SocccerISmyLIFE's posted comments

  1. On This Boy:

    posted about 1 month ago

    wow this sounds like someone I know and he’s absoulutely perfect!

  2. On 4th quarter :

    posted 2 months ago

    Oh Dan? This character could become interesting….

  3. On Nachos :

    posted 3 months ago

    aww! I wonder who he is…. sequel plz!

  4. On Cindy Lou Comes Cleaner:

    posted 3 months ago

    omg! I just read the whole series and I think I will die without a sequel!

  5. On New Town, New Problems, New Friends:

    posted 3 months ago

    many many sequel possibilties. I will b looking 4 one

  6. On Home Ec :

    posted 4 months ago

    lol! Bryce is soo cute!

  7. On Dream, or Nightmare?:

    posted 4 months ago

    OMG! I love these stories! Please continue!

  8. On kiss:

    posted 4 months ago

    this was sad but in an exciting way. I loved it!

  9. On Try...what?:

    posted 4 months ago

    wow. Go on, please!

  10. On Coming Clean :

    posted 4 months ago

    wow. Where is Linz in all of tgoing to his? Is she have like an “in” or something?

  11. On Unrequited Love:

    posted 4 months ago

    aww. Poor u! I personally would go for Sam!

  12. On An Inspiration Of Love:

    posted 5 months ago

    Nice Challenge

  13. On I sit on my bed, looking like an idiot, dressed for Easter:

    posted 5 months ago

    This is a sweet series. I feel liek I’m living a day in someones actual life!

  14. On You Never Asked :

    posted 5 months ago

    wow. Wasnt that sweet of Val

  15. On The Darkness Of Love:

    posted 5 months ago

    Awesome

  16. On My Alligator (Strong and powerful memories challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    wow. Deep, special and sweet. Nice job.

  17. On Falling Down :

    posted 5 months ago

    haha. Poor Linz. So who’s this Brian? A secret lover of the main character?!

  18. On Stupid Answers!:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha. Cute sequel.

  19. On Let's Make Peace:

    posted 5 months ago

    5 starz.

  20. On Let's Make Peace:

    posted 5 months ago

    That was weird. Those girls sound like antagionists to your story. Nice.

  21. On Unacceptable(Ficlet's challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    sad and interesting. nice job!

  22. On The Girl Who Could Talk With Her Eyes:

    posted 5 months ago

    good job. I love the title of your ficlet too. It was very intriguing.

  23. On The Way the Cookie Crumbles:

    posted 5 months ago

    love the title!

  24. On Take Me Seriously:

    posted 5 months ago

    doesn’t everyone want to be taken seriously? Great start!

  25. On My Prince:

    posted 5 months ago

    aww. Every little girls fantasy is to have a prince only some stories don’t always have a happy ending…..

  26. On The Emo/Punk Table :

    posted 5 months ago

    seriously emma jo is rite! Sequel! Now!

  27. On Psychedellic Grandmother (True Story Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    Haha! This is soo cute!

  28. On Facebook Romance:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha! This is cute. I want sum1 2 sequel it!

  29. On Cannot Believe:

    posted 5 months ago

    Series ENDED! Others can continue but I’m through!

  30. On Moern-Day Romeo and Juliette Done Right.:

    posted 5 months ago

    Aww. This is sweet and innocent like LoA said. I am wishing for a sequel.

  31. On Zero Unread Messages :

    posted 5 months ago

    aww poor main character! I feel bad…. but i bet Bryce is totally crushing on her!

  32. On Taking A Stand:

    posted 5 months ago

    lool. Good for the main character!

  33. On One Minute at 11:11 :

    posted 5 months ago

    Awesome! This was really really sweet. I will wish @ 11:11 always!

  34. On At the doctor's office:

    posted 5 months ago

    OMG! Just read the whole story! This was good!

  35. On What I Love About you:

    posted 5 months ago

    aww how sweet!

  36. On The Email:

    posted 5 months ago

    Hard to read and understand but still good.

