Hunting Beauty's posted comments

  1. On A Favor With Strings Attached:

    posted 2 months ago

    You guys never cease to amaze me with these ficlets of yours. Sassy is killin me tho. The way she thinks she can just force Jameson to forget Prandi and go for Becca is rediculous.

  2. On Buckle Up!:

    posted 3 months ago

    This is really good. I can’t wait for the next sequel.

  3. On Plenty Of Attention:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. Yes I agree that it’s kind of funny to hear a teacher complain about homework.

  4. On Plenty Of Attention:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree. Karl is extremely creepy & Sassy’s reaction to Paul’s broken nose, absolutely a classic.

  5. On Bemused and Amused:

    posted 3 months ago

    I’m in agreement with all of the above!
    hahaha…Han & Lei. I can totally see that now!

  6. On Clever Girl:

    posted 3 months ago

    Hahaha…I love how the officer fell for her story. Just goes to show ya that with an innocent face & a cute smile, a girl can get away with pretty much anything. LOL

  7. On Welcome Oblivion:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. John, if I didn’t know any better I’d say you’ve been looking for a mistake to point out to THX. LOL

    Amazing imagery, as usual. You did a great job. And I agree with John and g2 when they say Sissy probably isn’t out of the picture yet.

  8. On Old Man Down:

    posted 3 months ago

    That was a great continuation. Very touching ending.

  9. On Fresh Air:

    posted 3 months ago

    thnx guys! I tried to put myself in Ally’s shoes & write it out the way I would probably handle the situation. I’m glad it seems to have worked.

  10. On The Coming of Lenin:

    posted 3 months ago

    Uselessness is right when he says that this ficlet shows the awesomeness that we have come to expect from you. Bravo!

  11. On Zombie Emancipation:

    posted 3 months ago

    Ok this one kind of grossed me out a bit. Especially when you described the ‘squelch’ that sounded when they pulled on the squeegee. But I guess that was the goal.

  12. On Zombie Hegemony:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree with all of the above comments. Very funny.

  13. On Zombie Reification:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree w/ THX about the zombie bearded babies. LOL

  14. On Salvation in Watery Shadows:

    posted 3 months ago

    This is insanely good! The way you described the details, what Gordo is thinking & feeling, the sweat cascading off of his head. It was all so good. Can’t wait for the next ficlet.

  15. On Dulcet Tones for a Menacing Intent:

    posted 3 months ago

    It is, indeed, very tense. I’m on the edge of my seat here…what’s going to happen?

  16. On The Knowing:

    posted 3 months ago

    Amazing ficlet. John is right..everything is in slow motion which makes it more intense. Can’t wait to see what happens.

  17. On Art of Concentration:

    posted 3 months ago

    Keep the series going!

  18. On License and Registration:

    posted 3 months ago

    I can’t wait to see what Prandi has up her sleeve. And will they get to the dorm in time?

  19. On All The Right Moves:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree with Krulltar. Karl deffinately seems like a dirty old man. He creeps me out a bit.

  20. On Strawberry Fields Forever:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree w/ all of the above comments. You guys are awesome @ this!

  21. On Another One Bites The Dust:

    posted 3 months ago

    I love the title to this ficlet first of all. Reminds me of some good times in middle school. (We used to listen to that song every day after band & sing & dance to it LOL) I also love the way this just played out in my head as I read along, as if it were really happening & I was watching.

  22. On Do You Believe In Magic?:

    posted 3 months ago

    LOL THX. Yes, i deffinately see a cat fight coming on.

  23. On Simply Irresistible:

    posted 3 months ago

    a song popped into my head when i read this: Love is in the air…every where I look around….
    LOL

  24. On Nobody Puts Sassy In A Corner:

    posted 3 months ago

    Wow…it’s gettin pretty crazy now.

  25. On Smith:

    posted 3 months ago

    Poor Spike. It must be hard for him to have a dad that doesn’t accept him for who he is. That feeling is all too familiar for me, but it’s my mom instead. Isn’t it interesting how usually it’s the father & son or mother & daughter who don’t get along instead of the father & daughter or the mother & son?

  26. On Girl Interrupted:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. I love Jameson’s remark to Becca. “Who invited you?” that’s great…

  27. On An Outline of a Plan:

    posted 3 months ago

    This ficlet series is taking all kinds of crazy twists & turns! Can’t wait to see where it ends up next.

  28. On Ed and the Wonderball:

    posted 3 months ago

    i agree w/ g2 & phil

  29. On You Got Served!:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha…I love the ending the most here, thought the whole ficlet was good, because of the picture I got in my head of Jameson’s face when Prandi threw him her jacket and then her face when he fell off of his stool.

  30. On Becca's Dream:

    posted 3 months ago

    Personally, I think Becca deserves to have a dream like that. She was terrible to poor Jameson.

