Snarky's posted comments

  1. On The Life of a Double Football Player Mom {Kermitgorf's Sport Challenge}:

    posted 5 months ago

    Not that bad though. I think that most of our lives seem more boring when they are written out than they do in person.

  2. On But, We're Already Here:

    posted 5 months ago

    hee hee! Fantastic! I think drawing it out more would actually make it less effective. I love this.

  3. On The Really Big Rock (Mistress Elsha Hawk's Place Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    I had a really big bush to hide in. Turns out it really isn’t that big. I really like this! Makes me feel kind of like I’m five again, which is a good thing.

  4. On Echolocation, Country Style:

    posted 5 months ago

    But it would be kinda cool if it did!

  5. On Have A Double!:

    posted 5 months ago

    I like the way that you used slang and wrote in style with the subjects, worked great!

  6. On Quirk (Pen Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    I do it too. I try not to do it too regularly though.

  7. On Something Wicked This Way Comes:

    posted 5 months ago

    oooooh! I like Prince Clive. I mean, the character is fantastic, not that I’m in love with him.

  8. On The Strays:

    posted 5 months ago

    Shivering spine! I like it.

  9. On The Sounds of Her Lullaby (ending):

    posted 5 months ago

    I kinda like it actually. Its got real passion. Gives me the willys actually.

  10. On The Captain & Tenille0477: Robot Love Among The Stars( I'm in the Mode for Love Challenge) :

    posted 6 months ago

    Lippal area… not every story makes me laugh out loud, and this one did. Nicely written, it has a good feel to it.

  11. On spring cleaning :}:

    posted 6 months ago

    I love the rythm! I also like the rambling style.

  12. On So Very Unhelpful:

    posted 6 months ago

    Severe federal editing? Makes me worry about the government taking over (oxymoron?). I’m intrigued, and that probably means that it is well written, good job!

  13. On The simulation:

    posted 6 months ago

    Last man? Invader missiles? Now I’m intrigued.

  14. On Fear:

    posted 6 months ago

    only model-ish women. Fear is a woman. So is war. They tag team.

  15. On The Queen:

    posted 6 months ago

    Bitch! And I do mean that as a compliment. Paragraphing would help this.

  16. On Purple, Color of Royalty:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like it a lot. Unfortunately thats the way the world worked for distant ancestors. Well done.

  17. On A Matter of Seconds:

    posted 6 months ago

    And drink cup after cup of warm tea and breathe deeply and remember. Very good description of very powerful feelings. Some misspellings though, those things bother me even in emotional pieces, no matter how true they are.

  18. On Bad Time to Ask:

    posted 6 months ago

    BS can get you a long, long way. Nicely written.

  19. On The Butler's Secret:

    posted 6 months ago

    If the butler didn’t do it, he knew about it.

  20. On Held Up at Customs:

    posted 6 months ago

    That is most unfortunate.

  21. On Opportunity in Hell:

    posted 6 months ago

    human guise. Thrilling, a most excellent sequel.

  22. On Rain and Raven:

    posted 6 months ago

    I fully expect something large and black to tap me on my shoulder and whisper in my ear the next time I get in my car.

  23. On Rain:

    posted 6 months ago

    Beautiful. In a spine tingley sort of way. conjures up incredible mental images.

  24. On Omens:

    posted 6 months ago

    escape to where? I like it.

  25. On The rose-colored glasses are off:

    posted 7 months ago

    this sounds….. familiar. a fantastic job of poking fun at reality.

  26. On A Man's Eyes:

    posted 7 months ago

    This leaves me feeling terrified. I like it.

  27. On Digging into the roots of the Family Tree:

    posted 7 months ago

    I like the way that instead of typical vampire story morbidness, there is more a feeling of ticked offness. if thats a word.

  28. On Trapped in "Hold the Line" Hell {uselessness's Desperate Monologue Challenge}:

    posted 7 months ago

    some music is better than none! five minutes of nothing sets you off balance while five minutes of crappy music at least gives you something to hold on to.

  29. On Sweatin' Bullets:

    posted 7 months ago

    .... glass eye. beautiful. Made me laugh out loud in the library.

  30. On Booze for Thought:

    posted 7 months ago

    In Vino Veritas. its true.

  31. On One Little Push:

    posted 7 months ago

    fantastic. a great plot, imbued with strong emotions, and well written at the same time.

  32. On Later, In The Common Room At Ten Faeries' Den Hostel:

    posted 7 months ago

    fanfuckingtastic is the only word that I think is appropriate.

  33. On The parrots eat 'em all:

    posted 7 months ago

    I know people like his ex-wife. They are terrifying.

  34. On A transmuted Universe:

    posted 7 months ago

    I sincerely hope you have read Pratchett’s stuff. this reminds me of it some. I love it.

