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Blossom Ruoqen's posted comments

On Whenever:

posted about 1 month ago

Song. Song Song. song. Song song. hums tunelessly I can teach it to you Saree! beams brightly
On I'll Be There:

posted about 1 month ago

Awww. but hey, shouldn’t you tell me to break down when I’m actually near you? what if I just started bawling in front of my computer and the neighbors had to call the paramedics to break into my house in order to rescue me from drowning in my unchecked torrent of tears?!?
oh well. I forgive you.
*muah!
On Put Your Best Face Forward:

posted about 1 month ago

aww. bri-on. that’s really sweet, and seizes your smile I think I’ll take you up on that :P
On Ask the Wonderball:

posted about 1 month ago

Better late comment than never, aye? :P I loved this ficlet. I could almost sense something when the other girls started laughing, but the ending STILL caught me off guard! great job
On (Brebelles Challenge)The Alien Arrival (Silly Story):

posted about 1 month ago

I’m trying….to stifle….my laughter…..to no avail. BWUHAHAHA! oh my goodness. its well into the morning hours and, ya know what, I don’t care! very silly indeed (P.S. I’ve finally appeared on ficlets…Again :\ sad that it took me so long… Again :\ This means that I’m neglecting my home work… Again :\ – but actually, i don’t feel bad about the hw, writing is taking care of my soul!! who cares about achedemic greatnes snorts
On (Brebelles Challenge): I have Twilight on the brain...:

posted about 1 month ago

I’m sooooo tortured about that series… JEEZ! (i agree, this is not a legit silly story; but definitely an issue that needs to be addressed… somewhere….. at some point in time….) But ya know, I’m starting to look at polygamy in a WHOLE new light here.
On My Name Is Elena:

posted 3 months ago

Bri-on: OOoooo This is really good. Keep going. Even though this is your first as you go story, this is super, duper gooooood.
Blah: omgoooooodnesss!! austin powers voice she should dress up like a MAN baby…
I can sense hotness sneaking up like a tigress. It has stripes. Do you smell it?
On The Sneeze Of Death:

posted 4 months ago

lol. The Sneeze. That was great, although I now feel the joker’s pain tries to relax intensely painful grin
On Plans Go Awry:

posted 4 months ago

ooooh, looks like Sao’s not getting her sheep anytime soon…
hmm. lol, this is a tough one to sequel – lots to resolve-ish
On Up For Breakfast:

posted 4 months ago

Sequeled it! :D couldn’t resist the lure of a dragon story. Hope it suffices! large grin disproportionate to face
On I Miss You.:

posted 4 months ago

Short and sweet. Adorable <3
On To Be Touched by a Stranger:

posted 4 months ago

He took off his shirt. Ooh la la! lol just kidding. I agree with thx too: a completely different feel than a hollywood action…more feeling, and easier to relate to. That’s VERY good :D
On Mount Olympus On The Loose:

posted 4 months ago

pretty comical. tee hee. but serious too. and mystical awed voice with sparkling wide eyes
On Just a Quick Godly Check [Olympus on the Loose]:

posted 4 months ago

I’m planning a plot-twisting roller coaster for the next one!!! but bear with me, ‘cause, due to unforeseen occurrences, I have, oddly enough, even though it seems unlikely, (riled audience jeers “oh ge’ on wit et!”) I’ve been banned from the computer because of neglect and injustice towards my growing pile of home work. heh heh (to be said with absolutely NO humor at all) ha what a riot. my mom: she’s a knee-slapper all right
On Daffodils:

posted 4 months ago

Aww, and yeah, I think Marie will agree with you when she gets back. Whew! man is he in trouble…. daffodils are my favorite sniff sniff
On The YodaOnCrack Rap Video:

posted 4 months ago

tee hee. I have to agree with thx. totally fantasmastic.. with awescredible as a side garnish. ....and a drink of fun on the rocks pats back that was a good one (talking to myself) tee hee. ah haha ha!! bystanders gawk and back away, slowly
I love crazy people
On Priced to Move:

