Ficlets

Flute Loop<33's posted comments

On Lost Lover:

posted about 10 hours ago

ehh, you guys should go ahead for now, i forgot my idea =]
On Lost Lover:

posted about 10 hours ago

ehh, you guys should go ahead for now, i forgot my idea =]
On Her Father:

posted about 10 hours ago

ahh!! i can’t wait for a sequel!
On Her and Him..She and He:

posted about 10 hours ago

innnnterrstingggg!
On Songz Meeting (LA Series):

posted about 11 hours ago

hahaa woww.
On Texting Raquel:

posted about 11 hours ago

haha maybe they dont have licences =]=]

“AND I SWEAR THAT YOU DONT HAVE TO GO! I THOUGHT WE COULD WAIT FOR THE FIREWORKS I THOUGHT WE COULD WAIT FOR THE SNOW TO WASH OVER GEORGIA AND KILL THE HURTTTTT” -amazing song
On Candi's Reasoning:

posted about 11 hours ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On Hott:

posted about 11 hours ago

haha friends are there to say and do things you yourself would never do alone ;)
On Dinner and Candi:

posted about 11 hours ago

wait. is Candi the one that told him about his ex girlfriend? i think so.
On Telling Someone!:

posted about 11 hours ago

lol I wonder who in the world Raquel could be!
On Powerful feeling:

posted about 11 hours ago

At least he heard the garage =P That woulda sucked if his parents walked in and were just like standing there watching him
On Quick Goodbye:

posted about 11 hours ago

awwwww, idk what else to say!!
On Truth be Told...:

posted about 11 hours ago

wow. im jealous!
On Phone Call:

posted about 11 hours ago

haha, i wonder where he lives
On Phone Call:

posted about 11 hours ago

haha, i wonder where he lives
On One Comment, One Chance:

posted about 11 hours ago

Showers can really help bad situations a lot =]
On Painful Story:

posted about 11 hours ago

ewww hes gayyy
On The double-edged sword of Love:

posted about 11 hours ago

baddd memories, amazing ficlet. I feel for Tyler =(
On Hurtful Truth:

posted about 11 hours ago

Aww and now he can’t really write a ficlet because then Rose’ll see it. how lameee.
On Troubling Response:

posted about 11 hours ago

BREAK UP WITH THE BOYFRIEND ROSE =]=]
On Not-So-Loverly Interuption:

posted about 11 hours ago

whoops. nice twist though! I assumed they were both single
On Sleepless In Atlanta:

posted about 11 hours ago

awwwwwwwwww =]
On Inspector's Report (Savior):

posted 1 day ago

what is it?! sequel soon!
On Nailing David:

posted 1 day ago

howhowhow?!
On Not at Liberty:

posted 1 day ago

haha. Well there goes davids cover.
On Old House Motor Garage:

posted 1 day ago

dun dun dun
On Michelle's a Genius?!?!:

posted 1 day ago

I’m telling you it’s the name!
On More Evidence???:

posted 1 day ago

You allllways need more evidence =]
On Roxanne's Confrontation:

posted 1 day ago

family friend. phycopath. same diff.
On The Restraunt:

posted 1 day ago

hmmm.
On Lost Lover:

posted 1 day ago

if you don’t mind i might just seqel!
On Lost Lover:

posted 1 day ago

i just got chills.
On Memories of Love:

posted 1 day ago

wow.
On Letter to Wiley:

posted 1 day ago

wow. pretty much amazing!
On Hope:

posted 1 day ago

Depressing, and amazing all at the same time!
On Laughing Fit:

posted 1 day ago

Aww, yet again, the summer school thing kinda makes me think da javu =]
On Name to a Face:

posted 1 day ago

awwww!! This is like undescribably amazing!
On Need to Spill!:

posted 1 day ago

At least he couldn’t see her!
LoA
On Trying to Hold On:

posted 1 day ago

Thank God for ficlets, the amazing alternative to the other thing. =]
On A Deadly Phonecall:

posted 1 day ago

Ahh, I want to know!
On FICBLOG!!!: Callenge Round- up!!!:

posted 1 day ago

Wow, I figured since the blog was no longer going on I would just stop tagging with newchallenge, now I guess I should fix that!
On FICBLOG!:

posted 1 day ago

amazing idea!
On Walk to Ron's:

posted 1 day ago

sequeled!!!!
On Walk to Ron's:

posted 1 day ago

hehee =]
On Conclusion/Beginning: The Meaning of Freedom [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