  31. On Sweet Oblivion:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree with THX. Something’s up. I don’t know what you guys have up your sleeves but I’ll bet what ever it is, it’s really good.

  32. On The Houdini Bar Danceoff:

    posted 3 months ago

    I can only imagine what is going to happen next with this dance off coming. This series just keeps getting better and better.

  33. On That Butterfly in Chaos Theory:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree with John. I think you enjoy making us look like amateurs. I think you see it as your calling in life. LOL

    But in all seriousness…..THAT ROCKED!

  34. On March 18, pt 2:

    posted 3 months ago

    This whole time I’ve been trying to figure out what caused the fog? I figure the mud was caused by rain, but not sure about the rest of the conditions. And what caused the girl that she’s looking after to be this way? Did she go insane after being in these conditions after a while? And who is Daniel? So many unanswered questions.

  35. On March 18, pt 1:

    posted 3 months ago

    Aw..the poor girl. That would be a horrible thing to go through.

  36. On March 17, pt 2:

    posted 3 months ago

    Ok..that is seriously freaky. I’m actually imagining this going on and it’s freakin me out. I feel like I’m watching a horror movie.

  37. On March 17, pt 1:

    posted 3 months ago

    That would be really freaky. Feeling like someone was watching you, breathing on you, touching you… Makes me shudder.

  38. On March 16:

    posted 3 months ago

    Why are you writing about my birthday? LOL You did a good job. The imagery is very well done.

  39. On Something more sinister:

    posted 3 months ago

    That was a really good ficlet. Extremely good imagery.

  40. On Family:

    posted 3 months ago

    You did a good job with the imagery. You’re really bringin the characters to life.

  41. On Spiked:

    posted 3 months ago

    Hmmm…for some reason this spike character seems a bit familiar. Does he know anyone by the name of Shay by any chance? LOL

    Good beginning to a series. Can’t wait to see the rest.

  42. On Strawberries & Champagne:

    posted 3 months ago

    Hahaha I’m going to laugh if Jameson ends up doing to worm again.

  43. On Touched For The Very First Time:

    posted 3 months ago

    You described this so well that I could actually picture their facial expressions and everything going on in the bar at the time.

  44. On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

    posted 3 months ago

    yeah i’m following you Phil….and i agree.

  45. On Rats and Angels:

    posted 3 months ago

    There’s nothing I could say that Ana and Krulltar haven’t already said.

  46. On Penny for Your Thoughts:

    posted 3 months ago

    I agree with Krulltar. Very good job on leading into the kiss and describing everything else. The imagery was very vivid.

  47. On Fools in Love:

    posted 3 months ago

    Yes! The series continues! I love the imagery of this scene.

  48. On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

    posted 3 months ago

    We want a sequel! We just don’t wanna write it ourselves for fear of ruining the series. LOL

  49. On Moving On:

    posted 3 months ago

    I saw what you guys were talking about and I cleaned it up a bit. I hope I smoothed it out enough.

  50. On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

    posted 3 months ago

    I don’t like Sol-leks & Sandra. I mean, i deffinately like Sandra more than Sol-leks, but I don’t prefer either of them.

  51. On WonderEmily:

    posted 3 months ago

    I’m loving where this is going. Can’t wait to see what will happen next. This is one of my favorites among all of the ficlet serieses.

  52. On Zombie Proletariats:

    posted 3 months ago

    The sequels must continue! I’m a little disappointed that there hasn’t been another one in a while. What’s going to happen next?

  53. On From Inside The Wonderball part 2:

    posted 3 months ago

    LOL sailor emo! That would be funny.

    Awesome job on this ficlet. You did a great job of painting the picture of what is going on. I can picture the look on Emily’s face when the guy said “I like to keep my visitors for a few years”.

  54. On Dennis Yunker and His Senior Moment:

    posted 3 months ago

    The way you write your ficlets is almost poetic. You are a ficlet god!

  55. On Stupefied:

    posted 3 months ago

    Ok…I’m not sure if i should be sick or happy that Sassy & Old Bess finally found love…..but with each other…

    haha…anyway…things have deffinately been taking an unexpected turn in the last few sequels. Prandi & Jameson r together…ish…Becca & Paul are crying together, and Old Bess & Sassy…uh…yeah. All I have to say is: “Wow.”

  56. On Ooh-Oh, That Magic Feeling:

    posted 3 months ago

    Killer sequel, THX, as always, you blew me away with your writing abilities.

  57. On One Crazy Country:

    posted 3 months ago

    This one was really good. Like TBS said that picture of Sassy running to Old Bess is priceless.

  58. On From Inside The Wonderball:

    posted 3 months ago

    I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next. I agree with Eckhouse. Awesome twist.