posted 4 months ago

Hooray new cartoon character!!! lol
lovely descriptions, and wording is detailed but not dragged out. Huzzah! (cheers follow)
On Can't Forgive, but I Miss You:

posted 4 months ago

wonderful job. It’s a good thing you won’t have to look too far to find you! : ) your still in there..somewhere. meanwhile, I’ve got shovels!!
On My Puppy, I Miss You:

posted 4 months ago

Poor puppy! I know how sad that can be. It’s different for everyone, so I’m not going to say ‘I know how you feel’. But my sister and I had 4 baby flying squirrels that we raised, and one day the runt, the one we named baby, fell off my shoulder while I was descending some stairs and I didn’t notice. Naturally he started jumping after me and tried to scramble up my leg, but not before he was stepped on. All I heard was the crunch. All I saw was baby’s little fluffy tail twitch… my simpathy friend
On Missing You, All the Same:

posted 4 months ago

Everyone wonders that some time or another. It makes you wonder even more: why do we want to hope so badly, what makes us want to live out fully, if all we ever do is die in the end? Humans’ design can’t deal with death, and our body should be able to regenerate forever, but our cells start deteriorating because of a sickness called ‘old age’ that we were never meant to catch
On Shakespeare Academy:

posted 4 months ago

aww, this is cute giggles I like it. also, lackaday is one of my all time favorite words to spout at random intervals when I want to be dramatic :p
On Robots:

posted 4 months ago

gracias! I.D. tee hee, i’mma call you ID from hereon out!! declared from imaginary mountain top
On An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge):

posted 4 months ago

lol. i have nothing to say about that ^ i think a make up fantasmagoric words all the time :P tee hee. The story was a CLASSIC! Downfall of the snob! perfecto!

~Blossom
On The love to write draws you back:

posted 4 months ago

yay! thank you *muah
On Trapped like a zebra. (Is that even an expression?):

posted 4 months ago

your story is wonderfully descriptive, and, you have nice comma usage (hooraw!). Nice job writing suspense :D broad grin <3
On He Never Changed:

posted 4 months ago

alrighty, I’m going to give a couple of suggestions for this: “half sad half smirked” add in either a / or , between half and smirked. also, ‘flipped Pete off’ will probably flow much better. This story has a very realistic feel to it, so nice job applauds loudly
On Something in my mind:

posted 4 months ago

this has a really nice poetic flow to it. I really like it. and may I suggest, in the second paragraph, “There is something in my head, something evil, it isn’t so bad as it seems..”, changing ‘so’ to ‘as’ , or changing ‘it isn’t’ to ‘it’s not’. I think it might give it a better flow <3
On Graveyard of Broken Hoops (Kermitgorf's Sports Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

ok, it’s fixed…..and…..I love it….’nough said
On Graveyard of Broken Hoops (Kermitgorf's Sports Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

ahhh. nooooo! i can’t read the second paraghraph. its REALLY enjoyable to read though…I like it…it makes me happy.
On Empty:

posted 6 months ago

powerful emotions and a strong drive behind this one. Good Job!
On My Stargirl:

posted 6 months ago

heartfelt…that makes it truly beautiful. The poeticyness (my new word) was smooth and flowed nicely (not that I would have noticed since I was so enraptured anyway)
5 STARS (or just one extra special one)
P.S. my sister and 6 other girls were star sisters and they got small star tattoos in honor of one star that had already risen in death…and now my sister has joined. this piece was very touching
On Not Another Face In The Crowd:

posted 6 months ago

homie G, word. I dig youre rhythm and cannot begin to extrapolate this shizzle…. :P
On howhardlifeis' challege! its quiz time:

posted 6 months ago

how old ARE you? (if you don’t mind). On facebook you can go on someones site and choose an action to do to them (one of which is throwing a colored sheep at them)
On howhardlifeis' challege! its quiz time:

posted 6 months ago

lol, why thank you.. and 5 starts on your challenge – it was lots of fun and a needed stress reliever
On Silver Dream 8:

posted 6 months ago

thank you. I’m happy you could relate!
On Rising From Ruins:

posted 7 months ago

This is terrific. I’m in love…..
‘nough said
On A Haven for the Hopeless (Alliteration Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

