I like how in the beginning the future doesn’t look very bright, but then the whole fantasy comes in at the end and their future suddenly looks a lot better. Those last three lines were great.
someone who appeared to be a knight in shining armour but ended up being a jerk in aluminum foil. I love how you write! Descriptive, entertaining and true.
Like the quote, Krulltar. This ficlet was, dare I say it, Awesome! A message that I very much agree with…the LoA is and hopefully always will be a positive place open to anyone and everyone who wishes to write and be awesome. :)
Haha, well them purple trumpets are pretty rare, but if you know the right people then anything is possible. And yes, the Aquaggaswack is pretty dang awesome! :-D LoA
Funny observation…that is true isn’t it? The side effects usually always sound worse then why you’re taking the medication in the first place. I liked how you wrote the end; it made me smile LoA
Good idea…everyone loves comments! Although sometimes it’s hard to write comments…it’s hard to think of the right words to say sometimes. Well at least for me, anyways. Nonetheless, I accept this challenge, and I shall do my best! Wish me luck. LoA
I know exactly what it’s like to have such a good friend…someone who makes me smile. I hope that everyone finds a friend like that at least once in their lives. :) LoA
Congratulations on your featured ficlet! I loved the way you started and ended with the same paragraph. Great story. Oh, and Doppelganger is my new favorite word. :) LoA
Awesome challenge…I’ve been away from ficlets for a while so it’ll take some work to get my brain working in creative-story-mode again. But I will definitely enter once I get a good idea! ;-)
lol, I love it! Very creative. They have machines on two wheels that a human peddles, and it magically balances! :-D From earth’s point of view, to Prinpularia’s perspective…this could get interesting.
Best line: But did you really look at. What!? What did you really look at!? Your face? A squirrel? The unibrow? So many possibilities! lol, if anyone outside our group reads this they’ll be sooo confused. :-P
Best line: But did you really look at. What!? What did you really look at!? Your face? A squirrel? The unibrow? So many possibilities! lol, if anyone outside our group reads this they’ll be sooo confused. :-P
I like it…I can only imagine how difficult that job must be. Of course, as your story describes, being a nurse can also be very rewarding. Very nicely written. LoA
Oh wow, what did she see!? Kind of reminds me of one of my friends who talks about people and their auras…she can be a little strange sometimes too. Awesome ficlet, I hope there’s a sequel! LoA
oh no! what will happen now!? loved this line: he’s the largest suck-up since leeches inhabited the earth. He’s been aiming for the Vice Principal position since Pompeii got burninated :-D LoA
haha…awesome! No more writer’s block…awesome, the guitar…awesome, increasing awesomeness…also awesome! (I think I too may have to expand my vocabulary) LoA
Ooo… very evil, indeed! I feel kinda sorry for the person. I liked how you took the inspiration of what seemed to be an innocent and cheerful toy and turned it into something very twisted. I love it! LoA
Yay! Another great ficlet. I love the strange and random expressions! Randomness is always good. But what happened? Why is Burrito in the hospital? Why does Michelle keep running away? So many questions! LoA
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