  35. On Everything Will Blow Pt. 11:

    posted 7 months ago

    shivers down my spine, really.

  36. On Cold Comfort:

    posted 7 months ago

    Spectacular! Your descriptions are amazing, I could see the water and feel the mist. I also love the fog next to the ocean.

  37. On Murder on Winchester Dr. (killer):

    posted 7 months ago

    I like the way this is written, the perpetual cliff hanger. You do need to pick a tense though, past or present, said – jumps, darted – slam, there are some more. sorry, i’m nitpicky. I like it otherwise though!

  38. On The Deceiver Begins His Deception:

    posted 7 months ago

    this is bizzare, and I like it.It could go anywhere from here. Keep it up!

  39. On The best Combination:

    posted 7 months ago

    I like this one more than the rest, it is easier to read, and its happier, which I like.

  40. On Rehab-"O.J. goes down the wrong road":

    posted 7 months ago

    ecstasy, not extacy. sorry. It is a lot easier to read things when you spell them out, jr and hs for example. I like this though. It certainly hits home for a lot of people it think.

  41. On A Bowl of Fruit:

    posted 7 months ago

    hmmmmm, more of this? I’ll work on it. If they arent rubbish, I might even post them.

  42. On Eternal Monologue:

    posted 7 months ago

    That would be a terrible, terrible fate.

  43. On Lessons Two and Three:

    posted 7 months ago

    The problem is getting the other people to do the dirty work. Also hard to get a job that invovles nothing before noon. unfortunate.

  44. On Lesson Number One:

    posted 7 months ago

    oooh, nice.

  45. On The Thoughts and Hopes of Nervous Ballerina :

    posted 7 months ago

    I wanted to be one of those, so close, had to quit for school. You wrote this with real emotion, something that is unusual anywere.

  46. On My Lucky Green Converse:

    posted 7 months ago

    I blew the sides out of mine. Marvelous. iffy as a story though, more of a bloggy thing.

  47. On Black Art:

    posted 7 months ago

    a masterpiece…..... maybe not one you show to the relatives though?

  48. On Gorilla Matriarch:

    posted 7 months ago

    Totally agree. Mom always insisted on picking me up before 10. Over for dinner? right, not likely. drivers license was bliss.

  49. On To Serve Droid:

    posted 7 months ago

    This would be why it hasn’t run out of batteries? If your life doesn’t affect the life of anybody else on a regular basis, Nobody will notice you are dead untill a neighbor notices the smell, or the bills are so overdue they come to arrest you. Unnerving.

  50. On To Serve Man:

    posted 7 months ago

    sweet. I love the tone.

  51. On Hollie:

    posted 7 months ago

    Sounds like a suggestion/invitation/threat. A request for companionship that is dangerous to turn down. I like it.

  52. On Hell is other people... in chatrooms!:

    posted 7 months ago

    I despise: prolly, pls, suk, etc. Does it really hurt that bad to type two extra letters? Thats why I avoid chatrooms. Anyway, nice fic. I don’t know all of the cyber talk, but I got the gist of it. Good stuff.

  53. On Arfy NONFICLET:

    posted 7 months ago

    Its all very disturbing. I refuse to click on anything that flashes or isn’t fully clothed. That covers most things.

  54. On A City Swarmed:

    posted 7 months ago

    fantastic. I can’t decide whether to be worried or laugh. Maybe laugh and run away. Keep going!

  55. On The Cliff (Uselessness's Pure Dialogue Ficlet Challenge ):

    posted 7 months ago

    like…. bill and ted and Death, and this is wonderful. I always like death personified. very nice.

  56. On A Growing Family (SHOCKING DIALOGUE Challenge):

    posted 7 months ago

    I absolutely love it. I mean, a little blech, but still, thats what makes it so good.

  57. On Channeling Kerouac:

    posted 7 months ago

    I firmly believe that he will find it.

  58. On The Fall of Gordon:

    posted 7 months ago

    i’ve been that person. It’s tough to keep up the facade for long. But if you go downhill long enough you will eventually run into civilization.

  59. On An Undesirable Happenstance:

    posted 7 months ago

    Che Guevara’s parrot, nice

  60. On So Goes the Night:

    posted 7 months ago

    Ignoring all comments, this is a fantastic story. The kind that makes me grin and laugh about life.

  61. On Wicked evil Pricilla (21):

    posted 9 months ago

    I absolutely love it! Some of the grammar and spelling are iffy, but I think that gives it character, makes it individual and exciting. Fantastic!

  62. On She Never Got Along With Her Kindergarten Teacher -2-:

    posted 9 months ago

    this is a true story. keep goin, this is great!

  63. On Tying My Shoes:

    posted 9 months ago

    I like it.

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