SJHundak/S.J.Willing's posted comments

  1. On I Want to Be a Decepticon:

    posted 8 months ago

    Nice piece, alas I know nothing about the decepticons. I think I must be getting old

    LOL

    S.J.

  2. On Cars in the Water:

    posted 8 months ago

    Cute Literal translation taken to extremes and reminds me of my grandfather. We used to tell him to go through the traffic lights and he’d always say, “Through them? I rather hope I’d go past them.”

  3. On Kiss and Ride:

    posted 8 months ago

    Nice, I like to see a twist of humor like this.

    S.J.

  4. On Ficlet the 200th and the DOUBLE CHALLENGE!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Congratulations :) Welcome to the 200 club

    S.J.

  5. On Yoda'lling on.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh thank you, I get kinda weird every now and then :)

    S.J.

  6. On The Mind relieved:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Some of the small press stuff i read is 20 bucks for a trade paperback.

    Small press runs = higher prices I guess. Still, haven’t yet bought a small press for that price that I didn’t like.

    S.J.

  7. On The End is Not Enough:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Bablefish poorly translated korean goes something like this.

    “She isn’t here?”

    “Burn the place down”

    :)

    S.J.

  8. On FICLET #100!!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yay! Welcome to the Centennial Club!

    :)

    S.J.

  9. On The End is Not Enough:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehe hope you sequel…

    :)

    S.J.

  10. On The Tables Turned:

    posted about 1 year ago

    talking about people and things that use the picnic tables

    :)

    S.J.

  11. On Gray Day:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Darn you must have felt really washed out bu all that :)

    nice piece

    S.J>

  12. On Consumption and Calamity:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very nice imagery

    grats
    S.J.

  13. On The Mind relieved:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh yeah and it certainly gave me some inspiration :) Thanks

    S.J.

  14. On The Mind relieved:

    posted about 1 year ago

    :) thankee, then my job is done.

    S.J.

  15. On Double-Cross:

    posted about 1 year ago

    the good old he knoes she knows but doesn’t beleive she knows he knows lol

    Like it

    S.J.

  16. On The End is Not Enough:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you, must admit a slight departure from my crazy, weird type of humor style LOL

    S.J.

  17. On Merrily We Roll Along:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol cute

    S.J.

  18. On The Pain:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Argh I’m having a constant pain in my butt Hope that doesn’t keep getting bigger…

    :)

    S.J.

  19. On My Dream:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol nice dream

    S.J.

  20. On Hazel Eyes:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nice and descriptive

    S.J.

  21. On Van Mantra's Capture:

    posted about 1 year ago

    cool

    hmm looking to see if he gets reincarnated LOL

    S.J.

  22. On The Mind?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    damn pose a question— I gotta answer.

    :)

    S.J.

  23. On 62nd Floor:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nice ending, probably could have worked a little more suspense and tension into the piece with a clever working of paragraph spacing.

    S.J.

  24. On Picnic Tables:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol very cool

  25. On Last Kiss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice storyline, could I ask a favor though, could you use paragraphs, I found this a little difficult to read without the paragraph spacings

    Thanks
    S.J.

  26. On The First Sightings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hey the whole thing is good to read :)

    S.J.

  27. On On the Eve of the End :

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice hook.

    Hmm now what could she be in danger of…

    S.J.

  28. On Yoda'lling on.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yw :) it was just odd enough that I had to sequel it LOL

    S.J.

  29. On No Sleep for the Weary:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yeah toyed with the idea of gods, but then, to the Akindra these gods are like GODS!!!! so I compromised with Gods.

    Heh, hard to get it right some times.

    S.J.

  30. On Enter the Liberace....!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL thanks guys… guess I’d better put this smoke down…

    :)

    S.J.

  31. On The First Sightings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Throw Liberace at them, nothing can save them then :)

    S.J.

  32. On Subways Aren't What They Seem:

    posted about 1 year ago

    :) hey makes it more fun to add subplots and who can leave out the ice cream

    S.J.

