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On Thanks for everything(poem):

posted 4 months ago

this is really good!
On Jonas Part 12: Picnic:

posted 7 months ago

finish pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
On Jonas Part 10: What Now?:

posted 7 months ago

i dont like this amanda chic anymore…
just kidding!! haha
On Jonas Part 7: Party:

posted 7 months ago

parrr-tayyyyyy with the jobros? im so there haha
On Jonas Part 6: Inside The Fishbowl:

posted 7 months ago

haha joe would blush…
On Jonas Part 5: Wild Ride:

posted 7 months ago

fishbowl??? lol
On Jonas Part 3: Jealousy:

posted 7 months ago

NICK JONAS HAD GIVEN HER THE KISS OF LIFE !!
wow thats the funniest sentence of my life
On Jonas Part 2: One Down:

posted 7 months ago

hahahahhaha zumiez!!!!
On Jonas Part 2: One Down:

posted 7 months ago

hahahahhaha zumiez!!!!
On Jonas Part 1: Nick times Two:

posted 7 months ago

hahahahahhahahahahha wow this is like the funniest thing ive ever read!! im freaking in love with the jonas brothers i just saw them in concert last weekend!!! yeah this is awesome awesome story
On But Tears Will Ruin the Makeup:

posted 8 months ago

hey im a dancer too!!! i like this story.
On Dance, Pretty Child:

posted 8 months ago

wow. i like that alot. im a dancer sooo i really like this. awesome.
On Almost:

posted 8 months ago

wow. thats good.
On Rain:

posted 8 months ago

thats so cuteee!!!! you’re really good
On Leaving Love:

posted 8 months ago

awww thats sweet.
i love it
On He Said, pt. 2:

posted 8 months ago

omj thats amazing
thats REALLY REALLY good!!!!

AND I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THE JONAS BROTHERS!!!!!!!!
theyre AWESOME!!!!! totally in love with them. haha
but anyways.
this poem is really good. lol
On Black Valentine:

posted 8 months ago

i love it!!!!!!!!!!
On Alive:

posted 8 months ago

really goood
On Discussion of the Ugly Series.:

posted 10 months ago

thx for sequeling!!!
On She Didn't Like Him:

posted 10 months ago

o0o great plot twist!
On His..:

posted 10 months ago

wow….i like this alot.
On Challenge!!!:

posted 10 months ago

ill tell you how i found out the real reason when i post the ficlet
promise =]]]
On It's Always The Cute Ones:

posted 11 months ago

yeah thats happened to me.
not funn =[[[
On One Date:

posted about 1 year ago

Haha this story made me laugh. It’s funny how sometimes guys are so desperate.
On The ghost I'm running from:

posted about 1 year ago

strong emotions. I love it.
On She Loves The End:

posted about 1 year ago

wow. It hurts to know that there are actually people out there who actually feel this way.
On I Almost Feel Like Crying:

posted about 1 year ago

wow. this story is so beautiful. i absolutely loooove it!!!!
On High School Musical -- Barbie Style:

posted about 1 year ago

haha wow. i actually like HSM, but i think it went to far. but this story made me laugh!
On My Heart Danced sequel:

posted about 1 year ago

its good. a great sequel to the first story.
On trecherous waters:

posted about 1 year ago

very intense
On My Heart Danced:

posted about 1 year ago

i love this story! i can totally relate!!
“I slam my locker door shut
wanting to laugh,
Cry,
Sing,
Dance, and
Shout.
thats my favorite lines!!!
you should write a sequel!
On An Interesting Conversation:

posted about 1 year ago

*note from the author: please don’t IM these screen names, I dont know if they are real; I just made them up.
On A Ficlets Attack:

posted about 1 year ago

And there’s a buttload of homework to do.

ahha i love that line!!!
On The Cat and the Canary Have a Battle of Wits:

posted about 1 year ago

haha where do you come up with this stuff? you have a wild imagination. but thats a good thing cuz otherwise this story would be boring!! haha i luvv it!
On Twisted Fairy Tales:Modern Day Romeo and Juliet:

posted about 1 year ago

we just finished reading romeo and juliet toda in my english honors class. how different the story would have been if juliet had gotten pregnant…
On Hiding From the World Comes With Slate-Gray Umbrellas?:

posted about 1 year ago

breakout story of the year.
On Thoughts in my head:

posted about 1 year ago

hopelessly…i like it
On I want to save you:

posted about 1 year ago

i love it! it kinda makes you think, you know? but whatever! its awesome! keep writing
On I want you forever:

posted about 1 year ago

its
FABULOUS!
haha
On Signed Off:

posted about 1 year ago

aww! this sooo needs a sequel!
On Listen:

posted about 1 year ago

o yea!! this story rocks!!! it really is like the story of my life, or the life of any girl who likes to play sports but is still a girl. It has an interesting beginning considering where the story ends. But still awesome! =]]]
On Ideas:

posted about 1 year ago

i like it. i like how u turned a romance story into something else
On Is It Romanticism To Think I Can Write Romance?:

posted about 1 year ago

ok well idk why everyones getting all worked up over “abdomen.” i think its a funn word. And i liked this story, it made me smile. but yea the crying at the end is a little weird but still weird things happen in romance stories all the time!
On Tear:

posted about 1 year ago

WOW i really lovve thiss!!!!! ive totally felt like this b4! its like you read my mind! every time i cry i think”wow the things i cry about atre so stupid!” and now i know im not the only one. AWESOME AWESOME job!!!
On My Candles:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting….
On Hearts:

posted about 1 year ago

o0o intense
On Dead :

posted about 1 year ago

Her heart was gone
and
The way the music made her scream and shout
o0ooo i love those two lines!!!
On Saving the Day:

posted about 1 year ago

wow
On the soldier:

posted about 1 year ago

um…try making it longer
On They called me crazy:

posted about 1 year ago

intense!
On Release at Half Past Ten :

posted about 1 year ago

emotionally great
On No-one:

posted about 1 year ago

its like one of those fairy-tale romances I’ve always dreamed about
On halfway through autumn:

posted about 1 year ago

it most certainly izz!
On Your Gramps Can Be a Rapper Too!:

posted about 1 year ago

AAHAHAHA I CAN SO IMAGINE MY GRAMPA TRYING TO READ THIS!!! SOOO FUNNY!
On K.P. (A Poem):

posted about 1 year ago

aww i luvvvvvvvvvvv it!
On Not My House:

posted about 1 year ago

why does he have to go in the house???
On What I find:

posted about 1 year ago

oooo, intense. thats exactly how i feel today. its not been a good day for me.=[
On Adventure:

posted about 1 year ago

one of those “happily ever after” stories that gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside and makes you smile!
On pretending to be Dorothy Parker:

posted about 1 year ago

ooo, defensive.

i like it.

i love the names of your stories
On pretending to be Bridget Jones:

posted about 1 year ago

good descriptions
On Only today:

posted about 1 year ago

thats so how my days been today. i really needed this.
On my life is a repressed british drama:

posted about 1 year ago

i can totally relate
On as if anyone writes letters anymore anyway:

posted about 1 year ago

You knew that I was broken, sad, and ill,
and I knew that you weren’t exactly… free.

that is the best line ever!
On other gardens:

posted about 1 year ago

awesome
On playing with matches; running with scissors:

posted about 1 year ago

haha yes its a great pastime
On Left:

posted about 1 year ago

perfect.
On Nothing is Certain:

posted about 1 year ago

amazingly amazing
On halfway through autumn:

posted about 1 year ago

ok this is the best story i ever read!!!
On depressing statistics:

posted about 1 year ago

i LOVE it
On It's All Outside Of Your Head:

posted about 1 year ago

ahha i LOVE it
On Future:Unknown:

posted about 1 year ago

this is so what i needed right now!! awesome job!
On The End of Me:

posted about 1 year ago

haha i liked it a lot
my songs usually suck so i mostly stick to poems
but u should keep up with the songs
On Always the Same:

posted about 1 year ago

good use of the picture
On Real as Life Itself:

posted about 1 year ago

i can see the statue perfectly in my head…bird and all
On You Had Me at Hello :

posted about 1 year ago

o0o perfect for a sequel!!
On A Brief Glimpse into the Mind of Rockstarjoker:

posted about 1 year ago

Sign on to aim, see who’s on, and quickly hide my name. Love to talk, but hate some of the people who have my screen name.

haha tell me about it!!! been there, done that, bought the t-shirt, and sold it on Ebay!
On Edvard :

posted about 1 year ago

oooo i absolutely love it! its fabulous!
On Sasha's Promise :

posted about 1 year ago

yes! sequel, please!
On Consequences:

posted about 1 year ago

Dont say those things!
You break my heart
Dont smile that way, I dont want to forgive you
But I must

ahh..thats is the perfect paragraph!!!