  59. On Two For One Special:

    posted 3 months ago

    oh gosh I hope they’re not going to the bar I think they’re going to. and if they are, I hope sassy isn’t there when they walk in. that would just be extremely bad news.

  60. On What Goes Around Comes Around:

    posted 3 months ago

    Ok…so everyone in my house is asleep right now except for me and I am trying so hard not to laugh out loud at Paul. Great job on this sequel.

  61. On The Look of Love:

    posted 3 months ago

    wow…everything has suddenly gone backwards. I agree with what everyone else has said so far.

  62. On Return to the Wonderball:

    posted 3 months ago

    ok…totally a bad situation to be in for all of them right now. I wonder what’s going to happen next?

  63. On Not So Fast:

    posted 3 months ago

    i completely agree with everyone else. the twist of the second personality and how the 2 personalities are complete opposites is amazing.

  64. On An Unsettling Realization:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. i can actually picture the look on Paul’s face when Prandi turned him down. And it is priceless.

  65. On The Greatest Single Night of Your Life:

    posted 3 months ago

    The two of you are doing an awesome job working together on this series.

  66. On The Answer Will be Ficlets:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. i’m sure we all will Kermitgorf.
    and in my fantisy world when my book becomes a best seller i will simply say “The thing that I have to thank for my great success is ficlets and of course, all of the people on there who gave me advice and supported me along the way. Without them and ficlets, this never would’ve happened.”

  67. On Ficlets of the Future:

    posted 3 months ago

    hahaha. i loved it. you did a very good job.

  68. On So Long...:

    posted 4 months ago

    creepy music plays Noooooo! I knew nothing good could happen.

    Good job continuing the ficlet series of the wonderball. Everyone that’s working together on this is doing an amazing job.

  69. On Split Personality?:

    posted 4 months ago

    Emily! Throw it out the window!
    hahaha…I feel like I’m watching a horror movie where the girl knows she shouldn’t go in the room but she’s going to anyway and everyone’s yelling “Don’t go in! Run away!”

  70. On A True Prince:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok…there’s an unexpected turn around.

  71. On The Wild Card:

    posted 4 months ago

    This should be interesting….Sassy meeting Old Bess. Nothing good can come of this at all.

  72. On Frustration:

    posted 4 months ago

    Thanks. I was kinda mad @ someone that day and I needed to get out my feelings. It’s kinda my way of ranting online.

  73. On Tracy:

    posted 4 months ago

    Interesting. Why is she so drawn to the couple? I’m waiting to find out.

  74. On Zombie Proletariats:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with THX. It rocked!

  75. On To Play or Be Played:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok. That is just freaky! Throw wonderball out the window!

  76. On Room 34:

    posted 4 months ago

    One word: freaky

  77. On The Essential, Indispensable Wonderball:

    posted 4 months ago

    This just gets better and better! So suspensful! What’s going to happen next?

  78. On The Wonderball's Message:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow. This one was kinda freaky. I wonder who is waiting for her in room 34.

  79. On Daydreaming:

    posted 4 months ago

    You have a sequel.

  80. On Zombie Struggle:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…this is quite the situation they’re in. I hope the hero is sort of good at sort of planning. ;)

  81. On Snare:

    posted 4 months ago

    I think I agree with you on the whole Prandi thing, Ana. I like her quite a bit. She adds a bit of a different quality to the series.

  82. On Zombie Workers:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can tell I’m going to be addicted to this ficlet series and the others that are to come.

  83. On Zombie Union:

    posted 4 months ago

    Things don’t sound very good for this guy at all…he will soon be over taken by…. dun, dun, dun ... Karl Marx Zombies!

  84. On Zombie Manifesto:

    posted 4 months ago

    Nice visual on the blood splattering. Blech….

  85. On Zombie Revolution:

    posted 4 months ago

    Another funny ficlet. Nice work on the Zombie Karl Marx.

  86. On In The Neighborhood:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did a great job of showing just how big Agent Lefleur really is. I’m wondering who it is that’s pulling into the drive way though and what’s going to happen next.

  87. On The New And Improved Model J:

    posted 4 months ago

    Jameson is turning into quite the character. I love how he’s suddenly so cool and how Becca is trying not to be outdone. Great job on this sequel. Can’t wait to see it’s sequel.

  88. On The Game:

    posted 4 months ago

    Bravo! I love how you described what Becca was thinking and how her jealousy was kicking in when Jameson was so smooth with the hostess and then also when he gave Prandi a hug.

  89. On Tikbalang's Snare:

    posted 4 months ago

    I don’t believe you have ever disappointed anyone with your ficlets. And you certainly haven’t started to.

  90. On The Tortoise and the Hare:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with Ana. I can also picture the look on Paul’s face when he walks in the restaurant to find that not only has Jameson beat him there, but he also has both girls hanging on his every word. I can’t wait to see what Ana comes up with for the sequel.