  33. On Ice Cream Ecstasy:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol I like it. definately someone with a sweet tooth. Though nothing beats a Heath bar Blizzard :)

    S.J.

  34. On My 100th Ficlet and a Message: Your Choice:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL grats on the hundred :)

    S.J.

  35. On Yolkie Van Ackle (prt. 2):

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol now I want to see you write that en francais

    :)

    S.J.

  36. On 100TH Ficlet:

    posted about 1 year ago

    congrats on the 100th!

    S.J.

  37. On The Butler's Pride:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you, a kindred spirit!

    :)

    S.J.

  38. On Will you let me let you live:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting story but a little confusing though, did he kill her or did she kill him

    S.J.

  39. On Work-aholic:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hmm Hell hole or not, does she prefer the hell of her own bedroom or the hell of the world.

    Interesting question.

    S.J

  40. On Introductions:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting development.

    S.J.

  41. On Mrs. Neighbor Lady aka What's with all the Dogs?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehe, now that’s an interesting offer

    S.J.

  42. On Insomnia :

    posted about 1 year ago

    intriguing…

    so what happens next :)

    S.J.

  43. On Of Hot Pockets and Unnecessary Police Reports:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, sounds like my parents talking :)

    S.J.

  44. On The Orange Incident:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Neat, will have to report you to the Society for Protection against Cruelty to Fruit though, slaughtering all those oranges :(

    S.J.

  45. On Ficletcentennial:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Congrats! Let’s break out the bubbly

    :)

    S.J.

  46. On Luck of Some Sort:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hmm i have no idea why that comment is going off the page…. the bit that is missing should be..

    would help draw the reader into the scene

    I believe.

    S.J.

  47. On Luck of Some Sort:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like what you’re trying to say but I can’t feel any emotion for such a shocking possibility.

    It's almost as if you're making a news report.
    I think maybe a little more description, something to give a sense of being there, would help give this scene the sadness it needs and draw the reader in.

    S.J.

  48. On End of an Enemy (Guardians Ep. 29):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice, Will sequel hopefully tomorrow, If I’m not too dead after work :)

    S.J.

  49. On A Long Awaited Return:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting LOL, man you always make me have to think about the sequel :)

    S.J.

  50. On Stupid Bunny - Help Arrives:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol the crazy gets crazier.

    S,J.

  51. On A Writer's Best Friend:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh looks like my very first typewriter. I dread to recall how many sheets of paper went through that thing LOL

    S.J.

  52. On Stupid bunny won't start:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Esoteric, in its cute kinda way :)

    S.J.

  53. On a letter to the north:

    posted about 1 year ago

    ah italics worked here, must have tried to use underscores in the wrong places on the other one.

    Nice piece of intrigue here.

    S.J.

  54. On The Book Of i:

    posted about 1 year ago

    you should be able to edit the italics back into place basically it’s underscore no space words no space underscore and the stuff between the underscores are italics.

    It would make this nice story a lot easier to read :)

    S.J.

  55. On Duck Fishin:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol

    S.J.

  56. On Considering the Options:

    posted about 1 year ago

    still very intriguing, obviously something you’ve planned for a while :)

    S.J.

  57. On Money for Nothing:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol I actually know a girl who went to a dentist and had all her teeth removed just because she found them awkward. Admittedly she didn’t take them out herself but hey this is the next closest thing.

    :)
    S.J.

  58. On A Deal's A Deal:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Like it, Hmm, methinks something is afoot, they gave in way too easily

    :)

    S.J.

  59. On Hell on Ipecache Pt. 4:

    posted about 1 year ago

    you’ve been sequeled.

    :)

    S.J.

  60. On Crash:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice descriptive work!

    S.J.

  61. On Iris:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting thread, wonder just how far an AI child can develop.

    S.J.

  62. On Zombies!?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehe, Grape Jelly, yesssssss.

    S.J.

  63. On The Blizzard of '78:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cute and realistic.

    S.J.

