Ficlets

Phosphate11's posted comments

On Befuddlement, part 2.:

posted 7 days ago

this was a very nice sequel, I loved it!
On My First Steps (My First... Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

lol, very funny, nice job!
On Forever:

posted about 1 month ago

Personally, I love poetry, I love how it makes you understand and feel what the person is feeling, without them directly stating it, poetry really does evoke emotion, like Bilfurd said, and that is what this piece did for me. Nice job!
On My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]:

posted about 1 month ago

this was so sweet and cute! I love the part “He had acne and braces.” It just really made it real for me, loved it!
On The First Time I Stood ("My First" Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

oops, lol it posted twice, my bad!
On The First Time I Stood ("My First" Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

lol, “all I knew was I had cookies.”
this was awesome!
On The First Time I Stood ("My First" Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

lol, “all I knew was I had cookies.”
this was awesome!
On The First Time I Bled ("My First" Challenge):

posted about 1 month ago

Lol, I like the line, “had had the talk with me” lol. And the line, “It…hurt?”

Nice job!!
On Everyone says:

posted about 1 month ago

this was beautiful!
On "Make your own challenge" Challenge:

posted about 1 month ago

This is such a good idea! I am totally going to enter!
On Knowing Your Pain:

posted about 1 month ago

wow! I totally have felt like this before! Nice job!
On When I see you:

posted about 1 month ago

this makes me think of someone I know.

loved this, short, but beautiful
On Challenge by Numbers :

posted about 1 month ago

nice one! gotta try this
On Cellar, Cellar Door.:

posted about 1 month ago

yeah, I really like that last line
On goodbye:

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, it took me like 10 minutes just to read through all these comments! lol
Yeah so I haven’t been on ficlets in a really long time, so maybe I’ve forgotten some stuff, but I thought this was a really good poem.
I don’t think it deserves all this bashing, I don’t think Lena was doing all of this just to get on the most active and most popular list.
And I don’t really think there is anything wrong with writing your anger out, I like to do that, it is a much better alternative than other options.
On Gone?:

posted 3 months ago

omg, this touched me so much. It completely reminds me of this guy, that as much as I wanna hate, I keep falling for all over again, this was amazing!!
On change:

posted 3 months ago

yeah, you can’t change people
On Escape:

posted 4 months ago

this was great, and writing really is a great escape
On Via I-M (2):

posted 4 months ago

i love this!! especially because, it is like they were already friends, so now it is just so cute!!
On Drifting Apart (I Miss You Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!! And I really love the first paragraph, it makes me think about somebody that I somewhat miss.
On I really have no idea!- Random:

posted 4 months ago

iI really like the last line, because it totally flowed with the rest of the piece as well, this was awesome!!
On Via I-M:

posted 4 months ago

yeah this was so cute, I absolutely love it!!!!
On Snow Devil:

posted 4 months ago

whole** oops lol
On Snow Devil:

posted 4 months ago

oh this was cool, it kept me intrigued the how time
On To marry, or Not To Marry:

posted 4 months ago

awwww so sad, but I loved it
On Difficult Decision (An Inspiration Of Love Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

yeah it really is a difficult decision, that’s why I love that quote, it really gets you thinking!
On An Inspiration Of Love Challenge.:

posted 4 months ago

oh loved this, and the last line, ha ha!!
On Just a Saying, Poorly Timed:

posted 4 months ago

lol yes unexpected, but I loved it
On Inspiration Of Love Challenge: My Heart Decided For Me:

posted 4 months ago

awww so cute and sweet!!
On How About You? (Phosphates Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

ha this was funny in a sweet way, nice job
On labels:

posted 5 months ago

I hate labels, they are at my school too, they really are everywhere, but you can’t hide from them cause they are just there.
On Cry:

posted 5 months ago

I feel like this a lot, there are so many time that I just cry and nobody really knows, sometimes I cry and I don’t even know why, this was really touching
On Soccer:

posted 5 months ago

I couldn’t have explained it better myself, I love soccer, nice ficlet
On dont you hate?:

posted 5 months ago

wow okay so I’m guessing that most of the people that commented on here all know each other? Anyways about the ficlet, I loved it, and I can totally relate.
I use to like this guy, but know he can’t seem to get it through his head that I don’t anymore, and that he really isn’t that great. Oh well, great piece.
On moved on?:

posted 5 months ago

awww this is so sad, but if brandie treats her that way, than she deserves better
On Poem #4:

posted 5 months ago

wow I really liked this one, I can’t even explain how it made me feel. This was awesome!
On Poem #3:

posted 5 months ago

yes a broken heart is so sad!! It has to be one of the worst things in the world.
On Poem #2:

posted 5 months ago

another dark poem, but once again, very good
On Poem #1:

posted 5 months ago

wow this is so sad and cold, but so wonderfully written
On (Phosphate's Challenge) Forever:

posted 5 months ago

it isn’t letting me rate, but 5 stars!!
On two sides (vday thing):

posted 5 months ago

i love when somethings are so simple, but yet they seem to capture all the emotion, this was wonderful
On (Phosphate's Challenge) Forever:

posted 5 months ago

oh this so was so sad/beautiful, I felt like I was there, I loved it
On Different {Six word Memoir Challenge}:

posted 5 months ago

ooo, i like this, i like this a lot
On Maybe You Know:

posted 5 months ago

this is soooo sweet!!!!!! I love it!!!
On used to:

posted 5 months ago

wow, I love the comparison from before to after, the difference in the narrators feelings towards the person, very nice job
On To a Beautiful Boy (Six Word Memoir Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

yeah I agree, this is so sweet!!!!!
On I lost... (Six word memoir challenge):

posted 5 months ago

aww that’s sad, but so many things are really like that, sometimes you just loose, and then it is over. Nice job!!
On What is love?:

posted 5 months ago

yeah, the last line is so short and simple, but it is so perfect, i love it!!!
On lovesick7:

posted 5 months ago

lol, i love how such little things can seem like such magical moments when they are with the right person
On lovesick6:

posted 5 months ago

lol I like how she calculated it all
On lovesick5:

posted 5 months ago

oh love this series!! can’t wait to read the sequel!!
On lovesick5:

posted 5 months ago

oh love this series!! can’t wait to read the sequel!!
On lovesick2:

posted 5 months ago

lol I like the whole good hair day thing when it was his hair. lol that was funny!!!
On lovesick:

posted 5 months ago

wow he sounds dreamy!! lol
On Andrea and Kenny...Over?:

posted 5 months ago

lol, ha I really liked this, but i haven’t read any others in the series, but I think I just might have to now!!!
On I'll fall- Random:

posted 5 months ago

wow for not being meant to be poetic I sure am surprised because I thought this was beautiful!!!!
On A Wind On Winter Grass [Strong Memory Challenge]:

posted 5 months ago

awww the last line i miss it so was so sad and sweet!!! this was amazing
On Want To Know The Truth?:

posted 5 months ago

wow, this was like so sad, yet it was so nice, does that even make sense?? I really liked this, it was very well written!!!!
5 billion stars
On Reach for the Stars, If You Try Hard Enough, You'll Get One:

posted 5 months ago

this was so beautiful, and it really was inspiring. I loved it.
On Let's Make Peace:

posted 5 months ago

It has nothing to do with the series, yet it has everything to do with the series, because this series isn’t suppose to be about one main thing, it is just about all these things that go on in her life, like how a real life is like, lots of different, and sometimes random things.
On 1/30/08;; "Goodbye":

posted 5 months ago

I need a sequel!!!!!!
On Ten Minutes:

posted 5 months ago

hmmm… what is she gonna say???
On Cannot Believe:

posted 5 months ago

poor connor, his playerish skills have failed him
On Not Mine Yet:

posted 5 months ago

oh okay i get it here, at first I was wondering what the letters where but now I understand, nice
On Bear Bones Beginning:

posted 5 months ago

Sequel!!!
On So...Maddie:

posted 5 months ago

awww this was sad, but sweet too, I loved it, great job
On One Minute at 11:11 :

posted 5 months ago

I love stuff like this, it is beautiful, and I love reading it!!
On Katy:

posted 5 months ago

I agree with all of this, I wish katy well, this was beautiful
On Ways to get kicked out of Wallmart:

posted 5 months ago

lol ha ha “luke , I am your father!” I’ll try to sequel this, but my mind is completely blank right now!!
On Rejection (True Life Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

ha ha soo funny!!! I wonder, is this guy really gay looking?? or was it just because of the rejection?? lol, it seems so familiar as if… hmmm wonder why…
On Untitled.:

posted 5 months ago

this was awesome, nice job
On The Little Girl In The Painting:

posted 5 months ago

hmmm this was interesting. and I do agree, sequel?
On An Answer for My Question:

posted 5 months ago

oh I really liked the whole melody and harmony part!! Loved this!!!
On Someone Is Out There.:

posted 6 months ago

awww that is so beautiful and sad!!
On Just For Now, I Promise:

posted 6 months ago

i love the last line!!!

“It’s your life – make up the melody.”

Beautiful!!!!
On Where Are We?:

posted 6 months ago

where are they??!
On Oh You:

posted 6 months ago

lol ha ha PDA!!!!
On The Game:

posted 6 months ago

lol the end was pretty funny, he got schooled, lol, and the whole thing was very interesting, nice job!!!
On I Never Asked:

posted 6 months ago

this is wonderful and shows a different view point very well, of course with me being anti-abortion, it is very hard for me to understand it, but still a defiant point was made here, and it was beautiful.
On The Past Never Changes (Monochromatic Reflections):

posted 6 months ago

OMG I love this!!!! It is soooo beautiful!!!! but so is all your writing!!!!
On Getting His Number :

posted 6 months ago

okay so I added names in front, you can let me know if that helps, I know it was very uncreative, but hopefully it will be a little clearer now!! =)
On Getting His Number :

posted 6 months ago

yeah I was going to use screen names, but to be honest, I was really just to lazy to think of some, lol, maybe I will add the names in front of it or something so people can understand better
On I'm Gonna Make Someone Proud.:

posted 6 months ago

that was sweet and sad, and beautiful.
I love the line “No, not just a house, she needed a home.”
A home really does mean a lot more than a house.
On Shoes-Will They Make Me Or Break Me??:

posted 6 months ago

ha ha this kind of thing shows why I am so not “traditional” I mean really I only have like 2 pairs of shoes, at least that I wear often, but anyways cool story and maybe like LYHB said, a sequel?
On Would You Rather Be Eaten By... {Phosphate11's Would You Rather Challenge}:

posted 6 months ago

i love how this was in a story, and great would you rather questions!!!!
On Would You Rather Challenge:

posted 6 months ago

love these, really awesome, these were fun to read!!!!
On Not Much Part 3 (Mistress Elsha Hawk's challenge) :

posted 6 months ago

And this now, is the end.
On Not Much Part 2 (Mistress Elsha Hawk's challenge) :

posted 6 months ago

I think I will still have to write one more after this, to get the rest of the description and emotion of the place.
On Not Much (Mistress Elsha Hawk's challenge) :

posted 6 months ago

I have to write a sequel to this because I haven’t even gotten to my place yet, or used the 5 senses, but I wanted it to have the introduction so everybody could understand better.
On The End?:

posted 6 months ago

omg she broke up with her?? why??
On This Faith of Mine:

posted 6 months ago

this was really nicely written, and i feel bad for that guy at your school, i hate it when people are that mean to others.
On 5: Purple Shirt:

posted 6 months ago

they really are sooo cute together!!!!!
On 4: Player:

posted 6 months ago

lol i love this series!!!!!!!
On The Photographer:

posted 6 months ago

cool, this was nice to read
On 3: Show Me:

posted 6 months ago

cute!! sequel!!
On 2: Bowling:

posted 6 months ago

lol a guy moment, loving this series!!!
On 1: Pete:

posted 6 months ago

awww cute, now i wanna read the sequels!!!
On A Long Stream of Continuation (2.4):

posted 6 months ago

woah, that was interesting.
On On Innocence:

posted 6 months ago

loved this
On better or worse?:

posted 6 months ago

aww thats nice, the not having to pretend to be happy part
On Rejected:

posted 6 months ago

lol I can kind of imagine what the principal looked like!! liking these…
On Stuck in the middle:

posted 6 months ago

nicely written, mean kids!!
On Coustume Party.:

posted 6 months ago

this was cool, maybe a sequel????
On One Life to Live:

posted 6 months ago

this was awesome, loved reading it!!!!
On this is who i am.:

posted 6 months ago

woah!! her parents totally need to just accept her for who she is!!
On She Hates Me?:

posted 6 months ago

nice, liking this series…
On why? 4:

posted 6 months ago

wow
On Why? 3:

posted 6 months ago

oh yay another one, and look another after this one, now i must go read that one!!!!
On Tell Me A Story :

posted 6 months ago

thanks for all of the great comments people!! =) I’m not to great at the whole song writing concept, but if anyone else really wants to try and turn it into a song, feel free.
On Oh No She Did Not!:

posted 6 months ago

wow sleeping with 5 guys, thats not a very nice rumor
On Why?:

posted 6 months ago

land a girl?? interesting, could be a nice start to a series…
On Life Philosophy:

posted 6 months ago

awww this was soo nice, it made me feel all happy inside!!
On Inspiration Quiz:

posted 6 months ago

lol I know same with number 10, not one bf, but I still believe I loved a guy, but who knows I’m only 14.
On Phosphate11's Results of The Inspiration Quiz:

posted 6 months ago

I know this was suppose to be used in a story and everything, but I thought it would be kind of fun to just answer them straight down the line.
On 50 Ficlets= Phosphate11's Challenge!!!!! :

posted 6 months ago

Winner of challenge: Officially
On So Close: I Remember This... (Pt 10):

posted 6 months ago

this is so sad and this marcus person is soo horrible
On A Love Letter To All My Fellow Ficleteers:

posted 6 months ago

well thanks I think we all appreciate it, and I do agree so many of these stories on here have touched me
On Nightmare: I Remember This... (Pt 5):

posted 6 months ago

omg!!!! whats gonna happen???
On Don't: I Remember This... (Pt 4):

posted 6 months ago

I’m going to read the next one right now!! this series is hooking!!
On No Escape: I Remember This... (Pt 3):

posted 6 months ago

wow this is a really intense series, but really good
On If Looks Could Kill: I Remember This... (Pt 2):

posted 6 months ago

woah yeah, wow
On I Remember This... (Pt 1):

posted 6 months ago

wow this is really interesting, I must keep reading
On Great Plan?:

posted 6 months ago

I like the format style of this. It was cool. And I wasn’t expecting that at the end, nice!! I will have to keep reading.
On Do You?:

posted 6 months ago

wow, she just spilled out her heart, I wonder what he is going to say…
On Pens Poses a CHALLENGE!:

posted 6 months ago

This is a really cool challenge. I’m in!!
On Still Perfect :

posted 6 months ago

Sorry I will just set you straight here.
Linz does not like Evan.
Her and Evan are more like brother and sister. I know I never really showed it that well in the stories, but I just thought I would let you know, incase I still don’t show it enough in future stories.
On 5 Things I'll Never Tell Anyone:

posted 6 months ago

these are some pretty interesting things, I enjoyed reading it. And omg I couldn’t agree more on #4, there is this girl at my school who is totally obsessed, and if I don’t pay enough attention to her, she goes crazy, and sends me creepy melodramatic emails. lol.
On Meaningful Songs:

posted 6 months ago

I love this song, it is so beautiful and sad.
On Together Forever:

posted 6 months ago

That is so cute, I think that is what everyone wants in the end.
On My Five Secrets:

posted 6 months ago

nicely written, I agree on a lot of these.
On Carefull:

posted 7 months ago

the most important thing of all???
On Just Like:

posted 7 months ago

I wanna know where they are going!!!
On What's Expected Is Unexpected:

posted 7 months ago

omg love the series, need the next one
On To Swing With Morgan:

posted 7 months ago

awwww so sad, but beautifully written.
On The Flirt :

posted 7 months ago

you know there are definite parts and pieces that I pull from my life into these stories, so I guess you could say that they are similar.
On 5 things I've ever told anyone:

posted 7 months ago

I couldn’t agree more on #3. I always think that people could be talking about me. Nicely written.
On He Grinned:

posted 7 months ago

who are they going to visit????
On why? 2:

posted 7 months ago

this series is so interesting i need the next one!!!!!!
On All I Thought:

posted 7 months ago

oh its been so long since i’ve read one from this series, i had thought that it might have ended
On One More Thing to tell:

posted 7 months ago

oh failure, who isn’t afraid of it????
On Why?:

posted 7 months ago

wow omg this is part of that other series, right??? please continue!!!!!
On Charming:

posted 7 months ago

ha ha, i personally like charming guys, but hey thats just me, and i think everyone out there deep down, all they really want it love…
On 5 Things I Fear:

posted 7 months ago

it’s amazing how everyone really does have stuff to say, sometimes I felt like i was the only one, but obviously not
On 5 Things Locked So Deep Inside:

posted 7 months ago

wow, yeah everyone does have things that they have never told or just have to say, me included
On He likes me...Maybe!:

posted 7 months ago

i don’t know guys can be stupid, I felt like i was in this situation once, i liked this guy, and he did all these things that made it seem like he liked me, so I told him that I liked him, and then he told me that he didn’t like me… that was awkward.
On 5 Things I Have Never Told:

posted 7 months ago

wow, well i agree with number one, but then again I do recall my health teacher telling me one day that everyone will get married, even if they don’t think they will.
On A New & Improved 5 things I've Never Told Anyone, with a few touch-ups:

posted 7 months ago

when i first read this, i just thought it was soo cool, I didn’t realize it was going to become something that everybody just had to do, and I found myself needing to write my own 5 also, amazing idea!!!
On 5 Things I've Never Said:

posted 7 months ago

wow okay, so im totally exactly the same on 1,3,4, and 5
On 5 Things I Hate Talking About:

posted 7 months ago

agree with 1,2,4, and 5, and maybe 3 little bit too, lol i guess thats all of them
On 5 things I've Never Told Anyone:

posted 7 months ago

yeah i agree with 1 even though im 14, and agree with 5 too
On Five Things I've Never Told:

posted 7 months ago

ha ha I agree with 1, i do that all the time
On What About Dave?:

posted 7 months ago

what about dave??!
On WHAT??:

posted 7 months ago

what??!!
On A New & Improved 5 things I've Never Told Anyone, with a few touch-ups:

posted 7 months ago

this was cool though, and i totally agree with 1,2, and 5.
On Message.:

posted 7 months ago

yes suspense… who is it??!???
On Find Me.:

posted 7 months ago

yeah i would say that they qualify as a total creeper, lol, i have 2 read the next one!!!
On Hopeless Thoughts:

posted 7 months ago

hmmmm this is interesting, gets me thinking
On Drowning:

posted 7 months ago

sometimes i wish a guy would save me, others i think that life is better without them, oh well, nice ficlet.
On Murder Plot:

posted 7 months ago

nice, I like the “stage right” and everything.
On Not Gonna Fit:

posted 7 months ago

hummmm this could be interesting, I wanna see where this is going…
On Summer Love:

posted 7 months ago

oh I liked this, I could really picture everything going on, nicely done.
On Memories:

posted 7 months ago

this is another amazing poem, I just can’t stop reading your work.
On i love you:

posted 7 months ago

wow there isn’t even a way to describe this, it is just so well written, I love it!!!
On Life:

posted 7 months ago

yeah you really captured it perfectly, beautiful
On love alone:

posted 7 months ago

omg so powerful, this is awesome
On Middle of a Story, end. [phosphate's challenge_:

posted 7 months ago

Wow okay so I just finished reading all of them, and this was really well done, I really like this last one. And I like how they all described the scenery so well and the camera actions, nicely done!
On It's Game Time:

posted 7 months ago

I love game time at my town, my city’s team is the best there is!!!! yay!!
On What does this mean?:

posted 7 months ago

nice, sounds like you found someone special??
On SEQUEL TO THE LIFE OF MIA TOLKENS!!:

posted 7 months ago

abercrombie is the best smelling cologne out there, i heart it
On SoccerISmyLIFE's Challenge!:

posted 7 months ago

omg wow this is perfect for me. but the thing I wanna use for mine is also what I want to use for my series I am writing right now. So I will just sequel it to my series and put SoccerIsMyLife’s Challenge in the title, kk?? cool this is going to be fun!!
On Time To Mooch :

posted 7 months ago

ha ha, but no, Blake is definitely not that kind of person, try the exact opposite, lol
On Never Marry (Phosphate11's Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

This is a very well done screen play.
5 stars.
On Popular Max:

posted 7 months ago

amazing!!!
On Seriously.:

posted 7 months ago

wow really liking this series here, and I just have to know who wrote the note!!!??
On The Number Before Death:

posted 7 months ago

omg i really need the next one!!!!!!
On Not secret anymore...admirer:

posted 7 months ago

liking this series, would love to read another…
On The life of Mia Tolkens:

posted 7 months ago

awwww a cute guy, how we always seem to fall for them, the name tyler kind of reminds me of this other name, who I’m not really going to mention…
On Strong Heart no more:

posted 7 months ago

awwww, so sad, good thing that could never happen to me… you should meet my neighbors (it’s good poetry too, i like poetry)
On The best Combination:

posted 7 months ago

yes it is very happy!!! It made me smile!! yay!!!!
On And the World comes tumbling Down:

posted 7 months ago

this is good especially for a first, it was fun to read, it made me sad though, poor girl, her world is tumbling down!! lol, okay, great job.
-nran
On Just a Fad:

posted 7 months ago

hummmm, who is this Dave guy????
On Never, Nothing, No Chance.:

posted 7 months ago

omg, omg, what is going to happen??? I need the next one!!!!
On confusion 2:

posted 7 months ago

wait who is talking here?? is it that girl talking to brandie??? i need another one!!
On Soccer Practice :

posted 7 months ago

pierre is just his french name
On Soccer Practice :

posted 7 months ago

evan is pierre
On Lost friendship found again!!!:

posted 7 months ago

awww that’s cute, nicely done.
On Personal Learning Challenge :

posted 7 months ago

well my school in real life has 800 kids, I don’t know if that is considered big or small though.
On She Didn't Like Him:

posted 7 months ago

intrigue!!!
On That Day.:

posted 7 months ago

oooo what happens next??!!
On Lost..:

posted 7 months ago

interesting, i have to read the rest
On Professions in Study Hall:

posted 8 months ago

omg it really is awesome, i didn’t see it coming at all
On My Life Is Complete!:

posted 8 months ago

lol, there is defiantly a guy like that at my school…
On Ahead of Me:

posted 8 months ago

oh that’s kind of sad for linz, nicely written though
On Shopping=sweaty people in need of anti-perspirent{OTOC black friday challenge}:

posted 8 months ago

lol, “some of these people could really use some deodorent. PU!” lol, nice line.
On Dumb Jocks:

posted 8 months ago

yeah, that is actually where the name for the notebook was inspired by.
On I Love You (continued):

posted 8 months ago

this was nice, and had a good rhythm to it, 5*’s!!!
On Time after time....(Post-it's challange):

posted 8 months ago

this was nicely done, great job
On Jungle Gym [SIG Series, 2]:

posted 8 months ago

this was interesting, I liked it.
On Don't pretend:

posted 8 months ago

that really is beautiful
On Love?:

posted 8 months ago

wow, this was really good
On Round Pizza/Square Box?:

posted 8 months ago

omg yeah I’ve missed these so much!!!!!!!

And now I need another!!!!!!!!!

Awesome job!!!!!!!!!
On Alright:

posted 8 months ago

awwww thats cute, what happens next??!!
On A rambling thought of me:

posted 8 months ago

wow…there’s nothing else I can say
On Run!!!:

posted 9 months ago

This was really good, I liked reading it, it’s been a while since I’ve read an action based story, it really got me reading, and wondering. A sequel perhaps???
On Watch Me:

posted 9 months ago

it’s really familiar. good
On I Miss You:

posted 9 months ago

It was really short, I feel like there should be more.
On Stone:

posted 9 months ago

well that’s intersting, but I think it’s all in your head.
On Finding It:

posted 9 months ago

hmmm very short, but gets me wanting the next one. glad your back writing this series!!!
On Why am I smiling?:

posted 9 months ago

lol that was kind of funny, it was good
On On Purpose:

posted 9 months ago

wow that was surprising, but really good!!!!!!
On Her words.:

posted 9 months ago

oooooh intersting, sequel!!!!!!!!
On ...But once I was me:

posted 9 months ago

wow…amazing
On A Reason to Cry:

posted 9 months ago

i really liked this, it was really deep.
On Happy, and you know it.:

posted 9 months ago

lol that was pretty funny, and intersting
On A Sucky Friday:

posted 9 months ago

oh i think im hooked, i hope you make this a series, i’d love to read more!!!!!!!!!
On someday_93:

posted 9 months ago

yeah i agree with everyone above. and this was really nice, i really enjoyed reading it.
(i was born in 93 too!!!!!)
On Pizza:

posted 9 months ago

awwww that’s cute
On The Killer, the Main Characters, and Running Through A Dark House:

posted 9 months ago

this was great, i love this series
On fresh start a new day:

posted 9 months ago

i think iheartsoccer x10 didn’t put the e because they probably thought it was going to get bleeped out. but yeah this series really isn’t that bad, i was just thinking that she was making 13 year olds do that, but i guess she is making a different story out of it.
On Oh it is love....:

posted 9 months ago

oops i mean TottalyNotBlonde/SoccerIsMyLife
(sorry my bad)
On Dream World:

posted 9 months ago

wow that was really intersting, if you made this a series it could end up being really good.
On fresh start a new day:

posted 9 months ago

nope I disagree, IheartSoccer x10 is right, LovedandAlone ruined the series.
On Oh it is love....:

posted 9 months ago

well first FlirtingWithaBrickWall, i agree about the whole frowning upon sex thing, i think that LovedandAlone is just trying to make them older than they really are. Also it’s IheartSoccer x10, not 1heartSoccer (sorry just little things like that annoy me.)
but also I disagree, Music2MyEars29/SoccerIsMyLife had a very good series going and I really enjoyed it. I think LovedandAlone runied it.
On tears good bye:

posted 9 months ago

i don’t think age has anything to do with watching gone with the wind, because that is just a horrible movie no matter what age you are. but lovedandalone is making it seem like they are a lot older than they really are.
On I hurt... He hurts...what to do?:

posted 9 months ago

yeah idk why you had to try and continue soccerismylife’s story.
On Arm around Me:

posted 10 months ago

yeah awwwwwwwwww, how cute!!!!!
On Lips:

posted 10 months ago

ohhh that was good.
On Listen:

posted 10 months ago

lol ha ha yeah that was good
On Giving In:

posted 10 months ago

awwwww, it’s love!!!!!!!!!
On Catch Up:

posted 10 months ago

ha ha ya lol stalker!! i wanna kno what he is going to say!!!!!
On Signed Off:

posted 10 months ago

ohhhh…conflict…what’s next???
On Your Friend:

posted 10 months ago

ohhh wow didnt see that coming
On Just Dumb:

posted 10 months ago

ohhh Ty got burned lol, they should have used my #2 pencil burn, lol jk!!!!
On Just So You Know:

posted 10 months ago

lol wow, thats lots to follow, i think a bunch of ppl r gonna end up getting hurt. we will see!!
On Tear:

posted 10 months ago

wow, im touched, it can be hard to put things like that to words, that was very good.
On Movie Day:

posted 10 months ago

oh that’s a cliff hanger!!!!
On Waiting:

posted 10 months ago

ohhh the suspense!!! need the next one!!!!
On Oh NO!:

posted 10 months ago

ha ha ha brixley, looks like you’re caught!!!
On Why?:

posted 10 months ago

oh yes i really need the next one!!
On Fine:

posted 10 months ago

awwww yay!!!! im so happy!!!
On Math Class and Other Close Calls:

posted 10 months ago

oh i need to know what happenes next!!
On Monica, Again:

posted 10 months ago

ohhh jake is such a sweety
On ME:

posted 10 months ago

i liked this, it was good, i think I will read the prequels and sequels now
On Score:

posted 10 months ago

awwww how sweet
On Not Exactly Found:

posted 10 months ago

omg need a sequel!!!!!!!!!
On Bells and Brats:

posted 10 months ago

oh what is going to happen?!! Need a sequel!!!!!!!!!
On Will It Really Work?:

posted 10 months ago

oh what’s gonna happen????
On Battles Lost:

posted 10 months ago

aww how sad =(
On Plan in Action (Almost):

posted 10 months ago

oh its begging for a sequel
On This Far:

posted 10 months ago

ha ha i wanna see the date
On Going to School:

posted 10 months ago

oh ya I cant wait to read the next one!!!!
On My Girl:

posted 11 months ago

hmmm very intersting, this could be a new series.
On Excuse Me:

posted 11 months ago

that was really good, the kitten is really cute.
On Found Out:

posted 11 months ago

ok wow this is begging for a sequel!!!!
On Not Home:

posted 11 months ago

hmmm brixley kind of reminds me of someone… and 38 juggles yeah right, you just wanted her to be able to beat me!! =(
On Too Cool:

posted 11 months ago

what??!!??? omg I want the next one!!!
On Beep:

posted 11 months ago

oh I need the next one!!!!!!!
On Too Early to Call Someone:

posted 11 months ago

oh yeah I can feel the tension
On Can I Take a Message?:

posted 11 months ago

oh i want the next, have to read more!!
On Monica:

posted 11 months ago

oh lol that was kind of awkward, but cute!!
On Unbelievably Cruel:

posted 11 months ago

yeah i dont like Monica
On Phone's for You:

posted 11 months ago

ohhh, jake????
On You're More Important:

posted 11 months ago

awwwww that was cute
On Wet Face:

posted 11 months ago

oh that was sad, but good
On Under Water:

posted 11 months ago

lol jake will save the day!!
On Falling In:

posted 11 months ago

lol she fell in, like i shouldn’t laugh but it was funny
On Facing Jake:

posted 11 months ago

good, good, good
On Or Maybe I Did:

posted 11 months ago

yeah that was a flashback I think
On The Second Party:

posted 11 months ago

really good
On Matchmaker Max:

posted 11 months ago

oh cant wait to read more!!!
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