I agree with Pyro, I would give you wayyyyy more then 5 stars if i could have =]
On Liars and Dungeons [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

I love the last line, in a completely horrible way…
On Snapped [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

uh-mazing. thats the only way to describe it
On Plan [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

wow.
On Solution [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

I want to know what happened to her mom!
On Truth [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

This definatly is way more intersting because it’s backwards =]
On Precise as Knives [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

I definatly agree with Freedom =]
On The Art of Patience [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

wow, i really didn’t see that one coming
On Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]:

posted 2 days ago

dannnggg. im reading the sequel!
On Trying to Kiss and Make Up:

posted 2 days ago

there is now a sequel!!!!!
On Trying to Kiss and Make Up:

posted 2 days ago

=( Winter just happens to be at the broken trash can…
On Feeling Better:

posted 2 days ago

hahah slap happy =]
and the whole “I bet your pretty when you laugh” thing is realllllly cute!
On Thinking in the Morning:

posted 2 days ago

very cute =]
On Talking All Night:

posted 2 days ago

haha the begining, about summer school, sounds sorta familar =P i was so slap happy this morning!
On A Good Looking Day Ahead:

posted 2 days ago

haha, i love how hes had 3 hours of sleep and decides it’s going to be a good day, that made me laugh =]
On Laughing Hard:

posted 2 days ago

phh, the band baby i know mispells everything anyway =P haha jkjk love you best friend =]
On Mistress in my Mind:

posted 2 days ago

aww this is amazing! i don’t even know what else to say!
On Dinner and a Note:

posted 2 days ago

Haha, it does always seem whenever you want to see if someone commented you it takes FOREVER to load!
On A Change of Music:

posted 2 days ago

I think this whole series is pretty cute!
On A Budding Friendship?:

posted 2 days ago

Awww, i use it as one too =]
On A few seconds of relief:

posted 2 days ago

haha i agree with OTOC, i love that song/band, and i also really like this ficlet! comments always make you feel better =]
On A Fellow Writer:

posted 2 days ago

yeah i know what you mean OTOC =]
nice sequel =]
On Pretty bad day:

posted 2 days ago

haha I’m sure the whole “I’m having a bad day, I think I’ll write a ficlet” applies to a lot of people on this site =]
On So Much for First Impressions:

posted 2 days ago

And there is finally a sequel! Sorry that took so long!
On How Will Roxy Prove Her Theory??:

posted 4 days ago

oh burn. you suck david. =]=]=]
On Evidence!!!:

posted 4 days ago

WHATS HER REASONING!!! sorry, i get excited when i read a good series =]
On Roxanne's Investigation Begins:

posted 4 days ago

good. maybe he’ll slip up and they’ll stick him in the electric chair ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz.
On Narrator's Explanation:

posted 4 days ago

i agree with amber…. i mean band baby, i never knew you could write so amazingly!!!
On David's Intentions:

posted 4 days ago

=0 THE STUPID PIECE OF CRAP. i hate boys. espically ones named david, for various reasons. =]
On Breanna's end:

posted 4 days ago

poor girl. =(
On The Breakup:

posted 4 days ago

good. he deserves to be stranded!
On My Threatening Letter:

posted 4 days ago

Ahhh sequel fast I wanna know if the neighbors know anything!!!!!!!
On My Inner Voice:

posted 4 days ago

Just a quick fix, you have a couple i’s that should be I’s. =] but otherwise, pretty much amazing!!
On Diary of God's Dreamer:

posted 4 days ago

That’s crappy. I really like this though!!! and yeah T_R’s comment really makes no sense =]
On So Much for First Impressions:

posted 5 days ago

Ahhh! I love the last line!
On L'Autre Femme:

posted 6 days ago

That’s the way it always is! If they are nice, sweet, and good looking, they are either taken or gay! I loved this, I laughed out loud just like everyone else.
On Love and Cigarettes:

posted 6 days ago

I almost had the chance to fly to Paris! Too bad it was a little over my budget… I this is is really cute though!
On Enchanté:

