I like this. The memories of the bunny ears, sort of a symbol of childhood maybe, as she moves on in life…I’m glad she kept them =] I would’ve too… LoA
ooh…I want a horse! I love the first couple of sentences, and the descriptions of the horse. Plus also, I don’t know about David Bowie, but Ziggy Stardust is an awesome name for a horse! LoA
hmm…the story in itself could be interesting, but I found it really hard to read what with the lack of capital letters and correct punctuation. But beyond that, I like the ideas! LoA
I can feel the pain and agony of the character…this reminds me a good deal of a friend of mine. Really nice writing =] Paragraph breaks may have made it easier to read, though. LoA
oh wow. I’ve never been in a hurricane quite that scary…just a small one, where the aftermath was what was scary. But yeah, I can feel your character’s tension…cool! LoA
haha, it could have been longer, but the titles are are lyrics to the song “Concrete Angel” so I needed it to work out…the chorus goes _Through the wind, and the rain, she stands hard as a stone, in a world that she can’t rise above…but her dreams give her wings, and she flies to a place where she’s loved…concrete angel” =]
ooh, Pens, tis beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I could just see it all [I mean, I know there was a picture, but you know =]] I…I’m guessing she dies…but I hope maybe something happens and she doesn’t… LoA
Hmm…when I went to school…we had drills where we had to seal the classrooms up with plastic wrap and duct tape…we were pretty young, so we just thought it was a good bit of fun =] And awesome story…I love it. LoA
hahaha…you guys all make me laugh =] to be perfectly honest, I don’t really miss kindergarten either…I can count the happy memories on one hand. but you guys make me giggle =]
I love the different perspective…and the way the mirror can see her pain. I think perhaps there’s a good reason I don’t have a mirror in my room =] The mirror is watching you… dun dun dun LoA =]
it is, you’re so good at putting so much into just one moment…and really, one moment can mean everything. I know the feeling too…lovely, beautiful. LoA
I’ve seen people doing the soulja boy…I can’t do it though. And I can never understand the lyrics to the song…and every other freaking person can do it and I just stand there like an idiot… LoA
Hmm, I don’t know the song, and I’m not really into the church thing, but this is a beautifully written piece! And the picture is really cool, they go together quite well. LoA
Hmm, I don’t know the song, and I’m not really into the church thing, but this is a beautifully written piece! And the picture is really cool, they go together quite well. LoA
oooh…what happened to her? I really really want to know…but then again, I don’t, because it’s beautiful just as it is. It made me cry…but everything is making me cry today =] LoA
why do you like to make me cry so much?! =] this is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I need a thesaurus, seriously…you amaze me, every time without fail. LoA
Oh, oh, oh. I am totally and completely in awe. You write poetry so, so beautifully, with the deeper issues but still the gorgeous words…I really don’t know what to say except, this is absolutely amazing! The emotions are so tangible that it’s…breathtaking.
This is, for lack of a better word, beautiful. The childhood curiosity, the way you show the characters without anything but dialog, and still portray them amazingly…it’s brilliant. I love it. And the ending was perfect. LoA
That’s absolutely beautiful, Blossom, I love it. I can almost hear it in my head, although I’d love to hear what notes you had to go with it…and i love the message too. Amazing! LoA
Yes, thank you Blu! You are an amazing writer, and a great, great friend! I hope the Ficlets family is never broken either. Forever and ever…I love you!