  64. On Zo and the Gator:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice description and vignette, falls a little flat for me in the end since the story was so tame and ended. Would work very well in a longer story peice though

    S.J.

  65. On Dance Macabre:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like.

    S.J.

  66. On *Devastation*:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like the idea and the premise behind the ficlet, there isn’t enough heart though, I don’t get the sense of any emotion in all of this its almost like a newscaster or reporting reciting facts. Wouldn’t take too much to fix though and like I said the idea is great.

    S.J.

  67. On Storm Runner:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting but it felt like you could have done a little more to give the ficlet some “heart”

  68. On Eye of Mystery:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting prequel

    S.J.

  69. On Eye of Mystery:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice

    S.J.

  70. On Questions, Answers:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Aw come on, setting fire to their ship would be fun. :)

    S.J.

  71. On Trippin':

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehe cool
    Gotta be an alien in there somewhere :)
    S.J.

  72. On On The Porch:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting.

    S.J.

  73. On Circumstantial Decimates:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yep, it’s the what the hell is going to happen nextness of it that I enjoy.

    :)

    S.J.

  74. On Four-Color Treachery:

    posted about 1 year ago

    You’ve been sequeled

    :)
    S.J.

  75. On Caseload:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol I see you brought them in, Bravo!

    S.J.

  76. On The Truth is Stranger Than Fiction:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol hey I only had 1024 characters you know

    :)

    S.J.

  77. On Hell on Ipecache Pt. 4:

    posted about 1 year ago

    :) love the chemistry these two have.

    S.J.

  78. On Start of the Curse:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice backstory.

    S.J.

  79. On And Who Would Turn Down A Classic?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL love it, heh, radioactive solar orbiter crash hmm

    :)
    S.J.

  80. On Sleep Interests Me:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol reminds me of someone I knew, was always in bed asleep whenever I tried to get in touch, regardless of the time of day.

    :)

    S.J.

  81. On Hell on Ipecache Pt. 2:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting take. Hehe, as twisty and sneaky as mine.

    S.J.

  82. On Victims of Circumstance:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Intriguing, Hmm,

    oh, yeah you’ve been sequeled,.

    :)

    S.J.

  83. On The Cart:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL cute!

    S.J.

  84. On Four Twenty - Five Years Later:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh certainly different,.

    S.J.

  85. On A Mother's Day Conversation:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hehe

    S.J.

  86. On Dad, Do I love you?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice thoughtful piece, might want to recheck your spelling a little bit, e.g. you’re done, not your done, and debt instead of dept. Nicely done though otherwise.

    S.J.

  87. On Deft Delays and Darker Dealings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm, intriguing.

    in this world of terrorists its pretty much a foregone jump to conclusion peice.

    I wonder….

    :)
    S.J.

  88. On Plane Crash:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very catchy rhythm.

    S.J.

  89. On Strange Things are Afoot at The Rusty Tailpipe:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Doesn’t bother me at all. This mulitple pathway stuff is really what the ficlets is all about. How many ways can a story end :)

    I like seeing how peeps take the same peice and write something totally different to what I’d write.

    S.J.

  90. On Motive:

    posted about 1 year ago

    A nice, i hate you but want to please myself vampire. :) not many of those kind left nowadays.

    S.J.

  91. On A Cop Arrives:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol Yep I know those days,

    S.J.

  92. On Echad:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Intriguing piece,

    S.J.

  93. On A.I. Lost:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Don’t you just hate it when computers do that?

    :)

    Nice work

    S.J.

  94. On Right on the edge of the world:

    posted about 1 year ago

    What no big elephants and a turtle :)

    S.J.

  95. On Event Planning.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL possibly but I have a history, alas of misreading the prequels :)

    S.J

  96. On Nothing Like a Little Lightning to Ruin a Date:

    posted about 1 year ago

    heh, interesting to see a second take on this picture.

    Nice

    S.J.

