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On Grammar Police:

posted 17 days ago

Brilliant. I’m too tired to come up with a better comment, but I felt I ought to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed this, and it sounds like the beginning of some awesome series.
On How I eat brains:

posted 17 days ago

This made me chuckle out loud. This is especially fitting, what with this new zombie-fixation in pop culture lately.
I wish my cable got the zombie food network…
On A Mommy Misses Her Imagination:

posted 28 days ago

Sigh. So many times I look at the little kids around my house and feel the same thing (trouble is, I’m only 18, and should still have some imagination). When did we lose our imagination? How come kids can have such vivid ones, but as you get older, it just fades away?
I’m so nostalgic now, lol.
On Took the Risk:

posted 28 days ago

At least you took the risk, instead of forever wondering ‘what if?’. Chalk it up to another life experience, grow and learn from it, let it mold you a little. That’s all you can do.
On Nostalgia:

posted 28 days ago

No. Or maybe I don’t know. I just had to urge to write a ficlet, and it turned into some pile of rant. I am ashamed, lol.
On Let Me Fall:

posted about 1 month ago

Sounds like there is an interesting back story to this.
You weren’t by any chance inspired by the Cirque du Soleil song of the same name, were you?
On Peripheral Evil: Part 33 The Wise Men Get a Clue:

posted 2 months ago

Eddie and Chakatreatmentson have now made it onto my list of ‘most-entertaining-people-I’ve-encountered-on-the-internet’ list.
Bravo.
On Sorry?:

posted 2 months ago

I’m missing you. But it doesn’t change anything. Sorry.

I read this and immediately thought “Twilight”, which then immediately changed the context of the story for me. Not sure if that is what you intended, but it got me thinking in terms of the book.
But any way you look at it, it’s a good ficlet. It’s honest and raw, and I like that.
On So I dumped my girlfriend:

posted 2 months ago

When I finished reading this, immediately the character’s voice popped into my head saying “Shallow lover, eh? How do you like this for depth?”
On The Legend of Áhasêstse’ó Falls, Part 5 [Epic Poem Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Oh. My. Goodness.
This is perhaps the most beautiful thing I’ve read of yours. I love it. I absolutely do. It really feels old and retold a thousand times. And I love the repetition of the actions of between the characters, it really adds something. Sort of like, even though they’re enemies, they all feel the same thing and it ties them together. Beautiful.
Bravo!
On The Legend of Áhasêstse’ó Falls, Part 5 [Epic Poem Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Oh. My. Goodness.
This is perhaps the most beautiful thing I’ve read of yours. I love it. I absolutely do. It really feels old and retold a thousand times. And I love the repetition of the actions of between the characters, it really adds something. Sort of like, even though they’re enemies, they all feel the same thing and it ties them together. Beautiful.
Bravo!
On Epic Failure:

posted 2 months ago

Wow, I never thought of that until Mighty-Joe pointed it out…
Anyways, I had been expecting the start of some epic series here, with a coded message for saving humanity on the papers or something. But this was funny! Very Hermione-esque.
On Explaining Death to the Youngins:

posted 2 months ago

Oh wonderful! I love how you’ve brought Ana’s series into this.
On Tensions Rising:

posted 2 months ago

Ok, I must say, the three tags you have chosen for r this piece crack me up. “Is that a gun in your pocket, or are you just happy to see me?”
On The Sanctity of Marriage (Diabolical Villain Challenge):

posted 2 months ago

When I first started this, I thought it might have been from the mother’s POV. I just sensed some motherly-instinctive going on. But I think I like it better being the father taking revenge. All in all a tense, well-portrayed story. I’m really hating this pastor.
On Death Distraught By an Angel:

posted 2 months ago

Beautiful. I love how compassionate and human you’ve made Death, and I love how you showed his inner struggle and desperation. Especially in the line Oh, why this angel, why this cry, why this night?
On Home:

posted 2 months ago

One thing in this otherwise through-provoking and deep piece of writing: the first sentence feels like it needs a couple of breaks.
Very good point made here though. I think a lot of people ask themselves these questions.
On A Crime Beyond Atonement:

posted 2 months ago

Wow, expressing what I needed to in the space I had was difficult. I really hope this conveyed enough of the emotion and tone.
On A Picture of Failure:

posted 2 months ago

I really liked this. His hope and anxiety for people to get the message. His defeat when they didn’t. It’s very easy to relate to – be you an artist or not – because I think we’ve all been there.
On Gitarzan, he's a guitar man:

posted 2 months ago

“aluminum alien abomination of apocalyptic alliterations”...Brilliance.
The last few lines make me think of a Hulk-ish figure. “GRAAAWR!! KRULLTAR ANGRYYY!”
On Death and Acquiescence:

posted 2 months ago

I like how Death describes people’s souls depending on how much life they have lived. The old woman’s soul was “light and feathery”, while Andre’s in “heavy with days unlived”. I’m really digging how perceptive and introspective you have made Death. It’s very thought-provoking and touching at times.
On Death and the City:

posted 2 months ago

Clever portrayal of a day in the life of Death (wow, that was ironic). I’m in concurrence with BARomero about the Family Guy version. It just makes in funnier.
On The Table:

posted 2 months ago

Ha, oh wow. I bet it’d be great for business though: “New Special Elixerccino! It’ll perk you up in no time!”
On Last Night a Drag Queen Saved My Life:

posted 2 months ago

Well damn. I need to hang around more places like this.
Very entertaining read.
On G2 Goes Out With A Bang or Music to Krulltar's Ears:

posted 2 months ago

Alliteration makes me all giddy inside. And I’m with Stovo in wondering what the heck the plot is anymore.
Sweet stuff that I’m in the game now though. I love dancing.
On On the Road to Anywhere but Here:

posted 2 months ago

Lol. No Ana, I am not quite that brave enough. But perhaps someday.
On Vagabond Buddha:

posted 2 months ago

You know, I thought about writing a sequel to my original, but couldn’t quite figure out what to say in it. This…wow…this is pretty much what I was looking for.
I actually felt something. Congratulations on that.
On Don't Go to Work Today:

posted 2 months ago

You can tell something was obviously going to happen at work, but that last line…..that was just eerie.
On Don't Go to Work Today:

posted 2 months ago

You can tell something was obviously going to happen at work, but that last line…..that was just eerie.
On Anna Foiled By An Ill Timed Compliment:

posted 2 months ago

Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. The compliment itself was obviously the best part. But I also liked Baroness of Bad-ass as well.
On Teenage Dictionary: The Twilight Edition (Yep, I went there.):

posted 2 months ago

“Oh my Edward!”
Ha, I have a feeling that one’s gonna slip out of me next time I have an OMG moment.
But I was always partial to Jacob, honestly.
On Double Agent:

posted 2 months ago

Making out, double agents, and guns in churches? Yeah, I’d say it’s pretty corrupt. I like that the lovely Latina woman now has a name.
My only critique is that in an earlier ficlet, you had Helena running out into the street, and now the two are back in the cathedral. A minor detail that doesn’t really upset the flow, but it had me a bit confused.
On The Most Secure Place on the Planet:

posted 2 months ago

This totally sounds like Kung-Fu Panda. “Skidoosh!”
Awesome description of the setup of the prison. I like how the last line almost downplays the reaction of the public, it sounds sort of casual.
On The Business of Indulgence:

posted 2 months ago

So this has taken an interesting turn. I feel like this is an excellent launch pad for the remainder of an awesome series.
On Teenage Word Dictionary 2008:

posted 2 months ago

Completely hilarious. I just got finished reading most of the following entries, and found myself chuckling quite a bit. I know a lot of these are commonly used, but a few I was surprised to see used by people other than my friends! Now I’m at a loss to know where these originated from.
On Ana's Excellent Adventure in Ficlet-Land [Wonderful World of Ficlets Challenge]:

posted 2 months ago

Yes, a big thank you to penquincaptain18. You bring such wonderful and fresh writing to the site. I know that personally, your ideas and writing have been an inspiration of sorts when I’m stuck with my writing, and I’m sure I’m not alone
On Trees Below the Castle in the Air:

posted 2 months ago

Psst. You got sequel.
On Remember the Lies:

posted 2 months ago

Agreed with Ana. Until the end, you can sympathize with the narrator. But there comes a time when you realize that, not only your parents, but all parents tell such lies to their children. But most of the time, is it to give them hope and inspire them to become something. The effort he did not put forth was his own failing, not his parents.