  37. On The Email 2:

    posted 5 months ago

    These are soo creepy!! I’m need a sequel!

  38. On The Email 2:

    posted 5 months ago

    These are soo creepy!! I’m need a sequel!

  39. On An Awesome Dream [LoA Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    OMG!! I’m in absolute love and I mean love with this ficlet!! I aboslutely need a sequel!!! This ficlet is like keeping me alive!

  40. On Untitled.:

    posted 5 months ago

    beautiful!

  41. On 5 Awkward Things for Your Doctor to Say in the Middle of a Prostate Exam:

    posted 5 months ago

    This whole series was hialrious!

  42. On 5 Awkward Things To Say In The Middle Of History Class:

    posted 5 months ago

    Haha!

  43. On 5 Awkward Things To Do Or Say Right AFTER The Lights Come On :

    posted 5 months ago

    lool!!

  44. On 5 More Awkward Things To Do or Say Right Before The Lights Go Out:

    posted 5 months ago

    These are funny 2!!

  45. On 5 Awkward Things to Do or Say Right Before the Lights Go Out:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha. These are hilarious!

  46. On Tyler -- Chest Pains:

    posted 5 months ago

    omg! sequel!

  47. On Stories of a 100-Volt Klutz:

    posted 5 months ago

    haha. You poor, poor child.

  48. On My First [True Story Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    lol this is cute

  49. On Motorola Vs Nokia :

    posted 5 months ago

    ahh! OMG! Maybe Sam should be a lil more understanding or whatever. Good series

  50. On A Creeper? No A Creepster!:

    posted 5 months ago

    ahh LOL! sequel!

  51. On When I Cry... :

    posted 5 months ago

    Wow. Very deep.

  52. On Message Sent :

    posted 6 months ago

    Haha! Poor main character!

  53. On Goal!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yea I agree with Lone Writer this is a great description of how it feels to score the winning goal! I wanna know how that goalie felt because I myself am a goalie. This could be a great series.

  54. On Back At Matt's :

    posted 6 months ago

    aww!! His cute lil braces! omg! Okay i m done now obsessing over a fictional character… anyway realy good series! I love it!

  55. On Getting His Number :

    posted 6 months ago

    haha Linz is such a good friend! But whos this Anthony fellow? Is he a future lover?

  56. On Dear Fellow Ficlet Family Members, I Appreciate You:

    posted 6 months ago

    aww! I’m tearing this was soo sweet!

  57. On Back At Sam's :

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. These 2 are really different. I absoulutely love matt!

  58. On Stop Flirting With Waffle:

    posted 6 months ago

    haha poor narator!

  59. On You're In My Seat:

    posted 6 months ago

    OMG!!! WHAT WERE U THINKING!? wow. Ur character must be very shy. I bet Bryce planned this!

  60. On >>Fast Forward>>:

    posted 6 months ago

    Bryce? Rafael? Val? I think u went 2 fast!!! My head is spinning!!

  61. On Incoming Text:

    posted 6 months ago

    ahh! OMG!! I bet its Evan!! OMG!! Sequel b4 I like umm seriously injure myself!

  62. On Series Is Back:

    posted 6 months ago

    yay! I can live again!!

  63. On We Walk Home:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. This was deep. I liked this piece.

  64. On Limits of Immortality:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. I liked this. it really made me think. Like isnt there a quote out there thats like its better to have a lived ur life then went ur life unlived? Its something like that. But anyway great ficlet!

  65. On Answers to the Quiz:

    posted 6 months ago

    love love love Frank Sinatra! (i dnt think I spelled that rite)

  66. On Why?:

    posted 6 months ago

    i’m not a guy. Just so everyone knows. I’m just trying to write from a new angle. So umm if any1, guys or girls has any advice lemme have it!

  67. On British Accent (Profile Picture Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    cute!!

  68. On One unheard message :

    posted 6 months ago

    eww!
    I creeper!

