R_M is famous for being uptight. I love to use “they” as a gender-neutral pronoun, considering the fact that there’s not another one that fits a human. Don’t worry about him. You’re pretty good at the… grotesque(in a good way, I think) descriptions.
hm…Who’s the villain? I only have to believe that it’s the Pastor, because the father has redeeming qualities. A reason. The challenge states that it must be fully evil. So I’m guessing it’s the pastor.
Very well done, beautifully written. Although… and maybe it’s me… maybe I’m stupid… or maybe you meant to have it like this… I can’t for the life of me grasp what a few lines in the middle mean.
I don’t know what to say about this. Haha if I wrote something like this it’d make Shadow paranoid. But yeah, I like the intensity and emotion put into this. Seems real, it’s amazing that it’s not.
xD hooray for Tarzan to hop in and add randomness! And you’re still Dalek horny. I personally have a fangirl’s crush on both David Tennant and the character he plays. =crazy grin=
I like how you’re not making us see it, you’re having us smell it, taste it, hear it. I love this. It’s brilliant. I wonder why you’re not better known.
OCD sucks. It just does. My friend has it and when she gets the compulsions it’s terrible. She won’t do anything because “it’s just not rightly done.” But yeah, OCD is a serious disease, I like the idea you had with the picture. YOu’re very creative.
I would never have thought this up from this. And I just now noticed the bird on his shoulder. I love this, I don’t think I can find anything wrong with it. Zeus needs to help him now! Way to go, I seem to have not quite noticed you until now. I searched Greek and found this piece of brilliance. Off to read your other Ficlets!
I was using a wiffle ball, and when I was outside getting inspiration for this ficlet, mine landed in the pool and made a very—VERY— small splash, but it splashed nonetheless.
This is great, I don’t know why you thought it was terrible. It stayed almost songlike and I like the “Oh, and yeah, you. You’re cool.” Sounds like something my friend’s boyfriend wrote for her.(Not accusing you of plagarism, just pointing out the coincidence.)
Hun(don’t be alarmed, I call everyone hun), you are definitely a poet. Far as I see, you’re very talented. In everything, actually. The epic was easy to follow, the poem was good. The rhythm was a little off, but maybe that’s me. Poems have to have rhythm to me. I want to be able to read them out loud and not have to rush some words and have long pauses between others.
This is good so far. I’m moving on to read the next one, although I think “baited” should be “bated” like “abated” only without the a. Baited says that they were trying to lure their breath.
Great sequel to Stovo’s story, keeping the personalities of characters well, which is hard to do, in my opinion. Congratulations on the eye-grabbing title.
I’m thoroughly confused. Too many pronouns, and like Ana said, you should have shown, not told. What if all of us wrote that way? This would be long since a dead site.
Creepy, yet beautiful. I like the strain of the one who is going through this, although I seriously hope that it isn’t autobiographical. Brilliance, great choice of words.
WOW. Sounds like something I’d do if I wanted a divorce. I’m violent enough with my friends when they do something stupid(Kitty Pom-Pom knows that) if my husband was that kind of idiot I’d end up doing that.
o.o the e was the result of typing at a startling pace from something I had scrawled the night before right before I fell asleep. So sorry. I fixed it.
Thank you for thanking me. And yes. It’s true. But I got a permit to burn down a building(for demoliton purposes, DON’T CALL ME A CRIMINAL) with some clever wording.
There’s a thingy… theory that says JtR was a mason. it’s weird. Anyway. Good story, maybe the guy’s a masonic killer? Maybe it was a prostitute? Dunno. Just my ideas. Loved it!
Eight pounds of pressure to pull an ear off. It’s a useful fact in stories. I loved the imaging, and the entrance of the janitor. I think it was the janitor. Is it the janitor? The only thing that kinda bugged me is that the janitor had my boyfriend’s name. But you couldn’t help that. Keep ‘em comin.
Very insightful. I just might have to get a Twister game. I hope Twister pays you because they’re getitng money because of you. xD I loved your ficlet.
oh. wow. I didn’t wanna rate this, I really really didn’t, because I couldn’t come up with a rating, but too late. I’d clicked. four stars, I guess. good story. Very expressive.
Hm.. now that I think about it, Kermit’s right(For once, nah, just foolin’ with ya KG). Too many rules, it’s like you’re making us follow ONE straight path, instead of taking our twists and turns that we do so enjoy taking. You do kind of seem condescending.
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