I like big words, a lot… :D

A wonderful take on the sins we all acquire over time. Terribly terrific and heartrendingly hypnotic.
Your choice of words make for an enrapturing ficlet!
On Five Honest Truths:

posted 7 months ago

hopeless.x0. is my new hero. heh heh, holy poo….tee hee
I agree unconditionally with 1, 3, and 4.
On Five More Honest Truths:

posted 7 months ago

aww, I like fire too : ) my sister accidentally set the house we were staying in on fire while reading and sleeping (talk about talent).
Why San Francisco?
I’m currently learning spanish and would like to learn swedish, and german.
On Who Am I? (Color Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

5 stars all the blinkin’ way! spiffy job, well done an’ all that, wot wot!
On Is My Blue, Your Blue {Challenge Colors}:

posted 7 months ago

(I would give you 5 gazillion starts on this if it was on its own, but in response to the color challenge, you didn’t describe the feelings of a color. Amazingly awesome job here)
On Is My Blue, Your Blue {Challenge Colors}:

posted 7 months ago

In fact, what if we all actually had the same favorite color, but we named them differently according to our vision and perception of that wave pattern?
On White♥Black(Challenge Colors):

posted 7 months ago

The setting of your C.C. piece is very original compared to most of the other pieces and is a nice change. You did an excellent job linking your color choices to real life, more descriptive words would be enjoyable! : D good job
On Life in Grayscale:

posted 7 months ago

wonderful job. Your right, gray is under appreciated; but need for everything. It’s one of those things people usually don’t appreciate unless its gone
On Red (C.C.):

posted 7 months ago

‘oozing’, that has to be one of my favorite words. You made this a very heartfelt piece by mentioning your Grandpa. He sounds like a wonderful grandparent. :D This is a good way to honor his memory.
On Lost in Transparency{C.C}:

posted 7 months ago
tee hee. I like how you showed some of the difference between clear and transparent
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~Blossom
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On Blue (Color Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

blue is for cookie monster, who likes cookies, and shines blue while eating…cookies
On Pretty in Purple {Color Challenge}:

posted 7 months ago

Gorgeous wording here Bri-on. Purple calla lilies and tiger lilies were Oie’s favorite! :D
On Ten Hours After:

posted 7 months ago

Thank you muchly, it means a lot to me. : )
On Still Smiling:

posted 7 months ago

I agree with this totally and completely and I know what it is to fake smiles and happiness – all of it. and the reason I do is for other people, because that’s what I know they want to see: Because I know that’s what they think of me. Sweet, loving, innoscent, happy, bubbly, is what they expect to see. So that’s what I show them.
Excellent job in portraying the pain and reasons going through this girl’s head.
On 5 things I am afraid of:

posted 7 months ago

like me for instance…you never really know what I’ll do next. (be on your toes brianna)
On In Loving Memory (My Sister in My Heart):

posted 7 months ago

hey bri-on, if you feel like reading it, I’m going to start posting my “-hours after”
love you
On 5 Things I Feel Happy to get off my Chest:

posted 7 months ago

you have a lot to be thankful for. I’m an only child as of tuesday. Don’t get too mad at your sis.
way to go with letting out 6 things : ) nice job
On The one with the auburn hair:

posted 7 months ago

beautiful piece. I really like it: The description reminds me of my sister (except for, ya know, the whole ‘leg missing’ thing). It was emotionally touching for me : |
On I Don't Wanna Cry:

posted 7 months ago

Bri-on, teach me this song? could we sing it together?
On Pencils:

posted 7 months ago

Really innoscent. I like their interaction with each other. They seemed close
On Smiling...Well Not So Much:

posted 7 months ago

three other deaths in my school too, two other friends, and two other family members for me.
On Forty-one Hours After:

posted 7 months ago

She was very special. I used to read her all my ficlets to see if she liked them, so, I figured this would be good.
On In Loving Memory (My Sister in My Heart):

posted 7 months ago

Bri-on loves that scripture, and lets not forget psalms 37:11
On I will ALWAYS remember you:

posted 7 months ago

Love you sweety
On In Loving Memory (My Sister in My Heart):

posted 7 months ago

Thank you bri, this is really hard for me and I’m glad that you’re honoring her in your writing.
On [CHALLENGE] I'M IN THE MODE FOR LOVE:

posted 7 months ago

futurama-ish….OH BENDER!! Come back, my love!!!!
this gives me some great idea’rs, I’m just so tired right now, with too many tests tomorrow, and too long of a paper to write, I can’t do it right now (trying to use excuses to cover and avoid the bare truth – writers’ block)
On 'Tis Bliss to Kiss(I'm in the Mode for Love Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

You did a good job with the dialog, at the same time I feel there’s room for improvement. Adding personality quirks and/or character habits into the conversations will help to bring them to life

An enjoyable read and an interesting viewpoint of future marriages. Good Job : )
On Welcome:

posted 7 months ago

In light of the later conversation (or monologue) I would find great joy and deep seated satisfaction in adding, along with the previous rules and adjacent regulations, to the conundrum which is bri-on’s mind, that flatulence and prevarication will not be tolerated and ….is not fly….word
On Do it All:

posted 7 months ago

If ever I gave you 5 stars just because you’re my friend, this isn’t one of them.

beautiful words and imagery (for me anyway).
I absolutely love this piece. so much so that it took me over 9 minutes to type this due to my excitement….and I can’t even think of anything funny to say
On Clarity:

posted 7 months ago

awww, so cute! It follows your thought pattern and tells the story of- (dun dun dun) – the mind of bri-on!
On My Mind:

posted 7 months ago

Yeay!!
wonderfull job bri-on!!
it makes me want to wiggle in happiness
On A night at home (vamp. challenge):

posted 7 months ago

she’s more of a movie buff. nerdy in her own way :)
On Emergency:

posted 7 months ago

what?! what just happened to shade? oh nooo!
On If Only:

posted 7 months ago

he’s in cahoots with the guy that she assassinated..ok, maybe not – but still evil!
On You've Eaten Soap!:

posted 7 months ago

“OHMYGOSH YOUVE EATEN SOAP !”
possibly the highlight of my day :D
On Fairly-Paced Healer:

posted 7 months ago

geez! 400 yrs?
On Owww:

posted 7 months ago

broken neck?! the title couldn’t be more understated.
loved it :)
On Yeah Right:

posted 7 months ago

that’s why I hate when people say ‘it’s gonna be OK’, it never is.
On Car:

posted 7 months ago

gets bugles want some otoc?
On Nobody Gets Hurt:

posted 7 months ago

oopsies!
On Run Hedgehogs run!:

posted 7 months ago

I’VE GOT IT…the hedgehog boy is a chemist – a super body-building hedgehog chemist.
On Bad Idea:

posted 7 months ago

she’s completely different… what, like an animorph?
On You Shot Me:

posted 7 months ago

giggling too much to comment
On The Gun Is Fired:

posted 7 months ago

lmho!! oh my goodness
You had me laughing on the first paragraph, fantastic work
On Questions:

posted 7 months ago

haha. play around with a doc. ‘tis always a laugh
On Taxi!:

posted 7 months ago

and remember, the taxi is property of the taxi driver!
(no hijacking cars!)
On What have I come to?:

posted 7 months ago

I thought she was supposed to have a heart of ice?
meanwhile…want me to make that burn stop hurtin’? fires gun
lol
Good stuff
On You read it, You name it.(little more):

posted 7 months ago

You have a very nice arsenal of cliff hangers here. good job.
On You read it, you name it.(more is coming):

posted 7 months ago

Captivating beginning.
Did you mean to say ‘authoritative’?
either way, it’s nicely descriptive.
On A night at home (vamp. challenge):

posted 7 months ago

It would have to be either the 1930’s version or the 1960’s version. To tell you the truth I didn’t give that much thought while writing it, so thank you for bringing that out mr. Tarzan
On Fire touched her lips:

posted 7 months ago

more?