  97. On The Departure:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very concise and emotional.

    S.J.

  98. On "Tell me why, Suzanne.":

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very telling and informative vignette, Thank you

    S.J.

  99. On Mommy?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nice twist.

    S.J.

  100. On Flowers For You:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice Poem, thank you.

    S.J.

  101. On Event Of The Season:

    posted about 1 year ago

    missed the bit about it crashing in the pacific sorry

    S.J.

  102. On The Mystery Of 28 Yellow Shoes:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice, hey you should be a writer :)

    S.J.

  103. On Drinks for Two:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Holds a lot of info in a small space.

    Nice.

    S.J.

  104. On ...And What Do We have:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Save her! Save her!

    :)

    S.J.

  105. On Will Morning Find Me Miles Away?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL cool! Wonder if it can get any more esoteric.

    :)

    S.J.

  106. On Tina's Taxes:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hehe don’t let them ream you out :)

    S.J.

  107. On The Dark Forest:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice, realistic.

    S.J.

  108. On TOTALLY ENCHANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    uhm?

    no

    :(
    S.J.

  109. On Prophetic Words:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Didn’t quite understand what was going on here but is pretty well written.

    S.J.

  110. On Brazillian Maid:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Good, a nice strong scene, with plenty of hook.

    S.J.

  111. On the item in the glass case:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very intriguing, might I suggest you cut down on the Carefully echoes though, you have three in two paragraphs and it got a little irritating.

    Otherwise, yes curious to see where this goes.

    S.J.

  112. On Oversized Cozy Sweater:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice comedy.

    S.J.

  113. On Jessica Patiently Observes the End of the World:

    posted about 1 year ago

    heh cool

    S.J.

  114. On Monochrome:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very nice!

    S.J.

  115. On Windows of the Soul:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehe the evil baby from hell.

    Gimme my rattle or I’ll sic ya.

    :)

    S.J.

  116. On Yearnings:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice, Suggest you break it into paragraphs. It will heighten the tension some.

    S.J.

  117. On The Flower:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Evocative. well done.

    S.J.

  118. On The Sun of Sons:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cute, nicely written, and good description. Only fault I could find is that I wish there was more.

    :)

    S.J

  119. On i let it happen again.(fall out of love):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Not your best, alas. :( Need to capitalize the I’s, punctuate and spell check.

    Understand the feelings though, been there and done that too many times.

    S.J.

  120. On The Eighth Wonder of the World.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice, :) I don’t know if i’d say the undersea creature relax though, lol i’ve seen too many animal planet programmes. I like the sensations you’re describing though.

    S.J.

  121. On Are we remembered?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hehe cute. Hate to mention it though but the geek speak u, for you, isn’t quite accepted in the publishing world, (though you might get away with it in certain types of poetry.)

    Still very perceptive and cool

    S.J.

  122. On A Mist:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like it a lot, the imagery is good, I query the tense though, you start out with “the mist descends” and then change tense to “the sun started.” Personally I would have used “the sun starts” to keep the tense through the whole piece

  123. On Save The Troops.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice, I was thinking though you could get more life in it from a first person pov. You have some really nice emotion and imagery but just feels like it’s taking too long to come out because of the perspective.

    S.J.

  124. On A Fool And His Destiny:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice…

    :)

    S.J

  125. On Mud Bath:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL typical and so true of any important occassion.

    S.J.

  126. On Talking Frogs Included?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Intriguing story, don’t understand why you miss the spaces after the commas and periods etc, makes the reading a bit difficult.

    S.J.

  127. On Blood Lead:

    posted about 1 year ago

    cool stuff, nice tension here.

    S.J.

  128. On Cheater:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Sad little tale :(
    Hope it gets better for her.

    S.J.

  129. On Mr. 12, Or: Will I ever learn?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehehe glad to see the old thread is still running :)

    S.J.

  130. On Left or Right?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Terror and mayhem, lol are dentists the spawn of the devil or the saviours of mankind :)

    S.J.

