MeAndTheMoon's posted comments

  1. On some books should be left unopened:

    posted 2 months ago

    i like this a lot made me start to feel her emotions

  2. On Macy 15: Waiting:

    posted 2 months ago

    This is a really awesome series. The interactions are very realistic. I’m intrigued

  3. On Transfer Student:

    posted 3 months ago

    I don’t know. I realize this doesn’t completely flow with the prequel but I guess I kind of continued my story but with the idea of the papers falling from gemminx

  4. On You've Got Mail: (Alternate Movie Ending Challenge):

    posted 3 months ago

    I don’t think this ending would work for the actual movie, but for a ficlet it does because it’s a creative and interesting twist.

  5. On Star Wars: Return of the Jedi (Alternate Movie Ending Challenge):

    posted 3 months ago

    The only part I don’t like of this is the last phrase “we have a galaxy to run”... sounds a little cheesy to me. But that’s just being too picky, and overall it’s very well written and I agree more realistic.

  6. On Star Wars: Return of the Jedi (Alternate Movie Ending Challenge):

    posted 3 months ago

    The only part I don’t like of this is the last phrase “we have a galaxy to run”... sounds a little cheesy to me. But that’s just being too picky, and overall it’s very well written and I agree more realistic.

  7. On The Death of a Franchise:

    posted 3 months ago

    This is really good. It’s so funny to think about how if movies were real life, they wouldn’t even get out of the gate.

  8. On Case Study:

    posted 3 months ago

    I like this a lot. It’s an awesome twist although I’m not sure what the twist is yet.

  9. On For A Loved One:

    posted 3 months ago

    Thanks guys, and you got the message right.

  10. On This Dress:

    posted 3 months ago

    ok first of all to robotech, there aren’t any paragraphs to this ficlet i just started a new line for every sentence, it’s just a form that i like to use so sorry if you found it difficult to read.
    secondly to invisibility, THANKS! I love it to, and soco in general for that matter they are so amazing!

  11. On 000:

    posted 4 months ago

    i think something is wrong ccuz some of your stories like this one just come up as numbers, this one is all 000000 and another one is all 444444

  12. On Why I Hate Flying:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m not really scared of flying actually. I do it all the time it’s just whenever there is turbulence i start thinking about how awful it would be to crash

  13. On Cuban Smoke:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like it! cuz, it’s not like he didn’t feel anything for her, but it’s also not like he’s desperately aching for her either. classic guy haha

  14. On uselessness's DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!:

    posted 6 months ago

    i can’t wait for the results!

  15. On Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like the idea of being trapped by emotions instead of being physically trapped, but i could have used a little more serious of a struggle.

  16. On a very specific challenge...:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hey! I’m glad you like my entry. I really enjoyed this one it was whimsical

  17. On the person i need you to be:

    posted 6 months ago

    i really like the way you worded this. And your weeme looks exactly like you! haha

  18. On Car Meets Girl:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like it! good sequelling

  19. On Backless Chaps:

    posted 6 months ago

    i really like the diction in this. it sounds like a kid’s thoughts…like catcher in the rye kind of perspective. very nice

  20. On (I'm in the mode for love CHALLENGE) Hot Robod:

    posted 6 months ago

    hah sweet. i love this challenge

  21. On Hit or Miss (desperate monologue challange):

    posted 6 months ago

    yea, i wanted more story too but since i had to keep it to the person’s thoughts it was tricky. because when you’re panicking you are never like telling yoruself the story of what’s happening in your head. if i write a sequel it will definitely have more info

  22. On [CHALLENGE] I'M IN THE MODE FOR LOVE:

    posted 6 months ago

    thanks for doing this, it was one of my most fun ficlets to write! hope you don’t hate it

  23. On Matt:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like this story. it’s very cute and sounds like real life happening. the entries could be a little longer

  24. On Stovohobo Turns Thirteen:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like you thoughts. i think that you change and develop a lot after you turn thirteen, but at the sale time i think that by the time you are a teenager it’s good to have at least figured out who you’d like to be. it is probably not who you are now and it may not be who you end up as, but to at least be forming serious goals and having in mind a realistic ideal of what you want the future to look like

  25. On His Bed:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like it! i want background info

  26. On Unravelled :

    posted 7 months ago

    thanks i hate spelling errors and i’m a horrible typist so i need all the help i can get

  27. On An Artist's End:

    posted 9 months ago

    don’t know why i’m being so dark today, i’m in a good mood. :) oh well

  28. On Stokholm Syndrome:

    posted 9 months ago

    yep that’s it. it comes from a bank robbery in stockolm where that happened

  29. On The Weirdest Challenge I've ever Read (and I'm the one that Thought it Up, Too):

    posted 9 months ago

    i was a jerk and used up 2 terms, hope that’s ok!