All in all a good read from a very interesting perspective. I do like the dark turn, it’s very real-life.
On Experimental Ficlet #45:

posted 2 months ago

Amazing imagery. It’s such a lonely scene, both sad and hopeful.
On Experimental ficlet #44:

posted 2 months ago

“Milky bedroom skin”? Nice. Now I know who to model my writing after to avoid cliches.
On Equal Exchange:

posted 2 months ago

Love it! Traitorous heart...I like that expression.
Perfectly left open for a sequel, too. I’ll have to get to that after IHOP if no one else has by that time. I wonder what is it he wants?
On Anything to rid me of this Local Jerk:

posted 2 months ago

Wow! Definitely did not see that coming. Wonderful twist you have now added.
I can’t resist sequelling.
On Getting Into Character:

posted 2 months ago

Ah, Krulltar beat me to the bit about Heath Ledger, it reminded me of the same. Apparently, it is possible to get sort of lost in your character. (And Heath was never addicted to heroin, but he was on quite a few prescriptions for the anxiety and insomnia).
Anyways, This was a good read. It would be kind of cool to see from his point of view how he started getting stuck “in character” and the things that it did to him.
On A History Of Violins:

posted 2 months ago

I didn;t understand what was going on a first, the main character seemed so casual about an intruder. But then I picked up the idea.
Very suspenseful, I’m loving it. It would be nice to know everything that went down leading up to this moment.
On So, One Time at Band Camp...:

posted 2 months ago

Haha, I love the descriptions of the songs. And, being a former band-camper, I can definitely relate to this. Very fun read.
On The Facility:

posted 2 months ago

Excellent. It makes you wonder what is really going on in this facility (i assume a nursing home of some sort).
Glad that she decided not to leave him. Nursing homes aren’t so great in my opinion, even if they look like paradise.
On The Cathedral:

posted 2 months ago

A wordless braille, language without meaning.
Favorite line. I really liked the way you conveyed how much time has passed by, and the old, yet alive feeling of the building.
On Dandelion:

posted 2 months ago

Oh yes, that was supposed to be _hi_lighted, not lighted. There must have been some kind of typo or nixing because of character count or something. All fixed now!
And I’ve never heard that song before, but I’m going to look it up now. I’m curious.
On Odd Clouds at Morning:

posted 2 months ago

Amazing that this is the story line you got from the picture. You have a pretty spiffy imagination.
And I agree with the others: someone who has more motivation than us should sequel it.
On On Mid-July:

posted 3 months ago

Once again, pens, you manage to blow me away with your writing. I love the feel of this, especially the second paragraph. Perfectly depicted summer moments and thoughts, every phrase precise and meaningful. Absolutely beautiful work. Bravo!
On I'll Be There For You [Sing-Song Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Wow. This definitely hit some emotional chords.
Perhaps she did know that the narrator was there for her, but maybe it just wasn’t enough for her. There was just too much for another person to hold together.
That’s what I got from this, anyways.
Her mother’s tearful sobs attacked me through the receiver.
Best line, I think.
On The End:

posted 3 months ago

I only “stumbled” onto this piece because of your recent ficlet, with the contrary title.
Interesting, beautiful, emotional, descriptive…pretty much what we all strive for on this site with each post. Basically, you did a superb job of setting an example for us to follow. I’m pretty grateful that such a beginning, and such a place ever came into existence. Right on, Kev.
On Perkins Always Dies Twice or Kevin Lawver must die.:

posted 3 months ago

Goodness, every single thing bout this page was entertaining. This series and the comments it generates keep me in non-disolvable stitches.
On Why Nobody's Ever Asked Me That:

posted 3 months ago

It’s 1:23 in the morning, and yes, I did stay up to finish reading this.
But it was definitely worth it. My chuckle was steady as a choo-choo throughout. Love it! I’m going to miss these characters. You three ought to get together and collaborate some more, your mental synchronizing was astounding (and quite hilarious). Bravo!
On Lu's Maiden Voyage (At Long Last):

posted 3 months ago

Quicker than Jameson could say, “Don’t tase me, bro!”
That reference had me cracking up. Hopefully, Jameson isn’t as big of an ass as that guy. I’m going to have to start reading this series, it looks good.
On Touring with Tom:

posted 3 months ago

Ooh, I’m very intrigued. this sort of reminds me of the scene in “Bruce Almighty” when he first meets God in an empty building. Heh, if that’s the case her, this sounds like my kind of God.
But in all seriousness, I’m interested to see where this goes. Especially with a warning like the one given previously!
On Set the World on Fire:

posted 3 months ago

Somehow, I can’t believe I’ve only read 1024 characters. It seems like this says so much more than that.
Your descriptions were beautiful, as always, and driving scenes are definitely your thing.
I like this line : “Out here between midnight and morning, we are no one and we are everyone.” I love that feeling.
On I Don't Know, Frankie:

posted 3 months ago

How incredibly true. And you know, you don’t even notice that you don’t notice things most of the time. Like so many other things, approaching death should not be the time when you start to see.
Very sad, but very beautiful ficlet.
On The Sexy Mistress Elsha Claims a Gorf.:

posted 3 months ago

“I’d bet my foreskin on it.”
“Aren’t you a jew?”
Brilliance. I found myself having to suppress my laughter in order not to wake the household.
Keep it up! I’m eager to see what becomes of the Ficlet community now that it’s every man for himself.
On Anna Cristina's New Pic The Poem.:

posted 3 months ago

Oh my. I’m definitely going to have to agree with Perkins: you’ve got some cojones, brother. Big ‘uns, for sure, haha.
But I doubt she’ll mind. How could you not take this as a compliment? Especially coming from someone fond of leopard print…anything, let alone thongs.
On The Longer Aisle:

posted 3 months ago

This could make for a wonderful drama, if you intend to keep it going (which I wish you would! We have to see what happens).
Anyway, I really like this. You can really feel how torn and hurt she is, whether through her own actions or his, I don’t know.
On Pulmonary Orchestra:

posted 3 months ago

The title of this piece gave me the impression that perhaps the heartbeats of the different people would be different, but harmonious and synchronized, like an orchestra. But I guess it’s kind of the same thing.
I’d like to know how they figure 13 days from the heartbeats. This is a very novel idea. You’ve definitely hooked my interest. Keep going!
On The New Moon:

posted 3 months ago

I totally agree with everyone. You ought to keep writing something, be it a continuation of this, Edward’s past, or anything. I’ve just recently finished the series for the first time, and I’m suffering the beginnings of the withdrawals. I need more Twilight goodness!
On What did you just say? [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]:

posted 3 months ago

Ha! I didn’t get what was wrong at first, until i reread it a second time. I couldn’t help but to chuckle.
I wonder what kind of return policy came with the ring?
On A Date to the Eagle Site:

posted 3 months ago

Awesome look into the future. You had me thinking it was some desert dune-buggy ride at first.
“Only fifty stars.” I thought imperialism had just about ended by the 21st century?
On Slug of Oil & a Shiny Dame:

posted 3 months ago

“Ancient, 20th century.” Love it. And yes, the interfacing fantasy bit was a good chuckle.
On Foreign Hands:

posted 3 months ago

How beautifully tragic that she can no longer recognize her own hands without his. As if they had grown to be so much a part of each other that now, looking at her hands, herself, as being a separate entity, is too strange.
On Should i be me?:

posted 3 months ago

I love how perfectly this poem expresses longing to have someone back. And I love that you addressed the ways in which a person can communicate so much by not saying a word at all, because that, I think, is the main way we communicate ourselves.
Bravo.
On Nighttime Ruminations on Love Present & Past [poem(s)]:

posted 3 months ago

Far beyond five stars if I could! This was absolutely beautiful. I loved everything about the poem, but especially the second part. I’m not sure I can pick just one fantastically described line in this to be my favorite.
On Portrait [Paint a Picture Challenge!]:

posted 3 months ago

I love the flow of this, much like the brush itself over canvas. I especially like the “lofty tower of intellect” bit.
On The Year is 3090:

posted 4 months ago

Amazing imagery, and a novel description of a post-war/bomb/revolution world.
On Infatuation is a delicate dish. [poem]:

posted 4 months ago

Bloody brilliant. Described so richly, decadently, and truly. (And sexily too because, well, we all know honey is just…sexy).

The last stanza is the best part.
On That Soylent Green moment:

posted 4 months ago

Brilliant. I never really thought about it like that, but it does make sense.
Would you like fries with that?
Perfect closing line.
On Happily Toujours After:

posted 4 months ago

I’ve taken the time to read this series from beginning to end tonight. I must say it was beyond 100 percent worth it, and I loved every minute of it!
It’s one of those stories that makes you “in love with love”, so to speak.
On Footprints 2: The Quickening:

posted 4 months ago

I love this! I love when people get ballsy and blasphemous. And who’d have thought there would be a need to sequel the “Footprints” poem?
Five stars.
On The Out-of-Order Challenge!:

posted 4 months ago

Wow, I was actually thinking about writing a story story like this the other day. I’ll definitely have to get to this.