  69. On Penaltys of Love:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ouch. Poor dude.

  70. On New person:

    posted 6 months ago

    continue please. I kinda feel like sumthin was skipped or something

  71. On Ficlets Series Removed :

    posted 6 months ago

    i NEED that series 2 continue my life. Sooo get it back ASAP!!

  72. On The New Queen:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like it very much. Tis a great sequel!

  73. On An Unspoken Agreement :

    posted 6 months ago

    so what is Linz like a dumb blonde? Is that how she is all the time? Thats bad…..... Sequel!

  74. On Akward Moment (soccerismylife's challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    haha. That is good!

  75. On Tell Me A Story :

    posted 6 months ago

    OMG!! This is beautilful!!

  76. On A Slip Up, A Mistake, A Real Solid "Oops":

    posted 6 months ago

    o linz! She’s so funny (recording things oon her phone.) Sequel! I need to know!

  77. On Crush-less :

    posted 6 months ago

    I know this feeling and I love it and hate it.

  78. On My Quirk :

    posted 6 months ago

    haha. That is strange that you cheer for your home town everytime you enter but whatever floats your boat!

  79. On Still Perfect :

    posted 6 months ago

    wait
    1st of all don’t like him cuz of Bridget!
    2nd of all doesnt Linz like him? Wont she not like hi cuz of Bridget?!

  80. On Oops :

    posted 6 months ago

    haha good thing you’ve got Linz!

  81. On My Meaningful Poem:

    posted 6 months ago

    nice. That poem is truely beautiful.

  82. On Being Two-Faced:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow. This was a great sequel and teaches a great life lesson!

  83. On What Goes On in The Dressing Room.. Stays In the Dressing Room:

    posted 6 months ago

    wow. lol. I wished u would continue soon ( which doubles I need you to!)

  84. On My 10:

    posted 6 months ago

    Sorry bout this list people. C I dnt hav an Ipod so I just picked 10 songs I could remember lol!

  85. On My Meaningful Songs:

    posted 6 months ago

    nice choices

  86. On Meaningful Songs:

    posted 6 months ago

    OMG! I absolutly have 2 hear this song. It sounds beautiful.

  87. On Together Forever:

    posted 6 months ago

    love it! lol! My retarded computer.

  88. On Together Forever:

    posted 6 months ago

    Very Fairytale. I <3 it!

  89. On Destruction Of School Property :

    posted 6 months ago

    Haha… idiots! I have friends like this and they never cease to amaze me at how dumb they can get!

  90. On A Dreamy French Accent :

    posted 6 months ago

    lol. Stupid Mr. Brandy!

  91. On Just Like:

    posted 7 months ago

    if you don’t get this or need 2 be refreshed go back to my previous story: Catch Up. That might help!

  92. On Carefull:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg!
    never mind
    Wrong story!

  93. On Carefull:

    posted 7 months ago

    If you don’t get this you might have to go back to one of my stories: Catch Up.

    Just in case!

  94. On Funny Christmas Songs:

    posted 7 months ago

    this was cute. It made me recall all of the good x-mas songs out there.

  95. On Christmas time is here:

    posted 7 months ago

    Reminds me of Christmas in my home town….

  96. On The Stud :

    posted 7 months ago

    I want Brian!! Sequel Please!!

  97. On To Swing With Morgan:

    posted 7 months ago

    i had a moment like tis once but the ending was happier! I loved this piece though

  98. On Something Extra [Minimum Length Ficlet Challenge]:

    posted 7 months ago

    I choked on chocolate! Hialrious!

  99. On The Flirt :

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. Broke it in half. Wayy 2 go girl! I think Connors got a lil crush on the narrator…..

  100. On Initiation :

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! I want an initiation! That sounds soo cool!

  101. On My Silly Xmas Traditions :

    posted 7 months ago

    lol these are cute!!

  102. On Hollywood Heroin 3:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. This whole series wass soo funny!

  103. On Lead Dirigible:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. This was a cute way to continue this! Someone keep it going!

  104. On Hopeless. [adj. or n.] def.;:

    posted 7 months ago

    these are soo like what I was thinking! I really like how you spelled the numbers 2 that was unoriginal/original, however you look @ it.