  91. On Terry's Troubles:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did a good job. And just so you guys don’t go jumping to any conclusions, that’s not how all girls think. :p

    Girls like the one in this story, I find very annoying. You did a good job of getting in the mind of a girl like that though. Some times you amaze me…how in the world did you know exactly how some girls think. You worry me, Parker. LOL

  92. On His Mighty Steed:

    posted 4 months ago

    Jameson is cool. :)

    I love how they’re arguing over what’s going to happen at the end of the night.

  93. On All Sides of the Equation:

    posted 4 months ago

    Actually, Sarah, Prandi is rooting for Jameson to get back together with Becca...I’m not sure who Brandi is LOL

    Wonderfully written, Ana. I love how jameson is so concerned that Prandi might get hurt by Paul. Amazing job.

  94. On A Double-Date:

    posted 4 months ago

    Bravo! Very nicely written. I didn’t expet Jameson and Prandi to be in co hootz at all. And how Becca fell right into their trap…perfect.

  95. On The Call:

    posted 4 months ago

    Well that’s something I didn’t expect. Prandi calling Becca. Wonder what it could be about?

  96. On Gettin Aquainted:

    posted 4 months ago

    thnx guys…I guess no one’s gunna sequel it so I’ll go ahead and take care of that.

  97. On Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen:

    posted 4 months ago

    Love it, love it, love it!

  98. On Coiled Ready To Strike:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ana is right…you did a great job with the descriptions.

  99. On In the Flesh:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha…I love your comments, TBS “although I really don’t want imagine Old Bess ‘in the flesh’...” I don’t think any of us do, TBS. hahaha

    He’s right though…great interchange btwn them. You did a really good job on this…of course u do that on all of your ficlets. Keep it up!

  100. On Listen To Your Sweet Sassafras:

    posted 4 months ago

    Everyone who commented on this ficlet is right. Great job on it.

  101. On Out of Her Life:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree fully with THX and TBS. Let’s see just how Becca and Sassy wriggle their ways out of this one.

  102. On What Exactly Is Going On Here?:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok…if I were Jameson, I would seriously be considering killing Sassy right now.

    I like how you had Sassy come in and ruin everything for Becca and Jameson.

  103. On Resistance :

    posted 4 months ago

    TBS, l couldn’t have said it better myself.

  104. On Wake Up And Look At Me!:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha! very good rules to live by Krulltar.

    TBS, good job on the sequel. I wonder what will happen next…

  105. On Frustration:

    posted 4 months ago

    Now that I look over it my poem seems a little emo but it’s how I feel right now and i had to get it out.

  106. On Something Like That:

    posted 4 months ago

    TBS and John Perkins are right. Awesome job.

  107. On The Really Evil Voice:

    posted 4 months ago

    The series must go on, THX!

  108. On Any Last Requests?:

    posted 4 months ago

    Exactly what Becca wanted…a drunk Jameson. This is not going to go well for him at all.

  109. On Deep Space Disaster- To the Brig:

    posted 4 months ago

    I loved the potatoe part! Infact, I loved the whole thing.

  110. On Dead To Rights:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…that’s a pretty crazy thing (bout ur wife out drinkin ppl in 10 min and then still bein able 2 name all of the presidents). Actually, it’s a very interesting fact LOL

    ok now to the sequel. Jameson is about to be completely taken by surprize when she leaves him as a one night stand…depending on if the pictures come up first. I’m interested to see what will happen.

  111. On Farewell, Kevin (Part of the Chain):

    posted 4 months ago

    LOL thnx…that’s what i was aimin 4 :p

  112. On Seconds:

    posted 4 months ago

    Very intriguing character. So romantic yet so dangerous. I can’t wait to see where this series goes.

  113. On Why Me?:

    posted 4 months ago

    Awesome story with a very unexpected ending.

  114. On Dreaming Goes Away:

    posted 4 months ago

    Very well put. This whole ficlet holds absolute truth in every word.

  115. On Double-Take:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did an awesome job of describing how Jameson saw Becca and what his reaction to her was.

  116. On Got to Make That Breakthrough: Your Theme Song Challenge:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with KG and Sarah…you NEVER seem to have any problems with writer’s block from what I’ve seen.

    And I agree with Fantasy as well…it is extremely cool how u incorporated lyrics into a ficlet about music from a musical ficlet challenge. I would never be able to do something like that. I have a hard enough time coming up with the stuff I’ve been writing as it is. hahaha

  117. On I Can See Beautiful Things Coming Your Way:

    posted 4 months ago

    I’m really likin Old Bess…she’s nice LOL You did a great job on this as always. Everyone involved in this series has come to think of it.