Congrats on 500!
On Splat [just.to.say.challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

This was highly amusing and made me chuckle aloud. Excellent subject. Especially now since school is nearing the end.
On No second chances:

posted 4 months ago

So very relateable. I like the way you showed the bitterness turning her callous.
On PBBT's Soundtrack Challenge:

posted 4 months ago

Five stars simply for the Damien Rice choice.
That was the first song I ever heard by him, and then I was smitten!
On The Present:

posted 4 months ago

How completely let down she must feel after this. To think that her husband was growing in love with her more, and wanting to surprise her with a gift. But it turned out to be for the baby, and not actually her birthday. Which then might mean that her husband is merely in love with his unborn child now, and not any more in love with her than he was.
On Conspiracy in the Castle in the Air:

posted 4 months ago

Thought I’d take a shot at this. Hope you don’t mind! If you do, or if it doesn’t flow with what you guys already have, do feel free to brush it aside and continue what you were doing.
On One Wish [I AM... Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

“I am torn asunder by your oblivion.” and “I am set adrift in the sea of your indifference.” are my favorite lines. This was such a heart-wrenching and real description of wanting what you can’t have.
On Gabrielle's Secrets in the Castle in the Air:

posted 4 months ago

Ah! This is becoming so suspenseful! Such an addictive series. I’d love to join in, but I fear my imagination won’t be able to keep up with yours and kwatz’s.
On Rainbows:

posted 5 months ago

Wonderful idea. I love how you chose to express emotion through colors. Tell me, is this a series you plan to continue on your own, or is it open to anyone else to continue?
On Forgive me, love.:

posted 5 months ago

Sigh. so this had originally been like, 300-something characters over the limit, and I had to do some severe shortening.

I hope I still got the message across strongly enough. Please excuse the somewhat choppy-ness.
On Janie, Janie (This is Just to Say):

posted 5 months ago

You definitely deserved the award for this. Even as I read it for about, I don’t know, the fifth or sixth time, it makes my eyes water. Bravo.
On A Great High (One More Word Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

It’s amazing how vividly you described everything, while still sticking to the requirements of the challenge.
It really felt like the world was turning an inch a second, and melting into some crazy trip.
On The Game (One More Word Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

I think everything I would have said for this has already been said. It made me laugh out loud, seriously.
On Janie, Janie (This is Just to Say):

posted 5 months ago

Wow. This definitely struck some emotional chords. You certainly have a knack for tapping into such raw feelings.

5 stars all the way!
On If you listen closely...:

posted 5 months ago

This is exactly what they all say to make it easier. But you revealed what people are really screaming inside in a creative way.

Awesome.
On Forbidden Fruit [poem]:

posted 5 months ago

This was absolutely lovely! Nothing else seemed to matter in that moment, not even time. A wonderful capturing of the chemistry between two people.
On Shades of Grey:

posted 5 months ago

I really liked this. I could really feel his emotions and his thought.

The only thing that might have enhanced this though, is if you described more about her color, like her eyes, or lips, or some other feature.
On He'll Remember Me Forever:

posted 6 months ago

Wow. Definitely didn’t see that one coming. It’s sad that that was what he thought was the only way.

Good story.
On This ficlet contains vivid descriptions of pornographic acts:

posted 6 months ago

Ha! I knew I was not the only one with this problem!

They really should fix that. Stale, useless drafts take up too much space.
On On Innocence:

posted 9 months ago

Oh yes, this is the truth and the rule we all try so desperately to deny and suppress.

But really, life is far better when we ignore the rules, yes?
On 5 Things That You Never Knew About Stovohobo (You Know What? 6 Just for the Sake of Non-Conformity):

posted 9 months ago

Ha! I think about the exact same thing in number two! All of the time.
Or more often, fantasize about what i would do in a situation similar to LOST.
On On the Edge of Everything (Six Ficlet Challenge):

posted 9 months ago

This series was truly amazing. It felt so much longer than it actually was though, like years…

Is she digging because he buried the ring? We never really find out for sure…
On Concious Subconcious:

posted 10 months ago

I hate having to cut out punctuation for the sake of fitting it all in a ficlet.

Ah well. If it must be done…
On Throwing Dreams out the Window:

posted 10 months ago

Pens, I think I am in love with your words. No lie.