posted 6 days ago

I agree with everyone else, I think I have just decided what language I’m going to take next year =]
On Practice:

posted 6 days ago

Have you ever been to France? Or do you actually know how to speak it? just wondering =]
On La Première Impression :

posted 6 days ago

I love how you have the actual French in there, it makes it seem more.. real =]
On Megan to the Rescue:

posted 6 days ago

sequeled! =]
On Megan to the Rescue:

posted 6 days ago

awww!! Haha I totally do my make-up on the bus every morning =]
On Experimental Ficlet #46:

posted 7 days ago

Ahh, someone should definatly sequel this!
On Experimental Ficlet #45:

posted 7 days ago

Ha, everyone that has cheated, more power to you! I love this Elsha! and who cares if it’s the longest?!
On Experimental ficlet #44:

posted 7 days ago

Aww T_R why’d you go and give yourself one star!? You deserve more then that!
On experiMental ficlet #43:

posted 7 days ago

Ahh! She’s there!
On eXpErIMeNtaL ficlet #42:

posted 7 days ago

i really like this! Great continuation!
On Expiremential ficlet #41:

posted 7 days ago

I agree with Ana, this is very powerful and one of my favorites so far!
On Expiremential ficlet #40:

posted 7 days ago

I love it!! (I think whoever brought up the subject was reading Smiles profile…)(The Jonas Brothers are amazing =])
On The Corridor And The Rose-They Had Gotten Most Of Us:

posted 7 days ago

You should continute this! Like soon! It’s really good!!!!
On The Corridor And The Rose-Petrified:

posted 7 days ago

I don’t blame the character for being petrified, I think I would have pissed myself by now =]
On The Corridor And The Rose-Book 1: In Time:

posted 7 days ago

FLASH BACK! =]
On The Corridor And The Rose:

posted 7 days ago

Wow, this sounds like it’s going to be good!
On A Flurry of Text Messages:

posted 7 days ago

And there is now a sequel =]
On A Flurry of Text Messages:

posted 7 days ago

aww thanks for adjusting yours =] I’ll sequel as soon as I can!
On Surprise, Surprise, Surprise:

posted 7 days ago

nicee!!!! I have a nice idea for a sequel =]
On A Flurry of Text Messages:

posted 7 days ago

haha, if you go back and read the last one, it makes a lot more sense now, I accidentally had a less than sign in it and as you may know it messes things up a little =]

oh no, her mom says goodnight twice, do want me to change mine back? Ahhhh I’m so sorry! I feel like an idiot!

(Btw, i love this =])
On New Text Message:

posted 7 days ago

oh wow, this is odd, it’s missing the whole middle part. let me try and fix this =]
On Blank Page:

posted 7 days ago

wow, i totally never thought of that =] thanks!
On Blank Page:

posted 7 days ago

Ok you’ve got your sequel (just do everyone knows, its called New Text Message not read the other one =])
On Blank Page:

posted 7 days ago

veryy nice!! I’ll sequel asap!
On Busted:

posted 7 days ago

Sorry Ana, I had a burst of inspiration, do you want to pick it up from here? =]
On Saved by the Bell?:

posted 7 days ago

amazing sequel! I’m off to write the next one right now! and I really like the idea of a party.
On Boom's of the star:

posted 9 days ago

brave! =]
On Making The Best of It:

posted 9 days ago

That’s so sad!
On The Beggining of Joy:

posted 9 days ago

no mom OR dad, I think I would be a little depressed =]
On The darkness of Space:

posted 9 days ago

wow, this is a really cool thing going here! off to the sequel!
On Nova:

posted 9 days ago
- does the same thing as invisivility *
On Entering The Unknown:

posted 9 days ago

A little girl with no daddy is one of the saddest things in the world (at least in my opinion)
On The End of a Generation:

posted 9 days ago

Aww I almost got teary eyed! Amazing job!
On The End of It All:

posted 9 days ago

intersting!
On Middle School -- The Terror, The Trouble, and The Totally Terrific Thrill:

posted 9 days ago

I agree!!! It’s like, why don’t you just make a copy?! I mean the people who actually take notes would actually study it!
On Middle School -- The Terror, The Trouble, and The Totally Terrific Thrill:

posted 9 days ago

haha, well, highschool is worse =]
On Anna Cristina's New Pic The Poem.:

posted 9 days ago

I agree with everything everyone said above
On Skinny Dipping :

posted 9 days ago

Aw this is really cute.
On Place Litter in Proper Receptacle:

posted 9 days ago

I agree with THX
On Finishing The Beasts:

posted 9 days ago

poor dog human thing
On Finishing The Beasts:

posted 9 days ago

poor dog human thing.
On Minotaur:

posted 9 days ago

wow. don’t burn the poor thing!!
On toby sex:

posted 9 days ago

odd…..
On Toby intimate:

posted 9 days ago

dog porn. wow…
On Dirty Days:

posted 9 days ago

wow. I think I’ll read the sequel
On Log Me Out:

posted 9 days ago

intersting! I think you should sequel this and turn it into a story, but thats just my opinion =]
On Sundance:

posted 9 days ago

This seems like it should be taken in a very deep and personal way, I really like it! nice job!
On Experimental ficlet # 39:

posted 9 days ago

finally some action!!
On Experimental ficlet # 38:

posted 9 days ago

i agree with the above!
On Experimental Ficlet #37:

posted 9 days ago

I had the exact same question as band baby!
On Experimental Ficlet #36:

posted 9 days ago

poor guy =(
On Experimental Ficlet #35:

posted 9 days ago

i agree with Band Baby and TBS
On Experimental Ficlet No. 34:

posted 9 days ago

i wonder how he found the right random peach..
On Experimental Ficlet Number 33:

posted 9 days ago

nice addition!!!
On Experimental Ficlet Number 32:

posted 9 days ago

using what?!
On Experimental Ficlet Number 31:

posted 9 days ago

Who could they possibly be?!
On Experimental Ficlet Number 30:

posted 9 days ago

i think everyone is confused by blus comment =] and i agree with otoc!
On Teenage Dictionary (INVISIBLE EDITION!!):

posted 9 days ago

nice edition!!
On Dear Dr. Smith:

posted 9 days ago

I like how you thought of someone in a hospital, but you have no idea why they were there, nice job!
On Dear Lily.:

posted 9 days ago

this is such a cool series!! I’m off to read the sequel!
On Dear Jordan...:

posted 9 days ago

haha i love the last line! nice job!
On You're a Good Friend, Sam pt.2:

posted 9 days ago

i agree with otoc!
On You're a Good Friend, Sam pt.1:

posted 9 days ago

this sounds realllllly intersting! nice job!
On Surprise Trip:

posted 10 days ago

That is amazing! I love how she jumps right out of bed as soon as she knows hes coming =]
On Try to Make the Most of It:

posted 10 days ago

awww wayy cute!
On How Could You?:

posted 10 days ago

hahaha awww the name Seth makes me think of Adam!
On Bus Ride Home:

posted 10 days ago

You did it justice, nice job =]
On An unexpected success:

posted 10 days ago

I agree with RD, this is amazing!
On Secret Smile:

posted 10 days ago

wow. i just wrote an amazing sequel, and then my computer decided to be stupid. now i have to try again.
On Teenage Dictionary (Again):

posted 11 days ago

band baby ment Flute Loop, she just has a headache at the moment and can’t seem to tell the difference between an o and a u. Oh, and she doesn’t know what an E is =] (Don’t you love how’s she laying on the floor behind me?)
On Teenage Dictionary (Again):

posted 11 days ago

I love the last one. I’m sooo going to start using that =]
On Teenage Dictionary, Entry #176,908.:

posted 11 days ago

I always use frick! It’s like my favorite word of all time =]
On Teenage Dictionary, cont'd:

posted 11 days ago

And I thought I was the only one to say preggers =]
On Teenage Dictionary, Special Edition!:

posted 11 days ago

Gotta love Joe Jonas =]
On Teenage Dictionary, Grey Edition:

posted 11 days ago

Aw, don’t hate on Edward Cullen just because he’s amazing =]
On Teenage Dictionary, Gamer Edition :

posted 11 days ago

I have a few friends that are really into the whole “l33t” thing, it is soooo annoying =] nice addition though
On Teenage Dictionary (auf Deutsch):

posted 11 days ago

I agree with Lone Writer and BB too!
On PBBT's Life on the Back of a CD:

posted 11 days ago

AHHHH I love Escape the Fate and All Time Low!!! I’ll have to enter this challenge soon =]
On Pie Contest ((I Smell a Winner Challenge)):

posted 13 days ago

Yay May! Nice job =]
On Crazy Guy with a Gun:

posted 13 days ago

hahaha 44 characters =]. wait. i mean 6 =P
On New Girl in School:

posted 13 days ago

Aw, I wonder what happened to her!
On more teenage word dictionary:

posted 13 days ago

i agree!
On Teenage Word/Phrase Dictionary (cont.) x2:

posted 13 days ago

You started something really awesome Lone Writer! You should be proud =]
On Teenage Word/Phrase Dictionary (cont.):

posted 13 days ago

You know what…? That’s definatly my favorite!
On Teenage Word Dictionary, continued:

posted 13 days ago

nice addition!
On Teenage Word/Phrase Dictionary:

posted 13 days ago

OMG I love it!
On Teenage Word/Phrase Dictionary:

posted 13 days ago

I think every single person in my highschool has used your mom at least 5 times =]
On Teenage Word Dictionary 2008:

posted 13 days ago

It’s soooo true! I love the idea!
LoA
On How Time Passes:

posted 14 days ago

omg, this is amazing! It would definatly describe what every father has to go through =] 5*’s all the way.

minor fix, the last line should be fell not feel.
On The Lone Dollar (Personal Fantasy Challenge):

posted 14 days ago

I agree with paper flowers, you brought in reality and fantasy, very intersting =] Thanks for entering!
On A Perfect Life ((Personal Fantasy Challenge)):

posted 14 days ago

AWWW I could totally see this being your future =] Thanks for entering =P
On Your Personal Fantasy (A Challenge) I Took It!:

posted 14 days ago

Theres always time to decide on which thing you would like to do =] I like MEH’s idea myself! Anyway, thanks for entering =]]
On Part-time Writer, Full-time Theatre Geek [My Fantasy Challenge]:

posted 14 days ago

Aww, that sounds like an amazing future! Thanks for entering =]
On Is there really a God? Evolution? Heaven or Hell?:

posted 16 days ago

This is a really amazing ficlet, I wish some of my friends could read it. I grew up with no religion, and so I believe in evolution, as for everything else, I’ll find out when I die. And I don’t mind waiting until then =]
On A True Friend:

posted 16 days ago

This is really really really good! One of my favorite poems on ficlets!! Amazing job =]
On Experimental Ficlet No. 29:

posted 16 days ago

perfect!!!!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 28:

posted 16 days ago

Great continuation!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 27:

posted 16 days ago

I agree with Blu!!!
LoA
On Experimental Ficlet No.26:

posted 16 days ago

niceeeee ALRO613
On Experimental Ficlet No.25:

posted 16 days ago

wow, this was a veryyyy good addition!
5*s!
On Experimental Ficlet No.24:

posted 16 days ago

very nice twist!
On Experimental Ficlet No.23:

posted 16 days ago

I wonder who she was… hopefully someone will think of that =]
On Experimental Ficlet No.22:

posted 16 days ago

I also agree!
On Secret Smile:

posted 16 days ago

AWWWWWW
now how can I write a sequel that lives up to THAT?!
On Unexpected Meeting:

posted 17 days ago

awe poor Cora
On Overreacting ((Unexpected Twist)):

posted 17 days ago

This is sooo sad, and depressing. I’m glad you would talk to me if my mom died.
On English and a Twin:

posted 17 days ago

No!!!! why was he being all sweet to her on the phone then You must sequel soon, before I die.
On Wrong Question:

posted 17 days ago

That is so sad. They both totally like each other… off to the sequel.
On Expiremental Ficlet No. 21:

posted 17 days ago

someone has to keep this going! Anyone can sequel, it’s really not that hard.
On Experimental Ficlets No. 20:

posted 17 days ago

i love that quote =]
On Experimental Ficlet No. 19:

posted 17 days ago

i agree with the above
On Experimental Ficlet No. 18:

posted 17 days ago

nice sequel!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 17:

posted 17 days ago

this is actually turning into a pretty good story!
On Waiting for THE Question:

posted 18 days ago

.... You can’t just leave me like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s creul!!!!!!! sequel pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =]
On Scared or Startled?:

posted 18 days ago

I’m so happy there’s a sequel
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

haha. wow. i hope no one sees that. sorry about posting that 5 times…
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