  131. On The Odour Out Of Space:

    posted about 1 year ago

    :)

    Me like will try to sequel if the new job gives me enough time.

    S.J.

  132. On Tap tap three:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL like it

    S.J.

  133. On A Leaf's Life:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Lovely description

    S.J.

  134. On Hormones Win Every Time:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice but I would have like more.

    S.J.

  135. On Tough Love:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice, kinda surreal but gritty too

    S.J.

  136. On The Wreck of the Zheng He:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice, but I won’t ruin it for ya
    :)

    S.J.

  137. On wating for my freedom:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL nice

    S.J.

  138. On A scream in the rain:

    posted about 1 year ago

    ah now i understand , Thanks!

    S.J.

  139. On Fetching Mr.Finchman:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting sequel.

    S.J.

  140. On Slurpee and a Shooting:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice story but wouldn’t he have shot the witness too

    S.J.

  141. On Anti-Cat Mojo:

    posted about 1 year ago

    fingers crossed

    S.J

  142. On Beware of Cat:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm I guess the cat’s want to know if they’re mice or men :)

    S.J.

  143. On The Barney Conspiracy:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL cute, let’s hpe she doesn’t get pregnant wink

    S.J.

  144. On Blinking at me:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very cute.

    Never password your laptop jut before a long journey :)

    S.J.

  145. On Caring is our business... :

    posted about 1 year ago

    Murder mayhem and chaos, or is something more sinister afoot.

    S.J.

  146. On THE HOLLOW: A Fairy Tale:

    posted about 1 year ago

    well looking forward to seeing it progress. Might even try myself once I’ve recovered LOL

    S.J.

  147. On hoping for better things :

    posted about 1 year ago

    Sums up desperation and lonliness if a few short words. Powerful stuff.

    S.J.

  148. On I dream of you:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is very nice, with a pleasant surprise at the end.

    :)

    S.J.

  149. On A Kiss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very pretty poem, thank you.

    S.J.

  150. On The Tower of Song:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice. A good hook.

    S.J.

  151. On Home at last - and asleep:

    posted about 1 year ago

    it was fun, thank you.,

    S.J.

  152. On Origin of the cookie:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hehehe nice

    S.J.

  153. On Falling Men Fell Incorrectly (CLFM 47):

    posted about 1 year ago

    looks at the one star and cries.

    heh guess you can’t win them all. but if you can let me know why you one star rated it, okay?

    S.J.

  154. On The End (CLFM 49):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Had more folks on my contact list than I thought LOL

    S.J.

  155. On Ruins:

    posted about 1 year ago

    i like it
    S.J.

  156. On test:

    posted about 1 year ago

    you’ve been sequeled

    S.j.

  157. On First Wave Complications:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hehe nice

    Can’t trust anyone these days, not even missile launchers :)

    S.J.

  158. On Underneath the Dreaming Tree:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Agreed, very intense for such a short piece.

    S.J.

  159. On A fart in the dark-she speaks!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, looks like it’s going to be an interesting story.

    S.J.

  160. On Flee For the Hills (CLFM 41):

    posted about 1 year ago

    If I can work it right, all will be revealed in CLFM 47, the last sequel.

    If I can’t get it to match one of Susan Holder’s sequels I’ll have to write a new one.

    It is harder to read, sorry bout that, but somehow just sequeling myself didn’t seem like a challenge.

    I hope you enjoy what you can read though :)

    S.J.

  161. On A scream in the rain:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like it, I’m a little confused that the glass shattered after the shot. what happened there?

    Otherwise, very cool

    :)

    S.J.

  162. On Blue Sky:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice. :) be interesting to see this sequeled

    S.J.

  163. On Where the cookie came from:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Milk thieves?

    love it.

    S.J.

  164. On still working on it.. :):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hehe, what I want to know is what happened to the cookie

    :)

    S.J>

  165. On Relived (CLFM 30):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, you’re welcome to him :)

    S.J.