  118. On At the Houdini Bar:

    posted 4 months ago

    I love how the bar tender knows exactly what’s going on with jameson.

  119. On A Surprizing Turn of Events:

    posted 4 months ago

    oh and thank you too Krulltar

  120. On A Surprizing Turn of Events:

    posted 4 months ago

    Yeah I’m having fun writing it. I’m glad you’re enjoying it, tbs

  121. On Fine Day in Hell 5:

    posted 4 months ago

    You’re doing a good job on this series. Keep it up.

  122. On One Fine Day In Hell 4:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahahahaha I love the lines: “Will it hurt?” “Of course!” hahaha…I love how he’s just straight up with the guy here and doesn’t hesitate to tell the guy that his second death will hurt.

  123. On A Date With Destiny:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did a good job on this sequel as always.

  124. On She's back! (III):

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…that’s pretty sad. An X-friend being homeless and here she’s going on and on about how that person was such a bad person. Harsh.

  125. On Upstairs:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh..and I forgot to tell ya that I sequeled it.

  126. On Upstairs:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahahaha. I love it!

  127. On Sweet Sacrifice:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…interesting series. I’m interested in seeing what happens next. You’re doing a good job. Keep it up :)

  128. On Deep Space Disaster:

    posted 4 months ago

    congrats on makin most popular! :)

  129. On Running For My Life:

    posted 4 months ago

    Looking forward to a sequel.

  130. On She's back!:

    posted 4 months ago

    Harsh. That’s all I can say. But it was a really good ficlet.

  131. On History:

    posted 4 months ago

    That is a very interesting situation to be in. You wrote an interesting ficlet. Can’t wait to see if someone writes a sequel.

  132. On The Sound of A Heart Breaking:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh my gosh. I had a really sad song playing while I was reading this and I could really feel the pain that Becca was feeling very intensly. I could also feel how cold hearted Sassy was in this moment. This one was very captivating for me. I felt like i was actually there. This is a true work of art. A masterpiece.

  133. On Tossing and Turning:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can’t understand how someone could be so happy about ruining someone’s life. It just doesn’t make since but it seems like the way Sassy would be. You did a good job showing this side of her that has suddenly come out in recent prequels.

  134. On Tossing and Turning:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can’t understand how someone could be so happy about ruining someone’s life. It just doesn’t make since but it seems like the way Sassy would be. You did a good job showing this side of her that has suddenly come out in recent prequels.

  135. On Guilty Until Proven Innocent: The Laws of the Beast:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok I hated Sassy before but now I deffinately hate her with a passion. You did a really good job with this one. I’m actually feeling kinda sorry for Jameson at this point…actually I started feeling sorry for him a few prequels ago.

  136. On Of Cilia and Arranged Marriages:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can’t help but laugh at all of the drama that seems to be following Jameson ever since the night of the party. And how you had Prandi just break down on him there…pure gold.

  137. On The Really Evil Voice:

    posted 4 months ago

    Excellent job. I can feel the tention that must’ve been in there when all of the girls went silent. Once more the descriptiveness is captivating. Excellent work.

  138. On Misshapen Fairy of Unhappiness:

    posted 4 months ago

    This one just shows even more how much of a creep Gordo is. It makes a shiver go down my spine in discust at him. You did an excellent job, yet again. You are truly a master ficleteer.

  139. On Fruitless Pit-Stains:

    posted 4 months ago

    Well keep it up you’re doing great. I love the view of the over worked detective.

  140. On Sissy Reaps: Ode to the Bard:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with Kermitgorf. It was very poetic throughout. I liked this one. Maybe not as much as I liked the prequels but this one was still very good.

  141. On Flux Gramps and Old Sue:

    posted 4 months ago

    Amazing job on this one. The descriptiveness is once more so detailed that I feel like i’m actually there, watching and listening to everything that’s going on with out being seen.

  142. On Rapt audience:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with Kermitgorf and everyone else. You did a good job. You deffinately took the creep factor up a notch.

  143. On Where God Can't Hear:

    posted 4 months ago

    Dark and mysterious. Terribly dangerous. You did an awesome job.

  144. On Message in a Basement:

    posted 4 months ago

    They’re right. It’s full of suspense. I can’t wait to read what you did with the sequal to this one. Excellent job.

  145. On Gramps and His Memory:

    posted 4 months ago

    What a sad memory for him to have. I really got caught up in this one, as I did in the rest of this series so far.

  146. On A Dance for Cole:

    posted 4 months ago

    Very excellent work. PyroPunk is right, the images are very vivid. It’s like I’m there watching and listening to everything without anyone even knowing I’m there.

  147. On Time on His Mind:

    posted 4 months ago

    Yes I see the connections as well. You’re doing a good job on this series so far.