I love how she has conversations with herself, a very nice touch!
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

I love how she has conversations with herself, a very nice touch!
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

I love how she has conversations with herself, a very nice touch!
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

I love how she has conversations with herself, a very nice touch!
On Always Right (Except for that one time with the possum):

posted 18 days ago

I love how she has conversations with herself, a very nice touch!
On Solving the Mystery:

posted 18 days ago

=O! Sounds like there’s alot of passion in that writing!
On Things To Do:

posted 18 days ago

I totally forgot about the email!
On Not Really the Same:

posted 18 days ago

awwwwwwwwww
On Plans:

posted 18 days ago

I REALLY wish I had a boy like that =P
On That Crazy Little Voice:

posted 18 days ago

I totally called that one =]] (I really need to stop with the smily faces)
On Long Pauses:

posted 18 days ago

If I were her, I’d like him to ask in person =]
On Better than Edward:

posted 18 days ago

YAY!!!! I loveeeee this series!!!!!
On Complicated Compliments:

posted 18 days ago

beyond cute!!
On Mystery Topic:

posted 18 days ago

i agree with dreamer =]
On A Common Hobby:

posted 18 days ago

awww boys that write are always cute =]
On I'm an Idiot:

posted 18 days ago

=]
On So Not True:

posted 18 days ago

AHH, being a girl and all, I know how amazing it feels when a guy your crushing on calls you, you did a very nice job of getting that emotion across!
On A Lack of Inspiration:

posted 18 days ago

haha i hate that feeling…
quick tip, you should put the link to the begining of your series in your profile =] Much eaiser to find it that way =]
On Experimental Ficlet No. 16:

posted 18 days ago

intersting….!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 15:

posted 18 days ago

Ahhh this is turning into something amazing!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 13:

posted 18 days ago

yay! i agree with the above!
On Experimental Ficlet No. 12:

posted 19 days ago

really random, sorry guys
On Experimental Ficlet No. 10:

posted 19 days ago

I agree with penguin, this is really cool, I might just have to do a sequel to the last one!
On Why:

posted 21 days ago

i love it! i can totally relate.
On Love and Loss (Unexpected Twist challenge):

posted 21 days ago

nice job!!
On More Than Nothing:

posted about 1 month ago

aww thats so sad and cute at the same time!
On Backwards Challenge!:

posted about 1 month ago

haha nice, but are you saying just write one ficlet (ie the last one) or write a whole series backwards? just wondering =]
On Into the Mud Again:

posted about 1 month ago

wow, i totally did not mean to post that comment three times, sorry!!
On Into the Mud Again:

posted about 1 month ago

there is no way to describe how amazing this would be if it were to happen to me, you’re doing a great job! and I love the miniseries idea!
On Into the Mud Again:

posted about 1 month ago

there is no way to describe how amazing this would be if it were to happen to me, you’re doing a great job! and I love the miniseries idea!
On Into the Mud Again:

posted about 1 month ago

there is no way to describe how amazing this would be if it were to happen to me, you’re doing a great job! and I love the miniseries idea!
On Who is this Angel Covered in Mud?:

posted about 1 month ago

awwwwwwwwww that is sooooooo amazingly cute!
On I've Fallen in Mud Before:

posted about 1 month ago

aww i wonder who actually tripped her, herself or him?
On Tripped into the Mud:

posted about 1 month ago

haha this totally mimicks how something real could possible start, very cute =]
On Facedown in the Mud:

posted about 1 month ago

awww that is so sweet!!!
On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

posted about 1 month ago

wait!!! no!!!! there isn’t a sequel =(
guess I lied I’m not off to see what they are planning…
On What goes on outside the WonderBall:

posted about 1 month ago

I wonder what they are planning…
I’m off to see!
LoA
On WonderEmily:

posted about 1 month ago

The mystery just keeps getting bigger and bigger and this series is also getting better and better!
On From Inside The Wonderball part 2:

posted about 1 month ago

I can’t believe she’s willing to bring her brother into this…. thats creepy! along with the old guy =]
On From Inside The Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

