Although (as Krulltar says) slightly incongruous with the ultimate action, I really like the details in this piece. His memories make him a more intriguing character.
After reading a really horrible story marked “Mature” I became interested in trying to provide an adult scene with emotional content and weight. What better than a post-coital morning?
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