He’d finally gotten the courage. The courage to walk up to her, to look her in the eye, to ask. And miracle of miracles, she …
A prequel to Bitter Heart
The_Count's inspiration
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Jealous eyes (The betrayal challenge) used:
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The Marked (finality) used:
“God help me!” Michelle sobbed slowly turning around walking back toward him.
“That’s it, come, we have much to do, you and …
A sequel to The Marked 60
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The Marked 60 used:
Fully awake she noticed Kane laying across from her with one of the broken rail boards sticking out of his back. He coughed …
A sequel to The Marked 59
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The Marked 60 used:
“Ouch….Test!” Michelle screamed crawling toward her.
“I’m…still alive.” Test said with a sigh
“I thought you were dead,...
A prequel to The Marked (finality)
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The Marked 59 used:
“That’s more like it, I promise you’ll enjoy this..”Kane smiled kissing her lips.
Michelle watched as he sat back pushing he…
A sequel to The Marked 58
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The Marked 59 used:
“God help me!” Michelle sobbed slowly turning around walking back toward him.
“That’s it, come, we have much to do, you and …
A prequel to The Marked 60
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The Marked 58 used:
Michelle came to in one of the upstairs bedrooms laying on the bed, sitting up slowly she held her head in her palms. The ro…
A sequel to The Marked 57
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The Marked 58 used:
Fully awake she noticed Kane laying across from her with one of the broken rail boards sticking out of his back. He coughed …
A prequel to The Marked 59
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“Now that we’re clear lets start this party shall we.” Vincent said spinning Test back around facing him, he ripped her blous…
A sequel to The Marked 56
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The Marked 57 used:
“That’s more like it, I promise you’ll enjoy this..”Kane smiled kissing her lips.
Michelle watched as he sat back pushing he…
A prequel to The Marked 58
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The Marked 56 used:
“What…nn..” Test cried
Vincent grabbed her shoulders hard turning her around facing Michelle.
“Take the knife..and cut ou…
A sequel to The Marked 55
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The Marked 56 used:
Michelle came to in one of the upstairs bedrooms laying on the bed, sitting up slowly she held her head in her palms. The ro…
A prequel to The Marked 57
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The Marked 55 used:
“Don’t listen to him Michelle, he’s full of shit!” Test yelled
‘Am I?” Vincent said smiling.
Michelle slowly stepped back a…
A sequel to The Marked 54
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The Marked 55 used:
“Now that we’re clear lets start this party shall we.” Vincent said spinning Test back around facing him, he ripped her blous…
A prequel to The Marked 56
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The Marked 54 used:
That’s where you come in Michelle, your naive and your innocence make you a perfect match for my brother. A bit to sweet for …
A sequel to The Marked 53
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The Marked 54 used:
“What…nn..” Test cried
Vincent grabbed her shoulders hard turning her around facing Michelle.
“Take the knife..and cut ou…
A prequel to The Marked 55
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The Marked 53 used:
“Vincent what the hell is going on!” Test screamed holding her shoulder.
“It was you…wasn’t it?” Michelle asked staring at…
A sequel to The Marked 52
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The Marked 53 used:
“Don’t listen to him Michelle, he’s full of shit!” Test yelled
‘Am I?” Vincent said smiling.
Michelle slowly stepped back a…
A prequel to The Marked 54
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The Marked 52 used:
“Test..we gotta Test!” Michelle screamed as she turned running toward the door.
“Omg…” Michelle gasped stopping looking o…
A sequel to The Marked 51
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The Marked 52 used:
That’s where you come in Michelle, your naive and your innocence make you a perfect match for my brother. A bit to sweet for …
A prequel to The Marked 53
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The Marked 51 used:
She stalled thinking to herself for a moment before washing her hands exiting the bathroom,walking back through the hall she …
A sequel to The Marked 50
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The Marked 51 used:
“Vincent what the hell is going on!” Test screamed holding her shoulder.