  105. On I'm Crying on the Inside :

    posted 7 months ago

    So sad. This is soo sad it almost sickens me!

  106. On 5 Things That Have Happened To Me:

    posted 7 months ago

    I thought this was funny but I probably shouldn’t have. This really made me think…..

  107. On 5 Things I Hate Talking About:

    posted 7 months ago

    these are really good and deep!

  108. On The breakup :

    posted 7 months ago

    oo! These are good but they went by fast. Are you going to continue cuz I c something great right here!

  109. On Confusion, Again:

    posted 7 months ago

    ohh. Young love….

  110. On Anthony:

    posted 7 months ago

    This makes me think. I really need a sequel!

  111. On The psychic:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. This is interesting. You simply must continue!

  112. On Laugh:

    posted 7 months ago

    I dont like the length of this piece but I had 2 keep u guys guessin’!!

  113. On A Very Specific Narrative (challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    lol! This sounds soo bad…...

  114. On Dolly Needs A Do-over [a very specific challenge]:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. this was better than mine!

  115. On One More Thing to tell:

    posted 7 months ago

    i love the fact that u can have failure. It keeps ur head up… well atleast it does that 4 me.

  116. On Waterworks.:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! Again. Caleb sound sweet. I want a Caleb for Christmas! lol!

  117. On No Better Than Scum:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! Evan the evil! I would slap his face!

  118. On Crying.:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! those better be tears of joy!

  119. On Confused.:

    posted 7 months ago

    I would be too! lol….

  120. On 5 things:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol I love this list

  121. On Five Things I've Never Told:

    posted 7 months ago

    Urs were more interesting than most I read…

  122. On 5 Things I've Never Shared:

    posted 7 months ago

    I agree with all of them…....

  123. On Not Who I Thought He Was:

    posted 7 months ago

    he cheated!! That little!!! What now? Thats what I’m asking….

  124. On Pet French Fry?:

    posted 7 months ago

    haha! this is funny and a great sequel.

  125. On WHAT??:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG!! I can’t believe!!! What will she do now??

  126. On A New & Improved 5 things I've Never Told Anyone, with a few touch-ups:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow. This is something that I wished I would have come up with….

  127. On Don't Question Me; Teach Me!:

    posted 7 months ago

    That was interesting. Someone could make a series about this…..

  128. On My color, Green (the color challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    I love green too! This is good

  129. On Blue (Color Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    Wow. This is very impressive.

  130. On Who Am I? (Color Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    wow this is deep

  131. On Is My Blue, Your Blue {Challenge Colors}:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow. This was wayy kool!

  132. On White♥Black(Challenge Colors):

    posted 7 months ago

    This is good. But i don’t get it. Is she like color blind or something? Does she just purposely not see color. I think u should sequel. :)))

  133. On The Long Kiss goodbye :

    posted 7 months ago

    I like the way it is. But it could have been a little less bland as L.I.A.W.L said before me. I hope you continue!

  134. On CHALLENGE COLORS:

    posted 7 months ago

    kool I’m entering right now!

  135. On Was That a Rap? Nope, Too White.:

    posted 7 months ago

    I like this! It was funny and I laughed (not to be mean. It brightened my day as Saint Chuck said) You would have deffinately topped the charts with this one!

  136. On Message.:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg!! The suspense is killing me!! I need to know!

  137. On Just A Phase:

    posted 7 months ago

    oo Just a phase! Sounds like someone I knew once…..

  138. On Without you:

    posted 7 months ago

    great I’m glad! I’m sooo glad u got over it! U forgot 2 sequel this one to your others BTW. This one isnt as good as your others either…

  139. On Blown Out of Proportion, Again:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! This whole series has been amazing! It was strange at times but over all it was good. It took many twists and turns but overall: fantastic!

  140. On In Loving Memory (My Sister in My Heart):

    posted 7 months ago

    My prayers for everyone! I’m so sorry to all that have lost someone. Very well written. Though it does suck to write in past tense…

  141. On Falling hurts :

    posted 7 months ago

    I’m sooo sorry!!!!

