

  6. On Heavenly Possession:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Now that I’ve read the prequel I understand this one better!

  7. On The Long Dark Birthday of the Soul:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow. You two have sent this spinning off in a much darker direction, but it’s good. I think I’m going to see where you take it, and later do mine as an alternative path. Keep going!

  8. On Transformation hiccup:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Ack! It’s so…so DARK! :0

  9. On He who serves all:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Intriguing start.

  10. On Smooch the Frog:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Why all the question marks?

  11. On Too much:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Dangling participle alert! Good otherwise, though. Very effective.

  12. On *They* made me write it, honest:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I was thinking of the DNA bit with Ford Prefect also. It’s still cool, though.

  13. On Warning: Never Flip This Switch:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Logical. Perfectly logica—

  14. On Titular Fun:

    posted about 1 year ago

    giggle

  15. On A Belated Confession:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hey, look, you broke it. Now you have to fix it! ;)

  16. On Pippi, Perchance, Plus Pirate Potties:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yow. Realism can be so…inconvenient, sometimes.

  17. On Do You Want to Meet a Pirate?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I sacrificed some words, added the breaks, and fixed a continuity glitch. There.

  18. On The Toaster Adventures, Parts of Toaster:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wait until he gets the bill.

  19. On The Toaster Adventures, Part Cat:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Reminds me of a Diane Duane story.

  20. On Schroedinger's Husband:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Love it. Kind of Thurberesque, with a side of Futurama.

  21. On The Toaster Adventures, Part II:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Great dialogue.

  22. On The Toaster Adventures, Part I:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, heh, heh.

  23. On Soul Alone:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Ooh. Intriguing!

  24. On When It's All Over But the Guilt:

    posted about 1 year ago

    And now it’s back on track. Maybe it’s just me.

  25. On A Clean Getaway:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is about where it gets a little dicey for me. Not quite following the action.

  26. On Home is Where the Heartstar Is:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I’m a little lost again.

  27. On Like a Troubled Bridge under Fire:

    posted about 1 year ago

    And suddenly it’s off and running!

  28. On Infiltration:

    posted about 1 year ago

    The pov in this one throws me a bit, but I like the way it builds toward the end.

  29. On Take Us to Your Leader:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Effectively done. Moving on!

  30. On Jiana's Misgivings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It’s a measure of how engrossing this is that I clicked through two more screens before remembering to go back and rate the pieces.

  31. On We Come in Peace:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Good development. Starting to get a clue….

  32. On Solar Arrival:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I’m not sure this is THE entry point, but it will do. Beginning my run.

  33. On Endings and Beginnings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I’m a little lost – I will have to read at least one or two related pieces. But I like the coined words.

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