  148. On Numbered Beers With a Blue Collar Moebius:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can see the potential abusive situation that bts saw. You, once more, have done an amazing job describing the characters and what is going on with them.

  149. On Numbered Beers With a Blue Collar Moebius:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can see the potential abusive situation that bts saw. You, once more, have done an amazing job describing the characters and what is going on with them.

  150. On Numbered Beers With a Blue Collar Moebius:

    posted 4 months ago

    I can see the potential abusive situation that bts saw. You, once more, have done an amazing job describing the character and what is going on with them.

  151. On Slow Cough and Sputter:

    posted 4 months ago

    I’m looking forward to seeing how you have all of your characters cross paths. I can tell it is going to be quite interesting.

  152. On Pretty Things:

    posted 4 months ago

    This ficlet is very captivating to me. I had to read it slower than most of the ficlets, which means you did a good job with all of the descriptions of what’s going through his mind and where he is. Even who he is for that matter. I can’t wait to see where the rest of this series goes.

  153. On The Beast:

    posted 4 months ago

    I love how the protozoa grossed him out because it was furry looking. Hahaha.

  154. On Deep Space Disaster:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha! Good job as always. How in the world can you possibly have oreos with out milk? I mean come on! LOL

  155. On A Lasting Impression:

    posted 4 months ago

    You seem to have cleaned it up quite nicely because there was no confusion for me when I read it just now. You did an excellent job.

  156. On A Lasting Impression:

    posted 4 months ago

    You seem to have cleaned it up quite nicely because there was no confusion for me when I read it just now. You did an excellent job.

  157. On The Power of Revenge Compels You!:

    posted 4 months ago

    This one was really good. I love how Becca was trying to get Sassy to calm down, yet get permission from Sassy to go on a date with Jameson at the same time and it worked. I also love how Sassy thought that Becca was going to go for Paul instead of Jameson.

  158. On Hey Jealousy:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…ok Sassy is one insane girl. thebetweenspace is right…she’s gone off her rocker…majorly!

  159. On Only In America:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha…I love how Jameson is getting blamed for everything. Good job. I love he character Prandi.

  160. On Only In America:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha…I love how Jameson is getting blamed for everything. Good job. I love the character Prandi.

  161. On Watch Me Turn Medieval :

    posted 4 months ago

    You have a masterpiece right here. You did a wonderful job on it.

  162. On {Uselessness's Maneuvers Challenge}: Pulling the Cord:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow. That is a really good entry. The ending was very surprizing.

  163. On So Busted:

    posted 4 months ago

    ooo…it gives a whole new meaning to the word “busted”. When you’re mom catches you with a boyfriend without knowing where you’d be to begin with, that just means trouble. You did an excellent job.

  164. On Exploring:

    posted 4 months ago

    thnx 4 the feedback on all of the ficlets. I’ll keep all of your comments in mind when I’m writing my next one. And I’m not gunna Sequal this one..I’m gunna wait for someone else to do that just so I can see where they take it.

  165. On Backhand Fury: uselessness' PRECISE MANEUVERS Challenge:

    posted 4 months ago

    Wow…..the slow motion view of the girl that he’s hitting and the tention of all of it makes it very interesting and very tragic. You did a really good job on this, as you do on all of your ficlets. Keep it up. :)

  166. On Maybe I Shouldn't Have Done That:

    posted 4 months ago

    omgosh! hahahahaha! That is some funny stuff. Good job. Sucks for his wife though. I’d hate to see what she’ll do to him when she finds out. LoA

  167. On uselessness's PRECISE MANEUVERS Challenge!:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha…i like the idea of crouching Pooh hidden Piglet, PyroPunk

    oh and good challenge Parker

  168. On Finding a New Place:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha thnx

  169. On A Score To Settle:

    posted 4 months ago

    I like it. How Becca decieves Sassy and then Sassy goes to demand that Jameson give Becca her phone back? it’s a perfect scenario.

  170. On A Promise Is A Promise...Right?:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok..I don’t think I like Sassy. And I definately feel bad for Becca right about now.

    Good job on the sequel btw.

  171. On Please Don't Say It. Please Don't Say It.:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok…now that one was funny. I loved the movie refrence.

  172. On "I've had the time of my life...":

    posted 4 months ago

    I love the Dirty Dancing scene. Classic.

  173. On Too Forward:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ok…I am officially Becca. LoA
    I would probably do the same exact thing in a situation like that.

  174. On The Upper Hand:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha..nice on the last line. so cheesy LoA

  175. On Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You:

    posted 4 months ago

    So that’s how guys work deals out. lmao

    I like this sequel. You did a good job on it. I liked the whole gay ploy. LoA

  176. On What Guys Want, The Other Point of View:

    posted 4 months ago

    This is a great sequel. I like how u did it from “the other point of view”.