you know me, always the pyromaniac :D
On My Fallen Vengeance:

posted 7 months ago

absolutely fantastic last line. Ties the whole story together. enthusiastic nod
I think deep down, we all just like ‘to hear them scream’ knowing nod
young grasshopper, you are on the path to enlightenment solemn nod
nod nod
falls asleep
ZZzzzz
imma goin’ ta bedd.
On Eternal Monologue:

posted 7 months ago

haha, I wonder if given that much time to contemplate things, they could figure out Chris Angel’s secret
On Monster (Vampire Challenge):

posted 7 months ago

no! don’t do as he says!
some body needs a hug.
purple lips, aye?
sounds like someone got carried away with whippets.
nice job on this
On A night at home (vamp. challenge):

posted 7 months ago

Anyone care to sequel it?
On The Carmalized Heart:

posted 7 months ago

a very poetic beginning, a very realistic and humorous ending. Both wonderful writing styles, not sure they blend well together in that context? idk, it might just be me. I enjoyed it though.
Goes to show, even the undead have daydreams and confuse themselves.
nice job
On Vampire Tête-à-Tête [Vampire Challenge]:

posted 7 months ago

haha, foiled again…stupid boys.
On No time to wait, 137th ficlet, I NEED A CHALLENGE NOW!:

posted 7 months ago

yes, its very unique….your my hero
On Attraction:

posted 7 months ago

I think he’s a vampire too! and they’ll both try to bite each other at the same time and end up completely swapping blood resulting in a body/mind swap!! (maybe with a luchadore)
On Newsflash!: Blood is Beautiful:

posted 7 months ago

absolutely hilarious last line.
It’s one of those old jokes that isn’t funny when you retell it but evokes raucous laughter when remembered
On Vamped Up 3:

posted 7 months ago

HA! this is funny (to state the obvious). I liked your descriptive words (they made me laugh), they painted a complete (and funny) picture in my mind (as I laughed).
lmho
On Oh, To Die One Night:

posted 7 months ago

I agree with Tad. Chuckle is being used by the masses and even my great grandmother says snicker. So, as I was imagining your story, a chortle was the only possible beginning for his reply.
On The Game is not *just* a game (or Experiences with Vampire: The Masquerade): Vampire Challenge:

posted 7 months ago

woohoo! I read up to the current sequel. Great stuff, lovely twists, fascinating plot, intriguing characters….stops for deep breath...I’ll stop now
On Vampire Fruit?:

posted 7 months ago

heh heh, and my mother wonders why I don’t like apples. they’ve got fangs!!
Finally, someone who understands! sobs
On The Master Potter (a poem from my years as a guppie):

posted 7 months ago

thanks for the honesty,
I appreciate it.
This was actually a poem from 4 years ago and was based on events in my life. I agree with you, people can’t and shouldn’t be molded or made into something by another person – it didn’t work out well for me either, in fact, it sort of back-fired.
On All his fault:

posted 7 months ago

aww, so sad. I hope you get to your 24th ficlet mark so you can make a sequel!
I wonder where the rose came from…
very mysterious and heart-wrenching.
On Burn.:

posted 7 months ago

this story is really cute/adorable <3
On When blogs roamed the earth:

posted 7 months ago

here here good sir, I thoroughly agree.
Good show, old chap, etc. etc.
On The Keeper Of Happiness:

posted 7 months ago

cute rendition of the ‘funny money’ picture.
mine would have something more like “crap, that vendor cheated me again”
On Beyond The Open Window:

posted 7 months ago

ooo shivers
creepy ending >.<
Slight Spelling mistakes, nothing bad though.
very cool picture.
(guess who wants to live there?) :D tee hee
On Material Of My Heart:

posted 7 months ago

That is really encouraging :)
nicely put and heartfelt!
On Sorrow:

posted 7 months ago

Dun Dun Dun
(heh heh, soap opera with action)
~But wait! how could Lucy be the mother of Sorrow’s unborn child
When she’s really been dead for over a year!...
at the hand of Dusk!!!
On Portrait:

posted 7 months ago

I like how you listed multiple possibilities for her character, but then mused about the sadness behind her eyes. Not many people see deeply like that.
On Mariana's Decision:

posted 7 months ago

interesting…in a good way.
I have so many questions now!!!
you’re creating a sequel, right?
(please say yes)
o o
^
On Names:

posted 7 months ago

HEY!! ...that’s me :D
oooh la la sarah!
You’ve gots a dinosaur in your name!
heh heh
(yes, I will give all of your ficlets 5 stars in less it really deserves less or there’s something I know you can improve on)
On Standing:

posted 7 months ago

yeah right.
we ALL know that your only writing this about a*!!!
evil munchkin chuckle
I love that you write out everything (“stand-e-and” .... SO CUTE) _. (<—kissy face)
On Not Strong Enough:

posted 7 months ago

Go Lily! waves pompoms
I Believe!
On Love's Denile:

posted 7 months ago

“The heart’s desire is my destruction”
That’s a great line
A bunch of fragmented thoughts that all share a feeling and together make a poem!!
I really like it :D
tee hee sing-song voice I know who it’s about!!
On Faith:

posted 7 months ago

This story is really inspiring to me; so I made a sequel (except it was too long, and now there are 2 sequels). I hope I don’t disappoint any of you : )
On Found:

posted 7 months ago

oh…was I not supposed to rate this?
Oh No!! ah! how do I take it back?
Did I just ruin whatever was being accomplished by no one rating it?
I AM SOO SORRY!
On Found:

posted 7 months ago

This has a very poetic sound to it.
Beautiful.
On Zookeeper:

posted 7 months ago

This sounds like an acid trip. :p
I really like the adventurous cocktail of spontaneousness and complete sincerity you used.
I’m all warm and fuzzy inside now
On Friendship:

posted 7 months ago

F is for friends who do stuff together
U is for u and me!!
N is for nowhere and anywhere at alllllll
down here under Brianna’s bed snicker
On Crazy Days & Sleepless Nights:

posted 7 months ago

I’m with you there : P
On Birds long for the sun:

posted 7 months ago

I know this isn’t very clear with its subject…I hope you (the reader) don’t have too much trouble following it hopeful smile
This poem is trying to portray the intense longing that can be experienced (such as between a bird and the sun) where you would do anything for your desire – even if its self-detrimental.
On Blocked from my heart:

posted 7 months ago

The sad thing is, I really know little computer nerds who would break-up over online grammar.
This is one of teh cutest ficlets eve’!
On *Ist it better to write in 1st or 3rd person?*:

posted 8 months ago

wow…I’m learning A LOT from just reading this :) I wish I had something to add..but I don’t. srry :(
On Just an Idea that Spurred into a 12 Year Old:

posted 8 months ago

you betta’ listen to yo’ mamma chyle
jk
I’m 15 but it’s ok, I can deal with 12 year olds taking over the world…as long as I can still devour ginormous (gigantic+enormous) mounds of candy….I’ll be all right :D
and everyone’s right, you did a fantastic job on your first ficlet.
On and it shall be known(beginning):

posted 8 months ago

I am…so cun-foo-said.
I liked reading it, but I have NO IDEA what I just read.
The important thing is that your writing is not boring or awkwardly phrased : )
On Flying:

posted 8 months ago

HAA HA!
very cute and funny. I suspect most dads (well, mine at least) feel that way.
check the spelling of announcer in line 11
On From The Blue:

posted 8 months ago

why was he wearing….stockings..?
tee hee (not at your ficlet. at myself for being asinine)