I only wish that my mind could be as uninhibited as this, and able to form itself into coherent sentences.
On Falling Into Abyss:

posted 10 months ago

Intriguing. I have no idea how you got the alley scene and plot out of this picture, lol.
On Straight out of the Rain:

posted 11 months ago

I felt every single emotion when I read this. Nice work. A story hasn’t stirred me like this in quite some time.
On Ana Cristina, or The Royal Princess of Hialeah:

posted 12 months ago

A lot of people don’t like their names when they are younger. I think we have to grow into them, like an over sized sweater. Or grow around them in the way trees do to old buildings, until they are a part of us.
On Ascension :

posted about 1 year ago

Either I’m having severe deja vu, or I’ve read this before. I’m almost certain it has to be the latter.
Have you written this before?
On Damien and Jakob: City Streets:

posted about 1 year ago

On the contrary, I thought it was pretty well described. Especially the “vulnerable skull” line.

Loving the tone.
On Imaginary Friend:

posted about 1 year ago

“True love never waits.”
That’s something to think about, there.
On I want you forever:

posted about 1 year ago

Perfect expression of emotion.
On The Lowest Form Of Literature (Except Maybe When Kafka Does It):

posted about 1 year ago

I think it’s safe to say this is one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here. I love the nonsensicalness of it. Very creative use of the picture, too.
On Riding Your Thumb:

posted about 1 year ago

This was absolutely beautiful. I love the analogy here, you described it all wonderfully.

Emotionally, I’m at a loss for words.
On Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 5.:

posted about 1 year ago

Because really, that’s all she cared about. Not his chaotic life, but her accomplishing progress in him.

Do keep the series going.
On Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.:

posted about 1 year ago

The second to the last sentence is the best. I love this story, and how in the midst of hopelessness your character still maintains a sardonic humor.
On Here I Dreamt I Was In Europe:

posted about 1 year ago

In that case, I’d like to go to Europe too.
On What I love about kidney stones.:

posted about 1 year ago

I thought this was hilarious. Especially the line “Peeing. It’s Fantastic.”
On When I See You:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s needs more sentence variety. Bit choppy at times.
But, all over a really sweet story. I’m loving the last sentence.

(p.s. flugelhorn is beast)
On oh, Love:

posted about 1 year ago

I absolutely love the use of alliteration in this, and the feeling of desperate longing to be part of Love.
On When You're in my Head:

posted about 1 year ago

Every single sentence of this is as familiar as the back of my hand, blue eyes and everything. Wonderful.
On A Scene from the Balcony of the Tower:

posted about 1 year ago

Definitely one of the best endings I’ve ever read.

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On A Mommy Misses Her Imagination:

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On Let Me Fall:

On Peripheral Evil: Part 33 The Wise Men Get a Clue:

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On So I dumped my girlfriend:

On The Legend of Áhasêstse’ó Falls, Part 5 [Epic Poem Challenge]:

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On Epic Failure:

On Explaining Death to the Youngins:

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On The Sanctity of Marriage (Diabolical Villain Challenge):

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On A Crime Beyond Atonement:

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On Gitarzan, he's a guitar man:

On Death and Acquiescence:

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On G2 Goes Out With A Bang or Music to Krulltar's Ears:

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On Teenage Dictionary: The Twilight Edition (Yep, I went there.):

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On Ana's Excellent Adventure in Ficlet-Land [Wonderful World of Ficlets Challenge]:

On Trees Below the Castle in the Air:

On Remember the Lies:

On Experimental Ficlet #45:

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On Equal Exchange:

On Anything to rid me of this Local Jerk:

On Getting Into Character:

On A History Of Violins:

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On I'll Be There For You [Sing-Song Challenge]:

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On Perkins Always Dies Twice or Kevin Lawver must die.:

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On The New Moon:

On What did you just say? [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]:

On A Date to the Eagle Site:

On Slug of Oil & a Shiny Dame:

On Foreign Hands:

On Should i be me?:

On Nighttime Ruminations on Love Present & Past [poem(s)]:

On Portrait [Paint a Picture Challenge!]:

On The Year is 3090:

On Infatuation is a delicate dish. [poem]:

On That Soylent Green moment:

On Happily Toujours After:

On Footprints 2: The Quickening:

On The Out-of-Order Challenge!:

On Splat [just.to.say.challenge]:

On No second chances: