`crayola.'s posted comments

  1. On I Am This And That But Will Forever Be:

    posted 3 months ago

    very beautiful, very nice<3

  2. On Pickle [Baby Name Challenge]:

    posted 3 months ago

    sophia is my middle name, so great name. i actually think pickle would be a cute middle name<3

  3. On I Absolutely Love Her, When she Smiles:

    posted 3 months ago

    you are an amazing writer.
    and, yes i missed you. i’m so glad your back.

  4. On A bad dream:

    posted 3 months ago

    wow. excellent twist at the end. such an air of mystery and darkness in your poems. very nice.

  5. On I Love, I Love, I Love...Okay?:

    posted 3 months ago

    oh my gosh. i had to read this twice. wow. that’s awesome<3

  6. On The Oracle.:

    posted 3 months ago

    really great starting point. it’s like, i want to know more, but at the same time where the piece ends now is perfect enough.

  7. On The Downward Spiral of No Abandon:

    posted 3 months ago

    i like the idea, it’s very original. you write really well.

  8. On Ficletty Goodness (Or, My Ficlets Journey):

    posted 4 months ago

    you are an awesome ficlet-er. and you sure have talent. (and apparently we’re twins in personality)

  9. On Across the Glass (5):

    posted 4 months ago

    lovely piece, someday! i’m so glad your back! i hope you’re alright!

  10. On Sleeper Number Three:

    posted 5 months ago

    interesting concept, very original. nice job.

  11. On Family Love:

    posted 5 months ago

    very powerful, very creepy. again, a horrid concept to grasp. but it is well written and definitely scary.

  12. On Someday:

    posted 5 months ago

    very cute, and yes i think everyone would want another day added to the calender. very cute story. all i ask is for a continuation, please!

  13. On Jone:

    posted 5 months ago

    a few grammatical errors, but those can be fixed. and i think you meant to say “grabbed a knife” as opposed to “stabbed a knife.” also the piece seems to lack continuity in some places, like it jumps around. but other than that this piece is very disturbing. not that it’s graphic it’s just a horrid concept for one to grasp. patricide and matricide are a most horrendous crime and it makes me wonder about the writers mind set. but ending brings it to an nice close – it shows the boys’ remorse.

  14. On valentines day special:

    posted 5 months ago

    good, but at the same time it seems to broken, to choppy. i don’t know but it seems as if something is missing – that emotion perhaps – keeping it from seeing greatness.

  15. On Deleted:

    posted 5 months ago

    very bittersweet, like crying because your so happy and then crying because your so sad at the same time.

  16. On July, July:

    posted 5 months ago

    excellent detail, excellent imagery, excellent alliteration. and once i got to the end, brilliant story. lovely job!

  17. On Katy:

    posted 5 months ago

    i ditto bluesparrow, katy i hope you press on and over come.

  18. On I Never Asked:

    posted 5 months ago

    very emotional, very very touching, very very great job.

  19. On And The Winners Are.... http://ficlets.com/stories/20437:

    posted 5 months ago

    entering once i get my muse back, loffly challenge!

  20. On The Object of Her Affections: Crayola's Unique Love Story Challenge:

    posted 5 months ago

    wow, again unexpected. lovely job! thanks for entering!

  21. On Stone Cold - A Unique Love Story:

    posted 5 months ago

    oh, wow. so sad, so poetic. lovely job. thanks for entering!

  22. On Love challenge:

    posted 5 months ago

    wow, this was unexpected! lovely job! thanks for entering!

  23. On {Unique Love Challenge} Why can't you talk to me?:

    posted 5 months ago

    very cute. great job and thanks for entering!

  24. On A Love of the Type Dreams are Made Of (Unique Love Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    ah, something everyone can relate to. the love/obsession with one’s favorite fictional character. lovely piece. thanks for entering!

  25. On Love, blinded (Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    very cute, very cute. this is (sadly) a pairing you don’t see in real life very often. thanks for entering and great job.

  26. On Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    ah, i really like it. originally i thought you wrote eleven year olds and was a bit shocked but then i saw it was eleventh graders and relaxed. a bit controversial but that’s what makes it unique. thanks for entering, and great job.

  27. On Uncommon Love: Fritz and Cindy [challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    really great piece, lovely coupling. thanks for entering!

  28. On My Stargirl:

    posted 5 months ago

    beautiful. simply beautiful.

  29. On Wake Up and Smell Today:

    posted 5 months ago

    wow, it is so emotional and intuitive. brilliantly written. it seems so depressing, yet so sing song-y that the two contrasting emotions really work together. lovely piece and great job!

  30. On Infinite:

    posted 5 months ago

    reposted from my i’m not that girl account.

  31. On Little Red Pills:

    posted 5 months ago

    thanks someday. your so sweet!

  32. On The Official Answers of `Crayola. to IPNH's Survey:

    posted 5 months ago

    my mom would never let me dye my hair blue… she says my blonde hair is my crowning glory and my grandma tells me people would kill for hair my color…

  33. On Cutting:

    posted 5 months ago

    aw, thanks. sorry didn’t mean to make you cry… thanks for the comments.

  34. On Cutting:

    posted 5 months ago

    reposted from my i’m not that girl account.

  35. On Little Red Pills:

    posted 5 months ago

    reposted from my i’m not that girl account.

  36. On Little Boys:

    posted 5 months ago

    reposted from my i’m not that girl account.

  37. On A Letter To My Ficlet Loves:

    posted 5 months ago

    thanks dear! you too.

  38. On Hourglass:

    posted 5 months ago

    reposted from my i’m not that girl account.

  39. On The End?:

    posted 5 months ago

    a little choppy between chapters leaves me a little confused but it’s a nice plot. i like the way you handle this type of story. great job..

  40. On Becoming the victim...:

    posted 5 months ago

    brilliant imagery. such a horrid thing to descibe, to go through it even worse. but you did a great job with it. sequel, pretty please?

  41. On Tad's response to : A Fun But Insane Quiz From Insert Pen Name Here's Very Insane Mind (Hopefully this really really long title will grab your attention: CLICK ON MEEE!!!):

    posted 5 months ago

    very interesting responses, could inspire a ficlet…

  42. On An Unexpected Implication:

    posted 5 months ago

    very interesting, i like this piece. the style isn’t really my favorite, but i do like the plot you’ve got here.

  43. On A Degree of Difficulty:

    posted 5 months ago

    very interesting, a little hard to follow because it’s all one big paragraph, but an intriguing piece nonetheless. i definitely want to read on.

  44. On To My Ficlets Family:

    posted 5 months ago

    aww, someday. this is so sweet. i love you so much. it’s been great having you here. you’ve been so great to me. you’ve inspired me so many times. thanks for this. thanks.

  45. On Remember?:

    posted 6 months ago

    i like this.

    and i know i kind of took your story out of context for mine, but it inspired me to write the sequeled piece.

    nice job by the way.

  46. On Kaleidoscope Eyes:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow!
    her eyes do have color.
    great piece.

    `emily.

  47. On Alone, Still and Again:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. seriously beautiful, and so sad. lovely.

    `emily.

  48. On But Tears Will Ruin the Makeup:

    posted 6 months ago

    lovely piece, i really like the metaphor that i’m reading. the struggle to dance as a free creature just moving with no inhibitions but at the same time yearning for the dance one has known all their lives and cherished. well, that’s what i got. lovely piece, well written, very though provoking and emotional.

    `emily.

  49. On The Only Son:

    posted 6 months ago

    so powerful.

  50. On "I can't.":

    posted 6 months ago

    this nearly made me cry. also it reminds me of a relationship of my best friend. great writing.

  51. On Start Over? More Like Game Over.:

    posted 6 months ago

    i found you! i be `crayola. of EOE. lovely piece dear. so much visual! it’s captivating.

  52. On The Six Ficlet Challenge:

    posted 6 months ago

    can we do it as a prequel? so that it is in reverse order?

  53. On Eight Years Ago:

    posted 6 months ago

    i want to know more!! this is an awesome piece.

  54. On What You've Left Me With:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. wow. wow. you’ve left me speechless. i can’t tell you how many times i’ve felt this way before. amazing portrayal of my, and many other’s, emotions. you rock.

  55. On Can't Be My Superman:

    posted 6 months ago

    aww, makes me want to give the character (and you) a big hug. great job sweetie.

  56. On How Does One Go On {Minimum Lenght Challenge}:

    posted 6 months ago

    mhmm… it’s good and catching. and i see from your profile that it’s true. my prayers to you and your family. god bless. merry christmas.

  57. On Hijabi Girl:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. very inspiring. exactly, where it with pride.

  58. On In The Right Now:

    posted 6 months ago

    loverly.

  59. On Reason to Care, Reason to Feel:

    posted 6 months ago

    brilliant description and imagery. i can really get a picture of what’s going on and where it is. breathtaking suspense in the end the and get job getting me to empathize with your main character. awesome job!

  60. On Still Smiling:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. this got to me. i really felt it. your writing is just amazing. i can feel the cut, the incision, the pain. i can see the girl faking her smile (because that’s what i was doing all day) Great job once again.

    E.

  61. On 5 Things I've Never Told Anyone:

    posted 6 months ago

    mhhmm.. dear i wish i could just hug you. you seem like such a nice person. and such a good writer. don’t worry, it will only get better. dear, your awesome. five stars.

  62. On its now or never:

    posted 6 months ago

    you have what you want to say. this piece is really powerful. it’s wonderfully described, but i think it’s be better as a sonnet… but that’s just my opinion. great job, five stars.

