Spiro, Spero's posted comments

  1. On White chrysanthemums bloom in her heart.:

    posted 4 months ago

    @ THX 0047: Thanks for the crit. :) I’m not always the best at making paragraphs flow together, but I’m working on it.

    @pat J: Yay, I inspired someone!

  2. On Black iron, black feather:

    posted 4 months ago

    Aw, so sweet.
    Thanks so much for writing a sequel, I love it! You really understood my character, and I love the one you made.

  3. On White chrysanthemums bloom in her heart.:

    posted 4 months ago

    a study in character building and brevity. I failed at at least one of my tasks.

  4. On kittens for mittens CHALLENGE!:

    posted 8 months ago

    Interesting ideas, maybe I will try one later. Can’t wait to see what others do with them!

  5. On A Castle In The Sky:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I think the thing that works best with this ficlet is the repitition. In particular, the final paragraph works well, as well as the way you end and begin the story with a sentence about the door.

  6. On When Poison Fails:

    posted about 1 year ago

    The whole story was great, but I especially like the opening line.

  7. On When Poison Fails:

    posted about 1 year ago

    The whole story was great, but I especially like the opening line.

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