  166. On Too Fast! (CLFM 22):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Only time and the end of the story will tell what the gift is all about.

    :)

    S.J

  167. On Fizz banged-up (CLFM 3):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you.

    LOL It’s turning out harder than I thought it would be. I thought I’d be finished by now but I’ve got sixteen more to go.

    Aaargh!

    LOLOL

    S.J.

  168. On Tommy:

    posted about 1 year ago

    You’ve been CLFM sequeled.

    S.J.

  169. On a life found?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very nice imagery

    S.J.

  170. On First Alert:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cool!

    S.J.

  171. On Deal Gone Sour?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    oops yeah

    S.J.

  172. On Anso's Schooling:

    posted about 1 year ago

    You’ve been CLFM sequeled.

    S.J.

  173. On It Won't Be Boring:

    posted about 1 year ago

    :) Thank you.

    I rather liked this one myself

    and thanks, Hope you enjoy the book when it finally comes out LOL man the publishing world is soooo slow.

    :)

    S.J.

  174. On Hope this helps:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nice pacing and imagery

    S.J.

  175. On part two:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hmmmm

    So what’s going on?

    S.J.

  176. On What can I say?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Scary

    shivers

    S.J.

  177. On resurrection of a beloved man:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nah, Godiva truffles.

    Hmmmmmm.

    Thanks for what you did, t’was fun

    S.J.

  178. On What is heaven like:

    posted about 1 year ago

    hmm, they weren’t in the dead sea scrolls were they :)

    S.J.

  179. On Jesus' third miracle.. sort of.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    True that might be funnier too.

    :)
    S.J.

  180. On Jesus' expose on Heaven:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I philosophy I could live with,

    PAYTAH!!

    S.J.

  181. On getting onto the meatier subjects:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nope we won’t talk about the crucifixion.

    Promise.

    S.J.

  182. On Jesus' descent:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Comedy is the divine art of the absurd.

    S.J.

  183. On Jesus' learning reasons:

    posted about 1 year ago

    ooh yes, use everyone as guinea pigs, I like that.

    S.J.

  184. On Jesus' first miracle:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Aw, I liked her the other way.

    :)

    S.J.

  185. On Jesus' second coming 2:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, you go Jesus!

    And this has absolutely nothing to do with the crucifixion

  186. On Jesus' second coming:

    posted about 1 year ago

    There always is. Have you received any hate notes yet?

    lol I have.

    :)

    S.J.

  187. On almost concluded - 2:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Eek!, now where is that damn cat too.

    :)

    S.J.

  188. On almost concluded:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Where’s that snake… someone needs to eat these gusy LOL

    S.J.

  189. On Tobin and Flandip recover and talk:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Ah, now i see the mouse and jocinda connection.

    Neat.

    S.J.

  190. On Jocinda - meet mice:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Send them to the GAA. (God’s alcholics anonymouse)

    :)

    S.J.

  191. On Full circle:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Eek!

    LOL

    S.J.

  192. On time travel statistics:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Ah, the college course. I’ll have to go back in time for that one.

    Keep it going.

    S.J.

  193. On Did you think it would get normal?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    What’s a point five billion amongst friends. :)

    S.J.

  194. On Please leave the planet:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Douglas Adams style humor yes, not neccessarily Douglas Adams though. Styles of humor like plots are limited in number and its very easy to write comedy and make it look like someone else without even trying. (Hell, i do it often enough)

    S.J.

  195. On Convention concluded:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Complete change of pace and scene. Kinda threw me there for a moment.

    Cool though.
    S.J.

  196. On Magrathea:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice keep up the good cookie, uhm work,

    S.J.

  197. On catfish tales:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yeah they don’t teach us gambling like they ought to.

    :)

    S.J.

  198. On The fish speaks:

    posted about 1 year ago

    What is a good response.

    Hmm, mice and milk, sure you didn’t want to use cows or goats.

    S.J.

  199. On don the catfish:

    posted about 1 year ago

    woo woo woo woo

    You have entered the twilight zone.

