Maiera's posted comments

  1. On Dream, or Nightmare?:

    posted 5 months ago

    Very beautifully written..
    You have a fluid style of writing that’s amazing and a story line that is easily relatable.
    Congrats on being featured.

  2. On I Need chaos:

    posted 6 months ago

    I love it Babe.

  3. On Searching:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww….
    Honey.
    :((

  4. On Bartimaeus: A philosophical Exploration of the Pen name that is supreme above all others.:

    posted 7 months ago

    I love that series..
    And I do believe I have to agree that the first one is the best.

  5. On Introductions Finished:

    posted 8 months ago

    Hmm..
    You changed the character a little..
    But I think I like it..
    I will write one continuing our story a little later.
    Lylas

  6. On Two Pools of Crimson:

    posted 8 months ago

    slitteD

    fix it.

  7. On So bring on the rain:

    posted 8 months ago

    I LOVE this one.
    HOLY…MOLY

  8. On A shattered memory:

    posted 12 months ago

    “Hey Don’t Stop” by Cartel
    “Weathered” by Creed
    Starless by Crossfade
    “Ghost of a Good Thing” by Dashboard Confessional
    “Fade Away” by Day of Fire
    “Scars Remain” by Disciple
    “Perfect Insanity” by Disturbed
    “Broken Hearted” by Eighteen Visions

  9. On Synopsis of Our Lives Pt. 3:

    posted 12 months ago

    I love this one too. But the dialogue needs some work.

  10. On Synopsis of Our Lives Pt. 2:

    posted 12 months ago

    I love how emotion filled this one is, and I love the way you expressed it.
    —one of my favs.

  11. On Synopsis of Our Lives:

    posted 12 months ago

    hmm. I like it, although even without you telling me, I could tell you were upset.

  12. On Negotiating With the Enemy:

    posted 12 months ago

    Interesting develpment in the plot. A lot more organized than the second. Further emphasizing a need for a plan. And btw, “rearing**”

  13. On Wildcard:

    posted 12 months ago

    It’s very choppy…and I think you should lay out what you want to happen in the plot before you write. But I can see an idea forming, and it seems like it could be good.

  14. On In-character survey II: Cayaana from The Fog series:

    posted 12 months ago

    shakes her head
    Okay, clarification.
    Aiden=your main character
    Christopher=mine in the harloquin
    lol.
    So this will be on here, for future reference.
    :P

  15. On In-character survey: Cayaana from The Fog series:

    posted 12 months ago

    Hmm..You changed her character again….
    We need to work on this.

  16. On The Soundtrack to My Summer:

    posted 12 months ago

    Wow, you can tell I know you when I understood that. Lol. Maybe it also helps that we think alike, generalizing along with songs lol.

  17. On The heart beats before the heart break:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Wow, this poem seems to be filled with emotion, and I love how you get the reader to see through your eyes throughout the experience. Beautiful.

  18. On The Times We Spent Together:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I love the first three lines the most, They are relatable and is something everyone experiences. You have a way with expressing a complex event, very simply, kudos:]]

  19. On Sissy Fists:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Lol. No problem, I just wrote some more, and I will try to.

    Thank you for the praise though. You have serious talent as well. And a wide variety of writing which is a plus!
    XDD
    I may put some poetry on here soon tooXD

  20. On Sissy Fists:

    posted about 1 year ago

    XD, the sense of humor is fantastic.

  21. On A Love Unreturned:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Beautiful writing, and I love how it is actually something probable in today’s society.

  22. On Why I Love You:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Awww..
    I love this, and as the person before me said, the opening dialogue captures your attention.

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