  177. On Tongue-Tied:

    posted 4 months ago

    I like it…very interesting. I like how he kind of froze up when she started talking. LoA

  178. On A Fish Called Jameson:

    posted 4 months ago

    Read this one first..gunna go back & read prequels in a bit. Good job tho. :)

  179. On goodbye:

    posted 4 months ago

    wow…lots of fighting in the comments. waist of time if u ask me. y don’t y’all just leave lena & her friends alone?

    Lena, i think the poem is awesome. Keep up the good work.

  180. On Encounter:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did a great job on this sequel. It kept me wanting more. Wondering what’s next.

  181. On Numbers:

    posted 4 months ago

    I agree with Browncoatben and YodaOnCrack. You did an excellent job with this.

  182. On On a Walk:

    posted 4 months ago

    You did a really good job on this. You left plenty of room for another sequal and left us wondering what will happen next.

  183. On Experience:

    posted 4 months ago

    I like it. Stovohobo & Mk r right…it left many question unanswered and it’s a great opening for a sequal as Stovohobo said.
    Your ficlets r never short of excellence.

  184. On Nosepickers Anonymous:

    posted 4 months ago

    Hahahaha….you really did a good job on this one. Funny stuff. I liked it all…can’t really pick a fav part very easily.

  185. On Don't Muck with Tara's IPOD!:

    posted 4 months ago

    hahaha..good job of making THX queasy. lmao

    Like I said before, you truely are a master ficleteer. Everyone involved in this series is.

  186. On On the Run:

    posted 4 months ago

    You are a master ficleteer!

  187. On Stopping for Gas:

    posted 4 months ago

    Alright…I got a sequel written.

  188. On Stopping for Gas:

    posted 4 months ago

    This one is good. I can see how she’d b a bit sarcastic after what they’d been through the day before.

  189. On Fight or Flight:

    posted 4 months ago

    I wrote a sequal.

  190. On Fight or Flight:

    posted 4 months ago

    I like it…you did a really good job on this one.

  191. On On the Run:

    posted 4 months ago

    thnx guys..feel free 2 write a sequal just make sure 2 let me kno if u do so that i can check it out k?

  192. On The Light At the End of the Tunnel:

    posted 9 months ago

    thanks guys

  193. On Popularity Crazed Girls [[Shocking Dialogues Challenge]]:

    posted 10 months ago

    ya…I agree. the twist on this wasn’t that good. i had a brain fart on the twist. other wize it would’ve been better. oh well…at least I got some good practice. :)

  194. On Marie and the Chicken Nuggets:

    posted 10 months ago

    ok…that’s….very…..um…..different. Good job. :)

  195. On Scenes from a Football Game (Autobiography Challenge):

    posted 10 months ago

    Hahaha…don’t u just luv high school? LOL
    I luv how its serious and then your friend suddenly makes some random comment about how your hair smells like fruitloops…LOL

  196. On Moving....AGAIN!:

    posted 10 months ago

    You should be flattered since you helped inspire this.

  197. On Moving....AGAIN!:

    posted 10 months ago

    I remember this actually happening when I was eight years old. The conversation may not have been to this extent as far as my part, but I remember being mad and sad at the same time that we had to move again. I also remember crying because I didn’t want to leave my friends. I tried to portray that feeling in this ficlet.

  198. On Watching the Possibilities Go Round:

    posted 10 months ago

    I feel the same way in all the houses my family moves in to. I wonder how long we’ll be here and how long my friendships with other kids will last when I have to move again in a couple of years. You really brought that to life in this ficlet. Good job.

  199. On Tin Rabbit Robot performs Lucky Penny Brain Surgery:

    posted 10 months ago

    Hahaha…this is cute. I love the story. Good job.

  200. On Finding a Way Out:

    posted 10 months ago

    Thanks…I’ll remember that for the next prequel I make.

  201. On Finding a Way Out:

    posted 11 months ago

    Thanks guys. I’m extremely excited to be on ficlets…it has really improved my writing skills. Tho it would be nice if ppl would make sequels to my ficlets tho…I think it would make it a lot more interesting…don’t u guys think so?

  202. On Silver Dream 4:

    posted 11 months ago

    You are doing an excellent job on these sequels. Keep it up!

  203. On Phantoms In the Moonlight (nanowrimo):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an excellent job on it.

  204. On Friends of the Circus:

    posted 11 months ago

    you also did a good job on this one. I agree with thx…I’m torn between the same two lines…both r funny.

  205. On The Circus Comes to Town:

    posted 11 months ago

    Good job on this one.

  206. On Sour Milk?:

    posted 11 months ago

    I love it! You did an awesome job on this one.

  207. On Tin Rabbit & Dumb Pig:

    posted 11 months ago

    This is one of the cutest stories…infact, it maybe THE cutest story…I’ve ever read!