  63. On 5 Things I've Never Told Anybody.:

    posted 6 months ago

    1,2,4,5 are me as well. here’s a virtual hug for you dear. i get that, about being really outgoing, but then really shy. that’s me. sometimes you just don’t want to be outgoing and really social… number one, me too. i’ve actually been in that situation, only i did cry. For many things, and then I got yelled at because I left practice to cry. Anyway you have great skill as a writer and person. I may only be a stranger, but you inspire me. Great job, infinite stars.

  64. On 5 Unknowns About Myself:

    posted 6 months ago

    dear, i think you’ve have a rather novel worthy life. as my creative writing teacher once told me ‘some people are just born into the next bestseller.’ you dear are one of those. you are a great writer and have and awesome name.

  65. On 5 Things I've Never said Out Loud:

    posted 6 months ago

    your writing is awesome. and your so sweet with your comments. i’m so sorry about your mum. even though your a stranger, you’ll be in my prayers.

  66. On Blood:

    posted 6 months ago

    dear did i write this? because this sounds like it could have been taken from my journal and typed. this is beautiful. beautiful and sad. great job hun.

  67. On Five Things I Wish I Could Say:

    posted 6 months ago

    dear, i’m so sorry. just remember: i’m here. you can talk to me. i may be just words on a screen, but theirs a person behind those words that cares. i can relate to most of these numbers. good luck dear. good luck.

  68. On 5 things I've Never Told Anyone:

    posted 6 months ago

    you can never be a bad mother as long a you try. i’m seventeen and i want a child. it’s strange, but yea. i want him/her to be my world/my salvation. i’ve never told anyone that. good luck to you and your child. you seem to have so much heart that i don’t think you could be a bad mother. your good. your wonderful. he/she loves you. just some encouragement from a stranger…

  69. On Five Things I've Never Told:

    posted 6 months ago

    agreed on all of the above. your amazing dear, good luck and great job.

  70. On 5 Things I've Never Said:

    posted 6 months ago

    number one, three. four and five are me. i think you are a fabulous writer. you are my inspiration. i’m serious. whenever i see you’ve written something new, i have to read it because i know it will be great/insightful/well-written/heartwarming/etc. and i just shared my deepest darkest secrets in my post. i hope you get through whatever is eating at you. good luck dear, your in my prayers/blessings/faithless mutterings. i love you dear. good luck. great job.

  71. On Pet French Fry?:

    posted 6 months ago

    that is awesome. so cute, funny and yea, that last line is just amazing.

  72. On Now And Never:

    posted 6 months ago

    march 22 is my b-day! anyway great story!

  73. On Envelope:

    posted 6 months ago

    ooh, suspense. i want to know what happens. thank goodness for anna. i hope lily gets better {emotionally. great story. five stars.

  74. On Confused:

    posted 6 months ago

    mhmm… great continuation<3

  75. On Gracie:

    posted 6 months ago

    awesome job. really great. you did it again. five stars!

  76. On Dirt and Love:

    posted 6 months ago

    amazing amazing amazing. i love you. i’ve felt like that… your writing is awesome.

  77. On Reaching Melanie:

    posted 7 months ago

    aww it’s so sweet yet so sad. <3

  78. On The Master of Games:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmm… this is really good. love the metaphors, heh i think that’s the right device… five stars.

  79. On Finders, Keepers. :

    posted 7 months ago

    i really love this piece. their are some flaws with continuity but honestly this is really great. four point five stars, ie. five.

  80. On Everything Changes:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmm… it’s so detailed. so aww-mazing. five [ thousand ] stars.

  81. On Chasing a Dream:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmm… funny, cute, awesome twist. 5 big ones (stars)

  82. On Just A Girl:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow. awesome. 5*’s

  83. On Thanksgiving:

    posted 7 months ago

    it’s so cute<3

  84. On My World is Silent:

    posted 7 months ago

    aww.. this is so good. it made me cry a little… wow the imagery and the picture this paints is just aw-inspiring and yet so sad. great job. five stars (more if i could)

  85. On Finally, His Question:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmm, i haven’t read the prequel’s but i really like this piece alone. it’s really good, really really good.

  86. On Scenes from a Football Game (Autobiography Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    excellent! i love how it’s so serious, yet amazingly funny in the end. brilliant.

  87. On Leaving Well Read Notes [Post-It Challenge]:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmm… so cute, and possible. i could see doing this at work…. thanks for the idea!

  88. On Nice ducky!:

    posted 7 months ago

    mhmmm…. i really like this one. part cutesy little story; part psychological mystery, why has time frozen and what’s up with the geese and his fear? very good!

  89. On dancing in the rain:

    posted 7 months ago

    ooh, this is so cute. so romantic.

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