I’m really glad someone thought to write about the inside of the wonderball, I was wondering about that..
On A weakness in the Wonderball?:

posted about 1 month ago

invisivility_disability,
she was stuck in bed, but she started healing really fast, remember? and then she like ripped all the tubes… so yeah =]
On Return to the Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, now the mom is stuck in this mess too…
On Dana Sees the Light:

posted about 1 month ago

I love how Dana has been asleep or whatever since Tuesday. That means Emily has been in the Wonderball for like 5 days. That sucks =(
On Wonderball makes new Friends:

posted about 1 month ago

Poor Dana! I wonder what it would be like to watch your friend get stuffed into a wonderball…
On Not So Fast:

posted about 1 month ago

amazing twist! nice job!
On Figment of the Imagination:

posted about 1 month ago

intersing…
On So Long...:

posted about 1 month ago

Whats complete
On Who are you?:

posted about 1 month ago

woah. I didn’t see that one coming!!
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On Split Personality?:

posted about 1 month ago

Do something!!! Actually, if I was in the same position, I would do the same thing..
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On To Play or Be Played:

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, what an evil little thing.
Amazing story.
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On The Wonderball's Warning:

posted about 1 month ago

omg. I HAVE TO KEEP READING!!
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On Room 34:

posted about 1 month ago

I lied in my last comment. I don’t want a cool thing that can tell the future.
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On The Cryptic, Unpredictable Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

Way to be brave!! I wouldn’t have that kind of courage! 5*s!
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On The Essential, Indispensable Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

I wish I had a cool ball that would tell me about the future!! And I wonder if her friend puts her in a coma! What a nice friend =P
On The Room Awaits...:

posted about 1 month ago

Wow, I wonder what happened to her friend!!
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On The Wonderball's Message:

posted about 1 month ago

Ahhh!! I think I would stay far away from any room 34 for the wholeeee year.
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On Wonderball Comes to Life:

posted about 1 month ago

34!? And I also agree with MusicHearted and Stovohobo. =]
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On The Future Is Unwritten:

posted about 1 month ago

So this was pretty much amazing. Ok enough commenting, I’m off to read the sequel.
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On Phone Call:

posted about 1 month ago

haha OTOC it’s not a typo =]
On Different Plan?:

posted about 1 month ago

bahhhhh!! sequel now!!
On Just A Little Bit of a Shame:

posted about 1 month ago

wow. disregard my comments from eariler…
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On Just A Little Unfortunate:

posted about 1 month ago

ohhh boyyy…
On Just A Little Complicated:

posted about 1 month ago

that would really suck, you would have like no best friend or boyfriend or anything!
On Just A Little Different:

posted about 1 month ago

wow what a blunt way to describe your family… cool start though!
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On "I heard something":

posted about 1 month ago

omg! they totally know the same thing!!
On Just Random Doodles:

posted about 1 month ago

ahh shee knowss!!!
On Should I Let Them?:

posted about 1 month ago

another amazing series so far!
On School Auditorium :

posted about 1 month ago

bahhh must continue reading!!
On Ask the Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

This is a next to perfect story, you already have a somewhat developed plot, and a cliff at the end, and it makes me want to read more! You should definatly sequel. =]
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On Orlando Comforts Lynde:

posted 2 months ago

stalker?
sure seems like it, omg this could totally turn into one of those creepy stories proving you shouldn’t talk to people you don’t know online… or it could be a really cute story…

wow. most random comment of my life.
On Lynde meets Orlando:

posted 2 months ago

intersting….
On Maybe I was Wrong..:

posted 2 months ago

wait wait. im thinking of another name… but i really like bernard michael o_m!!
On One Last Kiss:

posted 2 months ago

awww what a sweet ending =]
On "Stay Outside Until Morning Light":

posted 2 months ago

yay!!
I love how her parents are smart enough to leave a note. =]
On Slamming Doors:

posted 2 months ago

Shouldn’t you be able to “communicate” in a relationship, poor bernard and faith need to learn that!!!! AHH
On Maybe I was Wrong..:

posted 2 months ago

Bernard Michael… i wonder who came up with that amazingly cute name … =]
On Rosaline, PLEASE!:

posted 2 months ago

i think i would have just gotten hit by the plate…. haha
On How Much Have you Learned?:

posted 2 months ago

i agree with Blusparrow!
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