    S.J.

  200. On Speech with the boss:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Stalker alert! Stalker alert!

    Uhm, hang on.

    Floater Alert!...

    :)

    S.J.

  201. On This sounds fishy:

    posted about 1 year ago

    To drown or not to drown that is the question :)

    S.J.

  202. On Take me to your leader:

    posted about 1 year ago

    But of course it’s a crummy tale, it’s the only way to get the chocolate chip of the shoulder

    :)

    Reading anxiously on.

    S.J.

  203. On Meet our leader:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Aw but I wanted a bunny girl, sniff

    S.J.

  204. On Flying phobia:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Uh oh I see a raisin oatmeal falling…

    :)

    S.J.

  205. On Further into the rabbit hole:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Icky lol

    S.J.

  206. On My cat did WHAT?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice descriptive work :)
    S.J.

  207. On Introducing Joe and Cindy - puppeteers:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL, remember dragons like us crispy with ketchup.

    :)
    S.J.

  208. On Now you see her... damn...:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm, is she a virgin? Oh, sorry that’s not lionel

    :)

    S.J.

  209. On There be dragons here... drat.....:

    posted about 1 year ago

    And what a shame cos inspite of the paisley shirt it was a very nice body to view.

    :)

    S.J.

  210. On the bunny slippers will look like what??:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh, smart enough to avoid humans, not smart enough to recognize them in all forms.

    Sneaky.

    S.J.

  211. On now you don't see her:

    posted about 1 year ago

    You’d be amazed at what the properly prepared bunny slipper can do

    Mwahahaha

    S.J.

  212. On Enter dragon:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Is this a rabbit dragon?

    Curious to know. Moving on to next ficlet.

    S.J.

  213. On If The Slippers Fit:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Oh no the bunny slipper secret is out!

    S.J.

  214. On The Bunny Slippers are Key:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I used to play an online game and one of the quests, if you killed a level 666 white rabbit, gave you the white rabbit bunny slippers.

    Man they kicked ass.

    :)
    S.J.

  215. On The pigeon's role in this.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL okay, yep the crummy was a good one.

    S.J.

  216. On finally getting dressed:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Shoulda had a t-shirt with an arrow pointing down saying I’m with Idiot. :)

    waiting to see where this leads.

    S.J.

  217. On My cat in all this mess:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice but the ending was a little bit plain compared to your others. Was hoping for a snappy remark like. “I had to bring it back, it was trying to swim away…”

    :)

    S.J.

  218. On Part Tres - sneaky snake:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Having found Jocinda by dint of searching all the toilet bowls the snake was flushed with success.

    Glad you continued this one.

    S.J.

  219. On The worst day of my life (Part 2 with more snake):

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL yay, you know not ALL snakes are evil :)

    S.J.

  220. On my sorrow:

    posted about 1 year ago

    intriguing, torn between expecting a tragedy and something paranormal happening.

    S.J.

  221. On The worst day of my life.. :):

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like the mix of fantasy and just everyday normal life

    :)

    Cute
    S.J.

  222. On Are we on number 10 now?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL you should have told him to get stuffed :)

    S.J.

  223. On Beyond is Never Enough:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yes, lol this little one has me thinking now and then. :)

    S.J.

  224. On Jesus' second coming:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol well that’s a different take on the situation :)

    S.J.

  225. On It Gets Better:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Never thought to ask the knight but one hopes he’s rather knightly and is a virgin, of course he might also come into the group of chilli dog. Female virgins are considered the traditional fare for a dragon, why no one knows but its been passed down through history. Also, for some reason, most legends deal with male dragons or genderless dragons, so hmm, female dragons I’m not sure of. Ronald is now a boy-toy LOL well I think Cindy’s going to be pulling a few of his strings so yeah. :)

    S.J.

  226. On Desertion:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice, :) lots of ways I can take this.

    Will probably sequel in a couple of days.

    S.J.

  227. On ...and Loose Change:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you :)

    S.J.

