The Lady's posted comments

  1. On The Side Effects of Inspiration-lost:

    posted 5 months ago

    I don’t think this actually qualifies as mature, but I know there’s probably someone out there who would consider my brief bit of language enough, so there we are.

    Also, I swear this doesn’t reflect how hard a time I’ve been having writing anything when I log onto ficlets.

    At all.

  2. On Tales of Nyk and the Gestalt:

    posted 8 months ago

    Yay! The Gestalt! I’ll sequel with the Mouse’s story.

  3. On Our World:

    posted 8 months ago

    Beautiful! It brings very vivid imagery to mind. I love music and I love color, so this is wonderful for me.

  4. On Gracie:

    posted 8 months ago

    I’m not sure a therapist would be this blunt right off the bat. But nonetheless, this is a great piece of writing and building up. I hope you continue, though it also works well as a one-shot.

  5. On English Breakfast Tea:

    posted 8 months ago

    Haha, typo.

  6. On The Adventures of Uglybaby: The Meeting:

    posted 8 months ago

    Because it’s a cool word, in all honesty.

  7. On Hollie's Winter:

    posted 8 months ago

    Hollie from my first ficlet ‘pears again!

  8. On The Chase:

    posted 8 months ago

    That was totally not the ending I expected. That was wonderful.

  9. On Eighties Hip-Hop Jam (Beatbox Not Included):

    posted 8 months ago

    You know what these remind me of? Once, in high school, I had to write a boast based off of ones in old literature, like Beowulf. These are like modernized versions of those. That makes them slightly more interesting, even if that’s not the intention at all.

  10. On Eighties Hip-Hop Jam (Beatbox Not Included):

    posted 8 months ago

    Never. If I can’t forget mine, you can’t forget yours. To the credit of yours, I am chuckling. A lot.

  11. On I've Come This Far:

    posted 8 months ago

    This is very pretty and bittersweet. The repetition is well done, which isn’t always the case with repetition, so my compliments on that. It captures high-school type crush/obsessions very well- far more serious than anything older ever thinks they are.

  12. On The Lady Doth Rap:

    posted 8 months ago

    Oh, ok! I thought maybe it was some random noise… ^ ^;

  13. On The Lady Doth Rap:

    posted 8 months ago

    Much thanks! Isn’t bifurcate a great word?

  14. On Warlord (King of Mars) lyrics:

    posted 8 months ago

    I had to read this a few times before I got my mind around how funny it was. And it is, it really is.

  15. On Was That a Rap? Nope, Too White.:

    posted 8 months ago

    We’ll all just blame Yoda. Still, rhyming is fun… And other people rhyming is entertaining.

  16. On To the tune of "Her Majesty" by Paul McCartney, from The Beatles' album "Abbey Road":

    posted 8 months ago

    That fits… unnervingly well… I rather like it.

  17. On The Lady Doth Rap:

    posted 8 months ago

    Thanks, I suppose. Well, actual thanks, even if this is one of the dumber things I’ve written… Ah, well, it stretches the creativity.

    ... what is “twita”?

  18. On Reaching Melanie:

    posted 8 months ago

    This is hopeful and heartbreaking at the same time… There are too many people out there with lives like Mellie’s.

  19. On [YodaOnCrack's Rap Challenge] An Unexceptional Nom de Plume:

    posted 8 months ago

    I think that’s kinda how these rap things go… “Apologies for our ridiculousness…”

  20. On Opportunity in Hell:

    posted 8 months ago

    That’s utterly disconcerting. If that was your intention, it was achieved flawlessly. (Actually, it was even if it wasn’t your intention.)

  21. On Am I Going Nuts?:

    posted 8 months ago

    This was completely not what I expected when I saw the title. And then I read that first sentence and went, ”...what…?” for a few seconds. But in a delighted way.

  22. On The YodaOnCrack Rap Song:

    posted 8 months ago

    The terrible thing is, I can actually hear this in my head as a rap… and now it’s stuck there.

    ...

    This is irresistible. I’m gonna write one.

  23. On The Adventures of Uglybaby: Table Talk:

    posted 8 months ago

    Taunt, taunt, taunt. It’s most likely in Wyoming… though it could be Michigan. I’ll probably never decide.

  24. On The Adventures of Uglybaby: The Meeting:

    posted 8 months ago

    Thanks for pointing that out, by the way. ^ ^

  25. On The Adventures of Uglybaby: The Meeting:

    posted 8 months ago

    Oops! I changed my mind about the character’s name, and missed one. Sorry!

  26. On Battleship:

    posted 8 months ago

    Just so people know, there is actually a place in New Mexico called Battleship. It’s a big cliff-mesa thing that looks a lot like a ship.

  27. On Breakfast nirvana. Breakfast challenge by Nouvelle Bardot:

    posted 8 months ago

    I like that she’s a picky eater. One can identify. This is really nicely done, though you’re missing some punctuation.

  28. On Impatience:

    posted 8 months ago

    I really like this. I don’t really know what it’s talking about, what with the 7 hours… but I really like it.

  29. On Simon the Not-So-Intelligent Designer:

    posted 8 months ago

    Oh my gosh. Firefly and Battlestar Galactica references together! Marvelous! I particularily like the bit with human and velociraptors.

  30. On The Cold:

    posted 8 months ago

    It’s a nightmare I had, actually… but it might have been about death. Anyway, thank you!

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