    Very well written….

  142. On Friday Night Lights Part 5:

    posted 7 months ago

    aww his cute lil face! I’m shocked by the whole STD thing BTW.

  143. On Drowning:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! Wonderful… simply stunning

  144. On Liar:

    posted 7 months ago

    It hurts bad…..

  145. On Again.:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. Maybe she should let it go? But I thinks thats impossible. You know what they say the clock wont change with u watching it….

  146. On Friday Night Lights Part 4:

    posted 7 months ago

    I like this Bridget character. She’s seems like she could be a great friend. Keep up the good work!

  147. On Friday Night Lights Part 3:

    posted 7 months ago

    Okay I can see where this is going. I like the fact he waves to them its cute!

  148. On Dirt and Love:

    posted 7 months ago

    sad. I really feel the emotion of this piece

  149. On Highschool Rumors:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow… I feel sickened by him. It was honestly well writened. It was a nice was to get all the emotions out.

  150. On Love Cubed:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow.. I like it!

  151. On Four Days:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG! Suspense! I’m like dyin’ here! Sequel!

  152. On Friday Night Lights Part 2:

    posted 7 months ago

    that Linz girl sounds like fun!

  153. On Friday Night Lights:

    posted 7 months ago

    Omg excitment!

  154. On Find Me.:

    posted 7 months ago

    Omg! That is creepy! I need 2 know who wrote that!

  155. On She's Knows:

    posted 7 months ago

    I swore so I thought it should be mature.

  156. On His Bed:

    posted 7 months ago

    That is a situation isn’t it?

  157. On first kiss (Soccerismylifes challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. That was good.

  158. On The Beauty I Couldn't Have:

    posted 7 months ago

    omg! I wish I had a moment like this…

  159. On Middle of a Story, end. [phosphate's challenge_:

    posted 7 months ago

    Omg!! These are really good!! Oh soo much better than mine! great job!!

  160. On Physco.:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. Sry thats not funny but, her life is starting to suck….bad

  161. On An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    wow That does sound very awkward. lol thats actually happened to me before. I hate girls like Andrea so I’m glad to see her fall….

  162. On What does this mean?:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG!! So sweet…...

  163. On It's Game Time:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow. This sounds just like football games in my town! I like it a lot

  164. On Time To Mooch :

    posted 7 months ago

    Ya me too! I guess we all have a Blake somewhere, It just so happens my Blake is in my math class!

  165. On An Awkward Day At Study Hall (Also an entry in SoccerIsMyLife's Challenge) :

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. This funny and awkward. Those dumb jocks!

  166. On SEQUEL TO THE LIFE OF MIA TOLKENS!!:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol very interesting…....

    (I LOVE Ambercrombie btw)

  167. On Back to a secret admirer..sorta:

    posted 7 months ago

    Omg!! I have read all of these and they are absolutely ahh-door-raa-bell!! Who is this mysterious Brendan? I am dying to kno!

  168. On Never Marry (Phosphate11's Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    I have never even seen a screen play before but I tried! I’m ssorry if it sucks. Take pity on me please! :)

  169. On Time To Mooch :

    posted 7 months ago

    hahahaha blake…. He sounds important to your character. Is he/she in love with him? Is he gonna replace Evan?

  170. On Body Builder Heartbreak:

    posted 7 months ago

    This is very fascinating. It’s interesting also. I like it!

  171. On He likes me, he likes me not:

    posted 7 months ago

    This is good. This happens to me all the time. You captured it well too!

  172. On The Girl Across the Ballroom:

    posted 7 months ago

    So awesome. I really, really am in need of a sequel for this!

  173. On The life of Mia Tolkens:

    posted 7 months ago

    Omg!! A boy!! I would absoulutely love to hear more about this mystery hottie!

  174. On An Adorable Soccer Player :

    posted 7 months ago

    aww! He’s soo cute! By far my fave!

  175. On Back to Band Part 2:

    posted 7 months ago

    O now theres Evan. Nice.

  176. On Back to Band:

    posted 7 months ago

    ooo That’s sad. His eyes sound HOTT!

  177. On Strong Heart no more:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. i know its not meant to be funny but the boy next door line just made me laugh. Its good though. I like that ur expirimenting with poetry.

  178. On The Football Jocks:

    posted 7 months ago

    Thats pretty good. Its deff. how I think of football jocks…

  179. On The best Combination:

    posted 7 months ago

    aww totally cute!

  180. On And the World comes tumbling Down:

    posted 7 months ago

    pretty good

  181. On confusion 2:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow this is interesting! U need to keep writing or I mite keel over!

  182. On Life Stinks:

    posted 7 months ago

    oo! That lil backstabber! Again I want more!

  183. On What Happened?:

    posted 7 months ago

    Awww he makes me smile!

  184. On Seriously.:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol! That sounds kinda awkward. it makes me want more!

  185. On Its So Aggervating Sometimes.:

    posted 7 months ago

    oo! A jerk jock. maybe he’ll change for her?

  186. On Innocent kiss:

    posted 7 months ago

    Aww This is soooo cute!! I abslolutely <3 it!!

  187. On Easiest Thing in the World:

    posted 7 months ago

    I ran short of space so you might not exactly understand the story yet. Sorry! But when I make a sequel you have to like read it so you get this. lol. Kay just so y’all know!

  188. On A Solid Crush:

    posted 7 months ago

    oo he proved you wrong. burn! lol not really! Okay well anyway noce transition

  189. On The Notes, pt. 4 (final):

    posted 7 months ago

    Amazing!!! Keep writing girl! I want more from ya!

  190. On confusion:

    posted 7 months ago

    interesting…...deff. needs more.

  191. On A Growing Family (SHOCKING DIALOGUE Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    Wow! Just wow. I hope after the challenge or soon you sequel this. I need to know whats gonna happen!

  192. On It's Him:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG! Who him….I’m addicted

  193. On [Post-It] Post-Its: Polite Society:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol! So original! deff. one of the best entrys!

  194. On Soccer Practice :

    posted 7 months ago

    good good. Its nice. You deffinately need a sequel!

  195. On Red Rose:

    posted 7 months ago

    ohh!!m OMG!! who is it from? I must kno!

  196. On A Little Too Much:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. who knows?

  197. On He Deserved It:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol
    yea maybe just a lil to much….but heyy u gotta expiriment sum where

  198. On In For It:

    posted 7 months ago

    oo he’s in for it now. I need 2 kno what hes in for.

  199. On The War.:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol its kinda cute. It’s good for like a kinda transition

  200. On Now What?:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol. This isn getting way interesting

  201. On My Classmates:

    posted 7 months ago

    wow! I can’t wait to hear about this Connor Stoll. And Bryce who isn he?

  202. On Personal Learning Challenge :

    posted 7 months ago

    nice story. I cant wait to hear about homeroom!

  203. On My..Ours? [Dialogue Challenge]:

    posted 7 months ago

    umm I’m kinda confused. I can’t tell which persons which because of all the lines switching but I guess thats dialogue! Your plot twist at the end was nice though. I got the basic story.

  204. On Not Even Close.:

    posted 7 months ago

    Caleb comes in right when they are about to “fight” or another girl that was watching from the sidelines comes in to stop this “fight” or the possiblilitys are endless! I want a sequel so come up with sumthin soon!

  205. On 58 Ficlets: The Post-It Challenge:

    posted 7 months ago

    Okay this was soo fun! I can not wait till u hot 100 Saint Chuck!

  206. On Identical Twins [shocking dialogue challenge]:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG! Totally confused. Is that possible? You must keep that going….sum how….

  207. On Off:

    posted 7 months ago

    Went where?? Omg! Suspense (yet again!)

  208. On Totally Obsessed:

    posted 7 months ago

    O theres the conflict!

  209. On Crazy:

    posted 7 months ago

    O crazy! That will deff. cause conflict!