“It was you…wasn’t it?” Michelle asked staring at…
A prequel to The Marked 52
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The Marked 50 used:
“Do….we’re screwed doll, but if I’m gonna go I’m taking that bastard with me!” Test frowned standing up.
Michelle stood up…
A sequel to The Marked 49
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The Marked 50 used:
“Test..we gotta Test!” Michelle screamed as she turned running toward the door.
“Omg…” Michelle gasped stopping looking o…
A prequel to The Marked 51
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The Marked 49 used:
“He got both of us….” Michelle said covering her mouth.
“I didn’t know it happened to you…not until you collapsed back t…
A sequel to The Marked 48
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The Marked 49 used:
She stalled thinking to herself for a moment before washing her hands exiting the bathroom,walking back through the hall she …
A prequel to The Marked 50
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The Marked 48 used:
The cesser stopped leaving Test motionless, her body crippled, she gasped for air reaching for Michelle.
“Take a deep breath…
A sequel to The Marked 47
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The Marked 48 used:
“Do….we’re screwed doll, but if I’m gonna go I’m taking that bastard with me!” Test frowned standing up.
Michelle stood up…
A prequel to The Marked 49
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The Marked 47 used:
“Don’t worry, we’re going to Vincent’s, he’s got all kinds of shit at his place, he comes for us we’ll be ready.” Test stated…
A sequel to The Marked 46
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The Marked 47 used:
“He got both of us….” Michelle said covering her mouth.
“I didn’t know it happened to you…not until you collapsed back t…
A prequel to The Marked 48
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The Marked 46 used:
“Ouch..my neck.” Test complained using the table to pull herself up.
Fully awake she remembered where she was quickly dashin…
A sequel to The Marked 45
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The Marked 46 used:
The cesser stopped leaving Test motionless, her body crippled, she gasped for air reaching for Michelle.
“Take a deep breath…
A prequel to The Marked 47
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The Marked 45 used:
“Oh my god she’s…” Michelle gasped covering her mouth.
“Damn, we’re to late..” Test frowned looking at the girl’s body lay…
A sequel to The Marked 44
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The Marked 45 used:
“Don’t worry, we’re going to Vincent’s, he’s got all kinds of shit at his place, he comes for us we’ll be ready.” Test stated…
A prequel to The Marked 46
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The Marked 44 used:
Kane stopped rearing back as a wooden spike pierced through his chest,he stumbled dropping down on one knee staring at Michel…
A sequel to The Marked 43
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The Marked 44 used:
“Ouch..my neck.” Test complained using the table to pull herself up.
Fully awake she remembered where she was quickly dashin…
A prequel to The Marked 45
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The Marked 43 used:
Test struggled,pushing against his arms kicking wildly as she gasped for air.Kane laughed as he watched her strength slowly s…
A sequel to The Marked 42
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The Marked 43 used:
“Oh my god she’s…” Michelle gasped covering her mouth.
“Damn, we’re to late..” Test frowned looking at the girl’s body lay…
A prequel to The Marked 44
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The Marked 42 used:
A loud cracking sound echoed through the room as a wooden board crashed down on his back,angered he quickly turned looking ov…
A sequel to The Marked 41
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The Marked 42 used:
Kane stopped rearing back as a wooden spike pierced through his chest,he stumbled dropping down on one knee staring at Michel…
A prequel to The Marked 43
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The Marked 41 used:
A reddish light radiated from under the door in the far left corner of the room, Michelle moved against the wall as she walke…
A sequel to The Marked 40
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The Marked 41 used:
Test struggled,pushing against his arms kicking wildly as she gasped for air.Kane laughed as he watched her strength slowly s…
A prequel to The Marked 42
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The Marked 40 used:
Down the hall they entered a large empty room,the room reaked of old machine parts an rotting pipes.Rats an insects scurring …
A sequel to The Marked 39
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The Marked 40 used:
A loud cracking sound echoed through the room as a wooden board crashed down on his back,angered he quickly turned looking ov…
A prequel to The Marked 41
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The Marked 39 used:
“Test! wait!” Michelle said quickly getting out of the car.