  30. On Elegiac Kennings (elegy and kennings):

    posted 9 months ago

    ok, so an elegy is a piece of literature that expresses sorrow over loss in the past. and kennings are metaphoric compound words. Both are characteristics of old English literature.
    A raven-harvest is a corpse
    A blood-ember is an axe
    And brow-stars are eyes.
    sooo yeah i used 2 rare techniques

  31. On Hide and Seek:

    posted 9 months ago

    I’m not really sure if it’s a game or not, I must admit

  32. On You gotta get the bear before the bear gets you:

    posted 9 months ago

    sweet! i really like this, it may be my fav of your poems!

  33. On I want to save you:

    posted 10 months ago

    there’s so few of them, but you can’t see there’s so many…so many demons to overcome. i hope it all works out. sigh

  34. On P for Pendetta:

    posted 10 months ago

    hahaha love the end!

  35. On Sasha Sure Can Count [to ten]:

    posted 10 months ago

    hey, i like this a lot! i love when people sequel me but leave it open so i can still write my own sequel. thanks!

  36. On That place you go:

    posted 10 months ago

    Makes me think of autumn…i love it

  37. On That Kiss:

    posted 10 months ago

    thanks for the constructive critisism, i think you’re right.

  38. On no title:

    posted 10 months ago

    sequel please!!!!

  39. On Disney & Pixar Allude to Other Movies in Theirs:

    posted 10 months ago

    so clever!

  40. On That Kiss:

    posted 10 months ago

    wow! i wasn’t even planning a sequel! i’ll have to do some thinking…if anyone wants to help me out be my guest

  41. On Angst of a kitten:

    posted 10 months ago

    don’t i know it! haha

  42. On Autumn Letters:

    posted 10 months ago

    i like “broken fetters”

  43. On Live 'Til We Don't:

    posted 11 months ago

    I love this one. Have you ever listened to Regina Spektor? one of her songs, On The Radio has a part that isn’t exactly your poem but very similar.

  44. On Science Fiction...ey (Part 2):

    posted 11 months ago

    I like this a lot! while i also prefer star wars, something about this is rather trekky but it doesn’t take away from the cool factor.
    Color me amused

  45. On The War Begins:

    posted 11 months ago

    wow i am reeeeaaalllyyy hooked on these stories. i can’t wait for the next one!

  46. On Would you?:

    posted 11 months ago

    haha i’m sry but when i saw this title i started thinking of that song in singin in the rain where they’re like “and if that girl were i, would you…would you?”
    great ficlet tho very adorable

  47. On Darwin:

    posted 11 months ago

    I really like it! Randomness is bliss

  48. On The Actor Who Smacked Her:

    posted 11 months ago

    in reply to Masked….whoo?

  49. On New Friends:

    posted 11 months ago

    awwwww his friends are the flowers!!! hehehe

  50. On Slain (cont'd):

    posted 12 months ago

    I want to know the whole story too!

  51. On Medicine:

    posted 12 months ago

    NO YOU DON’T!!! hahahahahahaha that is ironic, I admit, but I actually resurrected this from an old notebook. I can’t believe you actually think i would write a poem about someone giving me mono! COME NOW!

  52. On 10 miles:

    posted 12 months ago

    wow you’re right, those sequels don’t have to do with ANYTHING! great story on your part tho :)

  53. On love is:

    posted 12 months ago

    very lovely :)

  54. On The Firmament Cracked:

    posted 12 months ago

    I don’t know how to describe this, but it’s really awesome. Thank you for being dissatisfied enough with God to write it :)

  55. On Great Me-Maw:

    posted 12 months ago

    HAHA wow i like it a lot. i guess a lady who could handle kiwi skin would be able to predict her own death.

  56. On Fault in the Choice:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is actually my favorite in this series. It so perfectly mirrors what it feels like to realize not only that you’ve made a wrong choice, but that it’s going to have long lasting consequences

  57. On One kiss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    i read this right after i wrote mine and i was like wow even here our minds think alike. i like the question who will it be?

  58. On Cute Rabbit Story:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I imagine tall kid to be rather gangly and awkward. And short kid to be chubby and a little bit slow. I like it when in so few words I can get such clear mental pictures.

  59. On Kelly Preston:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I’ve never heard of a guy named Kelly. But that’s ok I like your work :) a lot!

  60. On Hate me:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I know exactly what this is supposed to mean, but that’s cuz i know you :)

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