It is a good backgound to someone’s life but there is no real plot. Now if you were going to embelish and start talking more about Brendan and how his life falling apart caused something or other it would be great. But it isn’t a great place to start. I’d say write a sequal about Brandon.
Also kid dieing because of terminal illness is very overdone.
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