  208. On The Attack:

    posted 11 months ago

    :) Thnx. We’ll have to see what happened to them in the next sequel.

  209. On The Attack:

    posted 11 months ago

    Thanks…I didn’t expect it to end up being so good. I’m happy.

  210. On Porcupines in Spain:

    posted 11 months ago

    I love how you did this ficlet. You did an excellent job on it.

  211. On A Wrong Number and Granny {Insert Pen Name Here's Fifty Nifty Challenge}:

    posted 11 months ago

    Well written. You did an excellent job on this story considering the challenge rules.

  212. On Train to Mexico:

    posted 11 months ago

    Awesome job! I found it quite interesting.

  213. On Hyper Girl And The Porcupines of Destiny:

    posted 11 months ago

    This is a great story. It’s so funny, and so different. I love it.

  214. On The Attack:

    posted 11 months ago

    Thanks. And thanks for the advice.

  215. On Enter At the Gateway; Leave the World:

    posted 11 months ago

    Excellent job.

  216. On The Attack:

    posted 11 months ago

    Ok…thanks…what in the story do you think needs more description?

  217. On The Attack:

    posted 11 months ago

    Wow…this is the first time I’ve actually scared myself with a story. My heart almost started racing as I pictured this in my mind the way I was trying to portray it. I hope it does the same for any one else that reads it.

  218. On Saphronia and Willimina (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an excellent job on this. I love how you made the twins sound completely different. The fright you portrayed in Sophronia seemed so real. The way you portrayed this made it play like a movie in front of my eyes. Once again, Excellent job.

  219. On Ghosts Of The Tennessee Road (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    I like where you took the story. It was very unsuspected. And the whole ghost thing kinda caught me off guard…u kno…when he said he’s not dead yet.

  220. On Handle on Memories and Vice Versa (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did a good job on this on…as usual.

  221. On One Bad Challenge Going Over [challenge!]:

    posted 11 months ago

    I would do this challenge, but I think I need to get better at writing first…but if I feel like I’ve gotten better before the end of the challenge, I may just take it. :)

  222. On The Night to Remember:

    posted 11 months ago

    Ok…thnx for the advice. I’ll try that as well.

  223. On Shall A Daughter Go? (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an absolutely wonderful job on this one. The atmosphere is excellent. You and uselessness have been extremely busy with these ficlets and you’re both doing an excellent job on them. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.

  224. On Lightning Never Stikes Twice (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    Goodness, you’ve been busy with these ficlets lately! You and THX are just constantly going back and forth with these things. And you’re both doing an excellent job of it. Keep up the good work!

  225. On Nightly Patrol on Tennessee Road (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an excelent job on this part of the story. It really gets the reader interested to the extent where they feel like they’re actually seeing what’s happening, yet they’re not part of the story. It appears as a movie flashing before the reader’s eyes. Once again, good job.

  226. On Gifts From Mother to Daughter (NoNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    THX, you did a great job with the sequel. I can’t wait to see what the next person does with it.

  227. On The Marauders of Tennesee Road (NaNoWriMo):

    posted 11 months ago

    Wow…you did an extremely good job on this.
    Can’t wait to see what THX 0477 did with the sequel.

  228. On The Black, Black Room:

    posted 11 months ago

    This ficlet is amazingly good, Parker. Although it doesn’t surprize me since I’ve read your other ficlets and they are all extremely good. This one is very spooky.

  229. On The Night to Remember:

    posted 11 months ago

    k…thnx for the advice. I’ll try that next time.

  230. On The Girl on the Beach (con't):

    posted 11 months ago

    You did a good job on this. I like how you described the bottle and paper that was in it. It’s fascinating, really.

  231. On The Girl on the Beach:

    posted 11 months ago

    This is extremely interesting. You did a good job on it.

  232. On Nevermore:

    posted 11 months ago

    This is so good. You did a wonderful job portraying what was happening. As I read what was going on I pictured a young teenage boy walking along a path and coming upon a flock of crows not scattering as he walked through them, but instead watching his every move in an extremely creepy way. And then, all of a sudden he feels a gust of wind swirling around him and at the same moment the crows take off swarming him.
    I’m sure that’s exactly what you were trying to portray too. Very creepy.

  233. On They Don't Come Out at Night:

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an absolutely marvelous job on this one. The suspense is killer. The pace of the story really keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. Keep it up, Wil!

  234. On The Fifteenth:

    posted 11 months ago

    You did an excelent job on this story. You are an extremely good fictional writer. I do believe we have a future world known author on our hands…keep up the good work!

  235. On Pep Squadder's First Date:

    posted 11 months ago

    hahahah….luv this one. But not ALL cheerleaders are like that…I used to be a cheerleader, and I have some really nice friends that are cheerleaders.

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