They quickly made their way inside the yard using the stacks of …
A sequel to The Marked 38
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The Marked 39 used:
A reddish light radiated from under the door in the far left corner of the room, Michelle moved against the wall as she walke…
A prequel to The Marked 40
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The Marked 38 used:
“There’s no telling what that freaks got hidden inside.” Test said looking to Michelle
“He could be some kind of cereal kill…
A sequel to The Marked 37
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The Marked 38 used:
Down the hall they entered a large empty room,the room reaked of old machine parts an rotting pipes.Rats an insects scurring …
A prequel to The Marked 39
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The Marked 37 used:
“I don’t feel right about this, we should call the police, let them handle it.” Michelle said clasping her hands together.
”...
A sequel to The Marked 36
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The Marked 37 used:
“Test! wait!” Michelle said quickly getting out of the car.
They quickly made their way inside the yard using the stacks of …
A prequel to The Marked 38
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The Marked 36 used:
The large metal door old an rusted hung loose to it’s attachments making it slam when closed.There was a half moon that night…
A sequel to The Marked 35
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The Marked 36 used:
“There’s no telling what that freaks got hidden inside.” Test said looking to Michelle
“He could be some kind of cereal kill…
A prequel to The Marked 37
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The Marked 35 used:
Michelle left the shelter and comfort of her suburban home following Test outside to her car,they drove away burning rubber a…
A sequel to The Marked 34
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The Marked 35 used:
“I don’t feel right about this, we should call the police, let them handle it.” Michelle said clasping her hands together.
”...
A prequel to The Marked 36
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The Marked 34 used:
The police won’t help, all they’ll do is ask him some questions give him a pat on the wrist and let him go, come on, don’t wu…
A sequel to The Marked 33
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The Marked 34 used:
The large metal door old an rusted hung loose to it’s attachments making it slam when closed.There was a half moon that night…
A prequel to The Marked 35
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The Marked 33 used:
“Get off me!” Michelle yelled pulling away.
“Wow whats your deal?” Test asked
“Your not my friend, you left me there alone…
A sequel to The Marked 32
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The Marked 33 used:
Michelle left the shelter and comfort of her suburban home following Test outside to her car,they drove away burning rubber a…
A prequel to The Marked 34
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The Marked 32 used:
She buried her face into the covers inhaling as warm memories flushed through bringing back dreams of the past. A loud an alm…
A sequel to The Marked 31
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The Marked 32 used:
The police won’t help, all they’ll do is ask him some questions give him a pat on the wrist and let him go, come on, don’t wu…
A prequel to The Marked 33
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The Marked 31 used:
The next morning the doctor gave permission for Michelle to go home, once they were home her mother cooked a huge meal and in…
A sequel to The Marked 30
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The Marked 31 used:
“Get off me!” Michelle yelled pulling away.
“Wow whats your deal?” Test asked
“Your not my friend, you left me there alone…
A prequel to The Marked 32
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The Marked 30 used:
“What?..the other night?” Michelle asked
“You’ve been asleep for two days now, I was worried you wouldn’t wake up.” her moth…
A sequel to The Marked 29
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The Marked 30 used:
She buried her face into the covers inhaling as warm memories flushed through bringing back dreams of the past. A loud an alm…
A prequel to The Marked 31
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The Marked 29 used:
The door behind her suddenly flung open, she jumped turning around just as something hard struck her knocking her over the ra…
A sequel to The Marked 28
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The Marked 29 used:
The next morning the doctor gave permission for Michelle to go home, once they were home her mother cooked a huge meal and in…
A prequel to The Marked 30
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The Marked 28 used:
At that moment the lights start to flicker and she saw something moving beyond her room door.
“Who’s out there?” She asked g…
A sequel to The Marked 27
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The Marked 28 used:
“What?..the other night?” Michelle asked
“You’ve been asleep for two days now, I was worried you wouldn’t wake up.” her moth…
A prequel to The Marked 29
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The Marked 27 used:
“Yes, but she is a little weak and it would appear shes anemic , I want to keep her here over night.” The Doctor added
“Oh g…
A sequel to The Marked 26
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The Marked 27 used:
The door behind her suddenly flung open, she jumped turning around just as something hard struck her knocking her over the ra…
A prequel to The Marked 28
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The Marked 26 used:
“Michelle..calm down your dreaming.”
David said holding her shoulders. She looked at him then around the room,stone white w…
A sequel to The Marked 25
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The Marked 26 used:
At that moment the lights start to flicker and she saw something moving beyond her room door.
“Who’s out there?” She asked g…
A prequel to The Marked 27
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The Marked 25 used:
Michelle walked into the Old style Sushie restaurant, she smiled as she walked toward the locker room to clock in. Just as sh…
A sequel to The Marked 24
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The Marked 25 used:
“Yes, but she is a little weak and it would appear shes anemic , I want to keep her here over night.” The Doctor added
“Oh g…
A prequel to The Marked 26
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The Marked 24 used:
“Michelle
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“Michelle.. what the hell is going on?”
David yelled sliding over the hood of the car running behind her…A sequel to The Marked 23
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The Marked 24 used:
“Michelle..calm down your dreaming.”
David said holding her shoulders. She looked at him then around the room,stone white w…
A prequel to The Marked 25
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The Marked 23 used:
She looked out the window as they drove, her eyes blinked lightly as she looked around the streets. Out of the corner of her …
A sequel to The Marked 22
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The Marked 23 used:
Michelle walked into the Old style Sushie restaurant, she smiled as she walked toward the locker room to clock in. Just as sh…
A prequel to The Marked 24
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The Marked 22 used:
She walked down the street in silence not knowing what she was doing or where she was going.
As she walked along the sidewalk…A sequel to The Marked 21
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The Marked 22 used:
“Michelle
“Michelle.. what the hell is going on?”
David yelled sliding over the hood of the car running behind her…A prequel to The Marked 23
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The Marked 21 used:
She was confused and angered with herself for being so careless,now she sat in a hospital pondering what horrors the doctor w…
A sequel to The Marked 20
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The Marked 21 used:
She looked out the window as they drove, her eyes blinked lightly as she looked around the streets. Out of the corner of her …
A prequel to The Marked 22
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The Marked 20 used:
Shocked Michelle frowned looking up at the much taller woman.
“I think… I was drugged.”
“You think..or you know?” the nu…
A sequel to The Mark 19
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The Marked 20 used:
She walked down the street in silence not knowing what she was doing or where she was going.
As she walked along the sidewalk…A prequel to The Marked 21
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The Mark 19 used:
After realizing what happened Michelle went to the hospital,when called upon by the nurse she was taken to a room for an exam…
A sequel to The Marked 18
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The Mark 19 used:
She was confused and angered with herself for being so careless,now she sat in a hospital pondering what horrors the doctor w…
A prequel to The Marked 20
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The Marked 18 used:
“What the fu…ahh ick ick!” she gasped as she hit the floor hard.
Her body convulsed, eyes rolled into the back of her head …A sequel to The Marked 17
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The Marked 18 used:
Shocked Michelle frowned looking up at the much taller woman.
“I think… I was drugged.”
“You think..or you know?” the nu…
A prequel to The Mark 19
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The Marked 17 used:
After realizing what happened Michelle went to the hospital,when called upon by the nurse she was taken to a room for an exam…
A prequel to The Marked 18
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The Marked 15 used:
After a few more drinks and hours of wild dancing Michelle took a break, she headed toward the restroom crossing the crowed f…
A sequel to The Marked 14
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The Marked 14 used:
“Go!” Test yelled throwing back her head with the cup to her lips,Michelle followed drinking to the last drop as they both sl…
A sequel to The Marked 13
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The Marked 14 used:
Michelle though deep inside herself saw a vision of a nude girl lying on a old-style king size bed,a dark figure moving over …
A prequel to The Marked 15
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The Marked 13 used:
“Your Vincent…ok, thank you Vincent for saving me.”Michelle blushed
“Not at all, think nothing of it.” he said smiling.
