French Toast's posted comments

  1. On The Wizard and the House, Cont.:

    posted 5 months ago

    I know I haven’t been doing a lot on here lately, but this is where my part of this story ends. It’s up to you all now to see where it goes.

  2. On Counting Ribs :

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting spin on an really overdone perspective. Shows how intense eating disorders can become. Good job!

  3. On A child among giants "a":

    posted about 1 year ago

    I really like it! It’s almost the exact direction I wanted the story to take!

  4. On An Ear for Music:

    posted about 1 year ago

    oooh! Interesting! I love it!

  5. On The Boy who Cried wolf... But better!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It’s marked mature for the language, just FYI.

  6. On Devil was an old man:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Extremely smooth and rhythmic. Moves right on along, and I definitely didn’t want it to end.

  7. On Breaking Up is Hard (Though Rocket Launchers Make it Significantly Easier):

    posted about 1 year ago

    Cool! I love it. The French isn’t bad either, like I know…

  8. On the loneliest whale in the world:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Sad and beautiful at the same time. The little twist of darkness at the end is a very nice touch!

  9. On Look For Beauty:

    posted about 1 year ago

    too true.

  10. On THE U.S.S. EMPRESS:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Interesting and intense, in a very, very good way. The dialogue is fast… I don’t really know how to put it. But I think you’ve really captured the character of Captain Nepal incredibly well.

  11. On Ground Chuck:

    posted about 1 year ago

    A bit of an abrupt ending, but otherwise good! I hope it continues!

  12. On Afternoon:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Oh dear, lovely little twist at the end there, certainly wasn’t expecting that!

  13. On Prosopagnosia: The Dream:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Very interesting. Personally can’t wait to see where this goes.

  14. On Meet You At The Swingset:

    posted about 1 year ago

    cool, and well written. The end really is great, really brings it full circle with the title.

  15. On I'm Coming:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Whoa! Wow! Awesome! It’s so intense!

  16. On Dream.:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Author’s note: This is a dream I actually had. The story is about me.

  17. On Twelve Inch High Underdog:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like the different point of view in this. Your writing really conveys the sense of purpose this dog feels. Didn’t this actually happen? It’s really cool that you brought a new type of heroic perspective to the story.

  18. On Arabian Sundown:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I like it. It reminds me a lot of Marguerite Henry’s “King of the Wind,” but shorter… of course. I like the set up, and the way the bits about the horse lead into the voice of god part.

  19. On A great day:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It’s funny! Well, thinking on it more, it’s more sad/funny than anything else. I really like it, it’s a very interesting perspective. It’s written very believably as well.

  20. On Patriotism Isn't For Everyone:

    posted about 1 year ago

    cool, a real kind of statement on the American public education system today. Well written too.

  21. On Tears:

    posted about 1 year ago

    pretty good, and the break-up storyline is very relatable.

  22. On A Bible for the Outcasts:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I really like this. It reminds me of that one song by Pink about “God is a DJ and life is a dance floor” that never really took off… but this is quite a bit simpler and the last few lines really pull it all together.

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