  210. On I Was Going To Find Out:

    posted 7 months ago

    O! I m soo hooked! I cannot get enough!

  211. On She Didn't Like Him:

    posted 7 months ago

    Plot twist! Omg! Does she like him? Again with the suspense!

  212. On That Day.:

    posted 7 months ago

    O a do-over? Those are never good

  213. On Her.:

    posted 7 months ago

    OMG! a girl? Wow I was totally thinking of sumthin else! Wow… continue plz!

  214. On Someone New:

    posted 7 months ago

    Ohh SO over Caleb! Whos the new guy?

  215. On The letter:

    posted 7 months ago

    ohh! Give him the note! suspense!

  216. On Lost..:

    posted 7 months ago

    forever linger in my mind ha! that was soo cool

  217. On Defining Her {Maybe_Misery's Challenge}:

    posted 7 months ago

    nice i liked it

  218. On Sorry, Not Today:

    posted 7 months ago

    a sequel would be nice, u can still do better.

  219. On On His Way:

    posted 7 months ago

    Not bad. You could have left a suspenseful ending but it’s okay

  220. On Poker Face {post it challenge}:

    posted 7 months ago

    Totally great! It was so interesting and very original

  221. On Post-it Note Life:

    posted 7 months ago

    lol!! It’s funny and cute. its reminds me of sumthin but I don’t know what

  222. On Allyson (uselessness challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    whoa so awkward

  223. On Allyson (uselessness challenge):

    posted 8 months ago

    whoa so awkward

  224. On Eye Contact:

    posted 8 months ago

    oo scandelous! Is she trippin’ or is it for real? Please continue!

  225. On Unfaithful:

    posted 8 months ago

    very well done.

  226. On More than Friends?:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow. So it is the same guy! (i think)

  227. On *Kiss* From a Friend?:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow. Is this like the same guy that you just had no feeling for?

  228. On Just a Friend Part Duece:

    posted 8 months ago

    oo this is like a dream typr thing. I don’t know why but thats how I see it

  229. On Just a Friend?:

    posted 8 months ago

    you are very good at puting the feeling in writing. It’s like everyone who hasn’t been there can go there

  230. On About Him....:

    posted 8 months ago

    sad…. the feeling was all here

  231. On All Grown Up:

    posted 8 months ago

    ohh sassy! I love it!

  232. On Questions:

    posted 8 months ago

    really cool

  233. On Coup de Coupe:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow, very deep but relatable at the same time. I like the similes you used, it made the whole thing easy to picture

  234. On Not so best friend:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow. That was interesting. I have had a feeling like this before. Its great that you captured it. Also if you have any left over spaces you should give more space inbetween sentences. I don’t really do a good job of that but I try. :)

  235. On Big John (a poem):

    posted 8 months ago

    i liked it 2. I kinda dnt think I wanna meet this guy. lol.

  236. On Dumb Jocks:

    posted 8 months ago

    OMG!!!!! This series is awesome! I absoulutely loooove it!!! I’m going to follow it and omg! I could go on and on. Anyway… Who is Rachel, Val and Lindsay? Maybe you should introduce some more people to keep your ficlets alive. But overall awesome!

  237. On Clover High Lunch Menu: Tornado Soup:

    posted 8 months ago

    This is getting interesting

  238. On Clover High: Room 204:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow a jungle. This guy sounds like a good teacher. Deff. Continue!

  239. On Why You Trippin'?:

    posted 8 months ago

    sry 4got 2 rate. (lol)

  240. On Why You Trippin'?:

    posted 8 months ago

    great new series! I’m totally hooked!

  241. On Remember:

    posted 8 months ago

    Pretty good. It has that sad beautiful thing going like Kermitgorf said. Captures the feeling well.

  242. On Confusion Of The Heart:

    posted 8 months ago

    Isn’t this the same as your old one. Try to continue phosphate

  243. On Without Balance:

    posted 8 months ago

    Wayyyy 2 deep. Try 2 chill

  244. On Audreys First Day(Part three) Sweet Boy:

    posted 8 months ago

    Ohh that is kinda cute. He sounds like a loser though. It’s cute and a lil cheesy at the same time.