“We…A sequel to The Marked 12
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The Marked 13 used:
After a few more drinks and hours of wild dancing Michelle took a break, she headed toward the restroom crossing the crowed f…
A prequel to The Marked 14
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The Marked 12 used:
“You shame yourself, raising your hand to a woman, are you a man or a beast?”The man said tightly holding Kane’s arm who then…
A sequel to The Marked 11
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The Marked 12 used:
“Go!” Test yelled throwing back her head with the cup to her lips,Michelle followed drinking to the last drop as they both sl…
A prequel to The Marked 13
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The Marked 11 used:
“You sluts are all alike, always talking about respect and being so damn high and mighty, but when Mr. Perfect comes along yo…
A sequel to The Marked 10
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The Marked 11 used:
“Your Vincent…ok, thank you Vincent for saving me.”Michelle blushed
“Not at all, think nothing of it.” he said smiling.
“We…A prequel to The Marked 12
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The Marked 10 used:
That night Michelle arrived at the Red Ribbon around 10, the place was packed wall to wall making it hard for her to get thro…
A sequel to The Marked 9
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The Marked 10 used:
“You shame yourself, raising your hand to a woman, are you a man or a beast?”The man said tightly holding Kane’s arm who then…
A prequel to The Marked 11
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The Marked 9 used:
Covering her mouth the girl held in a laugh, “Oh wow he’s got it bad, he totally wants to use those chopsticks on you!”
“That…A sequel to The Marked 8
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The Marked 9 used:
“You sluts are all alike, always talking about respect and being so damn high and mighty, but when Mr. Perfect comes along yo…
A prequel to The Marked 10
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The Marked 8 used:
With a smile and wink David disappeared behind the counter,Michelle picked up the tray an headed toward the mans table.”Here …
A sequel to The Marked 7
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The Marked 8 used:
That night Michelle arrived at the Red Ribbon around 10, the place was packed wall to wall making it hard for her to get thro…
A prequel to The Marked 9
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The Marked 7 used:
“A party? sweet, where is it?”Michelle asked as she dropped her notepad into her poach.
“It’s at a club on the north side cal…A sequel to The Marked 6
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The Marked 7 used:
Covering her mouth the girl held in a laugh, “Oh wow he’s got it bad, he totally wants to use those chopsticks on you!”
“That…A prequel to The Marked 8
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The Marked 6 used:
The girl sat alone with her back to the wall as she looked out of the window, her long dark hair hung just over her shoulders…
A sequel to The Marked 5
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The Marked 6 used:
With a smile and wink David disappeared behind the counter,Michelle picked up the tray an headed toward the mans table.”Here …
A prequel to The Marked 7
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The Marked 5 used:
Mini was a nic-named given to Michelle by David, not only in reference
to her name but also because she was petite. “Yea, ...A sequel to The Marked act 4
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The Marked 5 used:
“A party? sweet, where is it?”Michelle asked as she dropped her notepad into her poach.
“It’s at a club on the north side cal…A prequel to The Marked 6
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The Marked act 4 used:
“Hey snap out of it!” a voice yelled, Michelle jumped still with a blank look on her face as she looked down at the man sitti…
A sequel to The Marked act 3
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The Marked act 4 used:
The girl sat alone with her back to the wall as she looked out of the window, her long dark hair hung just over her shoulders…
A prequel to The Marked 5
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The Marked act 3 used:
“I can’t believe this..I over slept again, Ms Shinobu is gonna have a nervous brake down!” She raced down the street as fast …
A sequel to The Marked-continued
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The Marked act 3 used:
Mini was a nic-named given to Michelle by David, not only in reference
to her name but also because she was petite. “Yea, ...A prequel to The Marked act 4
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The Marked-continued used:
“Hey snap out of it!” a voice yelled, Michelle jumped still with a blank look on her face as she looked down at the man sitti…
A prequel to The Marked act 3