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SocccerISmyLIFE's posted comments

On This Boy:

posted about 1 month ago

wow this sounds like someone I know and he’s absoulutely perfect!
On 4th quarter :

posted 2 months ago

Oh Dan? This character could become interesting….
On Nachos :

posted 3 months ago

aww! I wonder who he is…. sequel plz!
On Cindy Lou Comes Cleaner:

posted 3 months ago

omg! I just read the whole series and I think I will die without a sequel!
On New Town, New Problems, New Friends:

posted 3 months ago

many many sequel possibilties. I will b looking 4 one
On Home Ec :

posted 4 months ago

lol! Bryce is soo cute!
On Dream, or Nightmare?:

posted 4 months ago

OMG! I love these stories! Please continue!
On kiss:

posted 4 months ago

this was sad but in an exciting way. I loved it!
On Try...what?:

posted 4 months ago

wow. Go on, please!
On Coming Clean :

posted 4 months ago

wow. Where is Linz in all of tgoing to his? Is she have like an “in” or something?
On Unrequited Love:

posted 4 months ago

aww. Poor u! I personally would go for Sam!
On An Inspiration Of Love:

posted 5 months ago

Nice Challenge
On I sit on my bed, looking like an idiot, dressed for Easter:

posted 5 months ago

This is a sweet series. I feel liek I’m living a day in someones actual life!
On You Never Asked :

posted 5 months ago

wow. Wasnt that sweet of Val
On The Darkness Of Love:

posted 5 months ago

Awesome
On My Alligator (Strong and powerful memories challenge):

posted 5 months ago

wow. Deep, special and sweet. Nice job.
On Falling Down :

posted 5 months ago

haha. Poor Linz. So who’s this Brian? A secret lover of the main character?!
On Stupid Answers!:

posted 5 months ago

haha. Cute sequel.
On Let's Make Peace:

posted 5 months ago

5 starz.
On Let's Make Peace:

posted 5 months ago

That was weird. Those girls sound like antagionists to your story. Nice.
On Unacceptable(Ficlet's challenge):

posted 5 months ago

sad and interesting. nice job!
On The Girl Who Could Talk With Her Eyes:

posted 5 months ago

good job. I love the title of your ficlet too. It was very intriguing.
On The Way the Cookie Crumbles:

posted 5 months ago

love the title!
On Take Me Seriously:

posted 5 months ago

doesn’t everyone want to be taken seriously? Great start!
On My Prince:

posted 5 months ago

aww. Every little girls fantasy is to have a prince only some stories don’t always have a happy ending…..
On The Emo/Punk Table :

posted 5 months ago

seriously emma jo is rite! Sequel! Now!
On Psychedellic Grandmother (True Story Challenge):

posted 5 months ago

Haha! This is soo cute!
On Facebook Romance:

posted 5 months ago

haha! This is cute. I want sum1 2 sequel it!
On Cannot Believe:

posted 5 months ago

Series ENDED! Others can continue but I’m through!
On Moern-Day Romeo and Juliette Done Right.:

posted 5 months ago

Aww. This is sweet and innocent like LoA said. I am wishing for a sequel.
On Zero Unread Messages :

posted 5 months ago

aww poor main character! I feel bad…. but i bet Bryce is totally crushing on her!
On Taking A Stand:

posted 5 months ago

lool. Good for the main character!
On One Minute at 11:11 :

posted 5 months ago

Awesome! This was really really sweet. I will wish @ 11:11 always!
On At the doctor's office:

posted 5 months ago

OMG! Just read the whole story! This was good!
On What I Love About you:

posted 5 months ago

aww how sweet!
On The Email:

posted 5 months ago

Hard to read and understand but still good.
On The Email 2:

posted 5 months ago

These are soo creepy!! I’m need a sequel!
On The Email 2:

posted 5 months ago

These are soo creepy!! I’m need a sequel!
On An Awesome Dream [LoA Challenge]:

posted 5 months ago

OMG!! I’m in absolute love and I mean love with this ficlet!! I aboslutely need a sequel!!! This ficlet is like keeping me alive!
On Untitled.:

posted 5 months ago

beautiful!
On 5 Awkward Things for Your Doctor to Say in the Middle of a Prostate Exam:

posted 5 months ago

This whole series was hialrious!
On 5 Awkward Things To Say In The Middle Of History Class:

posted 5 months ago

Haha!
On 5 Awkward Things To Do Or Say Right AFTER The Lights Come On :

posted 5 months ago

lool!!
On 5 More Awkward Things To Do or Say Right Before The Lights Go Out:

posted 5 months ago

These are funny 2!!
On 5 Awkward Things to Do or Say Right Before the Lights Go Out:

posted 5 months ago

haha. These are hilarious!
On Tyler -- Chest Pains:

posted 5 months ago

omg! sequel!
On Stories of a 100-Volt Klutz:

posted 5 months ago

haha. You poor, poor child.
On My First [True Story Challenge]:

posted 5 months ago

lol this is cute
On Motorola Vs Nokia :

posted 5 months ago

ahh! OMG! Maybe Sam should be a lil more understanding or whatever. Good series
On A Creeper? No A Creepster!:

posted 5 months ago

ahh LOL! sequel!
On When I Cry... :

posted 5 months ago

Wow. Very deep.
On Message Sent :

posted 6 months ago

Haha! Poor main character!
On Goal!:

posted 6 months ago

Yea I agree with Lone Writer this is a great description of how it feels to score the winning goal! I wanna know how that goalie felt because I myself am a goalie. This could be a great series.
On Back At Matt's :

posted 6 months ago

aww!! His cute lil braces! omg! Okay i m done now obsessing over a fictional character… anyway realy good series! I love it!
On Getting His Number :

posted 6 months ago

haha Linz is such a good friend! But whos this Anthony fellow? Is he a future lover?
On Dear Fellow Ficlet Family Members, I Appreciate You:

posted 6 months ago

aww! I’m tearing this was soo sweet!
On Back At Sam's :

posted 6 months ago

wow. These 2 are really different. I absoulutely love matt!
On Stop Flirting With Waffle:

posted 6 months ago

haha poor narator!
On You're In My Seat:

posted 6 months ago

OMG!!! WHAT WERE U THINKING!? wow. Ur character must be very shy. I bet Bryce planned this!
On >>Fast Forward>>:

posted 6 months ago

Bryce? Rafael? Val? I think u went 2 fast!!! My head is spinning!!
On Incoming Text:

posted 6 months ago

ahh! OMG!! I bet its Evan!! OMG!! Sequel b4 I like umm seriously injure myself!
On Series Is Back:

posted 6 months ago

yay! I can live again!!
On We Walk Home:

posted 6 months ago

wow. This was deep. I liked this piece.
On Limits of Immortality:

posted 6 months ago

wow. I liked this. it really made me think. Like isnt there a quote out there thats like its better to have a lived ur life then went ur life unlived? Its something like that. But anyway great ficlet!
On Answers to the Quiz:

posted 6 months ago

love love love Frank Sinatra! (i dnt think I spelled that rite)
On Why?:

posted 6 months ago

i’m not a guy. Just so everyone knows. I’m just trying to write from a new angle. So umm if any1, guys or girls has any advice lemme have it!
On British Accent (Profile Picture Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

cute!!
On One unheard message :

posted 6 months ago

eww!
I creeper!
On Penaltys of Love:

posted 6 months ago

Ouch. Poor dude.
On New person:

posted 6 months ago

continue please. I kinda feel like sumthin was skipped or something
On Ficlets Series Removed :

posted 6 months ago

i NEED that series 2 continue my life. Sooo get it back ASAP!!
On The New Queen:

posted 6 months ago

I like it very much. Tis a great sequel!
On An Unspoken Agreement :

posted 6 months ago

so what is Linz like a dumb blonde? Is that how she is all the time? Thats bad…..... Sequel!
On Akward Moment (soccerismylife's challenge):

posted 6 months ago

haha. That is good!
On Tell Me A Story :

posted 6 months ago

OMG!! This is beautilful!!
On A Slip Up, A Mistake, A Real Solid "Oops":

posted 6 months ago

o linz! She’s so funny (recording things oon her phone.) Sequel! I need to know!
On Crush-less :

posted 6 months ago

I know this feeling and I love it and hate it.
On My Quirk :

posted 6 months ago

haha. That is strange that you cheer for your home town everytime you enter but whatever floats your boat!
On Still Perfect :

posted 6 months ago

wait
1st of all don’t like him cuz of Bridget!
2nd of all doesnt Linz like him? Wont she not like hi cuz of Bridget?!
On Oops :

posted 6 months ago

haha good thing you’ve got Linz!
On My Meaningful Poem:

posted 6 months ago

nice. That poem is truely beautiful.
On Being Two-Faced:

posted 6 months ago

Wow. This was a great sequel and teaches a great life lesson!
On What Goes On in The Dressing Room.. Stays In the Dressing Room:

posted 6 months ago

wow. lol. I wished u would continue soon ( which doubles I need you to!)
On My 10:

posted 6 months ago

Sorry bout this list people. C I dnt hav an Ipod so I just picked 10 songs I could remember lol!
On My Meaningful Songs:

posted 6 months ago

nice choices
On Meaningful Songs:

posted 6 months ago

OMG! I absolutly have 2 hear this song. It sounds beautiful.
On Together Forever:

posted 6 months ago

love it! lol! My retarded computer.
On Together Forever:

posted 6 months ago

Very Fairytale. I <3 it!
On Destruction Of School Property :

posted 6 months ago

Haha… idiots! I have friends like this and they never cease to amaze me at how dumb they can get!
On A Dreamy French Accent :

posted 6 months ago

lol. Stupid Mr. Brandy!
On Just Like:

posted 7 months ago

if you don’t get this or need 2 be refreshed go back to my previous story: Catch Up. That might help!
On Carefull:

posted 7 months ago

omg!
never mind
Wrong story!
On Carefull:

posted 7 months ago

If you don’t get this you might have to go back to one of my stories: Catch Up.

Just in case!
On Funny Christmas Songs:

posted 7 months ago

this was cute. It made me recall all of the good x-mas songs out there.
On Christmas time is here:

posted 7 months ago

Reminds me of Christmas in my home town….
On The Stud :

posted 7 months ago

I want Brian!! Sequel Please!!
On To Swing With Morgan:

posted 7 months ago

i had a moment like tis once but the ending was happier! I loved this piece though
On Something Extra [Minimum Length Ficlet Challenge]:

posted 7 months ago

I choked on chocolate! Hialrious!
On The Flirt :

posted 7 months ago

lol. Broke it in half. Wayy 2 go girl! I think Connors got a lil crush on the narrator…..
On Initiation :

posted 7 months ago

omg! I want an initiation! That sounds soo cool!
On My Silly Xmas Traditions :

posted 7 months ago

lol these are cute!!
On Hollywood Heroin 3:

posted 7 months ago

lol. This whole series wass soo funny!
On Lead Dirigible:

posted 7 months ago

lol. This was a cute way to continue this! Someone keep it going!
On Hopeless. [adj. or n.] def.;:

posted 7 months ago

these are soo like what I was thinking! I really like how you spelled the numbers 2 that was unoriginal/original, however you look @ it.
On I'm Crying on the Inside :

posted 7 months ago

So sad. This is soo sad it almost sickens me!
On 5 Things That Have Happened To Me:

posted 7 months ago

I thought this was funny but I probably shouldn’t have. This really made me think…..
On 5 Things I Hate Talking About:

posted 7 months ago

these are really good and deep!
On The breakup :

posted 7 months ago

oo! These are good but they went by fast. Are you going to continue cuz I c something great right here!
On Confusion, Again:

posted 7 months ago

ohh. Young love….
On Anthony:

posted 7 months ago

This makes me think. I really need a sequel!
On The psychic:

posted 7 months ago

lol. This is interesting. You simply must continue!
On Laugh:

posted 7 months ago

I dont like the length of this piece but I had 2 keep u guys guessin’!!
On A Very Specific Narrative (challenge):

posted 7 months ago

lol! This sounds soo bad…...
On Dolly Needs A Do-over [a very specific challenge]:

posted 7 months ago

lol. this was better than mine!
On One More Thing to tell:

posted 7 months ago

i love the fact that u can have failure. It keeps ur head up… well atleast it does that 4 me.
On Waterworks.:

posted 7 months ago

omg! Again. Caleb sound sweet. I want a Caleb for Christmas! lol!
On No Better Than Scum:

posted 7 months ago

omg! Evan the evil! I would slap his face!
On Crying.:

posted 7 months ago

omg! those better be tears of joy!
On Confused.:

posted 7 months ago

I would be too! lol….
On 5 things:

posted 7 months ago

lol I love this list
On Five Things I've Never Told:

posted 7 months ago

Urs were more interesting than most I read…
On 5 Things I've Never Shared:

posted 7 months ago

I agree with all of them…....
On Not Who I Thought He Was:

posted 7 months ago

he cheated!! That little!!! What now? Thats what I’m asking….
On Pet French Fry?:

posted 7 months ago

haha! this is funny and a great sequel.
On WHAT??:

posted 7 months ago

OMG!! I can’t believe!!! What will she do now??
On A New & Improved 5 things I've Never Told Anyone, with a few touch-ups:

posted 7 months ago

wow. This is something that I wished I would have come up with….
On Don't Question Me; Teach Me!:

posted 7 months ago

That was interesting. Someone could make a series about this…..
On My color, Green (the color challenge):

posted 7 months ago

I love green too! This is good
On Blue (Color Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

Wow. This is very impressive.
On Who Am I? (Color Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

wow this is deep
On Is My Blue, Your Blue {Challenge Colors}:

posted 7 months ago

wow. This was wayy kool!
On White♥Black(Challenge Colors):

posted 7 months ago

This is good. But i don’t get it. Is she like color blind or something? Does she just purposely not see color. I think u should sequel. :)))
On The Long Kiss goodbye :

posted 7 months ago

I like the way it is. But it could have been a little less bland as L.I.A.W.L said before me. I hope you continue!
On CHALLENGE COLORS:

posted 7 months ago

kool I’m entering right now!
On Was That a Rap? Nope, Too White.:

posted 7 months ago

I like this! It was funny and I laughed (not to be mean. It brightened my day as Saint Chuck said) You would have deffinately topped the charts with this one!
On Message.:

posted 7 months ago

omg!! The suspense is killing me!! I need to know!
On Just A Phase:

posted 7 months ago

oo Just a phase! Sounds like someone I knew once…..
On Without you:

posted 7 months ago

great I’m glad! I’m sooo glad u got over it! U forgot 2 sequel this one to your others BTW. This one isnt as good as your others either…
On Blown Out of Proportion, Again:

posted 7 months ago

omg! This whole series has been amazing! It was strange at times but over all it was good. It took many twists and turns but overall: fantastic!
On In Loving Memory (My Sister in My Heart):

posted 7 months ago

My prayers for everyone! I’m so sorry to all that have lost someone. Very well written. Though it does suck to write in past tense…
On Falling hurts :

posted 7 months ago

I’m sooo sorry!!!!

Very well written….
On Friday Night Lights Part 5:

posted 7 months ago

aww his cute lil face! I’m shocked by the whole STD thing BTW.
On Drowning:

posted 7 months ago

omg! Wonderful… simply stunning
On Liar:

posted 7 months ago

It hurts bad…..
On Again.:

posted 7 months ago

lol. Maybe she should let it go? But I thinks thats impossible. You know what they say the clock wont change with u watching it….
On Friday Night Lights Part 4:

posted 7 months ago

I like this Bridget character. She’s seems like she could be a great friend. Keep up the good work!
On Friday Night Lights Part 3:

posted 7 months ago

Okay I can see where this is going. I like the fact he waves to them its cute!
On Dirt and Love:

posted 7 months ago

sad. I really feel the emotion of this piece
On Highschool Rumors:

posted 7 months ago

wow… I feel sickened by him. It was honestly well writened. It was a nice was to get all the emotions out.
On Love Cubed:

posted 7 months ago

wow.. I like it!
On Four Days:

posted 7 months ago

OMG! Suspense! I’m like dyin’ here! Sequel!
On Friday Night Lights Part 2:

posted 7 months ago

that Linz girl sounds like fun!
On Friday Night Lights:

posted 7 months ago

Omg excitment!
On Find Me.:

posted 7 months ago

Omg! That is creepy! I need 2 know who wrote that!
On She's Knows:

posted 7 months ago

I swore so I thought it should be mature.
On His Bed:

posted 7 months ago

That is a situation isn’t it?
On first kiss (Soccerismylifes challenge):

posted 7 months ago

lol. That was good.
On The Beauty I Couldn't Have:

posted 7 months ago

omg! I wish I had a moment like this…
On Middle of a Story, end. [phosphate's challenge_:

posted 7 months ago

Omg!! These are really good!! Oh soo much better than mine! great job!!
On Physco.:

posted 7 months ago

lol. Sry thats not funny but, her life is starting to suck….bad
On An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge):

posted 7 months ago

wow That does sound very awkward. lol thats actually happened to me before. I hate girls like Andrea so I’m glad to see her fall….
On What does this mean?:

posted 7 months ago

OMG!! So sweet…...
On It's Game Time:

posted 7 months ago

wow. This sounds just like football games in my town! I like it a lot
On Time To Mooch :

posted 7 months ago

Ya me too! I guess we all have a Blake somewhere, It just so happens my Blake is in my math class!
On An Awkward Day At Study Hall (Also an entry in SoccerIsMyLife's Challenge) :

posted 7 months ago

lol. This funny and awkward. Those dumb jocks!
On SEQUEL TO THE LIFE OF MIA TOLKENS!!:

posted 7 months ago

lol very interesting…....

(I LOVE Ambercrombie btw)
On Back to a secret admirer..sorta:

posted 7 months ago

Omg!! I have read all of these and they are absolutely ahh-door-raa-bell!! Who is this mysterious Brendan? I am dying to kno!
On Never Marry (Phosphate11's Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

I have never even seen a screen play before but I tried! I’m ssorry if it sucks. Take pity on me please! :)
On Time To Mooch :

posted 7 months ago

hahahaha blake…. He sounds important to your character. Is he/she in love with him? Is he gonna replace Evan?
On Body Builder Heartbreak:

posted 7 months ago

This is very fascinating. It’s interesting also. I like it!
On He likes me, he likes me not:

posted 7 months ago

This is good. This happens to me all the time. You captured it well too!
On The Girl Across the Ballroom:

posted 7 months ago

So awesome. I really, really am in need of a sequel for this!
On The life of Mia Tolkens:

posted 7 months ago

Omg!! A boy!! I would absoulutely love to hear more about this mystery hottie!
On An Adorable Soccer Player :

posted 7 months ago

aww! He’s soo cute! By far my fave!
On Back to Band Part 2:

posted 7 months ago

O now theres Evan. Nice.
On Back to Band:

posted 7 months ago

ooo That’s sad. His eyes sound HOTT!
On Strong Heart no more:

posted 7 months ago

lol. i know its not meant to be funny but the boy next door line just made me laugh. Its good though. I like that ur expirimenting with poetry.
On The Football Jocks:

posted 7 months ago

Thats pretty good. Its deff. how I think of football jocks…
On The best Combination:

posted 7 months ago

aww totally cute!
On And the World comes tumbling Down:

posted 7 months ago

pretty good
On confusion 2:

posted 7 months ago

wow this is interesting! U need to keep writing or I mite keel over!
On Life Stinks:

posted 7 months ago

oo! That lil backstabber! Again I want more!
On What Happened?:

posted 7 months ago

Awww he makes me smile!
On Seriously.:

posted 7 months ago

lol! That sounds kinda awkward. it makes me want more!
On Its So Aggervating Sometimes.:

posted 7 months ago

oo! A jerk jock. maybe he’ll change for her?
On Innocent kiss:

posted 7 months ago

Aww This is soooo cute!! I abslolutely <3 it!!
On Easiest Thing in the World:

posted 7 months ago

I ran short of space so you might not exactly understand the story yet. Sorry! But when I make a sequel you have to like read it so you get this. lol. Kay just so y’all know!
On A Solid Crush:

posted 7 months ago

oo he proved you wrong. burn! lol not really! Okay well anyway noce transition
On The Notes, pt. 4 (final):

posted 7 months ago

Amazing!!! Keep writing girl! I want more from ya!
On confusion:

posted 7 months ago

interesting…...deff. needs more.
On A Growing Family (SHOCKING DIALOGUE Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

Wow! Just wow. I hope after the challenge or soon you sequel this. I need to know whats gonna happen!
On It's Him:

posted 7 months ago

OMG! Who him….I’m addicted
On [Post-It] Post-Its: Polite Society:

posted 7 months ago

lol! So original! deff. one of the best entrys!
On Soccer Practice :

posted 7 months ago

good good. Its nice. You deffinately need a sequel!
On Red Rose:

posted 7 months ago

ohh!!m OMG!! who is it from? I must kno!
On A Little Too Much:

posted 7 months ago

lol. who knows?
On He Deserved It:

posted 7 months ago

lol
yea maybe just a lil to much….but heyy u gotta expiriment sum where
On In For It:

posted 7 months ago

oo he’s in for it now. I need 2 kno what hes in for.
On The War.:

posted 7 months ago

lol its kinda cute. It’s good for like a kinda transition
On Now What?:

posted 7 months ago

lol. This isn getting way interesting
On My Classmates:

posted 7 months ago

wow! I can’t wait to hear about this Connor Stoll. And Bryce who isn he?
On Personal Learning Challenge :

posted 7 months ago

nice story. I cant wait to hear about homeroom!
On My..Ours? [Dialogue Challenge]:

posted 7 months ago

umm I’m kinda confused. I can’t tell which persons which because of all the lines switching but I guess thats dialogue! Your plot twist at the end was nice though. I got the basic story.
On Not Even Close.:

posted 7 months ago

Caleb comes in right when they are about to “fight” or another girl that was watching from the sidelines comes in to stop this “fight” or the possiblilitys are endless! I want a sequel so come up with sumthin soon!
On 58 Ficlets: The Post-It Challenge:

posted 7 months ago

Okay this was soo fun! I can not wait till u hot 100 Saint Chuck!
On Identical Twins [shocking dialogue challenge]:

posted 7 months ago

OMG! Totally confused. Is that possible? You must keep that going….sum how….
On Off:

posted 7 months ago

Went where?? Omg! Suspense (yet again!)
On Totally Obsessed:

posted 7 months ago

O theres the conflict!
On Crazy:

posted 7 months ago

O crazy! That will deff. cause conflict!
On I Was Going To Find Out:

posted 7 months ago

O! I m soo hooked! I cannot get enough!
On She Didn't Like Him:

posted 7 months ago

Plot twist! Omg! Does she like him? Again with the suspense!
On That Day.:

posted 7 months ago

O a do-over? Those are never good
On Her.:

posted 7 months ago

OMG! a girl? Wow I was totally thinking of sumthin else! Wow… continue plz!
On Someone New:

posted 7 months ago

Ohh SO over Caleb! Whos the new guy?
On The letter:

posted 7 months ago

ohh! Give him the note! suspense!
On Lost..:

posted 7 months ago

forever linger in my mind ha! that was soo cool
On Defining Her {Maybe_Misery's Challenge}:

posted 7 months ago

nice i liked it
On Sorry, Not Today:

posted 7 months ago

a sequel would be nice, u can still do better.
On On His Way:

posted 7 months ago

Not bad. You could have left a suspenseful ending but it’s okay
On Poker Face {post it challenge}:

posted 7 months ago

Totally great! It was so interesting and very original
On Post-it Note Life:

posted 7 months ago

lol!! It’s funny and cute. its reminds me of sumthin but I don’t know what
On Allyson (uselessness challenge):

posted 8 months ago

whoa so awkward
On Allyson (uselessness challenge):

posted 8 months ago

whoa so awkward
On Eye Contact:

posted 8 months ago

oo scandelous! Is she trippin’ or is it for real? Please continue!
On Unfaithful:

posted 8 months ago

very well done.
On More than Friends?:

posted 8 months ago

wow. So it is the same guy! (i think)
On *Kiss* From a Friend?:

posted 8 months ago

wow. Is this like the same guy that you just had no feeling for?
On Just a Friend Part Duece:

posted 8 months ago

oo this is like a dream typr thing. I don’t know why but thats how I see it
On Just a Friend?:

posted 8 months ago

you are very good at puting the feeling in writing. It’s like everyone who hasn’t been there can go there
On About Him....:

posted 8 months ago

sad…. the feeling was all here
On All Grown Up:

posted 8 months ago

ohh sassy! I love it!
On Questions:

posted 8 months ago

really cool
On Coup de Coupe:

posted 8 months ago

wow, very deep but relatable at the same time. I like the similes you used, it made the whole thing easy to picture
On Not so best friend:

posted 8 months ago

wow. That was interesting. I have had a feeling like this before. Its great that you captured it. Also if you have any left over spaces you should give more space inbetween sentences. I don’t really do a good job of that but I try. :)
On Big John (a poem):

posted 8 months ago

i liked it 2. I kinda dnt think I wanna meet this guy. lol.
On Dumb Jocks:

posted 8 months ago

OMG!!!!! This series is awesome! I absoulutely loooove it!!! I’m going to follow it and omg! I could go on and on. Anyway… Who is Rachel, Val and Lindsay? Maybe you should introduce some more people to keep your ficlets alive. But overall awesome!
On Clover High Lunch Menu: Tornado Soup:

posted 8 months ago

This is getting interesting
On Clover High: Room 204:

posted 8 months ago

wow a jungle. This guy sounds like a good teacher. Deff. Continue!
On Why You Trippin'?:

posted 8 months ago

sry 4got 2 rate. (lol)
On Why You Trippin'?:

posted 8 months ago

great new series! I’m totally hooked!
On Remember:

posted 8 months ago

Pretty good. It has that sad beautiful thing going like Kermitgorf said. Captures the feeling well.
On Confusion Of The Heart:

posted 8 months ago

Isn’t this the same as your old one. Try to continue phosphate
On Without Balance:

posted 8 months ago

Wayyyy 2 deep. Try 2 chill
On Audreys First Day(Part three) Sweet Boy:

posted 8 months ago

Ohh that is kinda cute. He sounds like a loser though. It’s cute and a lil cheesy at the same time.
On Pervert targets girls on Ficlets (THIS IS REAL):

posted 8 months ago

Thanks so much! I feel a lil safer now :)
On what can i do??:

posted 8 months ago

wow these are a lot better than mine. Please continue…..
On Escape To Saftey:

posted 9 months ago

it’s okay
Not as good as the start
On Cutting:

posted 9 months ago

wow, so deep
On Little Boys:

posted 9 months ago

cute!! I absoulutly love it! The twist at the ending was great 2!
On My Interview With Michael Jackson (FAKE):

posted 9 months ago

funny and different than anything else u read on ficlets
On Run!!!:

posted 9 months ago

It was good. Its needs a sequel.
On The Red Sox Suck:

posted 9 months ago

this is so sad
you should so continue
On Crushing Is Complicated:

posted 9 months ago

its okay
On Pre-High:

posted 9 months ago

wow I’m concerned about you . . .
On Intertwined:

posted 9 months ago

wow
On Admit:

posted 9 months ago

Good but which one of us is it?
On Midnight:

posted 9 months ago

beautiful!!! This is ur finest!!
On Phosphate...Not a type of fat.:

posted 9 months ago

its okay
On Love:

posted 9 months ago

cool
still not ur best
I know how it feels
u dnt
On Everything:

posted 9 months ago

interesting
made me think
it was missing something.. .
On Sometimes It's Hard:

posted 9 months ago

deep thoughts
the ryming was kinda sucky though
it made the poem uneven
it was okay
not ur best
On The Circle Of Life:

posted 10 months ago

lol! Thats cute! OMG! yea well . . . pretty cool. It’s kinda like okay okay . . .but then the ends cutilicious!
On The God of the Dead Falling in Love:

posted 10 months ago

cool i like it
On Love?:

posted 10 months ago

wow sad . . .
On Listen:

posted 10 months ago

It didnt exactly come out like I wanted it too, but it works!
On The Book (Epistrophe):

posted 10 months ago

I like it. It was a great way to keep fitting book in.
On boys don't make any sense:

posted 10 months ago

Cute. I like how it’s written. I like the feeling it gives and the answers it wants
On The Decoy Red Button!!!!!:

posted 10 months ago

lol that whole decoy thingy made me laugh
On Goal Kick:

posted 10 months ago

Wow, omg! so sad. I totallt thinks this should be sequeled!
On Signed Off:

posted 10 months ago

sry 2 everyone who will read this but I can not continue the series because if I do, I mite get kicked off ficlets! Sorry y’all!
On Demon Summoning For Dummies:

posted 10 months ago

lol that last sentence was funny. SOme1 should totally sequel it!
On (Genre: High School Angst!) Who Needs a Soul If You Have a Date to Prom?:

posted 10 months ago

Grreat start!
On Tying My Shoes:

posted 10 months ago

This is sad btu, I understand it. It makes me feel kinda bad too. I like it though.
On IM's of Love #2 (boy side):

posted 10 months ago

u 4got 2 link this 1 2 the others
On IF I ??? WOULD U??:

posted 10 months ago

I like it. It’s very truthful. It reminds me of how I feel towards some of friends.
On IM's of love #1 ( girls side):

posted 10 months ago

omg! This is gonna be such a cute series! I kinda wish I started it! I mite start one, I hope you don’t get mad :) But I absoulutly think this is gonna rock!
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