Ficlets

Dangerous Angels' posted comments

On The Low Carb Kid vs. Yo' Momma:

posted 11 months ago

Ha Ha loved the title
On I've finally got the upper hand ..now how do I use it?:

posted about 1 year ago

The book in the VERY begininng of the story, the book that made her start doubting the scheme of things. lol =] re-read!
On daddy's litle girl:

posted about 1 year ago

This is a very good ficlet, but you should capitalize the first letter in each sentece so that the story can be Gramatically correct and contain some structure.
On One iPhone to Rule Them All…:

posted about 1 year ago

lol very interesting and funny.
On The hulk has nothing on me:

posted about 1 year ago

ok thanx. lol it is as good as gone
On Deadly cliche:

posted about 1 year ago

Very funny. I like it alot. That is how I feel sometimes, I just want to run around saying “Be original!”
On Irrational? Phobias.:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. Love it! Funny!
On Sheltered? I Should Think Not.:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. Thanx for having the courage to say it! I would have being that i go to parochial school and have all my life) but I am afraid of what my parents would think if they ever did a surprise raid on my computer! Lol
On The Pledge of Allegiance in the View of a Foreigner:

posted about 1 year ago

Lol. love it! You ar e a great write, this story has a lot of potential.
On Waste My Life for You:

posted about 1 year ago

I love! That is one feeling that i could never really put into words to my satisfaction, and u did. Thanx! Great job!
On For Love:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. obviously you were. But I love it! Good work!
On A further transgression:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. very good.
On Bloody Rain:

posted about 1 year ago

Very good.
On Get Out:

posted about 1 year ago

Lol. Love it!! I have days like that, bet everyone does! =)
On love and pain:

posted about 1 year ago

Interesting, but good. :)
On The Watcher:

posted about 1 year ago

Very good, but kind of reminds me of the book The Watcher though.
On Enter the Brigands:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. Very funny. Love it!
On Secrets Revealed, Love Lost:

posted about 1 year ago

Very well written.
On FICLETS IS BEING INVADED!!!!! PRT.2:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. wow, good title to your story bonus and the comments are exciting too. lol
On How Not to Copy Homework II:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. I like the twist. She did shot them right?
On HOT SEXY ME:

posted about 1 year ago

not the best work ever.
On A Deeper Meaning:

posted about 1 year ago

“my love of knowledge sets me apart as much as my looks.”

Good opening. I wonder where you will go with it? Hint, hint Wink, wink Nudge, nudge

Lol. This ficlet is very good. =)
On Country Club for Those Screwed Over:

posted about 1 year ago

Lol very funny. Extremely good. Looking forward to a sequel.
On Peace is for Parochies:

posted about 1 year ago

You should have put decided to seek revenge on the instead of avenge. Avenge does not make sense. =( Otherwise it is brilliant!!
On Crazy army guy:

posted about 1 year ago

This is not so good. Some sentences are a bit akward, and confusing. Especially the second sentence. You should have put: He was so crazy he mistook a man for a woman.
On Freddie Krueger's Coming After You:

posted about 1 year ago

Lol. Nice that you put it on ficlets to teach everyone the song; extremely generous of you.
On Please Say Yes (The Letter):

posted about 1 year ago

Ouch! I’m still wincing slightly from Saint Chuck’s whole slightly pathetic comment. Lol. It is true though. You should use more details, and you spelled opposite wrong, you might want to edit that.
On Ice cream and Cigarettes:

posted about 1 year ago

Yes, I agree this is not mature. Like the title thought, interesting development plot wise.
On Gay Guy:

posted about 1 year ago

Lol. I dont get it if he was gay and like woman, doesnt that make him a bi guy? Lol.
On Two Pools of Crimson:

posted about 1 year ago

This is very interesting, captivating title.
On A Cry in the Dark:

posted about 1 year ago

Very nice description.
On A Bible for the Outcasts:

posted about 1 year ago

lol are you working the spin tables of life? This is really good, looking forward to a sequel ;)
On CEREAL:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. this made me laugh, good job!
On DELETED FICLET:

posted about 1 year ago

It is really good I like the repetition. Thanx for the comments, need all the help i can get! =)
On Isnt immortality Grand?:

posted about 1 year ago

lol thanx i tried to make it as different as I could with the whole immortality and learning from philosophical ppl from different time periods.
On Tortured soul:

posted about 1 year ago

“You will see how my life has led me to this: This room, these clothes, this hat. Such a sad, sad existence.”

I really like this part. The 1st time I read it I read it as if his existence is sad, because he had a bad fashion sense, so it mad me laugh.

But job well done, keep up the good work. lol
On Sufferings of an exVietnam soilder:

posted about 1 year ago

I am not really sure about which drug is easy to grow in Vietnam because of its weather. I think it is heroin, but if anyone knows different, I would apprciate if you would tell me to I can change it. Thanx, hope you like my ficlet!
On Greg and Art:

posted about 1 year ago

The story has a good beggining, lots of possibilites. The only thing is that you should stick with the same tense through out.
On Ronald's Secret Weapon II, Night of the Living Penis:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. wow. and I though a women’s life was hard…..
On Ronald's Secret Weapon:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. i agree with Cobwebs. Extremely entertaining and funny, but to be continued :not necessary. Cant wait to read on though.
On Talking Frogs Included?:

posted about 1 year ago

lol. sorry about that. I ran out of characters, so i improvised by taking out spaces. Everyone/thing must do their part for the greater good of storykind, including grammar/puncuation!! : )
On Mud Bath:

posted about 1 year ago

oh uber means super. It is german.
On The Dull spoon:

posted about 1 year ago

Its cool that you wanted to explain why the person backed out of cutting themselves, but Princess od Dance wrote BLADE, which implies a knife.
On Side Effects of Perfection:

posted about 1 year ago

nice job. love the title!!
On Carny Clowns:

posted about 1 year ago

This is extremely funny. I like it. Hope there is a sequel!
On Mr Chuckles - Clown PI (pt 3):

posted about 1 year ago

Getting even better.lol
On Mr Chuckles - Clown PI (pt 2):

posted about 1 year ago

Even more intruiging than the 1st; the plot thickens!!??
On Mr Chuckles - Clown PI:

posted about 1 year ago

Very funny. Good use of references, with minor changes.
On DeathWish:

posted about 1 year ago

i like it. it is kool