luvvs it!!!
On That Kiss:

posted about 1 year ago

oychy! been there, done that, glad i dont have to go back!
On Perfect:

posted about 1 year ago

hmmm….. im not quite sure how i feel about this one. probably cuz i dont really understand it. but its good nevertheless!
On Would you?:

posted about 1 year ago

ha every time i read this it makes me smile! i think those exact same thoughts every day, and you wrote it so perfectly.
On A Love Story:

posted about 1 year ago

wow that’s really wonderful! i love it!
On 100 Years:

posted about 1 year ago

Sleeping Beauty all the way man! lol
On the only thing i can think about is JB!:

posted about 1 year ago

the song isnt about a whale that one line is. but the song is called, “That’s Just The Way We Roll” its a great song i luvv it!
On first crush:

posted about 1 year ago

ooo its really good. i liked how it’s only like two or three words on a line, it adds a little more feeling to it than if it had been all in one sentence. great!

btw, its aura, not ora. but great story!
On Whatshisface:

posted about 1 year ago

iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii like it!!!
On My first and only love:

posted about 1 year ago

umm…good details. i mean that in a good way too. dont take that the wrong way.
On The Park Bench:

posted about 1 year ago

haha! i loved this story!!!
On The Time Keeper:

posted about 1 year ago

crazy people
On Dead Lions and Closed Umbrellas :

posted about 1 year ago

oooooooooooooooooomygawd its awesome!
On Day by Day:

posted about 1 year ago

right on! lol
On Peaceful:

posted about 1 year ago

aww, it’s so sweet!...totally knew what was gonna happen tho. but still, sweet. very sweet.
On All Aboard:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting usage of words
On The House of the Bleeding Beater:

posted about 1 year ago

spooky spooky stuff
On Spoiler Alert!:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s very confusing and very cool.
On Do a little funny business in Mexico, amigo?:

posted about 1 year ago

ooooooooo…scary!! really good! it gave me chills. luvv the last sentence!!!
On A Pair of Shoes:

posted about 1 year ago

u should write a prequel
On A Day in the Life of Nouvelle Bardot's Cat:

posted about 1 year ago

This just keeps getting better!
On Freshman Rush:

posted about 1 year ago

reminds me of Greek
On The Beginning of Forever:

posted about 1 year ago

its really great!!!
On A Brief Glimpse Into The Mind of Partie Like Its 1492:

posted about 1 year ago

just to make things clear-I AM A GIRL!
On Wishes do come true:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting
On Life and Death:

posted about 1 year ago

The best poem ive ever read! five stars and ten toes up! lol
On A hug.:

posted about 1 year ago

i kow the feeling.
On A Brief Glimpse Into the Mind of Fritz and Zooey:

posted about 1 year ago

HAHAHA ITS HILARIOUS!!! I LUVV IT! ITS AWESOME! U ROKK!!!
On Compliments [a glance into a derranged mind]:

posted about 1 year ago

hehe its funny. btw, im not gay. I’m a girl!
On Love is...:

posted about 1 year ago

great meaning
On second sight:

posted about 1 year ago

this one is my absolute favorite, by far.
On standard contempt:

posted about 1 year ago

really good!
On The Girl in the Surf:

posted about 1 year ago

I luvv it! its one of my favorites!!!
On Zantacs Fast:

posted about 1 year ago

zantacs fast!
On Zantacs Fast:

posted about 1 year ago

haah it made me laugh at the end! its good
On No-one:

posted about 1 year ago

i agree, i find it rather cute but a bit predictable. you know right from the start what will happen in the end. I must say, not my best work. =(
On Fritz and Zooey: The Sofa Gave Birth to Kittens:

posted about 1 year ago

its funny!
On Precious Cheater:

posted about 1 year ago

I agree
On Friends :

posted about 1 year ago

so true
On The Lake :

posted about 1 year ago

really sweet and good descriptions!
On Numbers :

posted about 1 year ago

that’s really cool! you never think about airports that way. it makes you think. good job!
On somedon'tneedspace:

posted about 1 year ago

it’s a little hard to read sometimes, but nevertheless its great.
On A song for One:

posted about 1 year ago

good descriptons
On grander visions:

posted about 1 year ago

wow…............its powerful.
On A Little Bit of Child's Love:

posted about 1 year ago

aaawww its so sad…
On My Top 17 Songs [First]:

posted about 1 year ago

Hey There Delilah! Love that song!
On Im sucha bad poet♥♥:

posted about 1 year ago

I luvv it! It sounds like something I would write.Actually its something I wish I could have wrote. I especially lovved the ILOVE U IS THAT OK? line because even if he says its not okay, there’s nothing u can do to stop your love anyway.
On My Dream:

posted about 1 year ago

btw, nice musical reference!
On My Dream:

posted about 1 year ago

haha i can TOTALLY relate to this one! lol its good
On Scales of desire:

posted about 1 year ago

its really good.
On Love hurts:

posted about 1 year ago

very insightful. what else is there to say that hasn’t already been said?
On One kiss:

posted about 1 year ago

sooooooooooooo true.
On come back to me..:

posted about 1 year ago

It makes you sad when you think that things like this really do happen.
On For You I Would Die:

posted about 1 year ago

I really do love this story! I put it in my profile for AIM and i get comments about it all the time.! =]
On Humiliation:

posted about 1 year ago

Its great for a prequel or sequel.
On A Simple Tear:

posted about 1 year ago

This is so awesome! It has feeling and its like…...................so right and true. I love it!!!!!
On A Simple Tear:

posted about 1 year ago

This is so awesome! It has feeling and its like…...................so right and true. I love it!!!!!
On second sight:

posted about 1 year ago

Wow. It’s very inspiring. I like it a lot. It’s probably one of the best stories I’ve read.
On the meaning of love.:

posted about 1 year ago

it doesnt have to be a story to be great.
On My borther farted:

posted about 1 year ago

lol i love jeremy mGovern, too
On For You I Would Die:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s r3ally good. It has lots of feeling. I likeI liked it a lot
On Plans Involving Uber Stealthy Ninja Suits and Weed Killer:

posted about 1 year ago

It cracked me up!!!!
On Sorry:

posted about 1 year ago

wow its really good
On The Descent: down and dirty:

posted about 1 year ago

Yeah, I love it too.
On A Shape in the Night:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s a mystery. It really makes you wonder. =]
On This Kind of Commitment:

posted about 1 year ago

Its really good. I like it.
On Waste My Life for You:

posted about 1 year ago

wow its really good
On In The Bedroom:

posted about 1 year ago

hahaha! It made me laugh!
On Tick, Tock:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s perfect for a prequel or a sequel. =]
On Height of Suspicion:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s good. Intense.
On Urbanization:

posted about 1 year ago

Wow. It’s very good! So much said in so little words…=]
On Irrational? Phobias.:

posted about 1 year ago

lol It made me laugh! =]
On Mandi's eyes:

posted about 1 year ago

wow. that’s all I can say.
On The Pledge of Allegiance in the View of a Foreigner:

posted about 1 year ago

it’s funny. The first part made me laugh.
On Life Abridged:

posted about 1 year ago

lol it made me laugh that one line “i think people think too much”. Id tell you what I think of this story but you think people think too much. If that makes any sense! lol (i liked it). =P
On Beacon of Light:

posted about 1 year ago

o0o. spooky.
On Time for New Shoes.:

posted about 1 year ago

I like it. It’s true.
On Mommy and Abuse:

posted about 1 year ago

aaawwwwww, it’s so sad. It makes me want to cry. Especially the part where the note says you’re not coming back because you love me. That part is my favorite.
On Complaints of the Middle Class:

posted about 1 year ago

Actually, I have a PS2. lol, it’s really good though. really moving and completely true.
On Our Own:

posted about 1 year ago

wow. You’re totally right!
On that thing:

posted about 1 year ago

lol dani i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
On Like rain:

posted about 1 year ago

wow. its really intense. powerful. its sad and intriguing and it has lots of feeling.
On Believe:

posted about 1 year ago

Yeah, I feel that way, too. Like you can’t believe what YOU want to believe, only what others want you to believe.
On Perfectly Wrong:

posted about 1 year ago

yeah, i agree. it’s nice. i like it.
On "It's a boy!":

posted about 1 year ago

wow. it’s very inspiring.
On A star fell from the sky.:

posted about 1 year ago

what can i say but wow? its awesome
On Irony.:

posted about 1 year ago

soooo many big words.
On This is How Hearts Are Broken:

posted about 1 year ago

omg! it’s is so…......right! It reminds me of this person that I know . You described her exactly. Good job. I love it!
On Final Thoughts:

posted about 1 year ago

u like to make sequels to my stories, don’t u? lol its okay. i don’t mind. they’re good and i like them. so keep it up!
On Ocean Madness:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting. way to put a spin on things.
On Abandonment Split Two Ways:

posted about 1 year ago

i like how you turned the picture into something else.
On Secrets Revealed, Love Lost:

posted about 1 year ago

its perfect for a prequel and it has feeling. i like it. ;)
On this is what you wanted:

posted about 1 year ago

very sad and intriguing. i like it.
On Darkness:

posted about 1 year ago

very interesring w/ a spooky essence. i like it.
On So over him:

posted about 1 year ago

luv the song references! great story! love always! :)
On love is love:

posted about 1 year ago

love is love…...
so true! lol keep em comin’!
On Personal:

posted about 1 year ago

alyssa. im so proud! tear tear lol
but im soooooooooooo glad ur moving on!
On Am I a guy?:

posted about 1 year ago

haha. i love it!
On Greg and Art:

posted about 1 year ago

hello?! mark this as mature please! some young people use this site!
On Million Little Pieces:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s cool. I like how you incorporated the picture in with the story. It’s good, really good. =)
On Crash and Burn:

posted about 1 year ago

it’s good. I like it. =)
On The Cart:

posted about 1 year ago

yeah i agree w/ Mefel. How ccan a cart frolic? but its cute and i love it!
On SiReN's Song:

posted about 1 year ago

it’s interesting. in a good way.
On So Says the Leftist:

posted about 1 year ago

o0o. I like it. its cool.
On Like or love me?:

posted about 1 year ago

i like it! the repetition is good and it is a little confusing but still very good! keep writing!=]
On Didn't Know:

posted about 1 year ago

i like it . it is interesting, the part where you say he hated him and loved him at the same time.
On Registration, Please:

posted about 1 year ago

okay, but i think you should have kept it a real man. it would have been more interesting.
On Charlotte:

posted about 1 year ago

really cool. I like it. :)
On The Girl Who Destroyed The World:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting.
On LayingPieces Of Carpet:

posted about 1 year ago

i love it it is so interesting! It has a cool story line. :)
On Pop!:

posted about 1 year ago

awesome descriptions! I love it. It is so out there. Great work!
On The rise and fall of a teenage kiss butt 2:

posted about 1 year ago

haha i love it!
On The rise and fall of a teenage kiss butt.:

posted about 1 year ago

I like it. tht sounds just likie this kid in my class! awesome!
On Trippin':

posted about 1 year ago

i think its okay but its kinda weird. but weird is cool. :)-
On A Girl Called Jack:

posted about 1 year ago

It’s really good! I love how you say she doesn’t remember anything but her mom never lets her forget that she killed her brother. Nice work!
On In the Past, Five Minutes:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting.
On Sleep Interests Me:

posted about 1 year ago

Funny! I like it. I like to sleep too! haha! :)
On Four Color Life:

posted about 1 year ago

interesting storyline. I like it.
On The Hush of Battle:

posted about 1 year ago

it’s good. I like it.
On Doing What We Do Best:

posted about 1 year ago

this is awesome i love it its so cool!
On my home:

posted about 1 year ago

yeah its good. i like the rhyming in it. the landlord pete makes it funny. write some more! :)
On i sometimes wish you didn't:

posted about 1 year ago

that’s awesome! its so sad too. my dad left so i know the feeling.
On trembling.:

posted about 1 year ago

aaaawwwwwww. i like this. its so sad, and so emotional. u wrote it with feeling, i can tell. great job. make a sequel or something!
On Der Daumen:

posted about 1 year ago

yeah, i dont get it.
On My little memories:

posted about 1 year ago

i like it. can i write a sequel?
On Word Vomit 2:

posted about 1 year ago

Haha! I loved this story and its prequel! its awesome and embarrassing in an every-girl-will-have-this-happen-to-her-at-some-point-in-life sort of way! good job. :)
On Cant you see i love you?:

posted about 1 year ago

the feeling seems so real b/c it is real. this is how i really feel about someone. thx tho!
On Tortured soul:

posted about 1 year ago

WOW.! THIS ONE IS TOTALLY GREAT! I LOVE THE FIRST TWO LINES! THEY R AWESOME! KEEO UP THE GREAT WORK!
On Sweet Juice:

posted about 1 year ago

i liked it . it was interesting how they were so delicious and she thinks it was worth it. good job!
On Windows of the Soul:

posted about 1 year ago

This story is SOOOSOSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO awesome! the feeling is perfect!
I know I keep saying this, but your descriptions are unbelievable.!
On Yearnings:

posted about 1 year ago

Very passionate.
On The Flower:

posted about 1 year ago

This is really good//////!!!!! You use awesome descriptions! You are one of my favorite authors on this site! :)
On A Leaf's Life:

posted about 1 year ago

This is a great story! i love to dance and the vivid descriptions u used were so….......perfect. great job.