I like how you start your stories with an attention capturing sentence, or two.
It coerces me to read the whole thing,
which is good :D
On Lonely Relics:

posted 8 months ago

I…had…shivers.
very nice use of imagery and character development through conversation and the personality traits you portrayed :D
On Finding a Way Out:

posted 8 months ago

This is good so far, keep it up!
Some background information about the girls, why they were taking a walk, etc. would build more dimension for your ficlets. : ))
On If Only:

posted 8 months ago

you summed up life pretty nicely
:D
On The Park:

posted 8 months ago

outran is only one word : )) silly willy muffin head

I have a poem like this (well, a little longer maybe), it has to do with a child and her shadow and how she changes as she’s older – if I could only find it *digs through mounds of unmentionables under bed
On The Aimless Wanderer:

posted 8 months ago

I think you have the wrong type of ‘waist’ in line five. : )
I like how it starts off explaining about him and ends the same way: Calmly explaining the nature of his character.
On Why Literary Agents Just Don't Get The Joke:

posted 8 months ago

To write? or not to write…its not a question I can not comprehend :p
On That place you go:

posted 8 months ago

pretty!
the only place I have like that is in my head someplace…although a large fire recently demolished my happy place – I should really get some fire detectors installed…
On Question:

posted 8 months ago

wait, what ? >.<
oh, yes. I agree
I’ve watched, with bright sunlight on my back, it rain on the other side of the island. So I sipped my pina colada and thought ‘I wonder how many people are dancing in the rain’
On Cranes and Crows:

posted 8 months ago

Holy Rusted Metal, Batman!
I especially like the last paragraph;
very forward and strong.
: )
On Freedom Dies (Fin):

posted 8 months ago

lol,
to make the real joker proud
yes, now all my childhood dreams have been realized!!
On How To Be Happy, Even If You Already Are Part 4:

posted 8 months ago

was that YOU the other night in acme ??!
dont worry, It’s A Good Thing. (we love you Martha!!)
On How To Be Happy, Even If You Already Are Part 3:

posted 8 months ago

your right! I shall conform to the American Lifestyle (stuffs face with chocolate-coated potato chips)
and I shall vent my rage by way of screaming to rid myself of perverted old men! (goodbye Mr Rogers….no, I-I said goodBYE!
CURSES!!)
On How To Be Happy, Even If You Already Are Part 2:

posted 8 months ago

fail 9 times + try 10 times = Success!!
(I’m much better at this type of math…wait a second, your ‘out of the box’ thinking style has succeeded in conforming my usual ‘I hate math’ into ‘tree + monkey costume = fun’ !!
Thank You Mister Joker Man!! )
On How To Be Happy, Even If You Already Are Part 1:

posted 8 months ago

algebra…..repressed memories….I’d rather keep ‘em that way
:p
On How To Be Happy, Even If You Already Are Introduction:

posted 8 months ago

yeay restraining order!!!
lol
I shall read them all :D
On Blood and Emotions:

posted 8 months ago

This is a very artistic poem, it painted wonderful pictures in my head and I could imagine a scene to every line you wrote.
Consider replacing the word ‘from’ in the 7th line with ‘fro’ – I think it would match the style of your poem and help it flow.
On Writers-Block? Not For Me:

posted 8 months ago

I AM SOOO SRRY I HAD ANY PART IN INCURRING YOUR FRIENDS’ WRATH ON YOU!!!!
I love you

muah
On Writers-Block? Not For Me 2:

posted 8 months ago

here here
I concur so adamantly that I discover myself at a cerebral deficit
^.
On I had that one (dream challenge):

posted 8 months ago

I woke up crying so hard I had to use a nebulizer machine (for asthma attacks) to calm down. I don’t like cantaloupe seeds to this day. If I eat cantaloupes, someone else has to scrape out the seeds.
On Dream Challenge: 5 Scary Dreams - Continuation:

posted 8 months ago

lol, on #3 I was thinking along the lines of yogi bear turned punk/rock :P
On A Shadow, Grandmom & Me as a Ghost : [Dream Challenge]:

posted 8 months ago

neat and very understandable. KUDOS!
On Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]:

posted 8 months ago

I read it and really liked it, and then I read the comments; only then did my heart start beating faster. It took a little time for the suspense to catch up with me, which is what happens in real life, yet is difficult to portray in written work.
Good Job!
On What Got Me Writing, This Time Around:

posted 8 months ago

this is really, well, ....cool (for lack of a more descriptive word)
It sounds mysterious and vibrant at the same time
On World.:

posted 9 months ago

eEEEEEK!....b-but I…I l-like people.
On Emma One:

posted 9 months ago

is this an actual journal??
or a story?
either way I think it’s really interesting and well told :D
~Blossom
On Free-men:

posted 9 months ago

this song turned out a little rap-ish….?
ah well,
It’s supposed to be rapped/sang by two people – kind of like a ….a…conversation… ?
...maybe?
wow….lots of dots….and question marks…
.... ? ...like….woah…..dude.. .. ... >.>
On {Movie Phrase Ficlet Challenge!}:

posted 9 months ago

neat challenge!
I’ll probably write a sequel one of these days :p
On Silver Dream:

posted 9 months ago

:D thanks for the feedback YW
On Where did my nicknames come from? -Brebelles:

posted 9 months ago

I LOVE YOUUUUU (please don’t run away, I dont’t bite….ehem)
On A Day at Origins {Quarters Challenge}:

posted 9 months ago

tee hee, gum balls are nummy…
hurray for gum balls!!
On A Quarter Is A Quarter. A Challenge is a Challenge.:

posted 9 months ago

that was great. more than half the story was creating a wonderful visual of the fantastical toy store and then you ended with…cheese. hee hee
I loved it
On The Deviant and the Victim {Stoner's challenge}:

posted 9 months ago

very original. as a kid, I probably would’ve haggled for 6 pennies (my favorite number) ; p
On The Visit {mundane object challenge :The Quarter}:

posted 9 months ago

the quarter from great grandma was magical
; )
On Space Cash {Challenge: mundane object}:

posted 9 months ago

I really liked this story, I think you wrote is well and I can only look on in amazement at your creativity ; )
On Game Therapy (mundane challenge: a quarter) (Formerly called Bullying):

posted 9 months ago

I like how at the beginning I kind of get a glimpse into the kids family life and I kind off shake my head and think ‘now I wonder where the kid learned to bully!’
On Closing Time (Challenge: Mundane Object):

posted 9 months ago

a very nice idea, what inspired you to write about a quarter in this way??...I wonder
On Just One More {Challenge: mundane object}:

posted 9 months ago

I really like the feel of this story, although the narrator seems really serious in this saddening ficlet you still ended it on a hopeful note.
yeay for tigger!
On One down:

posted 9 months ago

this sounds like a weird compliment, but, I like your sentence structure!
; ))
On {Challenge: Mundane Object} Let the Currency Fly:

posted 9 months ago

I like the contrast between the vice p.’s good sense of humor and the story’s biting plot, I thought it was a very entertaining ficlet :D
On Pain {lyric challenge}:

posted 9 months ago

Yes, its three days grace,
and, ha ha blueyedwonder, yes, the lyrics are a bit depressing if you think to hard about it :p
On Midnight hue:

posted 9 months ago

I thank ye kindly :)
On Wow, 50 ficlets! Must mean a challenge is in your future... (Lyric Challenge):

posted 9 months ago

should…I just post it? or should I make it a sequel?
I just recently joined, so bare with me : \ : )
On Ugly:

posted 9 months ago

this strikes close to home.
its true
and ugly
I miss my once-best friend too
On A Little Expirement:

posted 9 months ago

ok then, I’m game :D

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