  245. On Pervert targets girls on Ficlets (THIS IS REAL):

    posted 8 months ago

    Thanks so much! I feel a lil safer now :)

  246. On what can i do??:

    posted 8 months ago

    wow these are a lot better than mine. Please continue…..

  247. On Escape To Saftey:

    posted 9 months ago

    it’s okay
    Not as good as the start

  248. On Cutting:

    posted 9 months ago

    wow, so deep

  249. On Little Boys:

    posted 9 months ago

    cute!! I absoulutly love it! The twist at the ending was great 2!

  250. On My Interview With Michael Jackson (FAKE):

    posted 9 months ago

    funny and different than anything else u read on ficlets

  251. On Run!!!:

    posted 9 months ago

    It was good. Its needs a sequel.

  252. On The Red Sox Suck:

    posted 9 months ago

    this is so sad
    you should so continue

  253. On Crushing Is Complicated:

    posted 9 months ago

    its okay

  254. On Pre-High:

    posted 9 months ago

    wow I’m concerned about you . . .

  255. On Intertwined:

    posted 9 months ago

    wow

  256. On Admit:

    posted 9 months ago

    Good but which one of us is it?

  257. On Midnight:

    posted 9 months ago

    beautiful!!! This is ur finest!!

  258. On Phosphate...Not a type of fat.:

    posted 9 months ago

    its okay

  259. On Love:

    posted 9 months ago

    cool
    still not ur best
    I know how it feels
    u dnt

  260. On Everything:

    posted 9 months ago

    interesting
    made me think
    it was missing something.. .

  261. On Sometimes It's Hard:

    posted 9 months ago

    deep thoughts
    the ryming was kinda sucky though
    it made the poem uneven
    it was okay
    not ur best

  262. On The Circle Of Life:

    posted 10 months ago

    lol! Thats cute! OMG! yea well . . . pretty cool. It’s kinda like okay okay . . .but then the ends cutilicious!

  263. On The God of the Dead Falling in Love:

    posted 10 months ago

    cool i like it

  264. On Love?:

    posted 10 months ago

    wow sad . . .

  265. On Listen:

    posted 10 months ago

    It didnt exactly come out like I wanted it too, but it works!

  266. On The Book (Epistrophe):

    posted 10 months ago

    I like it. It was a great way to keep fitting book in.

  267. On boys don't make any sense:

    posted 10 months ago

    Cute. I like how it’s written. I like the feeling it gives and the answers it wants

  268. On The Decoy Red Button!!!!!:

    posted 10 months ago

    lol that whole decoy thingy made me laugh

  269. On Goal Kick:

    posted 10 months ago

    Wow, omg! so sad. I totallt thinks this should be sequeled!

  270. On Signed Off:

    posted 10 months ago

    sry 2 everyone who will read this but I can not continue the series because if I do, I mite get kicked off ficlets! Sorry y’all!

  271. On Demon Summoning For Dummies:

    posted 10 months ago

    lol that last sentence was funny. SOme1 should totally sequel it!

  272. On (Genre: High School Angst!) Who Needs a Soul If You Have a Date to Prom?:

    posted 10 months ago

    Grreat start!

  273. On Tying My Shoes:

    posted 10 months ago

    This is sad btu, I understand it. It makes me feel kinda bad too. I like it though.

  274. On IM's of Love #2 (boy side):

    posted 10 months ago

    u 4got 2 link this 1 2 the others

  275. On IF I ??? WOULD U??:

    posted 10 months ago

    I like it. It’s very truthful. It reminds me of how I feel towards some of friends.

  276. On IM's of love #1 ( girls side):

    posted 10 months ago

    omg! This is gonna be such a cute series! I kinda wish I started it! I mite start one, I hope you don’t get mad :) But I absoulutly think this is gonna rock!

  277. On Goodbye My Friend:

    posted