Oh, oh, OTOC, that’s beautiful! You didn’t fail, not a bit, this is way better than I could have done. It’s perfect, I’m glad you could capture it in such an amazing way. Thank you, it means a lot to me. Love you! LoA
I love the thoughts of how it was more fun back then, despite that it was dark and windy…I got a great picture in my head reading this. Awesome job! LoA
No, you don’t always get what you want, I suppose…I think I halfway feel sorry for Bec, but only halfway. I think the other half of me doesn’t like her very much. Awesome series, keep going! LoA
First, I’m really really sorry you’ve had to go through this. But please, don’t give up on love. Love sometimes falls through, and like Bartimaeus said, it’s ok to be cautious, but don’t give up, love can be beautiful, and help fix the things that seem broken, I promise. Just be who you are, and things will work out, eventually. LoA
Oh, I love this, I really do! It’s a perfect sequel, definitely. And it really means a lot to me that you liked my story enough to write a sequel! This is amazing! LoA
I like that she (he?) actually thought about the color of her shirt, something I would never have the presence of mind to do in such a situation. I’m liking this series, can’t wait to see where it goes! LoA
I love this! Painful, but being strong at the same time, the whole thing really reminds me of an experience a friend of mine went through really recently. I especially love the last line, Look at me now, standing on my own… again. For me that makes the whole thing. LoA
Hmm, the burning half-moon scar thing kinda reminded me of the Twilight series, I don’t know if that’s what you were going for…I really liked this, could lead to all sorts of possibilities! What happened to her? LoA
Aww! I realize this is really old, I didn’t read it till now, so if you ever see this, I’ll miss you, and good luck in whatever you want to do! Love you! ~someday_93
It is achingly, painfully beautiful. Full of sadness and longing, but the strength of moving on, too. Gut-wrenching, it nearly made me cry! This is amazing! LoA
Oooh! Wyatt likes her too! And I think you’ve got teenage boy down spot-on with pretending not to care…Amazing! Beautiful writing! So what’s gonna happen now, will Sara and Wyatt talk? LoA
Aww! That’s really sweet, and it’s good that she found her voice, even if carving into cement…this is really good, very beautiful, especially the teenagers thoughts on leaving permanent marks. I love this! LoA
Hmm, I had wondered if perhaps you were a girl, after reading your blog that you linked to on your profile, but I was never quite sure…I like this! And you certainly have created quite a shock! LoA
For just an attempt at poetry, I’d say this is pretty awesome! Just the right amount of sadness and longing, and the words flow pretty well…I really like it! LoA
That’s awesome about the books! And, and, you know the Hail Mary in French? That’s awesome! Will you, please, please, note it to me? That would make me very happy, I know it’s weird… LoA
This is beautiful, and it looks like you were really excited writing this, cause there’s a bunch of spelling and grammar errors…sled and note in the first paragraph, capitalize making in the 3rd. But other than that, awesome! Snow days are cool…great story!
I like the thoughts on death in this, that was very cool. And I wasn’t sure exactly how the picture tied in at first, but it gave me a very definite image, reading this. LoA
Yes, MBTM, you gotta beat Stovohobo! And I’d miss you, definitely! I will try to comment on your stories more often, I probably don’t a lot, and I’m sorry. But don’t leave us! LoA
I love it! The hint of other things that may or may not have happened…maybe the little girl is a representation of the lost innocence of the artist…or maybe not! Amazing story! LoA
artistsrunwild, this series is all so sad! Amazing, but it’s making me cry, especially this one! I liked the part about never being quiet, always silence…that was cool. Amazing job! Can’t wait for more! LoA
Oh! That’s so sad! So, I guess it happens to him often, if he has these rituals…aww! But this line made me laugh: And he’s crying and his roommates are trying to comfort him yet still remaining masculine enough to share fart stories when they tire of his sobbing. LoA
Ooh, I’m the same on number 4…but I only have about three of the daydreams. They keep me entertained. And I agree with Mistress Elsha Hawk, the storeroom thing is awesome! LoA
I don’t trust either, there’s only one person in the entire world that I really trust to any degree at all. So I know about that…and I felt the same way on three, then left for 2 years and did nothing but cry. Keep on goin’! You can do it! LoA
I also have a pathological aversion to mayonnaise…but mine is ‘cause my mom used to use it as a head lice treatment, and now I just can’t eat it…ew! LoA
I don’t know…I don’t know. But I do know that I have asked myself all of these questions at one time or another, and I’m no closer to knowing the answers. LoA
It wasn’t fair that I should go crazy on my birthday. Talk about injustice. Now that is a brilliant line. That just made the whole story, at least for me… LoA
I must admit that I have never even contemplated cheering for my hometown, but it is cool that you love yours so much, and this made me laugh a bit, too! LoA
I’m thinking that this is a memory, of when they first got the apartment…but it is a bit confusing as to whether it’s the same person, or a different time… LoA
Yeah, don’t give up! I love the lines: It was crazy, really, because she knew that she still loved him. It was just that everything had changed so much. Great job! LoA
Oh, it did make me cry! Aww! I hadn’t been thinking that it was her who broke off the engagement…but maybe I just wasn’t paying close enough attention. At any rate, this whole series was great, it really made me want to keep reading! And yeah, I did it too, and it is a lot harder then it looks to work backwards! You guys who are reading these should try it too! LoA
This is beautiful, really beautiful. And you made it rhyme without seeming corny…which I can never seem to do. Before the last line, I was thinking it almost sounded like a poem you would leave for someone after you killed yourself…but then with the last line, obviously not. I love this! LoA
Aww! So, write more, please! I want to know how she got there, why she’s digging…this is amazing! It really makes me want to know more! I love the lines, How does it feel to stand on the edge of the world? I wouldn’t know, but I’d imagine it’s a lot like this. LoA
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