  228. On Please don't hurt me.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cool stuff. Well done. Just a hint though, I think you’d be able to get more dramatic tension in the piece if you split it up into smaller paragraphs

    Causes the reader to break, think, then get slammed by the next line.

    S.J.

  229. On ...Never reaching the end:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL nice.

    S.J.

  230. On Other Ways Than Straight Ahead (Guardians, Ep. 21):

    posted about 1 year ago

    cool, heh magma, nice

    S.J.

  231. On Finishing Touches:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Sequeled, up to you :)

    S.J.

  232. On Consequences Of Drinking:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice

    S.J.

  233. On The Awakening:

    posted about 1 year ago

    good.

    S.J.

  234. On I Think I Lost It:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Succinct :)

    S.J.

  235. On It Starts With Sorry:

    posted about 1 year ago

    nice. Catchy. A few to many sorry’s for me but otherwise very cool

    S.J.

  236. On THE HOLLOW: A Fairy Tale:

    posted about 1 year ago

    odd but interesting.

    S.J.

  237. On Pixies and Dust:

    posted about 1 year ago

    just a hint to write in italics it’s _ word _ without the spaces.

    S.J.

  238. On Thoughts: I'm Still Thinking:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yup, lol I know that feeling well

    :)

    S.J.

  239. On Cute Cuisine:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol Cute

    S.J.

  240. On The Addiction:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Job? What job? Oh! That job!

    :)
    S.J.

  241. On An Earthly Peace:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting, would probably help if you indicated it was his face he hurt, he assumes it is blood, I presume, since he can’t see in the dark?

    Looking forward to seeing how this develops

    S.J.

  242. On I-70:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Mysterious, Hmm, wonder what happens next.

    S.J.

  243. On Cowardice:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cute

    S.J.

  244. On New home, new mom:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Nice story kk, started off really well but feels, to me like you rushed the end a little, trying to get all the bits in that you wanted (tough writing with such limitations isn’t it lol)

    Still, very good though.

    S.J.

  245. On Just Married/40 days:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice story but have to agree the multiple letters drove me crazy.
    would probably help too, if you could extra space between para’s but that’s just me being picky

  246. On Hospital Bed:

    posted about 1 year ago

    much better, thank you for spell checking

    S.J.

  247. On Anso to Ficino 4/1497:

    posted about 1 year ago

    very nice, love it

    S.J.

  248. On Imprisoned (Guardians, Ep. 19):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yay, another great sequel and sequeled back, hopefully next time I can respond in less than a week lol

    S.J.

  249. On The Argentine Affair:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol nice, twisted kind of humor like mine :)

    S.J.

  250. On Vivid & Wicked:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting imagery, and catchy. Again though get the spell checker out, the misspellings are taking away from what is a nice flow of the poem.

    S.J.

  251. On Home:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I can see it working as a song, not bad. Needs a little spell checking though. If you don’t write in Word Dani see if you can download a copy of aspel it’s a freebie and does a sort of decent spellchecking job.

    S.J.

  252. On Bait and Switch:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very nice….
    Hmm, constructs…

    (is thinking very hard)

    :)
    S.J.

  253. On Titles Makes You Touchable:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Heh maybe it would have worked better if we’d called them the Unlikables, then Al and Co. would have gone out to make friends with them :)

    S.J.

  254. On Princess of the Valley:

    posted about 1 year ago

    i like it

    s.j.

  255. On After ten years:

    posted about 1 year ago

    interesting start.

    S.J.

  256. On Melanaria's Dragon:

    posted about 1 year ago

    As a fan of McCaffrey I’m not surprised to see a little dragon lore in here :)

    S.J.

  257. On Get Me Out of this Nut House!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOLOL Yeah I love it.

    S.J.

  258. On Does this smell OK to you?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    lol cute

    S.J.

  259. On The Amazing Colossal Tabby:

    posted about 1 year ago

    cute

    S.J.

  260. On ...:

    posted about 1 year ago