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posted 8 months ago
why would I respond to that? My original ficlet was directed toward HoboBeardBob.
Oh. You know me so well!
Gold! Thanks for ROTFLMAOWYMHIYF! I had forgotten about that one.
Wait, I’m not unhappy.
And FTL assistance with Stargates is real? Haw, haw. The whole thing with Science-Fiction is the fiction part. Great read.
And like scotch, this story gets better with age.
Wow! Great stuff…reminds me of those old Tex Murphy computer games….Anyone? Anyone? Just me?
The title alone is worth 5 stars, though it helps when the piece is equally as biting. Love it.
Love how you kept the theme going…please feel free to post again if the mood strikes.
talk about in medias res!
The dialog has a touch of Elmore Leonard. Nice.
Keep your mouth shut,you’re squawking like a pink monkey birdAnd I’m busting up my brains for the words
maybe he just smelled his momma…
perfectection
Yeah, I kind of was thinking the same thing…who exactly he was leaving. I didn’t even realize who until I was rereading and thought…hrm!
I agree LFP. i would love to see this continue… I’d love to sequel, but i have a hard time writing with a woman’s voice…
I agree LFP. i would love to see this continue…
I’d love to sequel, but i have a hard time writing with a woman’s voice…
i love these little vignettes…great work…love the idea of a diary. nice touch with the weather!
i love these little vignettes…great work…love the idea of a diary.
nice touch with the weather!
Excellent job with character development. Who knows where Dai will end up? Foreign Legion? South Pacific? Thailand? French Riviera? Can’t wait to see what he decides to do after reaching the coast.
Ha, a cat! very unexpected.
aaah…child abuse. great potential for a ficlet.
aaah…child abuse.
great potential for a ficlet.
too bad i have writer’s block now…
I’ve been reading a book on bohemian Paris lately. A touch of inspiration. However, this site really helped. http://www.pere-lachaise.com/perelachaise.php?lang=en
I’ve been reading a book on bohemian Paris lately. A touch of inspiration. However, this site really helped.
http://www.pere-lachaise.com/perelachaise.php?lang=en
I wish I knew more…. sigh
Great start. i love your descriptions. Your writing has a very “noir” style to it.
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